| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Nyx’s form solidified slightly [slightly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.379 | | leniency | 0.759 | | rawRatio | 0.091 | | effectiveRatio | 0.069 | |
| 92.20% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1282 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1282 | | totalAiIsms | 29 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "familiar" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "comforting" | | 4 | "shimmered" | | 5 | "tinged" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "profound" | | 8 | "silence" | | 9 | "velvet" | | 10 | "crystal" | | 11 | "pulsed" | | 12 | "stomach" | | 13 | "perfect" | | 14 | "amidst" | | 15 | "intricate" | | 16 | "silk" | | 17 | "tension" | | 18 | "pulse" | | 19 | "weight" | | 20 | "unreadable" | | 21 | "palpable" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "weight of words/silence" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "the weight of such truth" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 97 | | matches | | |
| 69.22% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 97 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 115 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1278 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 64.04% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 53 | | wordCount | 1047 | | uniqueNames | 15 | | maxNameDensity | 1.72 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 1 | | London | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Blade | 2 | | Veil | 1 | | Soho | 1 | | Rory | 18 | | Nyx | 10 | | Seer | 2 | | Isolde | 8 | | Hel | 1 | | Shade | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Blade" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Seer" | | 4 | "Isolde" | | 5 | "Shade" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Soho" |
| | globalScore | 0.64 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 52.60% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 77 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "silhouette that seemed to drink the light" | | 1 | "appeared, cutting across their path" | | 2 | "patterns that seemed to shift and move when she looked at them directly" |
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| 43.51% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.565 | | wordCount | 1278 | | matches | | 0 | "not from a mouth, but from the space around her, a soft vibration in the air" | | 1 | "not rough-hewn granite, but living wood" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 115 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 40 | | mean | 31.95 | | std | 26.31 | | cv | 0.824 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 56 | | 1 | 6 | | 2 | 30 | | 3 | 70 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 50 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 122 | | 9 | 48 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 65 | | 13 | 36 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 69 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 33 | | 18 | 31 | | 19 | 86 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 37 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 60 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 35 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 32 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 36 | | 31 | 32 | | 32 | 37 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 64 | | 35 | 31 | | 36 | 43 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 21 |
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| 98.03% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "were lost" | | 1 | "was trampled" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 164 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 115 | | ratio | 0.061 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde’s directions had been vague—a certain arrangement of trees, a specific bend in the path just after the third ancient oak." | | 1 | "It wasn’t a mirage; it was a faint, rippling distortion, like heat haze off tarmac, but tinged with a subtle silver light." | | 2 | "Wildflowers bloomed everywhere—velvet purple blossoms the size of her fist, delicate white stars that chimed like crystal when a breeze she couldn’t feel stirred them, and twisting vines heavy with berries that pulsed with a soft, bioluminescent blue." | | 3 | "The light had no single source; it emanated from the leaves, the flowers, the very moss, casting everything in a dreamlike, dappled luminescence." | | 4 | "In the perfect mirror of the water, she saw her own reflection—her straight black hair, her bright blue eyes wide with wonder." | | 5 | "This place was not just beautiful; it was aware." | | 6 | "At its centre stood a circle of standing stones, not rough-hewn granite, but living wood—ancient oak trunks so vast their tops were lost in a golden haze." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1057 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "over smooth, milk-white stones." |
| | adverbCount | 28 | | adverbRatio | 0.026490066225165563 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005676442762535478 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 115 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 115 | | mean | 11.11 | | std | 6.93 | | cv | 0.623 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 22 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 22 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 38 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 22 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 23 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 22 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 50.43% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.3391304347826087 | | totalSentences | 115 | | uniqueOpeners | 39 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 25 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "She glanced at the shadow" | | 1 | "She felt nothing but the" | | 2 | "She touched the Fae-Forged Blade" | | 3 | "They’d been walking for an" | | 4 | "It wasn’t a mirage; it" | | 5 | "She’d seen distortions before, near" | | 6 | "She stepped forward, and the" | | 7 | "They stood in a ring" | | 8 | "Their bark was silver-grey, smooth" | | 9 | "They reached out a hand," | | 10 | "They moved deeper into the" | | 11 | "Its cold was a sharp" | | 12 | "It made no sound as" | | 13 | "She reached a hand toward" | | 14 | "Their shadowy form seemed to" | | 15 | "They crossed the stream by" | | 16 | "Her silver hair cascaded to" | | 17 | "Her eyes were the pale" | | 18 | "She was ethereal, ageless, and" | | 19 | "She made no sound." |
| | ratio | 0.284 | |
| 39.55% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 74 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in Richmond Park" | | 1 | "Rory pulled her jacket tighter," | | 2 | "She glanced at the shadow" | | 3 | "The whisper that answered came" | | 4 | "Rory shook her head." | | 5 | "She felt nothing but the" | | 6 | "The Heartstone Pendant resting against" | | 7 | "She touched the Fae-Forged Blade" | | 8 | "Isolde’s directions had been vague—a" | | 9 | "They’d been walking for an" | | 10 | "Nyx’s form solidified slightly, a" | | 11 | "It wasn’t a mirage; it" | | 12 | "Rory’s breath caught." | | 13 | "She’d seen distortions before, near" | | 14 | "She stepped forward, and the" | | 15 | "The damp chill vanished, replaced" | | 16 | "The sound of distant traffic" | | 17 | "They stood in a ring" | | 18 | "Their bark was silver-grey, smooth" | | 19 | "The ground underfoot was a" |
| | ratio | 0.841 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 96.27% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "She glanced at the shadow stretching long beside her, a humanoid silhouette that seemed to drink the light." | | 1 | "Wildflowers bloomed everywhere—velvet purple blossoms the size of her fist, delicate white stars that chimed like crystal when a breeze she couldn’t feel stirre…" | | 2 | "But as she stared, the impressions began to fade, the moss springing back as if never touched." |
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| 34.09% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx’s form solidified slightly, a gesture of one shadowy arm pointing ahead" | | 1 | "Rory stood, her heart hammering" |
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| 46.55% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.138 | | leniency | 0.276 | | rawRatio | 0.75 | | effectiveRatio | 0.207 | |