| 50.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 20 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde said softly [softly]" | | 1 | "Rory turned back [back]" | | 2 | "Nyx said sharply [sharply]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 35 | | tagDensity | 0.571 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.15 | | effectiveRatio | 0.15 | |
| 83.56% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1825 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "perfectly" | | 1 | "softly" | | 2 | "carefully" | | 3 | "very" | | 4 | "sharply" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 50.68% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1825 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "sense of" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "flickered" | | 5 | "chill" | | 6 | "firmly" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "familiar" | | 9 | "pulse" | | 10 | "intensity" | | 11 | "shimmered" | | 12 | "marble" | | 13 | "perfect" | | 14 | "structure" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 110 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 110 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 125 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 45 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1847 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 18 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 76.05% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 58 | | wordCount | 1555 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 1.48 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 1 | | Rory | 23 | | Veil | 1 | | November | 2 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Isolde | 9 | | Fae | 2 | | Nyx | 11 | | Sunday | 1 | | London | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Seer | 1 | | Dymas | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Veil" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Eva" | | 5 | "Seer" |
| | places | | 0 | "November" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "Fae" | | 4 | "London" | | 5 | "Dymas" |
| | globalScore | 0.76 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 85.06% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 77 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like pomegranates, except they wer" | | 1 | "looked like they'd grown out of the pavin" |
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| 91.72% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.083 | | wordCount | 1847 | | matches | | 0 | "not with each other, but with the humming" | | 1 | "not to pick one but simply to touch the bark" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 125 | | matches | | 0 | "see that the humming that rose" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 49 | | mean | 37.69 | | std | 30.33 | | cv | 0.805 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 58 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 41 | | 4 | 34 | | 5 | 58 | | 6 | 26 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 40 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 124 | | 13 | 42 | | 14 | 67 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 60 | | 17 | 61 | | 18 | 75 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 54 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 61 | | 23 | 84 | | 24 | 54 | | 25 | 37 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 39 | | 28 | 65 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 47 | | 31 | 26 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 69 | | 35 | 19 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 32 | | 39 | 133 | | 40 | 79 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 38 | | 43 | 54 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 68 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 11 |
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| 89.31% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | | 0 | "was gone" | | 1 | "were made" | | 2 | "was covered" | | 3 | "were piled" | | 4 | "were glazed" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 264 | | matches | | 0 | "was standing" | | 1 | "was digesting" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 19 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 17 | | totalSentences | 125 | | ratio | 0.136 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd expected violence — the rending of reality, some cosmic scream as the Veil parted." | | 1 | "\"Keep moving,\" Nyx whispered from behind her — or beside her, or inside the folds of her jacket." | | 2 | "Isolde passed through behind her without a sound, and Rory turned just in time to see the rift — a shimmering vertical tear, like heat haze given edges — seal itself shut with a faint pop of pressure against her eardrums." | | 3 | "Richmond Park, the standing stones, the wildflowers that had no business blooming in November — all of it, sealed behind a barrier she couldn't see." | | 4 | "Vineyards stretched in every direction, their vines heavy with fruit that was too large, too dark, too lustrous — grapes the size of plums, their skins so purple they were nearly black, catching the amber light and holding it like tiny lanterns." | | 5 | "Not humid, exactly — thick the way a rich broth is thick, layered with flavor." | | 6 | "In this light, they were less shadow and more substance — Rory could make out the suggestion of a jaw, the faint violet glow of their eyes burning steadier than she'd ever seen them on the other side." | | 7 | "The ruts were too smooth, too regular — more like channels carved by water or time or something patient and deliberate." | | 8 | "Rory glanced back and saw her own footprints clearly — and Nyx's, which weren't footprints at all but faint scorch marks, as if the ground recoiled from whatever they were made of." | | 9 | "Not unpleasant — just off, the way a familiar word sounds wrong when you say it too many times." | | 10 | "Between the stones, tiny flowers grew — white, bell-shaped, releasing a perfume that hit Rory in waves." | | 11 | "She pressed her thumb against the crescent scar on her left wrist — an old grounding habit, learned the hard way — and counted to five." | | 12 | "The road curved through an orchard of the translucent pomegranate trees, and up close, Rory could see that the glowing seeds inside each fruit pulsed in rhythm — not with each other, but with the humming that rose through the ground." | | 13 | "It was a town — or a feast pretending to be a town." | | 14 | "Glass pitchers held liquids in colors Rory didn't think liquids could be — one was the precise violet of Nyx's eyes." | | 15 | "Hundreds, maybe — it was hard to tell, because they moved with a fluid, dream-like quality, circling the feast in slow orbits." | | 16 | "But the road continued beyond the settlement, narrowing into red earth again, climbing toward a structure on a distant hill — something with spires and smoke, with the warm amber sky pressing close around it like cupped hands." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1546 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "Long timber-framed buildings" |
| | adverbCount | 58 | | adverbRatio | 0.037516170763260026 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008408796895213453 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 125 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 125 | | mean | 14.78 | | std | 10.93 | | cv | 0.74 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 39 | | 4 | 2 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 41 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 25 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 22 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 42 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 32 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 23 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 38 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 20 | | 40 | 40 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 23 | | 43 | 19 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 21 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 81.60% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.504 | | totalSentences | 125 | | uniqueOpeners | 63 | |
| 69.44% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, it was quiet." | | 1 | "Then it dissolved." |
| | ratio | 0.021 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 28 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd expected violence — the" | | 1 | "It was the color of" | | 2 | "Their voice slid through the" | | 3 | "She stumbled forward two steps," | | 4 | "Its work was done, at" | | 5 | "Her pale lavender eyes were" | | 6 | "They stood on a low" | | 7 | "She could taste it on" | | 8 | "She let her fingers rest" | | 9 | "They descended the ridge along" | | 10 | "It was warm." | | 11 | "She pulled away and the" | | 12 | "She never did, of course," | | 13 | "They paused, their silhouette sharpening" | | 14 | "She tilted her head, and" | | 15 | "She stopped walking." | | 16 | "She switched to mouth-breathing and" | | 17 | "Her pulse was up." | | 18 | "She pressed her thumb against" | | 19 | "They pressed on." |
| | ratio | 0.292 | |
| 53.75% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 78 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone pulsed against Rory's" | | 1 | "She'd expected violence — the" | | 2 | "A breath of warm air" | | 3 | "The sky had no sun." | | 4 | "The light came from everywhere" | | 5 | "It was the color of" | | 6 | "Nyx whispered from behind her" | | 7 | "Their voice slid through the" | | 8 | "She stumbled forward two steps," | | 9 | "Isolde passed through behind her" | | 10 | "Richmond Park, the standing stones," | | 11 | "The pendant cooled against her" | | 12 | "Its work was done, at" | | 13 | "Rory said, and her voice" | | 14 | "Isolde stood perfectly still, her" | | 15 | "Her pale lavender eyes were" | | 16 | "Something older moved behind them." | | 17 | "Something like recognition." | | 18 | "Isolde said softly" | | 19 | "Rory turned back to the" |
| | ratio | 0.813 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 19.70% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "The light came from everywhere and nowhere, a diffuse golden warmth that soaked into the landscape like honey through gauze." | | 1 | "She stumbled forward two steps, her trainers crunching on soil that was the color of dried blood." | | 2 | "Richmond Park, the standing stones, the wildflowers that had no business blooming in November — all of it, sealed behind a barrier she couldn't see." | | 3 | "They stood on a low ridge overlooking a valley that shouldn't have been possible." | | 4 | "Vineyards stretched in every direction, their vines heavy with fruit that was too large, too dark, too lustrous — grapes the size of plums, their skins so purpl…" | | 5 | "One tree near the base of the ridge bore what looked like pomegranates, except they were translucent, and through their glassy rinds she could see seeds that gl…" | | 6 | "Rory glanced back and saw her own footprints clearly — and Nyx's, which weren't footprints at all but faint scorch marks, as if the ground recoiled from whateve…" | | 7 | "A low, constant vibration that lived somewhere beneath the soles of her feet, as if the earth itself was digesting." | | 8 | "They were laden with dishes that steamed and glistened: roasted birds with skin lacquered gold, tureens of soup that shimmered with oil slicks of color, towers …" | | 9 | "Rory watched a woman with flour-dusted hands slice into a roast with surgical precision, lift a sliver of meat to her lips, close her eyes, and shudder with an …" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 20 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx's form flickered, their edges blurring as if tasted by an unseen wind" |
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| 7.14% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 17 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 2 | "Nyx corrected (correct)" | | 3 | "Nyx observed (observe)" | | 4 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 35 | | tagDensity | 0.486 | | leniency | 0.971 | | rawRatio | 0.294 | | effectiveRatio | 0.286 | |