| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 94.97% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1987 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 49.67% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1987 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "echo" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "flickered" | | 6 | "mechanical" | | 7 | "weight" | | 8 | "stomach" | | 9 | "measured" | | 10 | "vibrated" | | 11 | "perfect" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 201 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 201 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 203 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 56 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 5 | | totalWords | 2013 | | ratio | 0.002 | | matches | | 0 | "You left this for yourself." |
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| 97.22% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Quick out-of-the-box thinking, Eva called it." |
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| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 29 | | wordCount | 1999 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.6 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Heartstone | 4 | | October | 2 | | London | 1 | | Didn | 2 | | Hel | 2 | | Eva | 1 | | Aurora | 12 | | Hel-portal | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 81.19% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 109 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like a sidestep, and each time she" | | 1 | "smelled like soil after rain, and undernea" | | 2 | "ircles she had apparently walked, was walking" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 8 | | per1kWords | 3.974 | | wordCount | 2013 | | matches | | 0 | "not stone at all, of course, but oak so ancient" | | 1 | "not by much, but enough" | | 2 | "Not to her left, where the breathing had been, but directly behind her" | | 3 | "not quickly, not with any sudden lunge, but with the slow lateral drift of something" | | 4 | "not with any sudden lunge, but with the slow lateral drift of something" | | 5 | "not the sweetness she remembered from her daylight visits but something coppery" | | 6 | "not the creeping fractional drift but a deliberate forward motion" | | 7 | "no syllable but" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 203 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 58 | | mean | 34.71 | | std | 24.32 | | cv | 0.701 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 38 | | 1 | 50 | | 2 | 47 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 58 | | 5 | 1 | | 6 | 42 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 58 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 47 | | 13 | 27 | | 14 | 65 | | 15 | 39 | | 16 | 44 | | 17 | 28 | | 18 | 32 | | 19 | 51 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 50 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 53 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 39 | | 28 | 35 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 75 | | 31 | 51 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 69 | | 34 | 23 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 75 | | 37 | 21 | | 38 | 66 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 101 | | 41 | 57 | | 42 | 41 | | 43 | 48 | | 44 | 37 | | 45 | 63 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 46 | | 48 | 33 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 201 | | matches | | 0 | "been scrubbed" | | 1 | "been warned" | | 2 | "been warned" |
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| 44.44% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 7 | | totalVerbs | 300 | | matches | | 0 | "was reacting" | | 1 | "were not blooming" | | 2 | "was exhaling" | | 3 | "was watching" | | 4 | "was coming" | | 5 | "was wearing" | | 6 | "was walking" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 26 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 19 | | totalSentences | 203 | | ratio | 0.094 | | matches | | 0 | "The screen threw cold light across her knuckles, and the Heartstone pendant pulsed once against her sternum — a slow, liquid warmth, like a second heartbeat pressed to her chest." | | 1 | "The standing stones materialized out of the tree line one by one as she moved deeper — not stone at all, of course, but oak so ancient and so dense it had petrified into something harder than granite." | | 2 | "The grove opened ahead of her — a clearing roughly forty feet across, carpeted with wildflowers that should not have been blooming in late October and were not blooming now." | | 3 | "The time display blinked — 11:58, then 11:51, then 12:17, then 11:58 again — and she shoved the phone back in her pocket before the numbers could rearrange themselves further." | | 4 | "So low she felt it before she heard it — a vibration in the soft earth that climbed through the soles of her boots and settled in her molars." | | 5 | "The sound continued — slow, deliberate inhalations from somewhere behind the tree line to her left." | | 6 | "The pendant was warmer now, not by much, but enough that she was aware of it against her skin — a coin left in the sun." | | 7 | "And as she watched, it moved — not quickly, not with any sudden lunge, but with the slow lateral drift of something that had been standing motionless for a very long time and was only now deciding to adjust its position by a few inches to the right." | | 8 | "Just the shape of it — tall, thin, upright in a way that no tree or stone or deer could account for — and the absolute certainty that it was watching her." | | 9 | "Close enough that she could see it wasn't a shadow at all but a gap — a void cut into the air in the rough outline of a figure, a space where the dark was denser and the faint moonlight simply stopped." | | 10 | "The outline of its head — if it was a head — tilted." | | 11 | "Every bloom in the clearing unfurled at once with a sound like a hundred whispered syllables, and the smell hit her — not the sweetness she remembered from her daylight visits but something coppery