Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
83
glossingSentenceCount
6
matches
0
"not quite but with that same low, insistent warmth Rory had learned to distrust over the past two weeks, the kind that had twice led her to the edges of things she hadn't been ready to see"
1
"felt like a held breath — like the land"
2
"violet that seemed to shift toward her as she looked at it"
"Not painfully — not quite — but with that same low, insistent warmth Rory had learned to distrust over the past two weeks, the kind that had twice led her to the edges of things she hadn't been ready to see."
1
"The Shade moved like smoke given manners — contained, deliberate, keeping pace at her left shoulder in what she'd come to recognise as a chosen proximity."
2
"Richmond Park in November was all iron skies and bare oaks, the kind of landscape that felt like a held breath — like the land was waiting for permission to go grey all the way down."
3
"She'd expected standing stones to announce themselves — Stonehenge grandeur, towering and obvious — but these were six ancient oaks, older than anything else in the park by the look of their gnarled bark, arranged in a rough circle that might have been mistaken for chance if you weren't looking."
4
"Not warmer — warmer would have been explicable."
5
"She crouched, bringing her face close to the ground without touching it — old instinct, the kind her father had drilled into her on walks as a child, you look before you touch — and the flowers were perfect."
6
"But within the circle, the air smelled of green things and something else — older, sweeter, with a faint mineral edge like rain on hot stone, though no rain had fallen and the stone beneath the soil was far below."
7
"The Shade was never still the way humans were still — their form always shifted in small ways, the edges of them breathing in and out of solidity."
8
"She tracked thirty paces from the standing oaks before the light shifted a second time — deepened, somehow, though the sun hadn't moved — and then she heard it."
9
"It wasn't a large space — a rough oval, perhaps twenty feet at its widest, carpeted in moss so deeply green it seemed luminous."
10
"Pale lavender eyes that held too much of something — not malice, nothing so simple — too much time, too many things seen and not spoken."
11
"\"Many things are told to many people.\" Isolde's gaze moved past her to Nyx, and something shifted in those lavender eyes — not surprise, never surprise, but a kind of recalibration."
12
"She thought about the package on her doorstep — anonymous, wrapped in plain brown paper — and the way she'd told herself at the time that she'd look into it, she'd find out who left it, she'd be sensible."
13
"She moved toward them, and Rory tracked the ground beneath her feet automatically — the instinct of someone who'd learned in the last month to notice the ways magic left evidence."
14
"Slender, leaf-shaped, the material of the blade catching the grove's soft light differently than steel would — too matte, too pale."
15
"Behind Rory, Nyx made a sound that was almost — not quite, but almost — a breath."
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
55
technicalSentenceCount
7
matches
0
"Not painfully — not quite — but with that same low, insistent warmth Rory had learned to distrust over the past two weeks, the kind that had twice led her to th…"
1
"Richmond Park in November was all iron skies and bare oaks, the kind of landscape that felt like a held breath — like the land was waiting for permission to go …"
2
"She'd expected standing stones to announce themselves — Stonehenge grandeur, towering and obvious — but these were six ancient oaks, older than anything else in…"
3
"There were others, scattered through the longer grass: something blue and bell-shaped, something deep violet that seemed to shift toward her as she looked at it…"
4
"The light was different too: softer, more even, as though the shadows had been smoothed out by a considerate hand."
5
"Sound, or the edge of sound: something between music and weather, a low harmonic drone that she felt more in her back teeth than heard in her ears, rising and f…"
6
"Sitting on the far edge of it, looking at Rory as though she'd been waiting since before Rory was born, was Isolde."