"Not the expected rot of a body left underground — this was something sharper, metallic and sweet at once, like pennies dropped into honey."
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"And yet someone had strung fairy lights — actual glass-bulbed Edison strings, not battery-powered — along the tiled walls of the old platform, and every one of them was still burning."
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"Glass jars shattered across the tiles, their contents — dried herbs, powders in colors she couldn't name, things that moved even though they shouldn't — scattered and ground underfoot."
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"She checked his neck first — no pulse, skin cool but not cold, no lividity that she could see."
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"The dark tracery didn't just travel up his arms — it spread across his chest beneath the open collar of his shirt, branching like the roots of a tree, converging over his sternum."
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"Not pain — she'd seen pain on a dead man's face before, and this wasn't it."
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"The face was etched with symbols she didn't recognize — not numbers, not compass points, but something intricate and deliberate, like a language she'd never seen."
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"She turned a slow circle, letting her eyes move without focusing, the way her first DI had taught her — don't look for what's wrong, let what's wrong find you."
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"She counted four of them — dark, asymmetric burns on the tile floor, each roughly the size of a dinner plate, arranged in a pattern that might have been random but felt deliberate."
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"She was small — five-four at most — with curly red hair and round glasses that caught the light of the fairy bulbs and threw it back in gold."
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"Of course — they were deep underground."
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"Quinn turned back to Eva, who had not moved from the bottom step but whose eyes were everywhere — the stalls, the scattered jars, the fairy lights, the body."
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"She pictured it now: the man standing at the center of five marks, performing some kind of ritual — she hated that word, but there it was — and the fifth point failing."
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"Not just unmarked — clean, scrubbed, in a station that hadn't seen a maintenance crew in seventy years."
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"It came away with a faint residue — not soot, not chalk, but something granular and dark that seemed to absorb the light from the fairy bulbs rather than reflect it."
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"Eva looked toward a narrow archway at the far end of the platform that Quinn hadn't noticed before — a service passage, half-hidden behind a hanging drape of dark fabric."
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"\"— by now the market's moved.\" Quinn checked her watch."
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"Even when the evidence asked her to believe in things that broke the world she understood — she followed it."
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"The voice belonged to PC Sheldon, the first officer on scene, a lanky twenty-three-year-old who stood at the bottom of the stairs with his torch aimed at the gr…"
1
"Glass jars shattered across the tiles, their contents — dried herbs, powders in colors she couldn't name, things that moved even though they shouldn't — scatter…"
2
"She'd felt something like it once before, three years ago, in a warehouse in Rotherhithe where DS Morris had walked through a door that shouldn't have existed a…"
3
"The fingers were blackened at the tips, as though he'd dipped them in ink, except the discoloration went beneath the nails and traveled up the veins to the wris…"
4
"The dark tracery didn't just travel up his arms — it spread across his chest beneath the open collar of his shirt, branching like the roots of a tree, convergin…"
5
"It swung in a slow, purposeful arc toward the far wall of the station, then held steady, then drifted back, as though tracking something that was itself in moti…"
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"She counted four of them — dark, asymmetric burns on the tile floor, each roughly the size of a dinner plate, arranged in a pattern that might have been random …"
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"She was small — five-four at most — with curly red hair and round glasses that caught the light of the fairy bulbs and threw it back in gold."
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"Quinn turned back to Eva, who had not moved from the bottom step but whose eyes were everywhere — the stalls, the scattered jars, the fairy lights, the body."