Run: 2026-02-24-01KJ8WY3FWD64M4QHHD27GWJYK

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Duration:
39.5s
Cost:
$0.030195
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt was always the stubborn one. Rory had to lean her shoulder into the door frame and torque the key at a precise angle before the mechanism gave, and when it finally did, the door swung inward with a groan that Ptolemy answered from somewhere inside with a chirp of indifference. She had been expecting the Thai takeaway she'd ordered forty minutes ago. Lucien Moreau stood in the corridor instead, one hand braced against the wall, his charcoal jacket still immaculate despite the rain beading on his shoulders. The single amber eye caught the light from the bare bulb overhead. The black one didn't. "No." Rory moved to shut the door. His cane was faster, the ivory handle wedging into the gap before she could throw the bolt. Not aggressive. Just there, the way Lucien was always just there, patient in the manner of something that had learned long ago that waiting cost nothing. "Five minutes." "You had five minutes. You had about four hundred of them, actually, over the course of two months. I haven't heard from you since March." "I know." "That's it? You know?" "I know, and I'm here now, and I need to come inside." She looked at him. The slicked-back hair had loosened slightly at the temple, a single pale strand falling across his forehead — the kind of small disorder that on anyone else would've meant nothing. On Lucien it meant he'd been moving fast, possibly for hours. His jaw carried two days of growth he wouldn't have allowed otherwise. Something had gone sideways. She stepped back from the door. He moved past her into the flat, and the familiar scent of sandalwood and something colder, mineral, like stone after rain, came with him. Ptolemy dropped from the top of the bookshelf, wound once around Lucien's ankle, and departed. The cat had always liked him. Rory had spent considerable energy resenting that. "Eva's not here," she said, shutting the door and throwing two of the three bolts. "I know. I came for you." She crossed to the kitchen counter, putting its narrow geography between them and filling the kettle more for occupying her hands than any genuine desire for tea. Books and scrolls covered every surface, Eva's research notes spilling from the table onto the floor, a half-eaten biscuit balanced on top of a leather-bound text about pre-Carolingian demonology. Normal. The kettle clicked on. "What happened?" Lucien lowered himself into the armchair by the window, the one that sagged on the left side and that Eva had propped up with a paperback of Middlemarch. He set the cane across his knees. He did not take his eyes off Rory. "Cresswell's people found something," he said. "Something they shouldn't have. Something connected to your name." The kettle became irrelevant. She turned from the counter. "My name." "Your full name. The other one." Malphora. She'd heard it twice in her life and both times the word had landed in her chest like swallowed glass. "How?" "I'm still working that out. Which is why I'm here and not elsewhere being more useful." He paused. "I needed to see you weren't dead first." The flat felt smaller than it usually did, which was already quite small. The rain against the window filled the silence Lucien left behind, and Rory stayed where she was by the counter, watching him sit in the broken armchair as though he'd been built for exactly this kind of room, this kind of low, careful tension. "You could have called," she said. "You blocked my number." "You could have had someone else call." "I could have." He turned the cane once in his hands, a slow rotation. "I didn't want to." The thing about Lucien was that he lied continuously and casually about small things — his whereabouts, his intentions, the contents of envelopes and the nature of favours — but he almost never lied about the things underneath. She'd learned to hear the difference. The slight flattening of his cadence when he was constructing something, the way his mismatched eyes settled on a point just past her when he was managing the truth rather than telling it. He wasn't doing either now. He was looking directly at her, the amber eye steady, even the black one carrying something that didn't quite resolve into anything she could name. That was the part that had kept her awake in March. Not the argument. Not the specific, precise words she'd said or the ones he'd said back. But the face he'd made when she'd walked out of that hotel bar — like something had gone quiet in him, the way a room goes quiet when a door at the far end of it is shut. She moved out from behind the counter. "Tell me what they found." "In a moment." He didn't stand, but something in how he held himself changed when she came closer, a shift in the quality of his stillness. "Are you all right?" "I'm fine." "You've got takeaway soy sauce on your jacket." She looked down. He wasn't wrong. She'd been on a delivery run three hours ago and had apparently carried the evidence of it home. She felt a laugh threaten the back of her throat against her better judgement, and she locked it there, but some fraction of it must have reached her face because one corner of his mouth moved. "I've been working," she said. "I know. Yu-Fei told me." "You went to the restaurant." "You weren't at your flat." "You went to my flat." "Rory." He said her name the way he always had, with the stress landing slightly differently than it would in English, the French still living in his vowels even after years in London. It did the same thing to her now that it always had done, and she disliked herself for that quite actively. She sat on the arm of the sofa across from him, forearms on her knees, close enough now that she could see the rain still drying on his collar. "Talk," she said. "Tell me what Cresswell has." He did. But for just a moment before he began, his eyes moved across her face in the careful way of someone checking something against memory, measuring the distance between what they'd been carrying for two months and what was actually in the room with them now. Whatever verdict he reached, he kept it behind his expression, and Rory kept hers behind hers, and the rain continued its work against the glass, and Ptolemy resettled himself on the demonology text, and neither of them mentioned March again. Not yet.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.294
leniency0.588
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
90.94% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1104
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
77.36% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1104
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"desire"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"tension"
count1
4
word"resolve"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"desire"
2"silence"
3"tension"
4"resolve"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences62
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences62
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences86
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1108
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions26
wordCount931
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.75
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Ptolemy3
Thai1
Moreau1
Lucien7
Eva2
Middlemarch1
Rory6
March2
English1
French1
London1
persons
0"Ptolemy"
1"Moreau"
2"Lucien"
3"Eva"
4"Rory"
places
0"March"
1"English"
2"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
30.95% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences42
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"quite resolve into anything she could name"
1"rs ago and had apparently carried the evidenc"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1108
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences86
matches
0"was that he"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean23.57
std25.48
cv1.081
sampleLengths
053
112
241
37
443
52
625
72
84
912
1061
116
1252
1315
146
1561
162
1743
1815
1911
206
2121
221
2326
2457
256
264
277
2818
29107
3065
317
325
3330
342
358
3660
375
385
395
405
415
4254
4329
448
4587
462
99.60% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences62
matches
0"been built"
9.52% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs140
matches
0"was constructing"
1"was managing"
2"wasn't doing"
3"was looking"
43.19% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences86
ratio0.035
matches
0"The slicked-back hair had loosened slightly at the temple, a single pale strand falling across his forehead — the kind of small disorder that on anyone else would've meant nothing."
1"The thing about Lucien was that he lied continuously and casually about small things — his whereabouts, his intentions, the contents of envelopes and the nature of favours — but he almost never lied about the things underneath."
2"But the face he'd made when she'd walked out of that hotel bar — like something had gone quiet in him, the way a room goes quiet when a door at the far end of it is shut."
92.66% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount930
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount45
adverbRatio0.04838709677419355
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.013978494623655914
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences86
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences86
mean12.88
std11.97
cv0.929
sampleLengths
08
145
212
325
412
54
67
717
82
924
102
1125
122
134
1412
154
1630
1711
1812
194
206
2124
2215
236
247
2515
266
2727
2829
291
304
312
3228
337
348
356
369
374
385
392
406
411
4220
431
4418
458
4613
4744
486
494
46.90% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.37209302325581395
totalSentences86
uniqueOpeners32
64.10% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences52
matches
0"Just there, the way Lucien"
ratio0.019
27.69% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences52
matches
0"She had been expecting the"
1"His cane was faster, the"
2"She looked at him."
3"His jaw carried two days"
4"She stepped back from the"
5"He moved past her into"
6"she said, shutting the door"
7"She crossed to the kitchen"
8"He set the cane across"
9"He did not take his"
10"She turned from the counter."
11"She'd heard it twice in"
12"He turned the cane once"
13"She'd learned to hear the"
14"He wasn't doing either now."
15"He was looking directly at"
16"She moved out from behind"
17"He didn't stand, but something"
18"She looked down."
19"He wasn't wrong."
ratio0.481
17.69% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount46
totalSentences52
matches
0"The third deadbolt was always"
1"Rory had to lean her"
2"She had been expecting the"
3"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
4"The single amber eye caught"
5"The black one didn't."
6"Rory moved to shut the"
7"His cane was faster, the"
8"She looked at him."
9"The slicked-back hair had loosened"
10"His jaw carried two days"
11"Something had gone sideways."
12"She stepped back from the"
13"He moved past her into"
14"Ptolemy dropped from the top"
15"The cat had always liked"
16"Rory had spent considerable energy"
17"she said, shutting the door"
18"She crossed to the kitchen"
19"Books and scrolls covered every"
ratio0.885
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences52
matches(empty)
ratio0
93.60% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The rain against the window filled the silence Lucien left behind, and Rory stayed where she was by the counter, watching him sit in the broken armchair as thou…"
1"He was looking directly at her, the amber eye steady, even the black one carrying something that didn't quite resolve into anything she could name."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.176
leniency0.353
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
79.8070%