Run: 2026-02-24-01KJ8WVZFJZ16ZSGXDYP7Q9H6S

Run Details

Duration:
1m 50s
Cost:
$0.107955
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The last of the regulars had gone at quarter past midnight. The Raven's Nest settled into itself the way old buildings do when the people leave — a slow exhalation, the creak of wood cooling, the refrigerators behind the bar suddenly audible. Silas moved through the quiet, upending chairs onto tables, collecting the last of the abandoned glasses. He didn't hear the door to the stairs open. "Couldn't sleep." Rory stood at the bottom of the staircase in an oversized grey jumper and jeans, her black hair loose around her jaw, feet bare on the flagstone floor. Not asking permission. Just explaining herself to the room, or to him, or to no one in particular. Silas set a glass down on the bar. "There's decaf. And there's whisky." "You know which one I want." He poured two fingers of Jameson into a lowball without being asked and slid it along the bar as she settled onto a stool. The green neon from the sign bled through the frosted window above the door and laid itself across one side of her face in pale cold light. She looked younger in it. Not young. Younger. There was a difference. She turned the glass without drinking, watching the amber tilt. "The maps," she said, nodding toward the wall. "Did you put those up or were they here when you bought the place?" "Some of both." Silas leaned against the back counter, arms folded loose across his chest. "The one over the fireplace was already here. The others I brought from Prague. Vienna. Cape Town." "Tourist habit." "Something like that." She looked at him then — properly looked, the way she'd been avoiding since she moved in three weeks prior, skimming past pleasantries and rent and the occasional borrowed corkscrew. The hazel of his eyes caught the same neon. The grey in his hair was more settled than she remembered it. More permanent. "You knew my father," she said. Not quite a question. Silas didn't move. "I did." "He mentioned you. Not often. Once, maybe twice, when I was pressing him about his London trips. He called you the Spymaster." A sound escaped her, not quite a laugh. "I thought it was a joke." "He found it amusing." Silas reached for his own glass, which had sat largely untouched for an hour. "He was a clever man, your father. Annoyingly so. Made it difficult to win an argument." "Yes." The word landed flat. She drank. He watched her jaw tighten around whatever she was deciding not to say next. "You came to Cardiff once," she said. "To the house. I was seventeen. My mum made a leg of lamb. You brought wine." "I remember." He did. A narrow Victorian terrace with a view of the bay in winter. Brendan Carter filling a doorway, laughing at something before the door was fully open. A girl at the top of the stairs in school uniform, pretending not to eavesdrop. Bright eyes and a sharper mind than she let on. "You asked me about the Lebanon." Rory looked up. "You'd said something at dinner and I'd looked it up." "You had colour-coded my errors. Three of them." "There were four. You conceded three." The silence between them rearranged itself. Silas moved along the bar to close the till, doing something with his hands because the conversation had taken a direction he hadn't planned for and he was managing the pace of his own response. "Your father told me you were going to read law," he said. "He was very proud." "He was very certain." She ran a thumb along the rim of her glass. "There's a difference." "And did you?" "Two years. Pre-Law. Cardiff." The bare facts of it assembled and discarded in the same breath. "I didn't finish." He hadn't known that. Brendan Carter had come to London twice more after that leg of lamb dinner, and they'd had their meetings and their habitual two large Scotches and Brendan had talked about his daughter only briefly, the way proud fathers do — assuming the future, describing it with the past-tense confidence of foregone conclusions. She was going to be brilliant. She was going to terrify courtrooms. She had four errors memorised already. "I didn't know," Silas said. "Why would you." Not cold. Just precise. "Your father and I lost touch after—" He stopped. "It's been some years." "He'll be fine," she said, reading something in the pause. "He and Mum are fine. Still in Cardiff. Still the same." A long beat. "We're not close. Not anymore." She said it the way you say a thing you've practised