Run: 2026-02-24-01KJ8WT2FE64MHEGEMJXCHWTNJ

Run Details

Model:
Aion 2.0
Duration:
1m 14s
Cost:
$0.005347
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain fell in relentless, icy sheets, turning the Soho pavement into a black mirror of neon and despair. Detective Harlow Quinn moved through it with the grim focus of a predator, her boots striking the wet concrete with military precision. Each step was measured, controlled, despite the burn in her lungs and the hammering of her heart. Eighteen years on the force had taught her how to run, but nothing had prepared her for the ghosts that ran with her. Ahead, a dark shape—a man in a sodden leather jacket—darted across Old Compton Street, slipping between the closing doors of a late-night coffee shop. Quinn didn't break stride. She’d been tailing him for twenty minutes, ever since he’d emerged from the side door of The Raven’s Nest. She’d seen the distinctive green neon sign reflected in the puddles as she waited in the shadows, the worn leather watch on her wrist feeling like a lead weight. Three years. Three years since Morris had bled out in an alley not unlike these, his eyes wide with a terror she still couldn’t classify. The report said it was a gangland knife. She knew it was something else. Something that left no trace but the cold, hollow certainty in her gut. The man—Tomás Herrera, according to her files—was her best lead. A former paramedic with a revoked license, now a street doctor for people who didn’t go to hospitals. People, she suspected, who weren’t entirely people. He was connected to the clique she’d been building a case against, a loose network of faces that always seemed to slip through the net of ordinary crime. Herrera was the thread. And tonight, he was running. He cut down a narrow alley, the brick walls weeping with damp. Quinn followed, her sharp jaw set, brown eyes scanning the darkness. The alley emptied into a smaller courtyard, littered with overflowing bins. Herrera was already scrambling over a low wall at the far end. For a former medic, he was agile. Quinn vaulted the wall, landing in a crouch, her hand going instinctively to the holster under her left arm. She didn’t draw. Not yet. The chase descended, literally. They left the relative glow of Soho for the industrial backwaters near Camden, the rain making the railway arches loom like cavern mouths. Herrera was leading her on a deliberate path, she realized. He wasn’t just fleeing; he was going somewhere specific. The thought tightened the knot in her stomach. Morris had muttered about “going underground” in his final, feverish moments. She’d assumed he meant going into hiding. Now, she wasn’t sure. Herrera disappeared behind a rusted construction hoarding next to a boarded-up station entrance. The sign, faded and peeling, still read “Camden Town.” Quinn slowed, approaching with caution. The hoarding covered a gap in the fencing. Beyond it, a set of crumbling concrete stairs led down into absolute blackness. A cold, damp wind sighed up from the depths, carrying a scent of ozone, damp earth, and something else—incense and decay. She paused at the top, her breath forming plumes in the chilled air. This was it. The decision point. Follow a suspect into an unknown, unsecured subterranean location, alone, without backup. Procedure screamed against it. Every instinct honed over her career told her to call it in, to set up a perimeter, to wait. But procedure hadn’t saved Morris. She saw his face again, the confusion in his brown eyes—so like her own—as the life left them. She remembered the pristine, almost surgical lack of evidence at the scene. No prints, no fibers, no ballistic match. Just Morris, and a look of profound, supernatural disbelief. Quinn took the stairs. The darkness swallowed her. She used the flashlight on her phone, the beam cutting a shaky path over graffiti-strewn walls and littered steps. The air grew colder, thicker. After two flights, the stairs ended at a heavy, riveted metal door, slightly ajar. A faint, pulsating glow seeped from around its edges. She heard the low murmur of a crowd. Pushing the door open a fraction, she peered inside. Her mind struggled to process the scene. She was in a vast, vaulted space, the arched ceiling of an abandoned Tube station. But it was no longer abandoned. Dozens of stalls lined the old platforms, lit by lanterns that burned with impossible colours—deep violets, sickly greens, and a gold that seemed to move. The air hummed with low conversation and a strange, melodic chiming. People—if they were people—moved through the aisles. A woman with skin like polished bark examined a vial of swirling liquid. A man whose shadow didn’t match his form haggled over a bundle of feathers that shimmered in the low light. The place was a bazaar, but nothing here was ordinary. The Veil Market. She’d heard the name in whispers, in the paranoid ramblings of informants she’d dismissed as addicts. A black market for things that shouldn’t exist. And there, thirty yards away, was Tomás Herrera. He had stopped running. He stood by a stall draped in dark velvet, talking urgently with a tall, gaunt individual whose long fingers were covered in rings. Herrera’s olive skin was slick with rain and sweat, his short curly hair plastered to his forehead. As he gestured, the sleeve of his jacket rode up, and Quinn caught a glimpse of the scar running along his left forearm. The Saint Christopher medallion glinted at his throat. He was buying something. The gaunt man handed him a small, cloth-wrapped bundle. Herrera passed over a few coins that gleamed dully, then something else—a small, pale object that looked like a knucklebone. The bone token. Herrera tucked the bundle inside his jacket and began to move deeper into the market, casting a nervous glance over his shoulder. Quinn stepped fully into the cavernous space, letting the door sigh shut behind her. The sound was barely audible over the market’s din, but a few nearby heads turned. Eyes, some with vertical pupils, some glowing faintly, fixed on her. She felt their gaze like a physical pressure. She was a discordant note here, in her sensible trench coat, with her police-issue posture and human smell. An intruder. She kept her hand near her holster and started after Herrera, weaving through the crowd. The stalls sold nightmares and wonders: jars containing things that squirmed, books bound in skin, knives that drank the light. A vendor with too many teeth smiled at her, offering a “charm for clarity.” She ignored him. Herrera was heading for a narrower tunnel at the far end of the platform, an access shaft perhaps. If he reached it, he’d be gone. Quinn picked up her pace, her boots echoing too loudly on the old tiles. “You are lost.” The voice was dry, rustling like dead leaves. A hand, cold and thin as a bird’s claw, settled on her arm. Quinn flinched, looking down at a figure shrouded in a grey cloak, its face hidden in shadow. “I’m not,” Quinn said, her voice harder than she felt. “This is not a place for your kind of law,” the figure whispered. “The market moves with the moon. It tolerates, but does not protect. The man you follow… he consorts with curers of deeper ills. You will not like what you find.” The words echoed Morris’s last rant about “curers” and “tainted blood.” Quinn shook off the hand. “Let go of me.” The figure retreated, melting back into the crowd with a soft, mocking chuckle. Herrera had seen her. His warm brown eyes widened in recognition and alarm. He ducked into the tunnel. Quinn ran. The decision was made the moment she’d taken the stairs. She plunged into the tunnel after him. It was darker here, lit only by sporadic, fungal-looking growths that gave off a faint bioluminescent glow. The air was stale, tasting of metal and rot. She could hear his footsteps ahead, splashing through shallow water. The tunnel curved and then opened into a smaller, circular chamber. Herrera was there, backed against a wall, the bundle clutched to his chest. He was breathing hard. “Detective Quinn,” he said, his Spanish accent thickening with stress. “You should not have come down here.” “Then you shouldn’t have led me here, Tomás.” She kept her distance, her posture loose but ready. “What’s in the package?” “Medicine,” he said simply. “For who?” “For people who need it. People your world forgets.” His eyes darted to the tunnel entrance behind her. “You need to leave. Now. Before they notice you’ve disturbed the flow.” “They who?” Quinn took a step forward. “The same ‘they’ who killed my partner? DS Morris. Three years ago. You were still with the NHS then. Did you hear about it? A cop dead in an alley, no cause, no suspects. Just a lot of questions.” Herrera’s face changed. The defiance bled away, replaced by a weary sorrow. He touched the medallion at his neck. “I heard. I am sorry for your loss. But you are digging in a grave that will only bury you. Morris… he saw a transaction. He tried to stop it. This world, it has its own rules. Its own justice.” “What transaction?” Quinn’s voice was a razor. “What did he see?” A sound echoed from the main market hall behind them—a deep, resonant gong. The murmur of the crowd shifted, becoming agitated. Herrera’s eyes filled with genuine fear. “The toll. The market’s guardians know an outsider is where she shouldn’t be. You have no token. You are not invited.” He pushed himself off the wall. “There is another way out. A service ladder at the back of this chamber. It leads to the surface, near the canal. Take it.” “I’m not letting you go.” “You have no choice,” Herrera said, and there was no malice in it, only grim fact. “If you stay, they will take you. And you will not be seen again. Your choice is to live with questions, or die with answers you cannot use.” The gong sounded again, closer now. Quinn heard heavy, shuffling footsteps entering the tunnel she’d just come through. Shapes blocked the faint light. Her heart pounded against her ribs. Every fibre of her being wanted to arrest Herrera, to seize the package, to force the truth out into the light of day. But the memory of Morris’s empty, terrified eyes was suddenly joined by the reality of the shifting shadows in the tunnel, the unnatural chill, the claw-like hand on her arm. She was out of her depth. For the first time in her career, Harlow Quinn truly understood what that meant. With a last, searing look at Tomás Herrera, she turned and ran for the back of the chamber, where a rusted iron ladder ascended into a ventilation shaft. She climbed, the cold metal biting into her palms, the sounds of the hidden world fading below her, leaving only the echo of her own failure, and the chilling certainty that the truth was far darker, and far deeper, than she had ever imagined.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said simply [simply]"
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.481
leniency0.963
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.074
91.90% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1852
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"suddenly"
2"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
40.60% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1852
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"predator"
count1
1
word"measured"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"scanning"
count1
4
word"stomach"
count1
5
word"depths"
count1
6
word"chilled"
count1
7
word"pristine"
count1
8
word"profound"
count1
9
word"shimmered"
count1
10
word"velvet"
count1
11
word"charm"
count1
12
word"echoing"
count1
13
word"echoed"
count2
14
word"footsteps"
count2
15
word"grave"
count1
16
word"chill"
count1
17
word"searing"
count1
18
word"echo"
count1
19
word"chilling"
count1
highlights
0"predator"
1"measured"
2"weight"
3"scanning"
4"stomach"
5"depths"
6"chilled"
7"pristine"
8"profound"
9"shimmered"
10"velvet"
11"charm"
12"echoing"
13"echoed"
14"footsteps"
15"grave"
16"chill"
17"searing"
18"echo"
19"chilling"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences137
matches(empty)
90.72% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences137
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"look"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences150
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1840
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions60
wordCount1567
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity1.15
worstName"Herrera"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Soho2
Harlow2
Quinn17
Old1
Compton1
Street1
Raven1
Nest1
Morris6
Tomás3
Herrera18
Camden1
Tube1
Veil1
Market1
Saint1
Christopher1
Spanish1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Raven"
3"Morris"
4"Tomás"
5"Herrera"
6"Saint"
7"Christopher"
places
0"Soho"
1"Old"
2"Compton"
3"Street"
4"Camden"
globalScore0.926
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences107
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"gold that seemed to move"
1"looked like a knucklebone"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.543
wordCount1840
matches
0"no trace but"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences150
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean41.82
std30.09
cv0.719
sampleLengths
081
1128
272
377
476
569
654
75
846
94
1059
119
12114
1327
1483
1558
1668
1752
1839
193
2038
2110
2243
2320
2413
2518
2655
2728
2817
2921
304
312
3230
3346
3459
3511
3621
3757
385
3944
4023
4159
4220
4372
95.02% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences137
matches
0"was connected"
1"were covered"
2"was made"
3"being wanted"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount8
totalVerbs255
matches
0"was running"
1"was already scrambling"
2"was leading"
3"was going"
4"wasn’t just fleeing"
5"was buying"
6"was heading"
7"was breathing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences150
ratio0.06
matches
0"Ahead, a dark shape—a man in a sodden leather jacket—darted across Old Compton Street, slipping between the closing doors of a late-night coffee shop."
1"The man—Tomás Herrera, according to her files—was her best lead."
2"He wasn’t just fleeing; he was going somewhere specific."
3"A cold, damp wind sighed up from the depths, carrying a scent of ozone, damp earth, and something else—incense and decay."
4"She saw his face again, the confusion in his brown eyes—so like her own—as the life left them."
5"Dozens of stalls lined the old platforms, lit by lanterns that burned with impossible colours—deep violets, sickly greens, and a gold that seemed to move."
6"People—if they were people—moved through the aisles."
7"Herrera passed over a few coins that gleamed dully, then something else—a small, pale object that looked like a knucklebone."
8"A sound echoed from the main market hall behind them—a deep, resonant gong."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1585
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"over graffiti-strewn walls"
adverbCount43
adverbRatio0.027129337539432176
lyAdverbCount18
lyAdverbRatio0.011356466876971609
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences150
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences150
mean12.27
std8.12
cv0.662
sampleLengths
019
122
217
323
424
54
619
729
82
923
108
116
1213
1310
1418
157
1628
174
185
1912
2011
2111
2212
237
2419
253
262
274
2823
2910
309
318
3211
337
344
3513
3614
378
3813
3921
4013
413
423
4312
444
4519
465
4718
4812
497
43.78% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.30666666666666664
totalSentences150
uniqueOpeners46
25.06% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences133
matches
0"Just Morris, and a look"
ratio0.008
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences133
matches
0"She’d been tailing him for"
1"She’d seen the distinctive green"
2"She knew it was something"
3"He was connected to the"
4"He cut down a narrow"
5"She didn’t draw."
6"They left the relative glow"
7"He wasn’t just fleeing; he"
8"She’d assumed he meant going"
9"She paused at the top,"
10"She saw his face again,"
11"She remembered the pristine, almost"
12"She used the flashlight on"
13"She heard the low murmur"
14"Her mind struggled to process"
15"She was in a vast,"
16"She’d heard the name in"
17"He had stopped running."
18"He stood by a stall"
19"He was buying something."
ratio0.286
38.95% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount112
totalSentences133
matches
0"The rain fell in relentless,"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn moved through"
2"Each step was measured, controlled,"
3"Quinn didn't break stride."
4"She’d been tailing him for"
5"She’d seen the distinctive green"
6"The report said it was"
7"She knew it was something"
8"Something that left no trace"
9"The man—Tomás Herrera, according to"
10"A former paramedic with a"
11"People, she suspected, who weren’t"
12"He was connected to the"
13"Herrera was the thread."
14"He cut down a narrow"
15"Quinn followed, her sharp jaw"
16"The alley emptied into a"
17"Herrera was already scrambling over"
18"Quinn vaulted the wall, landing"
19"She didn’t draw."
ratio0.842
75.19% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences133
matches
0"Now, she wasn’t sure."
1"If he reached it, he’d"
ratio0.015
98.90% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences65
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"A former paramedic with a revoked license, now a street doctor for people who didn’t go to hospitals."
1"Quinn vaulted the wall, landing in a crouch, her hand going instinctively to the holster under her left arm."
2"Dozens of stalls lined the old platforms, lit by lanterns that burned with impossible colours—deep violets, sickly greens, and a gold that seemed to move."
3"Herrera passed over a few coins that gleamed dully, then something else—a small, pale object that looked like a knucklebone."
9.62% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Quinn said, her voice harder than she felt"
1"he said, his Spanish accent thickening with stress"
2"She kept, her posture loose but ready"
75.93% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Morris had (have)"
1"the figure whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.222
leniency0.444
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.148
78.7665%