Run: 2026-02-24-01KJ8WYJ0H2ERAK4WB27S2ZFZ7

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Duration:
1m 16s
Cost:
$0.077885
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt stuck the way it always did—you had to lift the door by the handle and twist at the same time—and in the half-second it took Rory to wrestle it open, she'd already catalogued every reason the knock couldn't be who she thought it was. Eva had keys. Yu-Fei always called ahead. The curry house downstairs closed at eleven, and the owner never climbed the stairs for anything short of a gas leak. The door swung inward, and every one of her reasons turned to ash. Lucien Moreau stood on the cramped landing, one hand resting on the ivory handle of his cane, the other holding a bottle of wine by its neck like a peace offering he hadn't yet decided to extend. His charcoal suit was immaculate—because of course it was, even at half-past midnight in the rain—though a fine mist of droplets clung to the platinum blond hair slicked back from his temples. His mismatched eyes found hers immediately: the amber one warm, almost apologetic; the black one unreadable as a well. Neither of them spoke for three full seconds. Rory counted them. She'd gotten very good at measuring silences where Lucien was concerned. "No," she said, and moved to close the door. His cane caught the edge. Not aggressively—he didn't shove, didn't push. He simply placed it there, that thin line of polished wood between the frame and the latch, and waited. He'd always been good at waiting. It was one of the things she hated about him. "Five minutes," he said. His accent did what it always did to the vowels, softened them, rolled them like river stones. French by birth, English by long practice, and something else underneath that she'd only ever heard once, late at night, when he'd let his guard drop far enough for her to glimpse the thing that lived behind the charm. "You don't get five minutes. You don't get five seconds." She kept her hand on the door, knuckles whitening. "You know whose flat this is." "Eva is in Prague. She left yesterday. I checked." "Of course you checked. You check everything." She heard the bitterness in her own voice and hated it—hated how easily he could drag her back to the version of herself that gave a damn about his comings and goings. She'd done real work burying that version. Weeks of it. "That doesn't mean you're welcome here." "I am aware of that." He lowered his gaze—a rare concession from a man who weaponized eye contact. "Rory, I would not be here if it were not important." Her name in his mouth. The way he said it, like the two syllables were something fragile he was trying not to break. She'd asked him once to stop calling her that—to use Carter, or nothing at all—and he'd obliged for exactly one conversation before slipping back. Lucien Moreau did not take orders well. He simply made you forget you'd given them. Ptolemy chose that moment to thread between her ankles, purring like a diesel engine, and headbutt the edge of the open door. The tabby regarded Lucien with the serene indifference that only cats and certain breeds of aristocrat could manage, then padded onto the landing and began investigating his shoes. Rory exhaled through her nose. She looked at the bottle in his hand—good burgundy, she could tell from the label, because he never brought anything that wasn't—and then at the rain beading on the shoulders of his suit, and then at Ptolemy, who was now rubbing his jaw against Lucien's ankle with the enthusiasm of a long-lost friend. "Traitor," she muttered at the cat. She stepped back from the door. Lucien entered the way he did everything: with an economy of motion that made the space feel like it had been designed for him, even though Eva's flat was designed for no one. He picked his way between stacked towers of books and a precarious scroll that had unfurled across the hallway like a runner carpet, his cane clicking softly against the worn wood floor. He set the wine on the kitchen counter—the only surface not buried under research notes—and stood with his back to the window, streetlight from Brick Lane painting him in sodium orange. Rory closed the door. Refastened the deadbolts. All three. She took her time with each one, using the ritual to slow her pulse, which had done something inconvenient the moment she'd seen him and showed no signs of stopping. "Talk," she said, turning to face him across the narrow kitchen. She crossed her arms over the old university hoodie she'd been sleeping in. The flat smelled of cumin from below and old paper from everywhere else, and underneath it—faint, infuriating—the cedar and black tea scent he always carried. Lucien studied her. She could feel him doing it even when she stared fixedly at the wine bottle: that careful, clinical attention he gave to everything, cataloguing details, filing them away in whatever meticulous archive he kept behind those mismatched eyes. She wondered what he saw. Tired, probably. She'd been working doubles at the Golden Empress all week, and the shadows under her eyes had shadows of their own. "You look well," he said. "I look like hell and we both know it. Don't waste your five minutes." The corner of his mouth moved. Not quite a smile. The ghost of one, haunting the place where a real smile might have lived if he'd been a different kind of man. "Very well. There is a contract. Your name appeared on it three days ago." The words landed with the soft, surgical precision he was known for. Rory felt them arrive in her chest before her brain had finished processing them—a cold, dense weight, like swallowing a stone. "A contract," she repeated. "From the Auction Quarter. Someone wants you found. The listing was discreet—I nearly missed it. I would not have seen it at all if I had not been looking." "And why were you looking?" He held her gaze. The amber eye, the black eye. Two different kinds of seeing. "You know why." The silence that followed was not the kind you could measure in seconds. It had weight, texture, history. It contained within it the memory of his hand on the small of her back in a Soho alleyway, guiding her through a crowd of things that wore human faces. It contained the argument afterward—her voice raw, his terrifyingly calm—and the door she'd closed between them with a finality she'd meant to be permanent. It contained six weeks of nothing: no calls, no messages, no elegant notes slipped under her door in that precise, angular handwriting. Six weeks during which she had convinced herself, methodically and with great determination, that she did not miss him. She uncrossed her arms because she realized she was gripping her own elbows hard enough to leave marks. Her left wrist turned, exposing the small crescent-shaped scar there—childhood clumsiness, a broken teacup, nothing supernatural—and she caught Lucien's gaze drop to it and rise again. He'd kissed that scar once. She had not given him permission to remember that, but she supposed memory didn't work on a permission basis. "Who posted the contract?" she asked. "I do not know yet. That is part of why I am here. I need access to Eva's records—she tracks certain brokers I cannot reach. And I need—" He paused. Lucien did not pause. He spoke in fluid, considered sentences that sounded rehearsed even when they weren't. The hesitation cracked something open in the room, let the temperature change. "I need you to allow me to help you." "Last time you helped me, you lied to my face for two weeks." "I withheld information to protect—" "Don't." The word came out harder than she intended, and Ptolemy, who had resettled on a stack of occult journals by the radiator, lifted his head. "Don't do the thing where you reframe it. You lied. You made decisions about my safety without telling me. You treated me like a—like a civilian." "You are a civilian." "I am a person who deserved the truth, and you gave me half of it dressed up in a nice suit and a good accent." He flinched. It was slight—a tightening around his jaw, a fractional shift in his weight onto the cane—but she saw it, and the satisfaction she felt was immediately poisoned by something softer, something that lived in the part of her she'd been trying to wall off for six weeks. "You are right," he said quietly. "I will not insult you by arguing the point." She hadn't expected that. She'd expected the parry, the redirect, the elegant sidestep. Lucien without his rhetorical armor was a thing she had seen exactly once before, and it had ended with her back against a bookshelf in a shop in Covent Garden, his mouth on hers, the cane clattering to the floor between their feet. The memory arrived uninvited and fully formed, and she banished it with the same ferocity she'd use on an actual intrusion. "Sit down," she said, because she needed him to stop standing there looking like that—rain-damp and contrite and unfairly beautiful in the sodium light. "I'll get glasses." She turned to the cabinet above the sink, reaching for the mismatched wine glasses Eva kept between a mortar and pestle and a jar of something dried and unidentifiable. Her hands were steady. She was proud of that. Her hands had always been steady, even when the rest of her was shaking apart—it was the one thing she'd inherited from her father besides his stubbornness and his blue eyes. Behind her, she heard Lucien settle into the kitchen chair, the soft click of his cane leaning against the table edge. Heard the creak of old wood and the whisper of expensive fabric. When she turned back with two glasses, he had removed his jacket and draped it over the chair back, and was rolling his shirtsleeves to the elbow with the kind of deliberate precision that made the gesture feel more intimate than it had any right to be. She set a glass in front of him. Sat across the narrow table. Between them lay a scatter of Eva's notes—photocopied pages from what looked like a medieval bestiary, marginalia in Eva's cramped hand—and the bottle of burgundy, which Lucien opened with a folding knife from his pocket in one clean, practiced motion. He poured. She watched his hands—long-fingered, steady, a thin scar across the right knuckles she'd never asked about—and said nothing until both glasses were full and the bottle was set aside. "The contract," she said. "Tell me everything. And Lucien—" She waited until he looked up. "Everything. I won't do this with you again any other way." He met her eyes across the table. The amber, the black. Two different kinds of seeing, and both of them, right now, focused entirely on her with an intensity that made the cramped, cluttered kitchen feel like the smallest room in the world. "Everything," he agreed. He lifted his glass. His fingers paused around the stem, and then—softly, as though testing whether the word would bear his weight—he added, "I have missed you, Rory." She did not say it back. She wrapped both hands around her glass and breathed in the scent of good burgundy and cumin and cedar and rain, and she thought about walls, and how the most dangerous ones were the kind you built yourself, because you always knew exactly where the doors were. "Start talking," she said. But she didn't look away.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
94.74% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"he said quietly [quietly]"
1"His fingers paused around [around]"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.514
leniency1
rawRatio0.105
effectiveRatio0.105
89.85% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1971
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
1
adverb"softly"
count2
highlights
0"very"
1"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
72.10% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1971
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"unreadable"
count1
1
word"charm"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"could feel"
count1
4
word"weight"
count4
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"whisper"
count1
7
word"intensity"
count1
highlights
0"unreadable"
1"charm"
2"pulse"
3"could feel"
4"weight"
5"silence"
6"whisper"
7"intensity"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences109
matches
0"was proud"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences109
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences127
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen57
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1937
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions21
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount1650
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.73
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Rory5
Moreau2
Lucien12
English1
Carter1
Ptolemy3
Eva5
Brick1
Lane1
Golden1
Empress1
Soho1
Covent1
Garden1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Moreau"
2"Lucien"
3"Carter"
4"Eva"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Golden"
3"Soho"
4"Covent"
5"Garden"
globalScore1
windowScore1
79.58% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences71
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like a medieval bestiary, marginal"
1"as though testing whether the word would bear his weight—he added"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1937
matches(empty)
87.93% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences127
matches
0"burying that version"
1"chose that moment"
2"kissed that scar"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs51
mean37.98
std27.75
cv0.731
sampleLengths
075
113
288
322
49
546
660
725
89
955
1029
1162
1250
1358
146
156
1696
1739
1849
1969
205
2114
2246
2333
244
2529
265
2718
28113
2968
306
3168
3213
335
3452
354
3625
3749
3815
3977
4027
4169
4280
4353
4431
4526
4643
4731
4853
494
95.61% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences109
matches
0"was concerned"
1"been designed"
2"was designed"
3"was known"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs290
matches
0"was trying"
1"was gripping"
2"was shaking"
3"was rolling"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount32
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences19
totalSentences127
ratio0.15
matches
0"The third deadbolt stuck the way it always did—you had to lift the door by the handle and twist at the same time—and in the half-second it took Rory to wrestle it open, she'd already catalogued every reason the knock couldn't be who she thought it was."
1"His charcoal suit was immaculate—because of course it was, even at half-past midnight in the rain—though a fine mist of droplets clung to the platinum blond hair slicked back from his temples."
2"His mismatched eyes found hers immediately: the amber one warm, almost apologetic; the black one unreadable as a well."
3"Not aggressively—he didn't shove, didn't push."
4"\"Of course you checked. You check everything.\" She heard the bitterness in her own voice and hated it—hated how easily he could drag her back to the version of herself that gave a damn about his comings and goings."
5"\"I am aware of that.\" He lowered his gaze—a rare concession from a man who weaponized eye contact."
6"She'd asked him once to stop calling her that—to use Carter, or nothing at all—and he'd obliged for exactly one conversation before slipping back."
7"She looked at the bottle in his hand—good burgundy, she could tell from the label, because he never brought anything that wasn't—and then at the rain beading on the shoulders of his suit, and then at Ptolemy, who was now rubbing his jaw against Lucien's ankle with the enthusiasm of a long-lost friend."
8"He set the wine on the kitchen counter—the only surface not buried under research notes—and stood with his back to the window, streetlight from Brick Lane painting him in sodium orange."
9"The flat smelled of cumin from below and old paper from everywhere else, and underneath it—faint, infuriating—the cedar and black tea scent he always carried."
10"Rory felt them arrive in her chest before her brain had finished processing them—a cold, dense weight, like swallowing a stone."
11"It contained the argument afterward—her voice raw, his terrifyingly calm—and the door she'd closed between them with a finality she'd meant to be permanent."
12"Her left wrist turned, exposing the small crescent-shaped scar there—childhood clumsiness, a broken teacup, nothing supernatural—and she caught Lucien's gaze drop to it and rise again."