and alive, the scent of a wound before the blood dries." | | 12 | "Not fresh — the edges had softened with rain and time." | | 13 | "Or time had folded over on itself in this pocket between worlds and all her visits — past, future, imagined — had left their marks at once." | | 14 | "And from somewhere in the tree line behind the void, the breathing started again — only now it came from every direction at once, surrounding the clearing in a ring of slow, measured inhalations that rose and fell with the rhythm of the Heartstone in her fist." | | 15 | "Then a continuous buzzing that drilled into her hip, and the pendant went cold — instant, total, like plunging her hand into ice water." | | 16 | "The outline of the figure sharpened for a single heartbeat — she glimpsed angles that suggested cheekbones, the hollow where eyes should have been, a jaw that was too long and hinged in the wrong place — and then the moonlight shifted and it was just a gap again, a tear in the night shaped like a person." | | 17 | "Then the hand — the limb — the suggestion of a gesture — turned and pointed at her chest." | | 18 | "And in the perfect dark, Aurora heard the grass begin to move around her feet in slow, tightening circles — the sound of something vast and patient, drawing closed." |
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| 90.57% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1981 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "continued — slow, deliberate inhalations" |
| | adverbCount | 87 | | adverbRatio | 0.043917213528520946 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006562342251388188 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 203 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 203 | | mean | 9.92 | | std | 10.1 | | cv | 1.018 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 28 | | 2 | 9 | | 3 | 1 | | 4 | 30 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 21 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 38 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 1 | | 33 | 1 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 30 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 40.96% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 21 | | diversityRatio | 0.30845771144278605 | | totalSentences | 201 | | uniqueOpeners | 62 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 12 | | totalSentences | 162 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead the space between the" | | 1 | "Just a silence so total" | | 2 | "Just stopped, like the dark" | | 3 | "Then she'd put on her" | | 4 | "Just the wall of ancient" | | 5 | "So low she felt it" | | 6 | "Too long between each breath." | | 7 | "Just the shape of it" | | 8 | "Then the flowers opened." | | 9 | "Then a continuous buzzing that" | | 10 | "Then the hand — the" | | 11 | "Then it spoke." |
| | ratio | 0.074 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 44 | | totalSentences | 162 | | matches | | 0 | "She pulled her jacket tighter" | | 1 | "She tucked the phone away" | | 2 | "She'd been here twice in" | | 3 | "She stood in the gap" | | 4 | "she whispered, and the word" | | 5 | "She counted them off as" | | 6 | "She stopped at five and" | | 7 | "She counted again, slower this" | | 8 | "She was certain of that." | | 9 | "She pressed her palm flat" | | 10 | "It wrapped around her ankles" | | 11 | "She'd come because the message" | | 12 | "She'd spent the day telling" | | 13 | "She reached the centre of" | | 14 | "She checked her phone again." | | 15 | "She knew that." | | 16 | "She'd been warned." | | 17 | "It started low." | | 18 | "She held her own breath" | | 19 | "Her voice came out steadier" |
| | ratio | 0.272 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 115 | | totalSentences | 162 | | matches | | 0 | "The last dog-walker had left" | | 1 | "Aurora watched his torchlight bob" | | 2 | "She pulled her jacket tighter" | | 3 | "The screen threw cold light" | | 4 | "She tucked the phone away" | | 5 | "The oak standing stones were" | | 6 | "She'd been here twice in" | | 7 | "The wildflowers had turned their" | | 8 | "The air had tasted sweet" | | 9 | "That was the first wrong" | | 10 | "Richmond Park in October should" | | 11 | "Aurora stopped walking." | | 12 | "She stood in the gap" | | 13 | "The sound was grotesquely loud." | | 14 | "she whispered, and the word" | | 15 | "The standing stones materialized out" | | 16 | "She counted them off as" | | 17 | "She stopped at five and" | | 18 | "Aurora's pulse kicked sideways." | | 19 | "She counted again, slower this" |
| | ratio | 0.71 | |
| 30.86% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 162 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.006 | |
| 72.43% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 71 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead the space between the trees held a vacuum, scentless and still, as though the night had been scrubbed clean." | | 1 | "The grove opened ahead of her — a clearing roughly forty feet across, carpeted with wildflowers that should not have been blooming in late October and were not …" | | 2 | "Every petal sealed shut, every stem bent in the same direction, northeast, as though something in the far corner of the clearing had frightened them into fetal …" | | 3 | "And as she watched, it moved — not quickly, not with any sudden lunge, but with the slow lateral drift of something that had been standing motionless for a very…" | | 4 | "The shape held still, its not-face angled toward hers, waiting with the patience of something that had been here since the oaks were saplings and would be here …" | | 5 | "Then a continuous buzzing that drilled into her hip, and the pendant went cold — instant, total, like plunging her hand into ice water." | | 6 | "The outline of the figure sharpened for a single heartbeat — she glimpsed angles that suggested cheekbones, the hollow where eyes should have been, a jaw that w…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she whispered, and the word fell dead at her feet" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |