Run: 2026-02-24-01KJ8WJFQAY30E5CXX1H0SANWP

Run Details

Model:
Aion 2.0
Duration:
1m 23s
Cost:
$0.006329
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign buzzed like a trapped insect, casting a sickly glow over the damp pavement. Inside The Raven’s Nest, the air was thick with the smell of old wood, spilled beer, and something else—something like forgotten secrets. Rory Carter sat on her usual stool at the far end of the bar, her back to the wall. A half-empty glass of ginger beer sweated on a coaster. In her hands was a battered copy of *The Trial*, but her eyes weren’t on the page. They were fixed on the rain-streaked window, watching the distorted shapes of Soho pass by. Silas polished a tumbler with a clean white cloth, his movements slow and precise. The silver signet ring on his right hand caught the low light each time his hand turned. He didn’t speak. He never did when she was like this, lost in the grey space between memories and the present. The limp was barely noticeable tonight as he moved down the bar to refill a regular’s pint. The door opened, bringing in a gust of cold, wet air and the murmur of the street. A man stepped in, shaking water from a dark overcoat. He was tall, with the kind of posture that spoke of boardrooms and expensive suits. He glanced around, his eyes adjusting to the gloom, and then they stopped on her. Rory felt the weight of the gaze before she registered the face. She looked up. For a long moment, there was only the hum of the fridge and the distant drip of a tap. The man’s expression shifted through phases like a slot machine: confusion, disbelief, then a slow, dawning recognition that seemed to physically pain him. “Rory?” The voice was deeper than she remembered, but the cadence was the same. The way he said her name—like it was a question he already knew the answer to. Daniel Byrne. Her study partner from second-year torts. The one who’d quoted obscure legal precedents to make her laugh, who’d shared his notes when she’d missed lectures after another fight with Evan. The one she’d left without a word. She closed the book, her thumb marking the page. “Daniel.” He approached the bar as if navigating a minefield. His coat was wool, finely tailored. His shoes, though damp, were good leather. He looked like a photograph from a life she’d crumpled up and thrown away. “I don’t believe it.” He stopped a few feet from her stool, not quite invading her space but close enough that she could see the fine lines at the corners of his eyes, the subtle grey at his temples. Time had been kind to him in a conventional way. It had made him look established. Solid. “What are you doing in London?” “I live here.” Her voice was calm, cooler than she felt. “In this place?” The words were out before he could filter them. He winced, casting a quick glance around at the maps on the walls, the black-and-white photos of forgotten jazz musicians. “I mean—I’m meeting a client. He suggested this bar. I had no idea…” “It’s a good bar,” Silas said from behind the counter, his tone neutral. He didn’t look up from his polishing. Daniel seemed to notice Silas for the first time, gave a curt, polite nod. Then his attention snapped back to her. “Can I…?” He gestured to the empty stool beside her. She shrugged. A non-answer. He took it as permission and sat, draping his coat over his knees. He ordered a single malt from Silas, specifying the year. Rory watched his hands. No wedding ring. The same long, slender fingers that had once highlighted passages in her textbooks. “You look different,” he said, his eyes tracing her face. “So do you.” “I meant…” He shook his head, a faint, self-deprecating smile touching his lips. “You cut your hair.” Her hand went automatically to the ends of her black hair, now straight and resting on her shoulders. It used to cascade down her back. Evan had liked it long. She’d chopped it off in a public bathroom the day she left Cardiff. “It’s easier.” “It suits you.” He took a slow sip of his whisky, his gaze not leaving her. “I looked for you, you know. After you left. Your father said you’d gone to London. He was… worried. We all were.” “I’m fine.” The words were automatic, a shield. “Are you?” The question hung in the air between them, heavy and direct. “You just vanished, Rory. One day you were there, top of our class, next you were gone. No forwarding address. Your phone disconnected. Evan was…” He trailed off, his jaw tightening. “He was telling people you’d had a breakdown. That you were unstable.” She felt a cold knot form in her stomach. She took a sip of her ginger beer, the sweetness cloying. “And you believed him?” “No.” The answer was immediate, fierce. “Never. But when someone disappears like that… people talk. They fill in the blanks with whatever story makes sense to them.” He leaned forward slightly, his voice dropping. “I didn’t believe his story. I believed you were running from him.” She didn’t confirm or deny. She just looked at him, at the earnest concern in his eyes that had somehow survived the intervening years. It made her feel exposed, like a specimen under glass. “What are you doing now?” he asked, changing tack. “Are you… practicing?” A laugh escaped her, short and dry. “No. I’m not practicing.” “But you were so brilliant. Professor Alistair said you were the best natural legal mind he’d seen in a decade. You were going to change the world.” “I deliver Chinese food,” she said, the statement flat and factual. Daniel blinked. For a second, he seemed to think she was joking. Then he saw she wasn’t. His face did something complicated, a struggle between pity and confusion. “You… what?” “I work for a restaurant. Golden Empress. I ride a bicycle with a thermal box on the back.” She held up her left wrist, where the small crescent-shaped scar shone pale in the bar light. “I’m better at navigating London traffic than I ever was at navigating the Law of Property.” He stared at her wrist, then back at her face. “Why?” The question was too big. It contained a universe of other questions: *Why did you leave? Why did you give it all up? Why didn’t you call me?* “The law felt like a cage,” she said simply. “Every precedent was a bar. Every statute a lock. I was studying to become a very elegant key for a door I didn’t want to open.” “And delivering food isn’t a cage?” “It’s a different kind. One I chose. The walls are made of rain and traffic lights, not other people’s expectations.” She looked at Silas, who was now ostensibly checking stock, giving them the illusion of privacy. “And I have friends here.” Daniel followed her gaze, taking in Silas’s quiet authority, the slight limp as he moved. “Friends,” he repeated, the word tasting strange in his mouth. He swirled the amber liquid in his glass. “I became a partner at Fletcher & Byrne last year. My father’s firm.” “Congratulations.” She meant it. There was no bitterness in her voice, only a faint, distant sadness. “It feels hollow,” he admitted, the confession quiet, almost ashamed. “I sit in a corner office and argue about commercial leases and intellectual property. I wear the suits. I give the speeches. I have the life we were supposed to have.” He looked at her, his eyes searching hers. “And sometimes, I think about you in that library, telling me that justice was about people, not profit. And I wonder what the hell I’m doing.” The weight of time settled over them then, a palpable thing. It was in the silence that stretched, in the way the rain outside seemed to slow. Here was the unspoken regret, not just hers, but his. Regret for paths taken, for paths abandoned, for words never said. “You were supposed to be there with me,” he said, so softly she almost didn’t hear it. She remembered then, with sudden, painful clarity, the night before her final exams. They’d been in the library, surrounded by towering stacks of books. He’d been outlining a particularly Byzantine point of contract law, and she’d been doodling in the margin of her notes. He’d stopped, looked at her, and said, “We’re going to be brilliant, you and I.” Not as a question, but as a statement of fact. A shared future he took for granted. She had smiled, but hadn’t answered. Evan was waiting outside in his car, engine running. “I couldn’t stay,” she said now, the words finally finding their way out. “Because of him.” It wasn’t a question. She nodded, a single, sharp movement. “I should have seen it. I should have done something.” The regret in his voice was raw, fresh, as if the years had done nothing to scab over the wound. “I was so focused on the next case, the next exam… I saw the bruises once, on your arm. You said you’d walked into a door.” “I had.” “Rory.” “It was easier,” she said, echoing her earlier words about her hair. “It was easier to lie than to admit I’d let myself become that person. The one who needs saving.” “You never needed saving. You just needed an exit.” She looked at him then, really looked. The boy she’d known was still there, buried under the expensive suit and the weary eyes. The one who’d believed in justice. The one who’d believed in her. A wave of something close to grief washed over her—not for what they’d had, but for what they might have been, in a different world, with different choices. The door opened again, and a middle-aged man in a pinstripe suit entered, looking around expectantly. Daniel’s client. Daniel saw him, and his posture shifted instantly, the vulnerability sealing over like ice on a pond. He became Daniel Byrne, partner at Fletcher & Byrne. “That’s me,” he said, his voice regaining its professional timbre. He stood, pulling on his overcoat. He hesitated, then pulled a business card from his wallet. He placed it on the bar next to her glass. His