Run: 2026-02-24-01KJ8X0VSBS91V23YA1FRAXV7R

Run Details

Model:
Aion 2.0
Duration:
1m 10s
Cost:
$0.005038
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
**Draft Response:** The ancient oak standing stones were darker than the night around them. Rory placed a hand against the nearest one, the bark rough and cold under her palm. The air in the clearing tasted different—thick with the scent of blooming wildflowers despite the late hour, a sweetness that clung to the back of her throat. She had waited until the park was empty, until the last dog walker’s torchlight had vanished over the hill. The Heartstone pendant hung heavy against her sternum, a constant, quiet weight. It hadn’t pulsed since she’d passed through the stones, but the silence felt like a held breath. “Just a place,” she whispered. Her voice was swallowed by the grove. “A weird, hidden place.” Eva’s voice echoed in her memory, sharp with concern over a static-filled phone line. “You’re not going back to that park at night, Rory. That’s how urban legends start.” “It’s not an urban legend. Silas showed me the police reports. Three people in the last year, all last seen near Richmond Grove. They vanished.” “And you think a magical necklace is going to explain that? You sound like him.” Rory’s fingers tightened around the pendant. The chain bit into her skin. She hadn’t sounded like Evan. Evan’s obsessions were possessive, jealous, a closed fist. This was a thread, a single line of logic she couldn’t ignore. The pendant warmed near portals. People vanished here. The connection was a hook in her mind. A soft crunch came from her left. She froze. The sound was dry, like a footstep on brittle leaves. The grove’s floor was a carpet of moss and soft grass. No leaves. She turned her head slowly. Between the thick trunks of the boundary oaks, shadows layered upon shadows. Nothing moved. The wildflowers nodded in a breeze she couldn’t feel. “Animal,” she said, forcing her shoulders down. “Fox. Badger.” Her own reasoning sounded thin. The air was too still for a breeze, yet the flowers swayed in a gentle, rhythmic wave. As if something had just passed through them. The pendant gave a single, distinct throb of heat. Rory’s breath hitched. She cupped the crimson stone in her hand. It was warm, not burning, but alive. A faint inner glow seeped between her fingers, painting her skin a sickly watered-down red. Another crunch. This one closer, from behind the standing stone to her right. She spun, heart hammering against her ribs. The stone was a monolith of blackness. Nothing there. But the space around it… the darkness seemed deeper. It drank the faint starlight. “Hello?” The word left her before she could stop it. No answer. Just the sigh of the flowers. Then, a whisper. It wasn’t a word. It was the suggestion of sound, a brush of air against her ear that carried the cadence of speech. She jerked her head around. Empty air. *You’re imagining it. Stress. Lack of sleep.* The lawyerly part of her mind, her father’s gift, began cataloging evidence. *Subjective sensory input. No corroborating data.* The pendant pulsed again, a slow, steady beat like a second heart. The glow intensified. A figure flickered at the edge of her vision. A tall, narrow impression between two distant trees. When she snapped her gaze toward it, there was only trunk and shadow. “I see you,” she lied, her voice steadier than she felt. Cool-headed. Think. What did she know? The grove was a border. Time moved wrong here. An hour inside could be minutes outside. Or days. How long had she been here? She fumbled for her phone. The screen was black, unresponsive. The time read 00:00. The battery icon was full, but the device was dead. A cold trickle traced her spine. The whisper came again, clearer this time. It curled around a word she almost understood. It sounded like her name. Not “Rory.” Not “Aurora.” Something older. A vibration in the air that resonated in the hollow of her teeth. *Malphora.* She didn’t know that name. She had never heard it. The flowers to her left suddenly bent, pressed down as if by an invisible weight. The depression moved, a slow, deliberate path leading toward her. No sound of footsteps. Just the silent yielding of blossoms. Rory took a step back. Her heel sank into soft earth. The standing stones formed a loose circle. She was near the center. The path of bent flowers was coming from the tree line. Another depression appeared in the moss to her right, then another directly ahead. Converging. “Okay.” She swallowed, her mouth dry. “Okay. You’re here. What do you want?” The whispers coalesced. They weren’t in her ears anymore. They were in the rustle of the leaves above, in the creak of the ancient oaks, in the very soil under her feet. A chorus of faint, hungry voices speaking over each other in a language of sighs and cracks. *…came through the stones…* *…wears the key…* *…the blood is strong…* *…Malphora…* The pendant was hot now, a brand against her skin. Its crimson light spilled out, illuminating the trampled flowers, the deep green moss, the base of the standing stones. In that blood-red glow, she saw them. Footprints. Dozens of them. Etched into the moss as if by great pressure. They encircled her. Some were small, like a child’s bare feet. Others were long and twisted, with too many toes. They all faced inward. Toward her. They had been there the whole time. She just hadn’t seen them in the dark. The whispers stopped. The grove fell into a silence so absolute it pressed against her eardrums. The flowers stood still. No wind. No rustle. Nothing. From the deepest shadow between the stones, a shape detached itself. It didn’t walk. It unfolded. Tall, impossibly slender, a cut-out of deeper night. It had no features, just a suggestion of a head, of long, spindling limbs. It stood at the edge of the circle of footprints, watching her. Rory’s hand clenched around the Heartstone. The heat was nearly unbearable. The light flared, and for a fraction of a second, she saw it clearly. A face, long and pale like a birch trunk. Eyes that were not eyes, but pools of starless dark. A smile that was a crack in the world. Then the light died back, and the figure was just a shadow again. But it was closer. It had taken a step without moving. The certainty was a physical weight in her chest, cold and solid. She was not alone. She had never been alone from the moment she stepped through the stones. They had been waiting. They had been watching. And they had called her by a name she did not know.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.417
leniency0.833
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.58% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1118
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"suddenly"
2"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
19.50% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1118
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"weight"
count3
1
word"pulsed"
count2
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"echoed"
count1
4
word"rhythmic"
count1
5
word"throb"
count1
6
word"whisper"
count2
7
word"input"
count1
8
word"flickered"
count1
9
word"traced"
count1
10
word"resonated"
count1
11
word"footsteps"
count1
12
word"etched"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"pulsed"
2"silence"
3"echoed"
4"rhythmic"
5"throb"
6"whisper"
7"input"
8"flickered"
9"traced"
10"resonated"
11"footsteps"
12"etched"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences144
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences144
filterMatches
0"know"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences150
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans8
markdownWords28
totalWords1117
ratio0.025
matches
0"Draft Response:"
1"You’re imagining it. Stress. Lack of sleep."
2"Subjective sensory input. No corroborating data."
3"Malphora."
4"…came through the stones…"
5"…wears the key…"
6"…the blood is strong…"
7"…Malphora…"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions10
wordCount1038
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity0.48
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Evan"
discoveredNames
Heartstone2
Evan2
Cool-headed1
Rory5
persons
0"Evan"
1"Rory"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences77
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a held breath"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.895
wordCount1117
matches
0"not burning, but alive"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences150
matches
0"know that name"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs50
mean22.34
std15.45
cv0.691
sampleLengths
02
155
248
316
429
525
615
753
87
925
1028
119
1230
139
1433
1513
1630
1710
188
1933
2025
2115
2230
2335
246
2530
2639
271
2810
2935
3048
3113
3249
334
343
354
361
3736
3839
3915
403
4122
4250
4325
4428
4513
464
477
4837
4912
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences144
matches
0"was swallowed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs157
matches
0"was coming"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences150
ratio0.007
matches
0"The air in the clearing tasted different—thick with the scent of blooming wildflowers despite the late hour, a sweetness that clung to the back of her throat."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1044
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.03065134099616858
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.008620689655172414
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences150
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences150
mean7.45
std5.08
cv0.683
sampleLengths
02
112
216
327
419
512
617
75
87
94
1014
1115
1225
1315
146
156
165
178
1812
195
203
218
227
232
2410
2511
262
275
2812
292
309
317
322
335
3417
358
369
373
388
397
4015
412
4211
437
447
452
465
474
485
4910
48.44% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats19
diversityRatio0.36666666666666664
totalSentences150
uniqueOpeners55
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences122
matches
0"Just the sigh of the"
1"Then, a whisper."
2"Just the silent yielding of"
3"Then the light died back,"
ratio0.033
92.13% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount39
totalSentences122
matches
0"She had waited until the"
1"It hadn’t pulsed since she’d"
2"Her voice was swallowed by"
3"She hadn’t sounded like Evan."
4"She turned her head slowly."
5"she said, forcing her shoulders"
6"Her own reasoning sounded thin."
7"She cupped the crimson stone"
8"It was warm, not burning,"
9"She spun, heart hammering against"
10"It drank the faint starlight."
11"It wasn’t a word."
12"It was the suggestion of"
13"She jerked her head around."
14"*You’re imagining it."
15"she lied, her voice steadier"
16"She fumbled for her phone."
17"It curled around a word"
18"It sounded like her name."
19"She didn’t know that name."
ratio0.32
50.16% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount100
totalSentences122
matches
0"The ancient oak standing stones"
1"Rory placed a hand against"
2"The air in the clearing"
3"She had waited until the"
4"The Heartstone pendant hung heavy"
5"It hadn’t pulsed since she’d"
6"Her voice was swallowed by"
7"Eva’s voice echoed in her"
8"Rory’s fingers tightened around the"
9"The chain bit into her"
10"She hadn’t sounded like Evan."
11"Evan’s obsessions were possessive, jealous,"
12"This was a thread, a"
13"The pendant warmed near portals."
14"People vanished here."
15"The connection was a hook"
16"A soft crunch came from"
17"The sound was dry, like"
18"The grove’s floor was a"
19"She turned her head slowly."
ratio0.82
40.98% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences122
matches
0"As if something had just"
ratio0.008
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The air in the clearing tasted different—thick with the scent of blooming wildflowers despite the late hour, a sweetness that clung to the back of her throat."
1"It was the suggestion of sound, a brush of air against her ear that carried the cadence of speech."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she lied, her voice steadier than she felt"
1"She swallowed, her mouth dry"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"she lied (lie)"
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.333
84.5935%