Run: 2026-02-24-01KJ8WXWYE2ZZ9GCGSK2GYFMG0

Run Details

Model:
Aion 2.0
Duration:
1m 18s
Cost:
$0.005609
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign buzzed like a trapped insect, casting a sickly glow over the damp pavement. Inside The Raven’s Nest, the air was thick with the smell of old wood, spilled beer, and the faint, ever-present hint of Silas’s cigar smoke. Rory sat at the far end of the bar, her back to the wall, a half-finished pint of bitter sweating on a coaster. She traced the crescent scar on her left wrist with her thumb, a nervous habit she’d never shaken. Silas polished a glass with a slow, methodical rhythm, his silver signet ring catching the low light. His hazel eyes were fixed on nothing in particular, a sign he was turning something over in his mind. The limp was more pronounced tonight; the weather was changing. The door opened, letting in a slice of cold, diesel-scented air and the murmur of Soho. A man stepped in, shrugging off a tailored overcoat. He was tall, with the kind of broad-shouldered frame that spoke of regular gym visits, not manual labour. His hair was expensively cut, a shade of dark blond that looked natural but probably wasn’t. He scanned the room, his gaze passing over the maps and photographs, the few other patrons, and landing on her. Rory’s breath hitched. The glass in her hand felt suddenly precarious. “Laila?” The old nickname, the one only people from before ever used, sounded foreign in the dim quiet of the bar. It was him. Evan. Not her Evan, not the one with the quick smile and quicker temper who’d left bruises on her soul. This was Evan Pryce, her university boyfriend. The one before everything went wrong. The one she’d left in Cardiff without a word, vanishing into the London fog three years ago. He walked towards her, his steps confident on the worn floorboards. He’d filled out. The boyish softness was gone, replaced by sharp angles and a calculated ease. He looked like a man who read quarterly reports for fun. “Christ,” he said, stopping a few feet from her stool. A smile touched his lips, but it didn’t reach his eyes. They were the same pale grey she remembered, but colder now, assessing. “I thought it was you. I was meeting a client at that dreadful gastropub down the street, saw the sign, thought I’d pop in for a proper drink. And here you are.” “Here I am,” Rory said. Her voice was steady, a minor victory. Silas had stopped polishing the glass. He was watching, his expression neutral, but his posture had shifted. He leaned his weight off his bad leg. “Can I?” Evan gestured to the empty stool beside her. “It’s a free country.” He sat, draping his coat over his knees. He ordered a single malt, neat, specifying a brand Rory had only seen in magazines. Silas poured it without comment. “You look…” Evan began, turning the glass in his hands. “Different.” “So do you.” “I suppose time does that.” He took a sip, savoured it. “I heard you’d moved to London. No one knew where, exactly. You just… disappeared.” “I needed a change.” “A change.” He let the word hang. “You were top of our cohort. Professor Davies said you were the best natural legal mind he’d seen in a decade. We all thought you’d be at a Magic Circle firm by now, billing a thousand an hour.” Rory took a long pull of her bitter. It tasted of nothing. “Plans change.” “Clearly.” His gaze swept over her, taking in her simple jeans, the worn leather jacket, the lack of any jewellery except for a cheap watch. “What do you do now?” “This and that. I deliver food. For a restaurant.” A beat of silence. Evan blinked, then a short, disbelieving laugh escaped him. “You’re joking.” “Do I look like I’m joking?” “Rory—Laila—come on. With your brains? Delivering noodles?” “It pays the rent. It’s honest.” She heard the defensiveness in her tone and hated it. “Honest.” He repeated the word as if it were in a language he didn’t quite understand. “We were going to conquer the world, remember? You and me. Carter and Pryce. You’d take the bar, I’d go into corporate law, we’d buy that ridiculous house in Penarth with the sea view.” “I remember.” She remembered other things too. The pressure, the constant competition, the way his ambition had started to feel like a cage. The slow, chilling realisation that his vision of their future had no room for her doubts, only her achievements. “What happened?” His voice dropped, lost its performative edge. For a moment, he sounded like the boy she’d known, the one who’d shared notes with her in the library, who’d kissed her behind the Student Union building in the rain. “Life happened, Evan. I realised I didn’t want that life.” “What life? A successful one? A comfortable one?” “Your version of it.” She met his eyes. “It felt like a costume I’d never fit into.” He shook his head, looked down at his drink. “I looked for you, you know. After you left. Your dad was worried sick. Your mum… she wouldn’t speak to me. They thought I’d done something.” Guilt, old and familiar, coiled in her gut. “I called them. Eventually. They know I’m safe.” “But not why you left. Not really.” He leaned in closer, the scent of his cologne—something woody and expensive—overpowering the bar’s musk. “Was it me? Did I… push too hard?” There it was. The unspoken thing that had hung between them for the last half-hour, for the three years of silence. The weight of his presumption, his possession, his certainties. It hadn’t been cruelty, not then. It had been a suffocating kind of love, a blueprint for happiness he’d drawn without consulting her. “You didn’t mean to,” she said finally. “But yes. It was you. It was the whole… expectation. The path was set, and I realised I’d never chosen it. I was just walking it.” He sat back as if she’d struck him. The confident facade cracked, revealing something raw and bewildered underneath. “I loved you. I thought we wanted the same things.” “I thought I did too. Until I didn’t.” “So you just ran. No discussion, no fight. You just vanished and left me to explain to everyone why the brilliant Aurora Carter had thrown it all away to become a… a courier.” The word was a sneer, and he seemed to regret it instantly. He ran a hand through his perfect hair. “Sorry. That was unfair.” “It’s delivery person. And it’s not all I am.” She thought of Silas, of the hidden room behind the bookshelf, of the strange, shadowy world she was beginning to navigate. A world where her quick thinking mattered more than her degree classification. She said none of it. “What are you, then?” The question was genuine, stripped of its earlier condescension. “I’m still figuring that out.” He finished his whisky in one go, signalled to Silas for another. Silas moved with deliberate slowness, his limp audible on the floorboards. “I’m engaged,” Evan said abruptly, not looking at her. “Her name’s Chloe. She’s a solicitor at Harlow & Finch. We met on a merger. She’s… she’s ambitious. She knows what she wants.” “Congratulations.” Rory meant it. The thought of him with someone else brought no jealousy, only a dull relief. “It’s not like it was with us. It’s… easier. Less intense.” He accepted the fresh glass from Silas with a nod. “Sometimes I wonder what would have happened if you’d stayed. If we’d tried to talk about it.” “We’d have fought. I’d have left anyway. Just later, and with more scars.” He glanced at her then, and his eyes flicked to the crescent on her wrist. A different scar, from a different time. “You seem harder,” he observed. “I am.” “Are you happy?” The question hung in the air. Rory considered the flat above the bar, the smell of Yu-Fei’s cooking, the quiet understanding in Silas’s eyes, the freedom of her bike weaving through London traffic, the absolute absence of anyone’s blueprint for her life. “I’m not unhappy,” she said. It was the most honest answer she could give. Evan nodded, as if that was answer enough. He checked his watch, a sleek piece of titanium on his wrist. “I should go. Chloe’s expecting me.” “Of course.” He stood, shrugged back into his overcoat. He hesitated, then pulled a business card from his wallet and placed it on the bar beside her pint. “In case you ever… I don’t know. Decide to use that degree. Or just want a coffee. No expectations.” Rory looked at the card. *Evan Pryce, Associate, Thorne & Barclay Solicitors.* An address in the City. It was a artifact from a life she’d abandoned. “Take care of yourself, Laila.” “You too, Evan.” He gave her one last, long look, a mixture of nostalgia and a sadness that bordered on pity, then turned and walked out. The door swung shut behind him, cutting off the sound of the street. Silas resumed his polishing. After a moment, he spoke, his voice a low rumble. “Old ghost?” “Something like that.” “He carries a heavy watch.” Rory smiled faintly. She picked up the business card, held it for a second between her fingers, then tore it neatly in half and dropped the pieces into the ashtray. She finished her pint, the bitterness now a comfort on her tongue. “Another?” Silas asked. “No. I think I’m done for the night.” She slid off the stool, the weight of the encounter settling on her shoulders—not as a burden, but as a confirmation. The past was a country she had left. The man she’d once loved was a stranger in a well-cut coat. And she, Aurora Carter, was here, in a dim bar in Soho, with a crescent scar on her wrist and a future that was entirely, terrifyingly, her own.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"she said finally [finally]"
1"Evan said abruptly [abruptly]"
dialogueSentences63
tagDensity0.349
leniency0.698
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.063
93.96% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1656
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
45.65% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1656
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"traced"
count1
1
word"methodical"
count1
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"calculated"
count1
4
word"weight"
count3
5
word"silence"
count2
6
word"chilling"
count1
7
word"comfortable"
count1
8
word"familiar"
count1
9
word"unspoken"
count1
10
word"facade"
count1
11
word"perfect"
count1
12
word"navigate"
count1
13
word"flicked"
count1
14
word"encounter"
count1
highlights
0"traced"
1"methodical"
2"scanned"
3"calculated"
4"weight"
5"silence"
6"chilling"
7"comfortable"
8"familiar"
9"unspoken"
10"facade"
11"perfect"
12"navigate"
13"flicked"
14"encounter"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"the air was thick with"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences102
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences102
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences142
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords7
totalWords1653
ratio0.004
matches
0"Evan Pryce, Associate, Thorne & Barclay Solicitors."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"After a moment, he spoke, his voice a low rumble."