saying, smoothed down by repetition until it no longer caught on anything. Silas recognised the technique. "It wasn't the law," he said carefully. "That made you leave." Her chin lifted by perhaps half an inch. The crescent scar on her left wrist caught the light as she turned the glass again. Old and pink and slight. He hadn't noticed it before. "There was someone," she said. "For two years there was someone, and then I left, and then I came here." Each sentence its own complete sentence. "Eva found me the flat. She said you were decent." "Eva Marchetti?" "You know her?" "London's a village." He gestured slightly. "She asked me to keep an eye out. I didn't realise who she meant." Rory set the glass down. Something moved across her face and then was gone, too fast to name. "She didn't tell me that." "She was worried." "I know she was worried." The edge of it was brief, and she visibly softened it. "Sorry." "No." The refrigerator hummed. A taxi outside on the wet street. Silas watched her look at the map from Prague — a 1960s city map, grid lines and density, the kind of thing that looked like code to an untrained eye. She studied it with the focused blankness of someone not actually seeing a map. "I used to know exactly what I was going to be," she said. "That sounds ridiculous now." "No it doesn't." "I had a plan. A very specific plan." Her voice stayed level, didn't break or soften, and that was worse somehow for what it revealed. "And I thought I was the kind of person who kept to plans." Silas looked at the photographs above the bar. A waterfront in Cape Town. His own younger face half-turned from a camera on a Beirut street, unposed, from before the bad years. The person in that photograph had plans too. Controlled exits and contingencies and a very specific idea of what he was moving toward. "Plans don't account for people," he said. "No." She picked up her glass again and drank the rest of it. "They don't." He reached for the bottle without her asking. Poured. She didn't object. "My father," she said. "Does he know? That you own this place. That I'm here." "I haven't spoken to him in four years." "Four years." Something worked its way through her expression, slowly, like light through water. "What happened?" Silas turned the signet ring on his right hand once, a habit so old he only noticed it in moments like this. "He made a decision I disagreed with. I made one he disagreed with. We were both correct and neither of us said so." Rory exhaled a short, dry sound. "That sounds exactly like him." "It sounds exactly like both of us." She looked at the ring. At his hands. At the photographs again. At him. "You both just let it go," she said. "The friendship. You just put it down." "It got heavy," he said. "Sometimes things get heavy enough and you put them down for a moment and the moment extends and then one day it's simply been four years." The quiet in the bar changed again. It had a texture now, something between them that was almost tender but not quite — too many sharp edges for tender, too much that was known without being said. She was the girl at the top of the stairs again and he was the man who'd been to Lebanon and he'd never come back with the wine after that last visit and she'd stopped asking her father questions. "You lost weight," he said, and immediately felt it was the wrong thing. She didn't flinch. "You got old." "Yes." A slow nod. "I did." Outside the green sign buzzed faintly. Rain had started somewhere in the last few minutes — the hiss of it on the pavement just audible through the windows. Rory pulled the hem of her jumper down over her wrist without seeming to, a gesture so practiced it had become almost invisible. "I think I can sleep now," she said. She slid off the stool and took the glass behind the bar without being asked and rinsed it at the small sink and set it on the rack the way someone does when they've decided to be useful even in small ways. "Goodnight, Silas." "Goodnight, Rory." She crossed the floor and went up the stairs. He listened to her feet on the treads, the door at the top, the silence after. He stood at the bar for a long time in the green light and the rain sound, and thought about Brendan Carter in a Cardiff doorway, laughing at something before the door was even fully open, and thought about four years that had become simply the length of the distance and had never collapsed back into something shorter. He turned the signet ring once more. Then he finished closing up.