13"It was slight—a tightening around his jaw, a fractional shift in his weight onto the cane—but she saw it, and the satisfaction she felt was immediately poisoned by something softer, something that lived in the part of her she'd been trying to wall off for six weeks."
14"\"Sit down,\" she said, because she needed him to stop standing there looking like that—rain-damp and contrite and unfairly beautiful in the sodium light."
15"Her hands had always been steady, even when the rest of her was shaking apart—it was the one thing she'd inherited from her father besides his stubbornness and his blue eyes."
16"Between them lay a scatter of Eva's notes—photocopied pages from what looked like a medieval bestiary, marginalia in Eva's cramped hand—and the bottle of burgundy, which Lucien opened with a folding knife from his pocket in one clean, practiced motion."
17"She watched his hands—long-fingered, steady, a thin scar across the right knuckles she'd never asked about—and said nothing until both glasses were full and the bottle was set aside."
18"His fingers paused around the stem, and then—softly, as though testing whether the word would bear his weight—he added, \"I have missed you, Rory.\""
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1687
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount67
adverbRatio0.03971547125074096
lyAdverbCount22
lyAdverbRatio0.013040901007705987
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences127
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences127
mean15.25
std12.53
cv0.822
sampleLengths
047
13
24
321
413
537
632
719
88
93
1011
119
125
136
1419
156
1610
174
1817
1939
2019
216
229
2339
247
253
266
2718
2811
295
3018
3124
327
338
3422
3528
365
3753
386
396
4033
4132
4231
434
443
452
4630
4711
4813
4925
49.61% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.3543307086614173
totalSentences127
uniqueOpeners45
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences97
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount54
totalSentences97
matches
0"His charcoal suit was immaculate—because"
1"His mismatched eyes found hers"
2"She'd gotten very good at"
3"she said, and moved to"
4"His cane caught the edge."
5"He simply placed it there,"
6"He'd always been good at"
7"It was one of the"
8"His accent did what it"
9"She kept her hand on"
10"She heard the bitterness in"
11"She'd done real work burying"
12"He lowered his gaze—a rare"
13"Her name in his mouth."
14"She'd asked him once to"
15"He simply made you forget"
16"She looked at the bottle"
17"she muttered at the cat"
18"She stepped back from the"
19"He picked his way between"
ratio0.557
21.86% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount85
totalSentences97
matches
0"The third deadbolt stuck the"
1"Eva had keys."
2"Yu-Fei always called ahead."
3"The curry house downstairs closed"
4"The door swung inward, and"
5"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
6"His charcoal suit was immaculate—because"
7"His mismatched eyes found hers"
8"Neither of them spoke for"
9"Rory counted them."
10"She'd gotten very good at"
11"she said, and moved to"
12"His cane caught the edge."
13"He simply placed it there,"
14"He'd always been good at"
15"It was one of the"
16"His accent did what it"
17"French by birth, English by"
18"She kept her hand on"
19"She heard the bitterness in"
ratio0.876
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences97
matches(empty)
ratio0
11.66% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"French by birth, English by long practice, and something else underneath that she'd only ever heard once, late at night, when he'd let his guard drop far enough…"
1"She looked at the bottle in his hand—good burgundy, she could tell from the label, because he never brought anything that wasn't—and then at the rain beading on…"
2"He picked his way between stacked towers of books and a precarious scroll that had unfurled across the hallway like a runner carpet, his cane clicking softly ag…"
3"She took her time with each one, using the ritual to slow her pulse, which had done something inconvenient the moment she'd seen him and showed no signs of stop…"
4"It contained within it the memory of his hand on the small of her back in a Soho alleyway, guiding her through a crowd of things that wore human faces."
5"He spoke in fluid, considered sentences that sounded rehearsed even when they weren't."
6"It was slight—a tightening around his jaw, a fractional shift in his weight onto the cane—but she saw it, and the satisfaction she felt was immediately poisoned…"
7"When she turned back with two glasses, he had removed his jacket and draped it over the chair back, and was rolling his shirtsleeves to the elbow with the kind …"
8"Two different kinds of seeing, and both of them, right now, focused entirely on her with an intensity that made the cramped, cluttered kitchen feel like the sma…"
72.37% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"She kept, knuckles whitening"
1"she said, turning to face him across the narrow kitchen"
68.92% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she repeated (repeat)"
2"he agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.324
leniency0.649
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.162
74.8069%