| 88.89% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 16 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Pryce shrugged like [like]" | | 1 | "He flipped back [back]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 36 | | tagDensity | 0.444 | | leniency | 0.889 | | rawRatio | 0.125 | | effectiveRatio | 0.111 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1719 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 56.37% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1719 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silk" | | 1 | "perfect" | | 2 | "etched" | | 3 | "scanning" | | 4 | "echoing" | | 5 | "could feel" | | 6 | "rhythmic" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "mechanical" | | 9 | "trembled" | | 10 | "magnetic" | | 11 | "footsteps" | | 12 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 132 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 132 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 151 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 48 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1736 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 30 | | wordCount | 1388 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.72 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Underground | 1 | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 10 | | Pryce | 8 | | Young | 1 | | Italian | 1 | | Morris | 2 | | Rotherhithe | 1 | | Sixty-three | 1 | | Three | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Pryce" | | 3 | "Morris" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 87 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.576 | | wordCount | 1736 | | matches | | 0 | "not north but toward the tunnel's deeper reaches" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 151 | | matches | | 0 | "seen that face" | | 1 | "carrying that sweetness" | | 2 | "go, that he'd" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 46 | | mean | 37.74 | | std | 28.22 | | cv | 0.748 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 43 | | 1 | 79 | | 2 | 67 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 82 | | 6 | 28 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 72 | | 9 | 59 | | 10 | 37 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 67 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 55 | | 16 | 34 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 88 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 86 | | 21 | 44 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 103 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 41 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 31 | | 31 | 91 | | 32 | 54 | | 33 | 31 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 54 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 32 | | 40 | 64 | | 41 | 46 | | 42 | 55 | | 43 | 52 | | 44 | 51 | | 45 | 16 |
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| 94.63% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 132 | | matches | | 0 | "been chipped" | | 1 | "been worn" | | 2 | "being strangled" | | 3 | "were curled" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 223 | | matches | | 0 | "was looking" | | 1 | "was beginning" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 16 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 14 | | totalSentences | 151 | | ratio | 0.093 | | matches | | 0 | "The abandoned station yawned around her — vaulted ceilings blackened with a century of soot, tiled walls where the station name had long since been chipped away, and rails thick with dust that hadn't seen a train in decades." | | 1 | "Male, mid-fifties, dressed in what had once been expensive clothes — a grey herringbone coat, silk-lined, with hand-stitched buttonholes." | | 2 | "No signs of struggle — no skin fragments under the man's fingernails, no defensive abrasions on his hands." | | 3 | "Rigor had locked them in place, but she could see the edge of it — brass, green with verdigris, small enough to sit in a palm." | | 4 | "No wallet in his pockets — she'd checked." | | 5 | "\"Ferragamo. Even in that condition, they'd fetch two hundred at a consignment shop. And look at his watch pocket.\" The tiny pocket on the waistcoat still held a chain — actual gold, from the colour of it — that terminated in an empty clip." | | 6 | "Decades of abandonment, and yet — she crossed to the wall nearest the body." | | 7 | "But she could feel something — a faint vibration, deep and rhythmic, like a pulse in the brickwork." | | 8 | "At the thirty-first pace — dead center — she found scuff marks on the concrete." | | 9 | "Wax and something herbal — sage, maybe, or something that wanted to smell like sage but carried a bitterness beneath it." | | 10 | "He'd been watching whatever had happened here, compass in hand, and someone had killed him for it — or during it, or because of it." | | 11 | "But the glass face was new — replacement, recent." | | 12 | "Inside, the compass needle held its bearing — aimed into the dark throat of the tunnel, steady and absolute, pointing at something she couldn't see but was beginning, with a sickening certainty, to believe was there." | | 13 | "It pointed into the tunnel with mechanical insistence, and she felt the pull of it in her sternum, a gravity she recognized from every case that had ever mattered — the particular weight of a thread begging to be followed." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1383 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 39 | | adverbRatio | 0.028199566160520606 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004338394793926247 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 151 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 151 | | mean | 11.5 | | std | 9.7 | | cv | 0.844 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 5 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 33 | | 5 | 39 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 1 | | 9 | 1 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 24 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 20 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 1 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 48 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 26 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 67.33% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.44370860927152317 | | totalSentences | 151 | | uniqueOpeners | 67 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 31 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | | 0 | "He gestured toward the body" | | 1 | "She crouched beside the body." | | 2 | "His shoes were Italian leather," | | 3 | "His face held an expression" | | 4 | "She'd seen that face on" | | 5 | "She glanced up at Pryce" | | 6 | "He flipped back a page" | | 7 | "He tapped the bruising around" | | 8 | "She studied the marks." | | 9 | "They encircled the neck in" | | 10 | "She lifted his right hand." | | 11 | "She angled the hand toward" | | 12 | "Her knees popped." | | 13 | "She ran her fingers along" | | 14 | "She crouched and pressed her" | | 15 | "She stood and walked the" | | 16 | "She crouched and sniffed." | | 17 | "She stood and looked back" | | 18 | "He'd been watching whatever had" | | 19 | "she said to no one" |
| | ratio | 0.282 | |
| 82.73% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 83 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | | 0 | "The service tunnel smelled wrong." | | 1 | "This was something older." | | 2 | "Copper and ozone and a" | | 3 | "Detective Harlow Quinn ducked beneath" | | 4 | "The abandoned station yawned around" | | 5 | "Camden's underworld in the most" | | 6 | "DC Pryce stood near the" | | 7 | "The kind of officer who" | | 8 | "He gestured toward the body" | | 9 | "Quinn pulled nitrile gloves from" | | 10 | "Pryce shrugged like this was" | | 11 | "She crouched beside the body." | | 12 | "His shoes were Italian leather," | | 13 | "A man clinging to old" | | 14 | "His face held an expression" | | 15 | "The kind reserved for the" | | 16 | "She'd seen that face on" | | 17 | "A warehouse in Rotherhithe." | | 18 | "The memory threaded through her" | | 19 | "She glanced up at Pryce" |
| | ratio | 0.755 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 36.47% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the usual cocktail of mildew and stale urine that haunted every decommissioned stretch of the Underground." | | 1 | "The abandoned station yawned around her — vaulted ceilings blackened with a century of soot, tiled walls where the station name had long since been chipped away…" | | 2 | "Geometric shapes nested inside one another with a precision that made her eyes slide off them if she looked too long." | | 3 | "Wax and something herbal — sage, maybe, or something that wanted to smell like sage but carried a bitterness beneath it." | | 4 | "The verdigris on the casing was uneven, thick in crevices, worn off high points, the kind of patina that took years to develop." | | 5 | "Three years of dead ends and sealed files and colleagues who told her to let it go, that he'd surprised a vagrant, that it was a tragedy but a mundane one." | | 6 | "It pointed into the tunnel with mechanical insistence, and she felt the pull of it in her sternum, a gravity she recognized from every case that had ever matter…" |
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| 93.75% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 16 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "DC Pryce stood, his notebook open, pen cap between his teeth" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 36 | | tagDensity | 0.056 | | leniency | 0.111 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |