| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said carefully [carefully]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 24 | | tagDensity | 0.625 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.067 | | effectiveRatio | 0.067 | |
| 94.37% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1776 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 40.88% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1776 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sentinels" | | 1 | "throbbed" | | 2 | "resonance" | | 3 | "whisper" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "shimmered" | | 6 | "weight" | | 7 | "stomach" | | 8 | "etched" | | 9 | "pulse" | | 10 | "rhythmic" | | 11 | "chill" | | 12 | "warmth" | | 13 | "reminder" | | 14 | "crystal" | | 15 | "perfect" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 125 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 125 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 133 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 51 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1800 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 95.26% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 53 | | wordCount | 1644 | | uniqueNames | 15 | | maxNameDensity | 1.09 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 18 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Isolde | 7 | | Nyx | 9 | | London | 3 | | Seer | 2 | | Three | 1 | | Fae | 3 | | English | 1 | | Dymas | 3 | | Shade | 1 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Seer" | | 4 | "Shade" | | 5 | "Yu-Fei" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.953 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 89 | | glossingSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "quite hear, a resonance below the threshold of her ears, more pressure than noise" | | 1 | "quite penetrate" | | 2 | "looked like coffee grounds, and the sky a" | | 3 | "smelled like nothing she had ever encounte" | | 4 | "viridian that seemed to pulse with internal light" | | 5 | "sounded like permission until she added" | | 6 | "looked like fingers for once, instead of" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.556 | | wordCount | 1800 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 133 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 43 | | mean | 41.86 | | std | 29.23 | | cv | 0.698 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 71 | | 2 | 49 | | 3 | 64 | | 4 | 52 | | 5 | 28 | | 6 | 27 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 65 | | 9 | 27 | | 10 | 36 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 69 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 58 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 85 | | 18 | 71 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 63 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 58 | | 23 | 28 | | 24 | 94 | | 25 | 71 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 27 | | 28 | 86 | | 29 | 37 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 44 | | 32 | 122 | | 33 | 27 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 50 | | 36 | 31 | | 37 | 83 | | 38 | 26 | | 39 | 79 | | 40 | 25 | | 41 | 39 | | 42 | 8 |
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| 99.65% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 125 | | matches | | 0 | "was carved" | | 1 | "were glazed" |
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| 97.04% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 259 | | matches | | 0 | "was pulsing" | | 1 | "were stepping" | | 2 | "was pointing" | | 3 | "was telling" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 19 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 17 | | totalSentences | 133 | | ratio | 0.128 | | matches | | 0 | "By the time they passed Isolde's standing oaks — those impossible sentinels whose bark had fused into something more like stone than wood — the crimson gem was pulsing so fiercely she could see its glow through her jacket, a hot coal nestled against her chest." | | 1 | "Through it, colors bled that had no business existing in a London park — amber and gold and something warmer still, a hue she had no name for." | | 2 | "She left no mark in the soft earth where she'd stood, and the wildflowers — crocuses, impossibly, in this season — swayed back upright as though she weighed nothing at all." | | 3 | "In the fading light of the park, they were barely visible — a tall humanoid absence, a place where shadow pooled and thickened into something with intent." | | 4 | "There was no transition — no tunnel, no corridor of light, no gradual dissolve from one place to another." | | 5 | "The smell hit first and hardest — roasting stone fruit, caramelized sugar, woodsmoke, and beneath it all something vegetal and alive, the concentrated essence of a thousand growing things exhaling at once." | | 6 | "Between the vine rows, fruit hung in clusters she couldn't identify — too large for grapes, too luminous, their skins shifting color as she watched, cycling from plum-dark to a blushing gold." | | 7 | "Rory could hear, faintly, the rhythmic percussion of knives on cutting boards — dozens of them, maybe hundreds, a polyrhythmic chopping that rose and fell like rain on a tin roof." | | 8 | "She stepped through the rift the way she did everything — silently, with an economy of motion that made the extraordinary look habitual." | | 9 | "The light had no visible source — no sun, no moon, just that depthless amber glow suffusing the sky like stained glass backlit by fire." | | 10 | "Each cluster grew on stems as thick as Rory's wrist, and the individual fruits were the size of plums, their skins translucent enough that she could see seeds inside — tiny dark shapes suspended in glowing pulp." | | 11 | "Rory noticed they were more solid here than she'd ever seen them in London — more defined, the edges of their silhouette sharper, as though Dymas was a place where even shadows had more substance." | | 12 | "It was carved from a single piece of dark wood — or grown from it, the legs still rooted in the earth, branches curling up from the table's edges to form candelabras that held flames without wicks or wax." | | 13 | "Fruits split open to reveal interiors of shocking jewel-toned color — ruby, sapphire, emerald." | | 14 | "Somewhere deeper in Dymas, a bell rang — low, sonorous, the kind of sound you felt in your chest cavity." | | 15 | "Not metaphorically — the stone had angled on its chain, straining toward the source of the bell like a compass needle finding true north." | | 16 | "She thought of Yu-Fei's kitchen back in London — the cramped galley behind the Golden Empress, the clatter of woks, the honest human sweat of a dinner rush." |
