Run: 2026-02-24-01KJ8WVXXGNAZNY2YZK4Y0RRTY

Run Details

Model:
Aion 2.0
Duration:
1m 19s
Cost:
$0.005769
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air in The Raven's Nest held the familiar scent of polished wood, spilled ale, and the faint, ever-present hint of Silas’s cigar smoke that had seeped into the walls over decades. Rory Carter sat on her usual stool at the far end of the bar, the one with a slight wobble that matched the uneven rhythm of her thoughts. A half-finished pint of bitter sat before her, condensation tracing slow paths down the glass. She traced the crescent scar on her left wrist with her thumb, a subconscious habit when the silence grew too loud. Silas moved behind the bar with the economical grace of his trade, his slight limp more pronounced in the damp evening. He polished a tumbler with a white cloth, his silver signet ring catching the low green glow from the neon sign outside the window. He didn’t speak. He never did when she was like this, lost in the grey space between delivery shifts and the four walls of the flat above. It was a kindness. The door opened, slicing a wedge of sodium-yellow street light and the damp murmur of Soho into the dimness. A woman stepped in, shaking a compact umbrella closed. She was all sharp lines and expensive wool—a tailored coat the colour of charcoal, hair cut in a severe bob that screamed a salon in Mayfair. For a moment, she was just another city professional seeking a discreet drink. Then her eyes adjusted to the light, and they landed on Rory. Rory felt the recognition like a physical jolt. It wasn’t immediate. The woman’s face was older, sharper, the softness of her early twenties carved away by years and ambition. But the eyes, wide and a familiar shade of hazel, were the same. “Rory?” The voice was different too. Lower, more assured, polished with received pronunciation that had sanded away the Welsh lilt. Megan Davies. Cardiff University. Pre-Law tutorials, late-night library sessions fueled by terrible coffee, shared laughter that used to come so easily. Rory’s hand stilled on her wrist. She offered a slow, careful nod. “Megan.” Megan’s perfectly shaped eyebrows lifted. She approached the bar, her heels clicking a precise rhythm on the old floorboards. She slid onto the stool next to Rory, leaving one empty between them as if it were a necessary buffer. She placed her leather handbag on the bar with a soft, definitive thud. “My God. I heard you’d moved to London, but I never…” Megan’s gaze swept over Rory, taking in the worn leather jacket, the simple grey t-shirt, the hair that was just a bit too long and fell across her eyes. “I never expected to find you in a place like this.” “It’s a bar.” Rory’s voice was flat. She took a sip of her bitter. “People drink in them.” “You know what I mean.” A faint flush touched Megan’s cheeks. She turned to Silas, who had materialised soundlessly before her. “A gin and tonic. Hendricks, if you have it. Fever-Tree tonic.” Silas gave a near-imperceptible nod and turned to prepare the drink. His hazel eyes met Rory’s for a fraction of a second—a question, an offer of intervention. She gave a slight shake of her head. “So,” Megan said, turning back. She clasped her hands on the bar, her nails a flawless, neutral pink. “How long has it been? Four years? Five?” “Five and a half.” Rory remembered the last time vividly. A crowded student union bar, Megan waving a letter of offer from a law firm, Rory forcing a smile while Evan’s hand was a possessive weight on her lower back. She had stopped returning calls not long after. “Right.” Megan accepted the gin from Silas with a murmur of thanks. She took a delicate sip. “You just vanished, Rory. One day you were there, top of our torts class, the next… poof. People talked. There were rumours.” “Let them talk.” “I didn’t believe most of them.” Megan’s tone was careful, probing. “The one about you running off to join the circus seemed a bit far-fetched.” A ghost of a smile touched Rory’s lips. It felt strange on her face. “Not the circus.” “What, then? What have you been doing with yourself?” Megan’s gaze was intent, searching for the girl she’d known in the woman sitting beside her. Rory considered the lie, the easy deflection. *I’m in consulting. Freelance work.* But the weight of the years, the unspoken chasm between the life Megan assumed and the one she actually lived, pressed down. “I deliver food. For a Chinese restaurant in Camden.” Megan blinked. The silence stretched, filled only by the soft clink of ice in her glass. “You deliver food.” “Part-time. The hours are flexible.” “Rory, you were the smartest person in our year. Professor Callahan said you had a mind for constitutional law that came along once a decade.” Megan’s voice held a bewildered frustration. “And you’re riding a moped with noodle boxes?” “Sometimes it’s rice.” Rory took another drink. The bitter tasted of dust and regret. “Why?” The word was sharp, stripped of its professional polish. “What happened? Was it… was it Evan?” The name hung in the air between them, toxic and familiar. Rory’s fingers tightened around her glass. She didn’t answer. She didn’t need to. Megan let out a slow breath. “I knew it. I knew there was something… off about him. I should have said something. Done something.” “You did. You told me he was a ‘bit intense.’” Rory’s voice was quiet, devoid of accusation. It was just a fact. “I was twenty-one. I was scared of sounding like a nag. I thought you’d tell me to piss off.” Megan stared into her gin. “I regret that. More than you know.” The admission settled over them. Rory studied her old friend—the impeccable suit under the coat, the air of controlled competence. She looked like everything Rory’s parents had hoped she would become. “You look successful.” Megan gave a short, humourless laugh. “I am. Associate at Thorne & Grafton. Seventy-hour weeks, a flat in Canary Wharf I never see, a boyfriend who schedules our dinners a month in advance.” She looked at Rory, really looked at her. “You look… free.” Rory barked a laugh, a harsh, unexpected sound. “Free? Is that what this looks like?” “It looks like you answer to no one. It looks like you left a cage, even if you landed in a… a different kind of room.” Megan’s eyes drifted to the scar on Rory’s wrist, then away, as if she’d seen something too private. “I think about that cage sometimes. The one we were all scrambling to get into. The partnership track, the corner office, the right postcode. I got in. And most days, I can’t remember why I wanted it.” “You wanted it because it was the plan,” Rory said. “The only plan we were ever given.” “And you broke the plan.” There was no envy in Megan’s voice, only a profound, weary curiosity. “How does it feel? To be off the map?” Rory thought of Silas’s hidden back room, of the coded messages she sometimes carried for Yu-Fei Cheung, of the quiet, watchful life she’d built piece by piece from the wreckage. It wasn’t freedom. It was a different kind of survival, narrower and more deliberate. “It feels quiet,” she said finally. “Mostly, it just feels quiet.” Megan finished her drink. She signalled to Silas for another, but he was already there, replacing the empty glass with a fresh one. He moved away without a word. “I miss you, you know,” Megan said softly, to her own reflection in the mirror behind the bar. “I miss the person you were. The one who could argue a point into the ground and then buy the rounds after.” “She’s gone.” The words came out more bluntly than Rory intended. “I can see that.” Megan turned to face her. The professional mask had slipped, revealing the tired, regretful woman beneath. “But is what’s here… is it better?” Rory didn’t have an answer. Better was a luxury she’d stopped weighing years ago. Existence was the metric. Waking up without fear was the milestone. She looked at Megan, at the life she had chosen and now questioned, and felt a surge of something that wasn’t pity, but a deep, resonant sadness for the paths not taken, for the versions of themselves they had both buried. “It’s different,” Rory said at last. Megan nodded, accepting the non-answer. She took a long drink. “Do you ever think about coming back? To the law? It’s not too late. I could put in a word. We’re always looking for researchers with sharp minds.” The offer hung in the air, a lifeline thrown from one ship to another drifting in separate seas. Rory imagined it: the crisp shirts, the weight of a legal tome, the sterile smell of a corporate office. The cage, polished and gilded. “No,” she said, and the word felt final, a stone dropped into a deep well. “That’s not my life anymore.” Megan’s shoulders slumped, just a fraction. She finished her second gin and tonic and reached for her purse. “I should go. Early deposition tomorrow.” She stood, pulling on her expensive coat. She hesitated, then placed a business card on the bar next to Rory’s pint. The card was thick, creamy stock. *Megan Davies, Associate. Thorne & Grafton Solicitors.* “If you change your mind. Or if you ever just… want a coffee. With someone who remembers the old you.” Rory looked at the card but didn’t touch it. “Goodbye, Megan.” Megan offered one last, searching look, then turned and walked back into the London night. The door swung shut, sealing the bar in its familiar, amber-lit silence once more. Silas appeared, collecting the empty glass and the condensation-ringed coaster. His eyes flicked to the business card. “Leave it,” Rory said. He nodded, wiping the bar clean where Megan had sat, erasing the physical evidence of the encounter. Rory stared at the scar on her wrist, then out the window at the distorted green glow of the neon raven. The weight of the last five years settled in her bones, heavy and irrevocable. The past had walked in, spoken its piece, and left. All that remained was the quiet.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"she said finally [finally]"
1"Megan said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences55
tagDensity0.345
leniency0.691
rawRatio0.105
effectiveRatio0.073
91.26% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1717
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"really"
2"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
41.76% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1717
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"familiar"
count4
1
word"tracing"
count1
2
word"traced"
count1
3
word"silence"
count3
4
word"lilt"
count1
5
word"flawless"
count1
6
word"weight"
count4
7
word"unspoken"
count1
8
word"profound"
count1
9
word"coded"
count1
10
word"flicked"
count1
11
word"encounter"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"tracing"
2"traced"
3"silence"
4"lilt"
5"flawless"
6"weight"
7"unspoken"
8"profound"
9"coded"
10"flicked"
11"encounter"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count2
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences115
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences115
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences146
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords12
totalWords1714
ratio0.007
matches
0"I’m in consulting. Freelance work."
1"Megan Davies, Associate. Thorne & Grafton Solicitors."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions79
wordCount1235
uniqueNames17
maxNameDensity2.43
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Silas8
Carter1
Soho1
Mayfair1
Rory30
Welsh1
Davies2
University1
Megan26
Evan1
Yu-Fei1
Cheung1
Associate1
Grafton1
London1
persons
0"Nest"
1"Silas"
2"Carter"
3"Rory"
4"Davies"
5"Megan"
6"Evan"
7"Yu-Fei"
8"Cheung"
places
0"Raven"
1"Soho"
2"Mayfair"
3"London"
globalScore0.285
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences82
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like everything Rory’s parents had"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1714
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences146
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs53
mean32.34
std20.96
cv0.648
sampleLengths
096
176
279
342
41
540
613
752
851
918
1032
1135
1226
1348
1439
153
1625
1717
1825
1943
2019
215
2239
2314
2417
2524
2624
2722
2831
2934
3044
3115
3281
3317
3426
3555
3629
3740
3811
3927
4066
416
4238
4342
4420
4524
4634
4720
4811
4929
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences115
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs198
matches(empty)
84.15% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences146
ratio0.021
matches
0"She was all sharp lines and expensive wool—a tailored coat the colour of charcoal, hair cut in a severe bob that screamed a salon in Mayfair."
1"His hazel eyes met Rory’s for a fraction of a second—a question, an offer of intervention."
2"Rory studied her old friend—the impeccable suit under the coat, the air of controlled competence."
93.24% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1248
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"familiar, amber-lit silence"
adverbCount51
adverbRatio0.040865384615384616
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.009615384615384616
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences146
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences146
mean11.74
std8.8
cv0.75
sampleLengths
032
128
215
321
421
524
63
724
84
919
109
1126
1213
1312
148
153
1618
1713
181
195
2014
212
222
2317
246
256
261
275
2814
2920
3013
3140
3211
337
347
354
3611
3710
3811
3911
4016
418
425
4313
448
4510
4630
478
4812
495
42.01% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.3013698630136986
totalSentences146
uniqueOpeners44
60.61% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences110
matches
0"Then her eyes adjusted to"
1"All that remained was the"
ratio0.018
81.82% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences110
matches
0"She traced the crescent scar"
1"He polished a tumbler with"
2"He didn’t speak."
3"He never did when she"
4"It was a kindness."
5"She was all sharp lines"
6"It wasn’t immediate."
7"She offered a slow, careful"
8"She approached the bar, her"
9"She slid onto the stool"
10"She placed her leather handbag"
11"She took a sip of"
12"She turned to Silas, who"
13"His hazel eyes met Rory’s"
14"She gave a slight shake"
15"She clasped her hands on"
16"She had stopped returning calls"
17"She took a delicate sip."
18"It felt strange on her"
19"*I’m in consulting."
ratio0.345
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount102
totalSentences110
matches
0"The air in The Raven's"
1"Rory Carter sat on her"
2"A half-finished pint of bitter"
3"She traced the crescent scar"
4"Silas moved behind the bar"
5"He polished a tumbler with"
6"He didn’t speak."
7"He never did when she"
8"It was a kindness."
9"The door opened, slicing a"
10"A woman stepped in, shaking"
11"She was all sharp lines"
12"Rory felt the recognition like"
13"It wasn’t immediate."
14"The woman’s face was older,"
15"The voice was different too."
16"Pre-Law tutorials, late-night library sessions"
17"Rory’s hand stilled on her"
18"She offered a slow, careful"
19"Megan’s perfectly shaped eyebrows lifted."
ratio0.927
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences110
matches(empty)
ratio0
45.45% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The air in The Raven's Nest held the familiar scent of polished wood, spilled ale, and the faint, ever-present hint of Silas’s cigar smoke that had seeped into …"
1"Rory Carter sat on her usual stool at the far end of the bar, the one with a slight wobble that matched the uneven rhythm of her thoughts."
2"She was all sharp lines and expensive wool—a tailored coat the colour of charcoal, hair cut in a severe bob that screamed a salon in Mayfair."
3"Pre-Law tutorials, late-night library sessions fueled by terrible coffee, shared laughter that used to come so easily."
4"She slid onto the stool next to Rory, leaving one empty between them as if it were a necessary buffer."
5"She looked at Megan, at the life she had chosen and now questioned, and felt a surge of something that wasn’t pity, but a deep, resonant sadness for the paths n…"
98.68% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said, and the word felt final, a stone dropped into a deep well"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences55
tagDensity0.127
leniency0.255
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
80.1884%