Run: 2026-02-24-01KJ8WK6QZSW4B4RF5JF78KS45

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Duration:
1m 33s
Cost:
$0.083625
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Tuesday crowd at The Raven's Nest was thin enough to count on two hands. Rory balanced a crate of clean pint glasses against her hip and nudged the swinging door with her shoulder, stepping behind the bar where Silas was polishing the brass taps with a cloth that had seen better decades. "Last batch from the machine." She set the crate down with a clink. Silas didn't look up. "You're not on the clock." "And yet here I am. Carrying your glasses. Which, if you think about it, is really more of a commentary on my social life than my work ethic." The corner of his mouth twitched beneath his beard. He folded the cloth once, then again, and draped it over his shoulder. "There's a curry in the back. Yu-Fei sent it over." "Yu-Fei sends a curry every Tuesday. She thinks I'm wasting away." "You are wasting away." Rory opened her mouth to protest, then caught her reflection in the mirrored shelf behind the bottles — the sharp line of her jaw, the bruise-colored hollows under her eyes from three consecutive nights of broken sleep. She closed her mouth. Reached for an empty glass and poured herself a water from the tap instead. The door opened. Cold air swept through the Nest and curled around the legs of the barstools. A man stepped in, tall, rain-darkened coat hanging open over a charcoal suit that fit him like it had been cut by someone who charged by the stitch. He carried an umbrella — not a collapsible one, a proper full-length umbrella with a wooden handle — and he shook it once before leaning it against the wall near the door. He paused. Looked around. His gaze moved across the old maps pinned to the walls, the photographs yellowing in their frames, the green-tinged light that bled through the front window from the neon sign outside. His expression said he was deciding whether this was the kind of place where he belonged. Rory stacked the last glass on the shelf. Her hands stopped. He was different. The angles of his face had hardened into something architectural, all clean planes and deliberate symmetry. His hair, which she remembered as an unkempt mess perpetually falling into his eyes, was cropped close and swept back with product. He wore a watch that caught the low light — not flashy, but the kind of understated expensive that whispered rather than shouted. But it was him. She knew it was him before he'd taken five steps into the room, knew it from the way he tilted his head slightly left when surveying an unfamiliar space, a tic she'd catalogued a hundred times across library tables and lecture halls. Marcus Hale walked to the bar and sat down two stools from the end. He picked up the cardboard drink menu, scanned it without reading it, and set it down. "Whisky, neat. Whatever you'd recommend." Silas glanced at Rory. She hadn't moved. "Rory." She blinked. Reached for the Jameson — muscle memory, a small act of spite she didn't fully understand — and poured two fingers into a tumbler. She set it in front of him. Her hand was steady. That surprised her. Marcus picked up the glass, brought it halfway to his lips, and stopped. His eyes tracked from her hand to her wrist, where the sleeve of her jumper had ridden up to expose the pale crescent scar curving along the bone. "Aurora?" Nobody had called her that in two years. The name landed like a stone dropped into still water, and the ripples went somewhere deep and private. "Marcus." He set the glass down without drinking. His mouth opened, closed. He looked at the bar top, at his own hands spread flat against the dark wood, and then back at her. Something rearranged itself behind his eyes. "You work here?" "I live upstairs. I help out sometimes." "In Soho." "In Soho." He processed this. She watched him do it — watched the calculations run behind the composed exterior, the quiet reassessment of every assumption he'd carried about her for however many years it had been. Four. She knew exactly how many. Four years, two months, and some irrelevant number of days since she'd last stood in the same room with Marcus Hale, which had been the student union bar on a Thursday evening in March, and she'd been wearing a green dress Evan picked out, and Marcus had been three pints deep and arguing about constitutional precedent with a postgrad named Sian. "I thought you were — " He stopped himself. "What?" "I don't know. Practicing. Somewhere. Your father's firm, maybe." Rory leaned against the back counter and folded her arms. "That was always more his plan than mine." Silas had migrated to the far end of the bar with the instincts of a man who'd spent decades reading rooms. He busied himself with inventory, but Rory caught the faint angle of his head, the way his hand paused over the bottle he was pretending to inspect. Listening. She didn't mind. Marcus finally drank. His jaw tightened at the Jameson — he'd always been a Scotch man, she remembered now, a pointless loyalty to his grandfather's tastes. He set the tumbler down and rotated it a quarter turn. "Four years." "About that." "You just vanished, Aurora. One day you were there and the next — " He shook his head. "I called. Eva said you'd moved but wouldn't say where. Your mum said the same. I figured you'd surface eventually. People do." "And here I am. Surfaced." "Behind a bar in Soho." The way he said it. Not cruel, not quite. But freighted with something — a disappointment that wasn't his to carry, an expectation she'd never agreed to fulfill. She recognized the tone. Her father wielded it like a scalpel. Marcus at least had the decency to look uncomfortable with it. "You look well," she said. "The suit's new." He glanced down at himself as if he'd forgotten what he was wearing. "Chambers took me on last year. Kirkmore and Associates." "Kirkmore." She let out a breath that was almost a laugh. "Criminal defense?" "Commercial litigation." "God, that's even worse." He smiled. A real one, sudden and unguarded, and for a half-second he was twenty-one again, slouched in a plastic chair at the union, gesturing with a stolen chip while dismantling somebody's argument about tort reform. The smile dissolved as fast as it had appeared, swallowed by the expensive suit and the careful posture. "What happened, Rory?" The name. Her name. The one that belonged to her, not to her parents' ambitions or Evan's possessive script. He'd remembered. She picked up a glass and dried it with a cloth, though it was already dry. "A lot of things happened." "Was it Evan?" Her hands went still. She folded the cloth. Unfolded it. Folded it again. "What makes you ask that?" Marcus stared at his whisky. "I saw something. At that party — the one at Davies' house second year. You came in late and you had this — you were holding your arm a certain way. Like you were protecting something. And Evan was right behind you with his hand on your back and you flinched when he touched you. Just barely. Just enough." The bar seemed smaller. The maps and photographs on the walls pressed inward. Rory became aware of her own breathing, the mechanical in-and-out of it, and she focused on keeping it even. "You never said anything." "No." "Why?" He turned the glass again. The amber liquid caught the light from the green neon bleeding through the window. "I told myself I wasn't sure. That I was reading into things. That you were smart enough to — " He stopped. Pressed his thumb against the rim of the glass. "I was a coward. That's the honest answer." Silas coughed quietly from the end of the bar. Not a real cough — a signal, an offer. Rory shook her head, a tiny motion meant only for him. He returned to his inventory. "You couldn't have known," she said. "Don't do that." "Do what?" "Let me off the hook. I saw what I saw and I told myself a comfortable story, and you disappeared, and I spent two years wondering if I could have — " He pressed his knuckles against the bar. The watch glinted. "I spent two years wondering." Rory set the cloth down. She came around from behind the bar and sat on the stool beside him. Close enough that she could smell his cologne, something cedar and deliberate, so far removed from the supermarket deodorant he used to drown himself in before lectures. She rested her forearms on the bar and studied the crescent scar on her wrist. A childhood bicycle accident. The only scar anyone could see. "I left him," she said. "That's the part that matters." "Is it?" "It has to be. Because the alternative is going back over every single moment and asking who should have done what, and I can't live there, Marcus. I'd drown." He was quiet. The rain picked up outside, drumming against the window. Someone at a corner table laughed at something on their phone, a bright sharp sound that didn't belong to this conversation. "You seem different," he said. "I am different." "No, I mean — " He turned on the stool to face her. "You seem more like yourself. More like whoever you were before, I don't know, before all of us got our hands on you. University, your father, Evan. You're sitting straighter." "I'm sitting on a barstool, Marcus." "You know what I mean." She did. She hated that she did. Because it meant he'd noticed back then, too — noticed the way she shrank, incremental, year by year, folding herself into smaller and more accommodating shapes. And if he'd noticed that, he'd noticed everything. The flinch at Davies' party wasn't a revelation. It was a confirmation. "I deliver food," she said. "For a Chinese restaurant around the corner. I make barely enough to cover rent. I have no savings, no career, and I haven't spoken to my father in eighteen months." She paused. "I also sleep through the night most weeks now, and I said no to something last Tuesday without apologizing for it. So. Swings and roundabouts." Marcus looked at her. Really looked, the way people looked when they'd set down the version of you they'd been carrying in their head and tried to see what was actually there. His eyes were glassy. He blinked it away. "I'm sorry." "For which part?" "All of it. The party. Not calling again after Eva stonewalled me. Sitting here in this suit being surprised that you're not what I expected." She reached over and picked up his whisky. Took a sip. The Jameson burned in a familiar way — her father's drink, and hers now too, reclaimed. "You're forgiven for the suit," she said. "The rest, we can work on." He exhaled. Something in his shoulders loosened, just a fraction, the careful architecture of his adult self yielding to the structural memory of who he'd been. He signaled to Silas. "Another, please. And whatever she's having." Silas limped over, that slight drag in his left leg barely perceptible unless you knew to look. He poured a second Jameson, set a fresh glass in front of Rory, and filled it without being asked. His hazel eyes moved between them with the quiet appraisal of a man who'd spent a career reading the distance between what people said and what they meant. He walked away without a word. Marcus picked up the fresh glass and held it out. Rory touched her tumbler to his. The clink was small and unambitious. "To surfacing," he said. She drank. Outside, the green neon sign buzzed and flickered against the rain. Inside, two people who'd known each other in a previous life sat close enough that their elbows nearly touched, wearing the years between like wet coats they hadn't yet decided to take off.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences66
tagDensity0.227
leniency0.455
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.48% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1996
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"really"
count2
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"slightly"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Marcus"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
79.96% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1996
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"charged"
count1
1
word"tinged"
count1
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"processed"
count1
4
word"mechanical"
count1
5
word"comfortable"
count1
6
word"familiar"
count1
7
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"charged"
1"tinged"
2"scanned"
3"processed"
4"mechanical"
5"comfortable"
6"familiar"
7"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences135
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences135
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences186
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen61
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2020
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions21
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions43
wordCount1473
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.75
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Marcus"
discoveredNames
Tuesday1
Raven1
Nest2
Silas7
Hale2
Rory11
Jameson4
Marcus9
Thursday1
March1
Evan1
Sian1
Scotch1
Pressed1
persons
0"Silas"
1"Hale"
2"Rory"
3"Jameson"
4"Marcus"
5"Evan"
places
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"March"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences74
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.495
wordCount2020
matches
0"not flashy, but the kind of understated expensive"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences186
matches
0"hated that she"
1"noticed that, he'd"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs87
mean23.22
std25.84
cv1.113
sampleLengths
053
113
29
328
432
511
64
755
8128
911
10110
1130
125
137
141
1540
1641
171
1826
191
2038
213
227
232
242
25101
269
271
289
2918
3052
3137
322
332
3440
355
365
3750
388
3922
4013
412
424
4354
443
4521
4621
473
4813
495
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences135
matches
0"was cropped"
1"being asked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs268
matches
0"was polishing"
1"was deciding"
2"was pretending"
3"was wearing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences186
ratio0.054
matches
0"Rory opened her mouth to protest, then caught her reflection in the mirrored shelf behind the bottles — the sharp line of her jaw, the bruise-colored hollows under her eyes from three consecutive nights of broken sleep."
1"He carried an umbrella — not a collapsible one, a proper full-length umbrella with a wooden handle — and he shook it once before leaning it against the wall near the door."
2"He wore a watch that caught the low light — not flashy, but the kind of understated expensive that whispered rather than shouted."
3"Reached for the Jameson — muscle memory, a small act of spite she didn't fully understand — and poured two fingers into a tumbler."
4"She watched him do it — watched the calculations run behind the composed exterior, the quiet reassessment of every assumption he'd carried about her for however many years it had been."
5"His jaw tightened at the Jameson — he'd always been a Scotch man, she remembered now, a pointless loyalty to his grandfather's tastes."
6"But freighted with something — a disappointment that wasn't his to carry, an expectation she'd never agreed to fulfill."
7"Not a real cough — a signal, an offer."
8"Because it meant he'd noticed back then, too — noticed the way she shrank, incremental, year by year, folding herself into smaller and more accommodating shapes."
9"The Jameson burned in a familiar way — her father's drink, and hers now too, reclaimed."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1289
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"tall, rain-darkened coat"
adverbCount46
adverbRatio0.035686578743211794
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.0069821567106283944
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences186
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences186
mean10.86
std10.78
cv0.992
sampleLengths
015
138
213
34
45
528
69
713
810
911
104
1137
124
1314
143
1514
1628
1732
182
192
2031
2116
228
233
243
2516
2622
2723
284
2942
3014
3116
325
334
343
351
362
3724
387
394
403
4113
4228
431
448
4518
461
477
484
4921
49.28% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.3118279569892473
totalSentences186
uniqueOpeners58
29.50% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences113
matches
0"Really looked, the way people"
ratio0.009
39.47% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount51
totalSentences113
matches
0"She set the crate down"
1"He folded the cloth once,"
2"She closed her mouth."
3"He carried an umbrella —"
4"His gaze moved across the"
5"His expression said he was"
6"Her hands stopped."
7"He was different."
8"His hair, which she remembered"
9"He wore a watch that"
10"She knew it was him"
11"He picked up the cardboard"
12"She hadn't moved."
13"She set it in front"
14"Her hand was steady."
15"His eyes tracked from her"
16"He set the glass down"
17"His mouth opened, closed."
18"He looked at the bar"
19"He processed this."
ratio0.451
35.22% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount96
totalSentences113
matches
0"The Tuesday crowd at The"
1"Rory balanced a crate of"
2"She set the crate down"
3"Silas didn't look up."
4"The corner of his mouth"
5"He folded the cloth once,"
6"Rory opened her mouth to"
7"She closed her mouth."
8"The door opened."
9"A man stepped in, tall,"
10"He carried an umbrella —"
11"His gaze moved across the"
12"His expression said he was"
13"Rory stacked the last glass"
14"Her hands stopped."
15"He was different."
16"The angles of his face"
17"His hair, which she remembered"
18"He wore a watch that"
19"She knew it was him"
ratio0.85
44.25% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences113
matches
0"Because it meant he'd noticed"
ratio0.009
44.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences51
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Rory balanced a crate of clean pint glasses against her hip and nudged the swinging door with her shoulder, stepping behind the bar where Silas was polishing th…"
1"A man stepped in, tall, rain-darkened coat hanging open over a charcoal suit that fit him like it had been cut by someone who charged by the stitch."
2"His gaze moved across the old maps pinned to the walls, the photographs yellowing in their frames, the green-tinged light that bled through the front window fro…"
3"He wore a watch that caught the low light — not flashy, but the kind of understated expensive that whispered rather than shouted."
4"Four years, two months, and some irrelevant number of days since she'd last stood in the same room with Marcus Hale, which had been the student union bar on a T…"
5"But freighted with something — a disappointment that wasn't his to carry, an expectation she'd never agreed to fulfill."
6"Inside, two people who'd known each other in a previous life sat close enough that their elbows nearly touched, wearing the years between like wet coats they ha…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"He pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences66
tagDensity0.121
leniency0.242
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.03
82.9661%