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| 87.28% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1636 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "shocking jewel-toned color —" |
| | adverbCount | 78 | | adverbRatio | 0.04767726161369193 | | lyAdverbCount | 25 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.015281173594132029 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 133 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 133 | | mean | 13.53 | | std | 9.77 | | cv | 0.722 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 46 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 28 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 31 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 27 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 19 | | 39 | 50 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 32 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 29 | | 48 | 24 | | 49 | 32 |
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| 59.40% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.40601503759398494 | | totalSentences | 133 | | uniqueOpeners | 54 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | | 0 | "Then her eyes adjusted, and" | | 1 | "Then her composure returned, smooth" | | 2 | "Then she blinked and focused," | | 3 | "Somewhere deeper in Dymas, a" |
| | ratio | 0.035 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 32 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd felt it quicken a" | | 1 | "She could see the rift." | | 2 | "She left no mark in" | | 3 | "Her pale lavender eyes fixed" | | 4 | "Her silver hair lifted in" | | 5 | "Their violet eyes floated like" | | 6 | "She drew a slow breath." | | 7 | "She stepped through." | | 8 | "Her mouth watered before her" | | 9 | "Her stomach clenched with a" | | 10 | "They stood at the crest" | | 11 | "Their violet eyes swept the" | | 12 | "It was the first time" | | 13 | "She stepped through the rift" | | 14 | "She closed her eyes and" | | 15 | "They descended the hill single" | | 16 | "Its pulse had steadied since" | | 17 | "Her body wanted desperately to" | | 18 | "She curled her fingers into" | | 19 | "she said over her shoulder," |
| | ratio | 0.283 | |
| 66.19% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 89 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | | 0 | "The pendant burned against Rory's" | | 1 | "She'd felt it quicken a" | | 2 | "The air ahead of them" | | 3 | "Something deeper, as though reality" | | 4 | "Rory said, though no one" | | 5 | "She could see the rift." | | 6 | "A vertical crease in the" | | 7 | "Isolde stopped walking." | | 8 | "She left no mark in" | | 9 | "Her pale lavender eyes fixed" | | 10 | "the Seer said" | | 11 | "Her silver hair lifted in" | | 12 | "Rory kept her voice level" | | 13 | "Isolde tilted her head, ageless" | | 14 | "Nyx drifted forward." | | 15 | "Their violet eyes floated like" | | 16 | "The shadow-form rippled." | | 17 | "Rory's hand found the Fae" | | 18 | "The leaf-shaped dagger was cold" | | 19 | "She drew a slow breath." |
| | ratio | 0.788 | |
| 88.50% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | | 0 | "By the time they passed" | | 1 | "Now it throbbed in time" |
| | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 16.13% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | technicalSentenceCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "She left no mark in the soft earth where she'd stood, and the wildflowers — crocuses, impossibly, in this season — swayed back upright as though she weighed not…" | | 1 | "They stood at the crest of a low hill, and below them Dymas unfolded like something dreamed by a painter who'd gone mad in the most beautiful way possible." | | 2 | "Vineyards cascaded down terraced slopes in rows so precise they looked etched, their leaves a deep viridian that seemed to pulse with internal light." | | 3 | "Between the vine rows, fruit hung in clusters she couldn't identify — too large for grapes, too luminous, their skins shifting color as she watched, cycling fro…" | | 4 | "Beyond the vineyards, orchards spread in concentric rings around structures that might have been kitchens or temples or both." | | 5 | "She stepped through the rift the way she did everything — silently, with an economy of motion that made the extraordinary look habitual." | | 6 | "Rory noticed they were more solid here than she'd ever seen them in London — more defined, the edges of their silhouette sharper, as though Dymas was a place wh…" | | 7 | "They kept flexing their hands, opening and closing fingers that actually looked like fingers for once, instead of vague dark appendages." | | 8 | "It was carved from a single piece of dark wood — or grown from it, the legs still rooted in the earth, branches curling up from the table's edges to form candel…" | | 9 | "She looked at the vineyards behind them, the orchards with their keening music, the amber sky that held no sun." | | 10 | "Its warmth seeped into her palm, insistent and strange, pulling them deeper into a realm that wanted very badly to be generous." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 25.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 12 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 1 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "she murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 24 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.25 | |