Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
123
glossingSentenceCount
5
matches
0
"luminescence that seemed to come from the walls themselves — a faint, blue-green phosphorescence that reminded her of the bioluminescent algae she'd seen once on a holiday in Wales"
"Harlow Quinn kept her eyes on the figure thirty meters ahead — the dark jacket, the short curly hair plastered flat by the downpour, the way he moved with the fluid economy of someone who knew these streets better than she did."
1
"She caught the flash of his face under a streetlamp — olive skin, wide eyes, the white gleam of something at his throat."
2
"Herrera vaulted a low fence at the edge of the market stalls — the daytime ones, locked up now behind corrugated shutters and padlocked gates."
3
"No firearm — this was London, and she was CID, not an armed response unit."
4
"She checked her watch — the worn leather band dark with water — and noted the time."
5
"Not just empty of Morris — empty of everything."
6
"She counted thirty steps, then forty, then lost count as the stairwell curved and the caged bulbs gave way to a dim luminescence that seemed to come from the walls themselves — a faint, blue-green phosphorescence that reminded her of the bioluminescent algae she'd seen once on a holiday in Wales."
7
"Camden had them — most of London did, sealed up and forgotten, existing in the margins of the city's memory."
8
"People moved between the stalls — and she used the word \"people\" loosely, because some of them were not, or not entirely."
9
"A child — no, something child-shaped — with too many teeth, browsing a display of bottled liquids that glowed in colors she wasn't sure she had names for."
10
"She noticed that everyone who entered produced something small from a pocket or bag and held it up briefly — a token of some kind, pale and irregular in shape."
11
"And Quinn knew — with the bone-deep certainty that had kept her alive through eighteen years of police work — that if she left now, this entrance would be gone by morning."
12
"And those incidents shared a quality — a texture, a flavor of wrongness — with what had happened to Morris."
13
"She walked the way she walked through any crime scene — with her eyes open and her face closed."
14
"Behind her, somewhere in the depths of the market, something howled — low and sustained and wrong, the sound curling through the vaulted chamber like smoke."
15
"His grip was firm, professional — a paramedic's grip, trained to hold people still."
16
"Her phone buzzed immediately — four missed calls, two texts, full signal restored."
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
104
technicalSentenceCount
15
matches
0
"Harlow Quinn kept her eyes on the figure thirty meters ahead — the dark jacket, the short curly hair plastered flat by the downpour, the way he moved with the f…"
1
"She pushed harder, her boots slapping through puddles that reflected the blurred neon of shuttered storefronts."
2
"It turned the street into a mirror of itself, doubling the amber streetlights into smeared columns that stretched toward her feet."
3
"More static, thick and strange, underlaid with something that sounded almost like whispering."
4
"The scraping led her to a set of stairs she'd never noticed in all her years walking Camden."
5
"Concrete steps, narrow, lit by a single caged bulb that threw sickly yellow light down into a darkness that swallowed everything below the fourth step."
6
"She counted thirty steps, then forty, then lost count as the stairwell curved and the caged bulbs gave way to a dim luminescence that seemed to come from the wa…"
7
"The air smelled of smoke and copper and something floral she couldn't name, something that made her sinuses ache."
8
"A man whose shadow moved independently of his body, crouching and stretching against the wall like a separate organism."
9
"A child — no, something child-shaped — with too many teeth, browsing a display of bottled liquids that glowed in colors she wasn't sure she had names for."
10
"She noticed that everyone who entered produced something small from a pocket or bag and held it up briefly — a token of some kind, pale and irregular in shape."
11
"And Quinn knew — with the bone-deep certainty that had kept her alive through eighteen years of police work — that if she left now, this entrance would be gone …"
12
"The particular exhaustion of someone who had been carrying a weight for too long and had forgotten what it felt like to stand straight."
13
"Quinn walked to the nearest main road, hailed a cab, and sat in the back seat with water pooling around her boots, watching London slide past the window."
14
"She pressed her thumb against the place on her wrist where Herrera's fingers had been and thought about Morris, about warehouses that were too clean, about wall…"