created_at"2026-02-24T22:38:42.172Z" 2/24/2026, 10:38:42 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags26
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"he said carefully [carefully]"
1"He gestured slightly [slightly]"
dialogueSentences78
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.051
74.91% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1594
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count4
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
3
adverb"slightly"
count1
4
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"very"
2"carefully"
3"slightly"
4"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
87.45% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1594
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"coded"
count1
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"coded"
1"silence"
2"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences107
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences107
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences153
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen58
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1600
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions30
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount1130
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity0.97
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Jameson1
Silas11
Victorian1
Carter3
London1
Scotches1
Brendan4
Rory5
Prague1
Cape1
Town1
Beirut1
Lebanon1
Cardiff1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Jameson"
3"Silas"
4"Carter"
5"Brendan"
6"Rory"
places
0"Victorian"
1"London"
2"Prague"
3"Cape"
4"Town"
5"Beirut"
6"Lebanon"
7"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"not quite a laugh"
1"brief, and she visibly softened it"
2"looked like code to an untrained eye"
3"something between them that was almost tender b"
4"not quite too many sharp edges for tender, too much that was known without being said"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1600
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences153
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs75
mean21.33
std19.23
cv0.902
sampleLengths
058
19
22
346
413
56
663
710
822
932
102
113
1253
1310
145
1536
1634
175
1816
1923
2061
2113
228
236
2441
2516
2617
273
2819
2974
305
317
3213
3329
3427
3511
3634
3736
382
393
4020
4123
423
4317
441
4554
4617
473
4838
4954
92.15% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences107
matches
0"being asked"
1"was gone"
2"being said"
3"being asked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs174
matches
0"was deciding"
1"was managing"
30.81% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences153
ratio0.039
matches
0"The Raven's Nest settled into itself the way old buildings do when the people leave — a slow exhalation, the creak of wood cooling, the refrigerators behind the bar suddenly audible."
1"She looked at him then — properly looked, the way she'd been avoiding since she moved in three weeks prior, skimming past pleasantries and rent and the occasional borrowed corkscrew."
2"Brendan Carter had come to London twice more after that leg of lamb dinner, and they'd had their meetings and their habitual two large Scotches and Brendan had talked about his daughter only briefly, the way proud fathers do — assuming the future, describing it with the past-tense confidence of foregone conclusions."
3"Silas watched her look at the map from Prague — a 1960s city map, grid lines and density, the kind of thing that looked like code to an untrained eye."
4"It had a texture now, something between them that was almost tender but not quite — too many sharp edges for tender, too much that was known without being said."
5"Rain had started somewhere in the last few minutes — the hiss of it on the pavement just audible through the windows."
89.93% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1126
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount58
adverbRatio0.05150976909413854
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.014209591474245116
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences153
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences153
mean10.46
std9.76
cv0.934
sampleLengths
011
131
216
39
42
528
63
715
88
95
106
1124
1227
135
142
151
164
1710
188
1914
2015
2117
222
233
2430
259
2612
272
286
294
303
312
3230
336
3418
3516
365
372
3814
397
4016
414
4212
4314
4415
4510
466
473
4810
498
45.75% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.3333333333333333
totalSentences153
uniqueOpeners51
77.52% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences86
matches
0"Just explaining herself to the"
1"Then he finished closing up."
ratio0.023
61.86% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences86
matches
0"He didn't hear the door"
1"He poured two fingers of"
2"She looked younger in it."
3"She turned the glass without"
4"she said, nodding toward the"
5"She looked at him then"
6"He watched her jaw tighten"
7"She ran a thumb along"
8"He hadn't known that."
9"She was going to be"
10"She was going to terrify"
11"She had four errors memorised"
12"she said, reading something in"
13"She said it the way"
14"he said carefully"
15"Her chin lifted by perhaps"
16"He hadn't noticed it before."
17"He gestured slightly"
18"She studied it with the"
19"Her voice stayed level, didn't"
ratio0.395
23.95% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount75
totalSentences86
matches
0"The last of the regulars"
1"The Raven's Nest settled into"
2"Silas moved through the quiet,"
3"He didn't hear the door"
4"Rory stood at the bottom"
5"Silas set a glass down"
6"He poured two fingers of"
7"The green neon from the"
8"She looked younger in it."
9"She turned the glass without"
10"she said, nodding toward the"
11"Silas leaned against the back"
12"She looked at him then"
13"The hazel of his eyes"
14"The grey in his hair"
15"Silas didn't move."
16"A sound escaped her, not"
17"Silas reached for his own"
18"The word landed flat"
19"He watched her jaw tighten"
ratio0.872
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
ratio0
75.89% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Silas watched her look at the map from Prague — a 1960s city map, grid lines and density, the kind of thing that looked like code to an untrained eye."
1"It had a texture now, something between them that was almost tender but not quite — too many sharp edges for tender, too much that was known without being said."
2"He stood at the bar for a long time in the green light and the rain sound, and thought about Brendan Carter in a Cardiff doorway, laughing at something before t…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags26
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags15
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences78
tagDensity0.192
leniency0.385
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.0075%