name was embossed in crisp, black letters. A mobile number, an office number, an address in the City. “If you ever need anything. Anything at all. A reference. A friend. A…” He trailed off, unable to finish the sentence. “Just take it.” She looked at the card but didn’t touch it. “Goodbye, Daniel.” He held her gaze for a moment longer, a thousand unsaid words hanging in the air between them. Then he gave a slight, almost imperceptible nod, turned, and walked toward the waiting client. His footsteps were firm, confident on the wooden floor. He didn’t look back. Rory watched him go. She waited until the door had closed behind him, swallowing him back into the London night. Then she picked up the business card. The paper was thick, expensive. She ran her thumb over the embossed letters, feeling the ridge of each one. She held it for a long moment, over the empty glass. Then she let it go. It fluttered, a tiny white leaf, and landed in the dregs of her ginger beer. It darkened at the edges, the ink beginning to blur. Silas moved down the bar and silently removed the glass. He didn’t ask. He just took it away to be washed, the card dissolving into pulp in the soapy water. Rory picked up her book again, but the words swam on the page. Outside, the green neon sign continued to buzz, a constant, steady hum against the silence.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags27
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said simply [simply]"
dialogueSentences59
tagDensity0.458
leniency0.915
rawRatio0.037
effectiveRatio0.034
89.83% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1967
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"very"
2"softly"
3"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
61.87% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1967
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"gloom"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"navigating"
count3
3
word"tracing"
count1
4
word"stomach"
count1
5
word"palpable"
count1
6
word"silence"
count2
7
word"unspoken"
count1
8
word"echoing"
count1
9
word"footsteps"
count1
10
word"fluttered"
count1
highlights
0"gloom"
1"weight"
2"navigating"
3"tracing"
4"stomach"
5"palpable"
6"silence"
7"unspoken"
8"echoing"
9"footsteps"
10"fluttered"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"the air was thick with"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences140
matches(empty)
81.63% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences140
filterMatches
0"look"
1"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences170
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords18
totalWords1964
ratio0.009
matches
0"The Trial"
1"Why did you leave? Why did you give it all up? Why didn’t you call me?"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions27
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount1479
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity0.47
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Carter1
Soho1
Byrne3
Evan3
Time1
Silas7
Cardiff1
Daniel7
Byzantine1
Fletcher1
City1
London1
Rory5
persons
0"Carter"
1"Byrne"
2"Evan"
3"Time"
4"Silas"
5"Daniel"
6"Rory"
places
0"Raven"
1"Soho"
2"Cardiff"
3"Byzantine"
4"Fletcher"
5"City"
6"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
19.57% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences115
glossingSentenceCount6
matches
0"something like forgotten secrets"
1"recognition that seemed to physically pain him"
2"as if navigating a minefield"
3"looked like a photograph from a life she’"
4"not quite invading her space but close enough that she could see the fine lines at the corners of his eyes, the subtle grey at his temples"
5"something close to grief washed over her—not for"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches4
per1kWords2.037
wordCount1964
matches
0"not quite invading her space but close enough"
1"not just hers, but his"
2"Not as a question, but as a statement of fact"
3"not for what they’d had, but for what they might have been, in a different world, with di"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences170
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs61
mean32.2
std22.09
cv0.686
sampleLengths
0100
169
257
315
442
51
629
739
810
936
1062
1111
1245
1320
1431
1547
1610
173
1817
1945
2038
218
2256
2324
2446
2534
2612
2711
2827
2911
3030
3151
3211
3328
3435
356
3641
3746
3816
3975
4048
4117
4276
4315
4413
453
4610
4756
482
491
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences140
matches
0"were fixed"
1"was embossed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs262
matches
0"was joking"
1"was waiting"
92.44% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences170
ratio0.018
matches
0"Inside The Raven’s Nest, the air was thick with the smell of old wood, spilled beer, and something else—something like forgotten secrets."
1"The way he said her name—like it was a question he already knew the answer to."
2"A wave of something close to grief washed over her—not for what they’d had, but for what they might have been, in a different world, with different choices."
82.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1490
adjectiveStacks3
stackExamples
0"same long, slender fingers"
1"faint, self-deprecating smile"
2"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount49
adverbRatio0.032885906040268455
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.011409395973154362
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences170
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences170
mean11.55
std7.67
cv0.664
sampleLengths
017
122
219
310
417
515
614
717
83
918
1017
1117
1210
1315
1415
1512
163
1719
1823
191
2013
2116
222
236
2424
257
269
271
289
296
307
3114
3239
3310
346
351
366
3711
3812
3920
4013
4113
427
4314
447
4510
462
472
4813
4910
35.29% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats25
diversityRatio0.2411764705882353
totalSentences170
uniqueOpeners41
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences134
matches
0"Then his attention snapped back"
1"Then he saw she wasn’t."
2"Then he gave a slight,"
3"Then she picked up the"
4"Then she let it go."
ratio0.037
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount76
totalSentences134
matches
0"They were fixed on the"
1"He didn’t speak."
2"He never did when she"
3"He was tall, with the"
4"He glanced around, his eyes"
5"She looked up."
6"Her study partner from second-year"
7"She closed the book, her"
8"He approached the bar as"
9"His coat was wool, finely"
10"His shoes, though damp, were"
11"He looked like a photograph"
12"He stopped a few feet"
13"It had made him look"
14"Her voice was calm, cooler"
15"He winced, casting a quick"
16"He didn’t look up from"
17"He gestured to the empty"
18"He took it as permission"
19"He ordered a single malt"
ratio0.567
15.97% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount119
totalSentences134
matches
0"The green neon sign buzzed"
1"Rory Carter sat on her"
2"A half-empty glass of ginger"
3"They were fixed on the"
4"Silas polished a tumbler with"
5"The silver signet ring on"
6"He didn’t speak."
7"He never did when she"
8"The limp was barely noticeable"
9"The door opened, bringing in"
10"A man stepped in, shaking"
11"He was tall, with the"
12"He glanced around, his eyes"
13"Rory felt the weight of"
14"She looked up."
15"The man’s expression shifted through"
16"The voice was deeper than"
17"The way he said her"
18"Her study partner from second-year"
19"The one who’d quoted obscure"
ratio0.888
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences134
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences63
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"He was tall, with the kind of posture that spoke of boardrooms and expensive suits."
1"The man’s expression shifted through phases like a slot machine: confusion, disbelief, then a slow, dawning recognition that seemed to physically pain him."
2"The same long, slender fingers that had once highlighted passages in her textbooks."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags27
uselessAdditionCount9
matches
0"Silas said, his tone neutral"
1"he said, his eyes tracing her face"
2"He trailed, his jaw tightening"
3"He leaned, his voice dropping"
4"he repeated, the word tasting strange in his mouth"
5"He looked, his eyes searching hers"
6"she said, the words finally finding their way out"
7"he said, his voice regaining its professional timbre"
8"He trailed, unable to finish the sentence"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he repeated (repeat)"
1"he admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences59
tagDensity0.186
leniency0.373
rawRatio0.182
effectiveRatio0.068
74.8423%