"The last dog walker had disappeared over Isabella Plantation's ridge twenty minutes ago, and the park had folded into itself the way only London green spaces could — swallowing every trace of the city beyond the tree line until the world shrank to grass and shadow and the ancient oaks standing black against a moonless sky."
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"Eva had texted her coordinates earlier that evening — no context, no explanation, just a dropped pin somewhere in the southwest corner of the park and a single message that read: *The grove."
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"Their trunks had a quality she hadn't expected from the descriptions she'd read — they didn't look like trees so much as columns of compressed darkness, their bark so deeply furrowed it seemed to breathe."
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"The grove opened before her — a rough circle of cleared ground maybe forty feet across, ringed by those impossible oaks."
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"Not an echo, not even the flat deadness of an enclosed space — her voice simply stopped, as if the air three feet from her mouth had a different density."
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"Not from wind — there was no wind now, she realised."
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"No sign anyone had been here — no footprints in the soft earth, no crushed flowers, no rubbish, nothing."
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"But the clock read 23:47, which meant she'd been walking for — she did the maths — far longer than the distance warranted."
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"A creak — deep, structural, the sound a ship's hull makes under pressure."
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"Roots had broken the surface of the clearing — pale tendrils the width of fingers, lacing across the ground in patterns that mirrored the frost she'd noticed earlier."
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"She held the stone between thumb and forefinger and felt it vibrate — a frantic, arrhythmic pulse, nothing like its usual gentle warmth near Hel portals."
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"A shape that suggested height — seven feet, eight — narrow, the proportions wrong in a way she couldn't immediately articulate."
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"Found it again — different gap between different trees, closer."
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"It tilted its head — a slow, mechanical inclination, as though it had seen something do this gesture once and was reproducing it from imperfect memory."
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"An expanse of skin — if it was skin — unbroken by any opening, any ridge, any mark."
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"The sound of the roots growing filled the silence now — a wet, fibrous crackling, soil shifting, wildflowers bobbing as their stems were jostled by the spreading network below."
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"She felt it more than saw it — a displacement of air, a change in the pressure against her skin, as if the grove had compressed by a fraction."
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"From somewhere beyond the trees — far away: kilometres, maybe; or inches, maybe — came a sound she recognised."
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"The flowers turned away one by one, returning to their neutral, skyward posture, and the sound beneath the ground — that deep subterranean vibration — faded to a murmur, then to memory."
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"Then scrolled up and found nothing — no earlier texts, no coordinates, no dropped pin."
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"Eva's phone went straight to voicemail, that automated voice that meant the device was dead or deliberately shut off."
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"Wildflowers grew here despite the season, pale things she couldn't name in the dark, their petals catching some ambient light that had no obvious source."
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"The oaks that had seemed to sway minutes earlier stood rigid, their canopy a lattice of black capillaries frozen against the grey nothing of the sky."
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"Dozens of pale heads rotating on their stems to face her, the way sunflowers track the sun except there was no sun and they were tracking her as she walked and …"
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"Just the ring of oak and the ring of flowers and the silence that wasn't silence because now she could hear something."
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"A vibration in her molars, in the small bones of her inner ear, the kind of sound that didn't travel through air but through ground, up through the soles of her…"
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"Everything beyond the ring of trees had become a blackness so total it seemed painted on, a matte void that started precisely where the grove ended."
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"Then all of them simultaneously, a chorus of deep wooden groans that rose and fell in a rhythm that sounded deliberate."
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"The crimson gemstone cast its own light now, a deep red glow that turned her fingers the colour of raw meat."
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"It tilted its head — a slow, mechanical inclination, as though it had seen something do this gesture once and was reproducing it from imperfect memory."
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"An old, childhood ache, suddenly vivid, suddenly present, as though something in the grove had reached through her years and touched it."