| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 17 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 45 | | tagDensity | 0.378 | | leniency | 0.756 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 94.27% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1745 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 39.83% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1745 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "silk" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "could feel" | | 4 | "whisper" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "throbbed" | | 7 | "shimmered" | | 8 | "marble" | | 9 | "crystallized" | | 10 | "stomach" | | 11 | "etched" | | 12 | "pulsed" | | 13 | "perfect" | | 14 | "desire" | | 15 | "footsteps" | | 16 | "measured" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 108 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 108 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 135 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 48 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1769 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 88.36% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 51 | | wordCount | 1460 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 1.23 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 18 | | London | 1 | | November | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Isolde | 9 | | Earth | 2 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Nyx | 8 | | Evan | 1 | | Sunday | 2 | | Hel | 1 | | Fae | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "November" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Earth" | | 4 | "Nyx" | | 5 | "Evan" | | 6 | "Fae" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "Hel" |
| | globalScore | 0.884 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 51.32% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 76 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like crystallized sap" | | 1 | "seemed more defined than they ever had on Earth — the edges of their silhouette sharper, the darkness of their body deeper by contrast against the golden light" | | 2 | "looked like peaches made of glass, and in" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1769 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 135 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 54 | | mean | 32.76 | | std | 26.99 | | cv | 0.824 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 55 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 65 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 35 | | 7 | 38 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 30 | | 13 | 91 | | 14 | 70 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 40 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 42 | | 19 | 63 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 61 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 68 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 29 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 64 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 80 | | 33 | 36 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 25 | | 37 | 98 | | 38 | 54 | | 39 | 44 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 38 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 80 | | 44 | 101 | | 45 | 20 | | 46 | 48 | | 47 | 54 | | 48 | 31 | | 49 | 33 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 108 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 230 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 22 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 19 | | totalSentences | 135 | | ratio | 0.141 | | matches | | 0 | "Not a gradual shift — one step she breathed London's damp November chill, and the next her lungs filled with something thick and sweet, like inhaling warm honey." | | 1 | "The light it cast had weight — Rory could feel it pressing against her skin like bathwater." | | 2 | "Arguing with Isolde was like arm-wrestling smoke — you exhausted yourself while the smoke just drifted." | | 3 | "The fruit that hung in heavy clusters was translucent, each grape the size of a marble, and inside Rory could see something moving — tiny currents, lazy spirals of luminescence, as though each one contained its own small weather system." | | 4 | "Beyond it, the landscape erupted into terraced orchards, the trees unlike anything terrestrial — some bearing fruit that glowed faintly blue, others dripping with what looked like crystallized sap." | | 5 | "Here, in this amber world, they seemed more defined than they ever had on Earth — the edges of their silhouette sharper, the darkness of their body deeper by contrast against the golden light." | | 6 | "The breeze carried roasting meat and caramelized sugar and something underneath those — something dark and earthy and ancient, like the smell of a forest floor after rain but richer, deeper." | | 7 | "Up close, Rory could see the bark was etched with fine lines — patterns that might have been natural grain or might have been script." | | 8 | "The Fae-forged blade sat against her hip in the makeshift sheath Nyx had fashioned from a belt, and even through the leather she could feel its perpetual cold — a counterpoint to the pendant's heat." | | 9 | "They moved down through the vineyard in single file — Nyx leading, their incorporeal edges brushing the vine leaves aside without disturbing them, Rory in the middle, Isolde trailing with her silent, footprintless steps." | | 10 | "Layers of scent accumulated like geological strata — fruit and fermentation at the surface, then roasted grain, then butter and saffron and black cardamom, then deeper still something almost mineral, almost metallic, that Rory associated with blood." | | 11 | "The trees here were massive — trunks wider than cars, bark the color of dried blood, branches heavy with fruit she had no frame of reference for." | | 12 | "One tree bore what looked like peaches made of glass, and inside each one she could see a tiny, perfect scene playing out — a dinner table, a feast, figures eating and laughing in endless loop." | | 13 | "\"Memory fruit.\" Isolde plucked a leaf from the tree — just a leaf — and held it up." | | 14 | "Their form had gone rigid — fully solid, which Rory had learned meant they were alarmed." | | 15 | "Not cautious ones — confident, measured, accompanied by the clink of metal on metal." | | 16 | "His skin had a faintly reddish tint, and his eyes — when they locked onto the group — were solid black from corner to corner." | | 17 | "His expression didn't change — he had the still, appraising look of a butcher evaluating a cut of meat — but something in his posture shifted." | | 18 | "Then he smiled — wide, too wide, the excess teeth catching the amber light." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1446 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "sudden, visceral, hollow ache" |
| | adverbCount | 42 | | adverbRatio | 0.029045643153526972 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004149377593360996 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 135 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 135 | | mean | 13.1 | | std | 10.36 | | cv | 0.79 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 28 | | 2 | 27 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 2 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 30 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 1 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 24 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 24 | | 30 | 40 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 29 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 34 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 25 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 31 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 70.62% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.45925925925925926 | | totalSentences | 135 | | uniqueOpeners | 62 | |
| 34.72% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "Then he smiled — wide," |
| | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 25 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "Their whisper-voice carried an edge" | | 1 | "Her silver hair caught the" | | 2 | "They stood at the edge" | | 3 | "They twisted around trellises of" | | 4 | "They paused at the edge" | | 5 | "Their violet eyes dimmed" | | 6 | "Her mouth flooded with saliva." | | 7 | "She swallowed hard." | | 8 | "It just sat there, patient" | | 9 | "She pointed at the vine's" | | 10 | "She gestured at the glowing" | | 11 | "They moved down through the" | | 12 | "She caught herself staring at" | | 13 | "She thought about Evan's smile." | | 14 | "They cleared the vineyard and" | | 15 | "It was warm green shot" | | 16 | "Their form had gone rigid" | | 17 | "She drew the Fae blade" | | 18 | "His skin had a faintly" | | 19 | "His nostrils flared." |
| | ratio | 0.26 | |
| 48.54% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 79 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "The pendant burned against Rory's" | | 1 | "The shimmer she'd walked through" | | 2 | "The sky was amber." | | 3 | "This was a deep, saturated" | | 4 | "The light it cast had" | | 5 | "Nyx solidified at her left" | | 6 | "Their whisper-voice carried an edge" | | 7 | "Isolde moved past them both," | | 8 | "Her silver hair caught the" | | 9 | "Rory pressed her palm flat" | | 10 | "The pulse that had been" | | 11 | "Isolde's lavender eyes slid sideways." | | 12 | "Rory bit down on the" | | 13 | "They stood at the edge" | | 14 | "The vines were nothing like" | | 15 | "They twisted around trellises of" | | 16 | "The fruit that hung in" | | 17 | "The vineyard stretched for what" | | 18 | "Nyx drifted forward, their shadow-form" | | 19 | "Here, in this amber world," |
| | ratio | 0.823 | |
| 52.08% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "Because what stretched before her" |
| | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 50.26% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "The shimmer she'd walked through dissolved behind them with a sound like tearing silk, and the grey of Richmond Park vanished as though it had never existed." | | 1 | "Nyx solidified at her left shoulder, their form pulling tight and dense, the violet glow of their eyes narrowing to pinpricks." | | 2 | "The pulse that had been a gentle nudge for weeks now throbbed with the steady rhythm of a second heartbeat, warm enough to sting." | | 3 | "The fruit that hung in heavy clusters was translucent, each grape the size of a marble, and inside Rory could see something moving — tiny currents, lazy spirals…" | | 4 | "Beyond it, the landscape erupted into terraced orchards, the trees unlike anything terrestrial — some bearing fruit that glowed faintly blue, others dripping wi…" | | 5 | "In the amber light, the moonsilver didn't glow as it did under Earth's moon, but it caught the gold and threw it back sharper, whiter, a defiant sliver of somet…" | | 6 | "The first was tall and broad-shouldered, dressed in a long apron stained with things that might have been sauces or might have been worse, a heavy cleaver hangi…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 17 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 45 | | tagDensity | 0.089 | | leniency | 0.178 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |