Run: 2026-02-24-01KJ8WKWBTZQ9719R1J574KABA

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Duration:
42.3s
Cost:
$0.033690
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt always stuck. Rory had to lift the door slightly on its hinges and twist the knob at the same time, a trick Eva had shown her exactly once and that she still managed to fumble every time. She did it now, cursing under her breath, the knock at the door a second time louder than the first. She pulled it open. Lucien Moreau stood in the dim corridor with his ivory-handled cane hooked over one forearm and his other hand raised to knock again, knuckles inches from her face. He lowered it slowly. For a moment neither of them moved. He looked precisely as she remembered him, which was somehow the most annoying part — the platinum hair slicked back to architectural perfection, the charcoal suit without so much as a crease from whatever journey had brought him here. The amber eye caught the light from the hallway. The black one didn't. "You're not Eva." "Brilliant deduction." Rory kept her hand on the door. "She's not here." "I know." She waited for him to explain. He didn't. Downstairs the curry house pumped its familiar haze up through the floorboards — cardamom, fenugreek, something frying — and Ptolemy materialised from behind her ankles to investigate the newcomer with the unsolicited confidence of a cat who'd never once been wrong about a person. Lucien looked down at him. "Don't." Rory reached for the tabby, but Ptolemy had already wound himself once around the tip of the cane and sat down on Lucien's shoe. "I didn't do anything." "You never do anything. Things just happen around you." Something shifted in his expression. Not quite a smile. He glanced past her into the flat — the towers of books on every surface, Eva's scrolls pinned to the wall above the radiator, the cold mug of tea Rory had abandoned on the coffee table an hour ago. "May I come in?" "You haven't told me why you're here." "I'm aware." She held his gaze for a beat longer than was comfortable, which was a thing she'd learned to do specifically because of him, because in the early days she'd been the first to look away and she'd decided at some point that she was done being the first to do anything. She stepped back from the door. He moved past her, close enough that she caught the faint trace of something — cedar, maybe, or the particular cold of November streets still clinging to the wool of his jacket. She shut the door and worked the deadbolts in reverse, one two three, giving herself those few seconds with her back to him. When she turned around he was standing at Eva's bookshelf, not reading the spines, just standing there with his cane loose in his hand and his shoulders carrying a tension she hadn't noticed in the corridor. "You look tired," she said. "You look well." He said it without turning around. "London suits you better than it did." "You saw me four months ago." "I know when I saw you." She moved to the kitchen, filling the kettle more to occupy her hands than out of any particular desire for tea. The small flat made distance between them impossible — fifteen feet, maybe, between the kitchen counter and where he stood. "Four months and you show up at eleven at night without ringing ahead." "Would you have answered if I'd rung?" She set the kettle on its base and pressed the switch. The element ticked on. He'd turned now. The amber eye tracked her across the kitchen. "Probably not," she admitted. "Then we've saved some time." "We haven't saved anything, Lucien. You're standing in my friend's flat and you still haven't said why." She crossed her arms, not in hostility but because she needed something to do with them. "So." He set the cane against the bookshelf and it leaned there obediently. He moved to the armchair across from the sofa — Eva's reading chair, the one that sagged on the right side — and he didn't sit in it so much as lower himself into it with the careful deliberateness of someone who hadn't slept. "There's a job. Something's come up that requires — " He stopped. Pressed two fingers to the bridge of his nose. "That requires someone who thinks laterally. Someone the usual circles don't know." "You have an entire network of people." "I have people who are known. The situation calls for clean." "And you thought of me." "I always think of you." The kettle reached its boil and clicked off. The silence it left behind had weight. Rory didn't move from the kitchen. She studied him — the line of his jaw, the slight looseness around his eyes that wasn't tiredness exactly but something more like the aftermath of it, as though he'd been awake very deliberately for days rather than simply unable to sleep. "That's not fair," she said. "No." He didn't pretend not to understand her. "It isn't." She pulled two mugs down from the cabinet and dropped a teabag in each one without being asked whether he wanted any. There was something almost muscle-memory about it, the way she knew without thinking that he'd take it with one sugar and no milk, and the recognition of that knowledge was its own small grief. "The last time I helped you with a job," she said, pouring the water, "you told me the risk was minimal." "The risk was minimal." "I got stabbed, Lucien." "Superficially." She turned around and looked at him. "Superficially," he said again, with considerably less conviction. "It needed four stitches." "Which I arranged." "In a car. You arranged stitches for me in the back of a moving car." Ptolemy had followed him into the flat and was now installed across his knee with total commitment, and Lucien sat with one hand resting on the cat's back in a way that suggested he hadn't entirely noticed he was doing it. "I was scared," he said. Quiet. Matter-of-fact, the way he delivered anything that cost him. "When you were hurt. I want you to know that before whatever conversation we're about to have." Rory set his mug on the coffee table and took her own to the sofa, tucking her feet up beneath her. She wrapped both hands around the warmth and looked at him across the small distance that was all the room allowed.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said again [again]"
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.3
leniency0.6
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.05
76.44% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1061
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"precisely"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count1
4
adverb"deliberately"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
2"precisely"
3"very"
4"deliberately"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
62.30% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1061
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"comfortable"
count1
2
word"tension"
count1
3
word"desire"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"aftermath"
count1
7
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"comfortable"
2"tension"
3"desire"
4"silence"
5"weight"
6"aftermath"
7"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences55
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences55
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"managed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences83
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen51
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1072
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount841
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.71
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva4
Moreau1
Ptolemy3
Lucien4
Rory6
November1
Pressed1
Quiet1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Lucien"
4"Rory"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences38
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.933
wordCount1072
matches
0"not in hostility but because she needed something to do with them"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs56
mean19.14
std18.49
cv0.966
sampleLengths
060
14
232
37
452
53
612
72
852
95
1025
114
129
1348
144
157
162
1751
186
1955
2036
215
2216
236
246
2541
2613
277
2815
2911
304
315
3234
3356
3433
357
3611
375
385
3915
4048
415
4210
4356
4421
454
464
471
487
498
98.88% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences55
matches
0"being asked"
98.99% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs132
matches
0"was standing"
1"was doing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences83
ratio0.084
matches
0"He looked precisely as she remembered him, which was somehow the most annoying part — the platinum hair slicked back to architectural perfection, the charcoal suit without so much as a crease from whatever journey had brought him here."
1"Downstairs the curry house pumped its familiar haze up through the floorboards — cardamom, fenugreek, something frying — and Ptolemy materialised from behind her ankles to investigate the newcomer with the unsolicited confidence of a cat who'd never once been wrong about a person."
2"He glanced past her into the flat — the towers of books on every surface, Eva's scrolls pinned to the wall above the radiator, the cold mug of tea Rory had abandoned on the coffee table an hour ago."
3"He moved past her, close enough that she caught the faint trace of something — cedar, maybe, or the particular cold of November streets still clinging to the wool of his jacket."
4"The small flat made distance between them impossible — fifteen feet, maybe, between the kitchen counter and where he stood."
5"He moved to the armchair across from the sofa — Eva's reading chair, the one that sagged on the right side — and he didn't sit in it so much as lower himself into it with the careful deliberateness of someone who hadn't slept."
6"She studied him — the line of his jaw, the slight looseness around his eyes that wasn't tiredness exactly but something more like the aftermath of it, as though he'd been awake very deliberately for days rather than simply unable to sleep."
94.18% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount836
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount39
adverbRatio0.04665071770334928
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.014354066985645933
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences83
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences83
mean12.92
std12.5
cv0.968
sampleLengths
05
135
220
34
428
54
67
739
89
94
103
119
123
132
146
152
1644
175
1825
194
209
215
224
2339
244
257
262
2751
286
2932
3023
3136
325
339
347
356
366
3721
3820
3913
407
4111
424
433
448
454
465
4733
481
4912
59.84% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.40963855421686746
totalSentences83
uniqueOpeners34
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences48
matches(empty)
ratio0
20.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences48
matches
0"She did it now, cursing"
1"She pulled it open."
2"He lowered it slowly."
3"He looked precisely as she"
4"She waited for him to"
5"He glanced past her into"
6"She held his gaze for"
7"She stepped back from the"
8"He moved past her, close"
9"She shut the door and"
10"He said it without turning"
11"She moved to the kitchen,"
12"She set the kettle on"
13"He'd turned now."
14"She crossed her arms, not"
15"He set the cane against"
16"He moved to the armchair"
17"She studied him — the"
18"He didn't pretend not to"
19"She pulled two mugs down"
ratio0.5
12.08% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount43
totalSentences48
matches
0"The third deadbolt always stuck."
1"Rory had to lift the"
2"She did it now, cursing"
3"She pulled it open."
4"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
5"He lowered it slowly."
6"He looked precisely as she"
7"The amber eye caught the"
8"The black one didn't."
9"Rory kept her hand on"
10"She waited for him to"
11"Downstairs the curry house pumped"
12"Lucien looked down at him."
13"Rory reached for the tabby,"
14"Something shifted in his expression."
15"He glanced past her into"
16"She held his gaze for"
17"She stepped back from the"
18"He moved past her, close"
19"She shut the door and"
ratio0.896
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences48
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences22
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"He looked precisely as she remembered him, which was somehow the most annoying part — the platinum hair slicked back to architectural perfection, the charcoal s…"
1"Downstairs the curry house pumped its familiar haze up through the floorboards — cardamom, fenugreek, something frying — and Ptolemy materialised from behind he…"
2"When she turned around he was standing at Eva's bookshelf, not reading the spines, just standing there with his cane loose in his hand and his shoulders carryin…"
3"He moved to the armchair across from the sofa — Eva's reading chair, the one that sagged on the right side — and he didn't sit in it so much as lower himself in…"
4"She studied him — the line of his jaw, the slight looseness around his eyes that wasn't tiredness exactly but something more like the aftermath of it, as though…"
5"Matter-of-fact, the way he delivered anything that cost him."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.175
leniency0.35
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.05
77.4238%