| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 12 | | tagDensity | 0.417 | | leniency | 0.833 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 86.58% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1118 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "suddenly" | | 2 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 19.50% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1118 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "echoed" | | 4 | "rhythmic" | | 5 | "throb" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "input" | | 8 | "flickered" | | 9 | "traced" | | 10 | "resonated" | | 11 | "footsteps" | | 12 | "etched" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 144 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 144 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 150 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 28 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 8 | | markdownWords | 28 | | totalWords | 1117 | | ratio | 0.025 | | matches | | 0 | "Draft Response:" | | 1 | "You’re imagining it. Stress. Lack of sleep." | | 2 | "Subjective sensory input. No corroborating data." | | 3 | "Malphora." | | 4 | "…came through the stones…" | | 5 | "…wears the key…" | | 6 | "…the blood is strong…" | | 7 | "…Malphora…" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 10 | | wordCount | 1038 | | uniqueNames | 4 | | maxNameDensity | 0.48 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Evan" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 2 | | Evan | 2 | | Cool-headed | 1 | | Rory | 5 |
| | persons | | | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 77 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a held breath" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.895 | | wordCount | 1117 | | matches | | 0 | "not burning, but alive" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 150 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 50 | | mean | 22.34 | | std | 15.45 | | cv | 0.691 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 2 | | 1 | 55 | | 2 | 48 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 29 | | 5 | 25 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 53 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 25 | | 10 | 28 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 30 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 33 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 30 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 33 | | 20 | 25 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 30 | | 23 | 35 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 30 | | 26 | 39 | | 27 | 1 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 35 | | 30 | 48 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 49 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 1 | | 37 | 36 | | 38 | 39 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 22 | | 42 | 50 | | 43 | 25 | | 44 | 28 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 37 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 144 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 157 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 150 | | ratio | 0.007 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the clearing tasted different—thick with the scent of blooming wildflowers despite the late hour, a sweetness that clung to the back of her throat." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1044 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 32 | | adverbRatio | 0.03065134099616858 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008620689655172414 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 150 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 150 | | mean | 7.45 | | std | 5.08 | | cv | 0.683 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 2 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 27 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 25 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 48.44% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 19 | | diversityRatio | 0.36666666666666664 | | totalSentences | 150 | | uniqueOpeners | 55 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 122 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the sigh of the" | | 1 | "Then, a whisper." | | 2 | "Just the silent yielding of" | | 3 | "Then the light died back," |
| | ratio | 0.033 | |
| 92.13% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 39 | | totalSentences | 122 | | matches | | 0 | "She had waited until the" | | 1 | "It hadn’t pulsed since she’d" | | 2 | "Her voice was swallowed by" | | 3 | "She hadn’t sounded like Evan." | | 4 | "She turned her head slowly." | | 5 | "she said, forcing her shoulders" | | 6 | "Her own reasoning sounded thin." | | 7 | "She cupped the crimson stone" | | 8 | "It was warm, not burning," | | 9 | "She spun, heart hammering against" | | 10 | "It drank the faint starlight." | | 11 | "It wasn’t a word." | | 12 | "It was the suggestion of" | | 13 | "She jerked her head around." | | 14 | "*You’re imagining it." | | 15 | "she lied, her voice steadier" | | 16 | "She fumbled for her phone." | | 17 | "It curled around a word" | | 18 | "It sounded like her name." | | 19 | "She didn’t know that name." |
| | ratio | 0.32 | |
| 50.16% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 100 | | totalSentences | 122 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 1 | "Rory placed a hand against" | | 2 | "The air in the clearing" | | 3 | "She had waited until the" | | 4 | "The Heartstone pendant hung heavy" | | 5 | "It hadn’t pulsed since she’d" | | 6 | "Her voice was swallowed by" | | 7 | "Eva’s voice echoed in her" | | 8 | "Rory’s fingers tightened around the" | | 9 | "The chain bit into her" | | 10 | "She hadn’t sounded like Evan." | | 11 | "Evan’s obsessions were possessive, jealous," | | 12 | "This was a thread, a" | | 13 | "The pendant warmed near portals." | | 14 | "People vanished here." | | 15 | "The connection was a hook" | | 16 | "A soft crunch came from" | | 17 | "The sound was dry, like" | | 18 | "The grove’s floor was a" | | 19 | "She turned her head slowly." |
| | ratio | 0.82 | |
| 40.98% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 122 | | matches | | 0 | "As if something had just" |
| | ratio | 0.008 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the clearing tasted different—thick with the scent of blooming wildflowers despite the late hour, a sweetness that clung to the back of her throat." | | 1 | "It was the suggestion of sound, a brush of air against her ear that carried the cadence of speech." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she lied, her voice steadier than she felt" | | 1 | "She swallowed, her mouth dry" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she lied (lie)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 12 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |