Run: 2026-02-24-01KJ8WHF9N05Q2B1QFV8MWS0B8

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Duration:
48.7s
Cost:
$0.036789
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The entrance was a rusted service door set into a brick wall off Chalk Farm Road, sandwiched between a closed-down newsagent and a letting agency. Quinn found it propped open with a broken padlock, a uniform standing outside with his collar turned up against the October drizzle. "DS Brennan's already down there, ma'am." The uniform handed her a torch. "Mind the third step. It's gone." She descended into the dark. The staircase opened into a platform that the Tube maps had stopped acknowledging decades ago. Her torch swept across curved Victorian tiling, cream gone grey with age, and the remains of signage that had been stripped back to bare fixings. The air was cold in the particular way of underground spaces — still and damp and sealed against the world above. A generator hummed somewhere further along the tunnel. Somebody had strung portable work lights along the ceiling, and in their yellow wash Quinn counted four uniformed officers, a forensic technician crouched over an evidence bag, and DS Brennan standing with his hands in his pockets near the far end of the platform. He spotted her and lifted his chin in greeting. The body was face-down between the platform edge and the tiled wall, a man in his mid-forties, dressed in a long coat the colour of old blood. No wallet. No phone. The forensic technician had photographed the positioning before turning him, and Quinn studied the prints on her tablet as she crouched beside the remains. "Cardiac event," Brennan said, materialising at her shoulder. "Pre-existing condition, most likely. Came down here, had a turn, never came back up." "How did he get in?" "Door was already compromised. Rough sleepers use these places." Quinn looked at the man's hands. The nails were clean. The coat was expensive — she'd seen the label when the technician had pulled the collar back. A Savile Row cut, recently pressed. Not a rough sleeper. "Nothing on him to say who he is." "Not yet. We'll run his prints." She stood, her knees protesting the cold, and took a slow pass of the platform. The work lights threw hard shadows into every recess. At the mouth of the tunnel, where the track disappeared into black, she stopped. A woman sat on an overturned crate with a worn leather satchel in her lap, watching Quinn with green eyes behind round glasses. Red curls escaped from under a knit hat. She had the look of someone who had been told to stay put and was tolerating it with considerable effort. "Who authorised a civilian on my scene?" Brennan came up behind her. "Museum consultant. British Museum rang when we requested help identifying an artefact recovered near the body. She was apparently already on her way." "Already on her way," Quinn repeated. The redhead stood. "Eva Kowalski. I work in the restricted archives. Your forensic team found something and didn't know what they were looking at." She reached into her satchel and produced an evidence bag without being asked, as if she'd been holding it ready. "It's a navigational tool. Brass, eighteenth or nineteenth century. The engravings are protective in nature — apotropaic symbols, common in the period." Quinn took the bag. Even through the plastic the compass was striking. Small, no wider than her palm, the brass casing eaten green around the edges. The face was covered in fine-cut markings that ran between the cardinal points in a way that wasn't decorative. They were too precise for that, too intentional, each line intersecting in a logic that she couldn't follow but could feel at the edge of her comprehension, the way you felt grammar in a language you'd never studied. The needle sat still beneath its crystal face, pointing not toward the tunnel entrance — which was north — but toward a section of tiled wall beside the body. Quinn turned the compass in her hand. The needle held its position, indifferent to the rotation. "The needle's stuck," Brennan said. "Mechanism's corroded. We think it was the victim's — collector, maybe, or just someone who bought it off a market stall." Quinn looked at the wall the needle indicated. The tiles there were immaculate. She walked back toward the body and crouched again, this time ignoring the man entirely and pressing her torch close to the floor. The platform surface near the body was thick with decades of grime, disturbed in three places: the forensic team's boot prints, the body's own impression, and a third set, older than the team's marks but newer than the grime beneath, a pair of shoes with a distinctive narrow heel, already partially blurred by resettlement. "He wasn't alone when he came down." She followed the second set of prints with her torch beam. They moved from the body toward the tiled wall — and stopped. Stopped cleanly. No turn, no retreat. They simply ended. She stood and put her palm flat against the tiles where the footprints terminated. Solid. Cold. She pressed along the seam lines. "Detective." Kowalski's voice carried something careful in it, something that straddled the line between warning and information. Quinn looked at her. The woman's jaw was tight beneath her freckled skin. She had tucked a curl behind her left ear with a gesture that looked involuntary, a thing she'd done without deciding to. Her eyes moved from Quinn to the wall and back again, and in that flicker Quinn read what a woman with a master's degree from Oxford and access to restricted museum archives was choosing not to say. "You told me the needle was pointing to the wall." "The needle is stuck," Brennan said again. "You pointed the compass at several positions when you looked at it." Quinn held the bag up. "The needle hasn't moved from that wall since it came out of your satchel." Kowalski said nothing. Quinn turned back to the wall. The tiles were cream under the work lights, seamless, mute. But the second set of footprints ended in front of them as if the wall had simply accepted the person who'd made them. She pulled out her notebook and wrote down the compass's description. Brass. Verdigris. Sigils. Needle fixed on a single point. Then she drew a small sketch of the platform layout, marking the body's position and the arc of the second set of prints in relation to the wall. "Where was the compass found?" The forensic technician checked her notes. "Approximately thirty centimetres from the victim's right hand. Face-down." Face-down. Quinn looked at the original photograph again on her tablet. The compass had been placed face-down deliberately, or it had fallen from a pocket in a very specific way. Not from a pocket. A pocket would have sent it sliding toward the platform edge. It lay perpendicular to the body, away from it, as if it had been set down. Or dropped in haste. "He didn't own it," Quinn said. "It was left with him."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Brennan said again [again]"
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.08
91.31% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1151
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"deliberately"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"deliberately"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
86.97% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1151
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"could feel"
count1
1
word"crystal"
count1
2
word"flicker"
count1
highlights
0"could feel"
1"crystal"
2"flicker"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences78
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences78
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences93
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen54
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1158
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
63.98% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount930
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.72
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Chalk1
Farm1
Road1
October1
Tube1
Victorian1
Quinn16
Brennan5
Savile1
Row1
Oxford1
Kowalski2
persons
0"Tube"
1"Victorian"
2"Quinn"
3"Brennan"
4"Kowalski"
places
0"Chalk"
1"Farm"
2"Road"
3"Oxford"
globalScore0.64
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences51
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1158
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean26.93
std25.55
cv0.949
sampleLengths
047
118
25
3113
49
555
622
75
89
937
108
116
1238
1351
147
1528
166
1766
184
1979
2029
2116
2226
238
245
2577
2630
279
2822
2917
304
3168
3210
337
3431
353
3639
3748
385
3915
4061
414
4211
82.77% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences78
matches
0"been stripped"
1"been told"
2"being asked"
3"was covered"
4"been placed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs143
matches
0"was tolerating"
1"was choosing"
19.97% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences93
ratio0.043
matches
0"The air was cold in the particular way of underground spaces — still and damp and sealed against the world above."
1"The coat was expensive — she'd seen the label when the technician had pulled the collar back."
2"The needle sat still beneath its crystal face, pointing not toward the tunnel entrance — which was north — but toward a section of tiled wall beside the body."
3"They moved from the body toward the tiled wall — and stopped."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount931
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.02577873254564984
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.007518796992481203
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences93
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences93
mean12.45
std10.42
cv0.837
sampleLengths
025
122
212
36
45
515
625
721
88
944
109
1127
122
132
1424
158
1614
175
189
196
204
2117
226
234
248
256
2615
279
2814
2923
308
3120
327
335
3423
356
363
3741
3822
394
408
4114
4219
4338
4429
457
469
475
4821
498
75.63% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.4731182795698925
totalSentences93
uniqueOpeners44
50.51% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences66
matches
0"Then she drew a small"
ratio0.015
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences66
matches
0"She descended into the dark."
1"Her torch swept across curved"
2"He spotted her and lifted"
3"She stood, her knees protesting"
4"She had the look of"
5"She reached into her satchel"
6"They were too precise for"
7"She walked back toward the"
8"She followed the second set"
9"They moved from the body"
10"They simply ended."
11"She stood and put her"
12"She pressed along the seam"
13"She had tucked a curl"
14"Her eyes moved from Quinn"
15"She pulled out her notebook"
16"It lay perpendicular to the"
ratio0.258
35.76% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount56
totalSentences66
matches
0"The entrance was a rusted"
1"Quinn found it propped open"
2"The uniform handed her a"
3"She descended into the dark."
4"The staircase opened into a"
5"Her torch swept across curved"
6"The air was cold in"
7"A generator hummed somewhere further"
8"Somebody had strung portable work"
9"He spotted her and lifted"
10"The body was face-down between"
11"The forensic technician had photographed"
12"Brennan said, materialising at her"
13"Quinn looked at the man's"
14"The nails were clean."
15"The coat was expensive —"
16"A Savile Row cut, recently"
17"She stood, her knees protesting"
18"The work lights threw hard"
19"A woman sat on an"
ratio0.848
75.76% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences66
matches
0"Even through the plastic the"
ratio0.015
27.65% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Her torch swept across curved Victorian tiling, cream gone grey with age, and the remains of signage that had been stripped back to bare fixings."
1"She had the look of someone who had been told to stay put and was tolerating it with considerable effort."
2"The face was covered in fine-cut markings that ran between the cardinal points in a way that wasn't decorative."
3"The needle sat still beneath its crystal face, pointing not toward the tunnel entrance — which was north — but toward a section of tiled wall beside the body."
4"She had tucked a curl behind her left ear with a gesture that looked involuntary, a thing she'd done without deciding to."
75.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She reached, as if she'd been holding it ready"
70.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Quinn repeated (repeat)"
1"She reached (reach)"
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.24
leniency0.48
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.16
85.1765%