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions47
wordCount1149
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity0.96
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Silas11
Soho2
Evan9
Pryce2
Cardiff1
London2
Rory9
Student1
Union1
Yu-Fei1
Associate1
Thorne1
Barclay1
City1
Aurora1
Carter1
persons
0"Silas"
1"Evan"
2"Pryce"
3"Rory"
4"Yu-Fei"
5"Aurora"
6"Carter"
places
0"Raven"
1"Soho"
2"Cardiff"
3"London"
4"City"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
57.41% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences81
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"looked like a man who read quarterly repo"
1"quite understand"
2"sounded like the boy she’d known, the one"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.605
wordCount1653
matches
0"not as a burden, but as a confirmation"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences142
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs66
mean25.05
std20.62
cv0.823
sampleLengths
083
146
279
311
41
573
638
765
812
925
1010
114
1228
1311
143
1525
164
1745
1814
1930
209
2115
226
237
2416
2550
2642
2740
2810
298
3017
3135
3216
3330
3453
3533
3628
378
3857
3947
4013
415
4223
4332
4418
4538
4613
4727
482
493
98.38% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences102
matches
0"were fixed"
1"was gone"
83.72% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs172
matches
0"was turning"
1"was watching"
2"was beginning"
82.49% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences142
ratio0.021
matches
0"The limp was more pronounced tonight; the weather was changing."
1"“But not why you left. Not really.” He leaned in closer, the scent of his cologne—something woody and expensive—overpowering the bar’s musk."
2"She slid off the stool, the weight of the encounter settling on her shoulders—not as a burden, but as a confirmation."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1159
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"cold, diesel-scented air"
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.031061259706643658
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.013805004314063849
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences142
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences142
mean11.64
std8.32
cv0.715
sampleLengths
017
125
223
318
417
519
610
716
89
918
1016
1120
123
138
141
1520
163
171
1819
197
206
2117
2211
233
2413
2511
2610
2711
2812
2932
305
317
326
3311
348
3510
364
378
3815
395
4010
411
423
4311
4414
454
467
4738
488
494
46.48% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.3380281690140845
totalSentences142
uniqueOpeners48
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences97
matches(empty)
ratio0
30.31% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount46
totalSentences97
matches
0"She traced the crescent scar"
1"His hazel eyes were fixed"
2"He was tall, with the"
3"His hair was expensively cut,"
4"He scanned the room, his"
5"It was him."
6"He walked towards her, his"
7"He’d filled out."
8"He looked like a man"
9"he said, stopping a few"
10"They were the same pale"
11"Her voice was steady, a"
12"He was watching, his expression"
13"He leaned his weight off"
14"He sat, draping his coat"
15"He ordered a single malt,"
16"He took a sip, savoured"
17"He let the word hang"
18"It tasted of nothing."
19"His gaze swept over her,"
ratio0.474
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount91
totalSentences97
matches
0"The green neon sign buzzed"
1"Rory sat at the far"
2"She traced the crescent scar"
3"Silas polished a glass with"
4"His hazel eyes were fixed"
5"The limp was more pronounced"
6"The door opened, letting in"
7"A man stepped in, shrugging"
8"He was tall, with the"
9"His hair was expensively cut,"
10"He scanned the room, his"
11"Rory’s breath hitched."
12"The glass in her hand"
13"The old nickname, the one"
14"It was him."
15"This was Evan Pryce, her"
16"The one before everything went"
17"The one she’d left in"
18"He walked towards her, his"
19"He’d filled out."
ratio0.938
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences97
matches(empty)
ratio0
61.69% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"He was tall, with the kind of broad-shouldered frame that spoke of regular gym visits, not manual labour."
1"He scanned the room, his gaze passing over the maps and photographs, the few other patrons, and landing on her."
2"The unspoken thing that had hung between them for the last half-hour, for the three years of silence."
3"Rory considered the flat above the bar, the smell of Yu-Fei’s cooking, the quiet understanding in Silas’s eyes, the freedom of her bike weaving through London t…"
4"And she, Aurora Carter, was here, in a dim bar in Soho, with a crescent scar on her wrist and a future that was entirely, terrifyingly, her own."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Evan said abruptly, not looking at her"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"He repeated (repeat)"
1"he observed (observe)"
dialogueSentences63
tagDensity0.127
leniency0.254
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.063
79.2477%