| 0 | "Let's analyze the text and apply the rules precisely." |
| 1 | "Rules summary:\n1." 1/1/2001, 12:00:00 AM |
| 2 | "Convert agented passives (with \"by [agent]\") to active voice." |
| 3 | "2." |
| 4 | "Infer agent when not stated using context." |
| 5 | "3." |
| 6 | "Leave truly agentless passives unchanged if no agent can be determined." |
| 7 | "4." |
| 8 | "Do NOT change dialogue." |
| 9 | "5." |
| 10 | "Do NOT change non-passive constructions (like copulas)." |
| 11 | "6." |
| 12 | "Preserve everything else exactly." |
| 13 | "I'll go through the text sentence by sentence." |
| 14 | "This is passive without an agent." |
| 15 | "Who closed the gallery?" |
| 16 | "Possibly gallery management, staff, or authorities." |
| 17 | "Context: The gallery is a place, maybe closed by its staff or management." |
| 18 | "But the sentence doesn't say, and surrounding sentences don't clearly indicate who closed it." |
| 19 | "It might be agentless." |
| 20 | "However, later we see \"the gallery had been closed\" could be inferred that the gallery staff closed it." |
| 21 | "But is that clear from context?" |
| 22 | "Possibly not." |
| 23 | "I think it's agentless." |
| 24 | "Rule 3 says leave truly agentless passives unchanged." |
| 25 | "So I'll leave it." |
| 26 | "Active, no change." |
| 27 | "Agented passive: \"had been polished by the cleaning crew\" -> convert to active: \"The cleaning crew had polished the floors just days ago,\" Keep the rest." |
| 28 | "Agented passive: \"had been forced open by the intruder\" -> \"The intruder had forced the front door open.\"" |
| 29 | "Passive: \"had been used by whoever broke in\" -> \"where whoever broke in had used a crowbar.\"" |
| 30 | "But careful: \"whoever broke in\" is the agent." |
| 31 | "Actually, the phrase \"by whoever broke in\" is agent." |
| 32 | "So convert: \"where a crowbar had been used by whoever broke in\" -> \"where whoever broke in had used a crowbar.\"" |
| 33 | "But the sentence structure: \"Deep gouges scarred the frame where a crowbar had been used by whoever broke in.\"" |
| 34 | "After conversion: \"Deep gouges scarred the frame where whoever broke in had used a crowbar.\"" |
| 35 | "That seems fine." |
| 36 | "Active." |
| 37 | "Passive without agent." |
| 38 | "Who pried it loose?" |
| 39 | "Likely the intruder/thief." |
| 40 | "Context: previous sentences about intruder breaking in." |
| 41 | "So we can infer \"The intruder\" or \"Whoever broke in\" as agent." |
| 42 | "But rule 2 says infer agent when not stated using context clues." |
| 43 | "The surrounding sentences: \"The front door had been forced open by the intruder.\"" |
| 44 | "and \"Deep gouges scarred the frame where a crowbar had been used by whoever broke in.\"" |
| 45 | "So agent is intruder/whoever broke in." |
| 46 | "So we can change to: \"The intruder had pried the lock loose and tossed it aside.\"" |
| 47 | "Or \"Whoever broke in had pried the lock loose and tossed it aside.\"" |
| 48 | "Which one?" |
| 49 | "The previous sentence used \"whoever broke in\" so maybe consistency." |
| 50 | "But the first sentence used \"the intruder\"." |
| 51 | "Both refer to same agent." |
| 52 | "I'll use \"The intruder\" as it's simpler." |
| 53 | "However, note: the sentence has two verbs: \"had been pried loose\" and \"tossed aside\"." |
| 54 | "Both passive." |
| 55 | "So convert both: \"The intruder had pried the lock loose and tossed it aside.\"" |
| 56 | "Leave unchanged." |
| 57 | "Dialogue, leave." |
| 58 | "First part: agented passive: \"had been disabled by someone with technical knowledge\" -> \"Someone with technical knowledge had disabled the alarm system\"." |
| 59 | "Second part: \"the wires had been cut cleanly, not ripped out.\"" |
| 60 | "Passive without agent." |
| 61 | "Who cut the wires?" |
| 62 | "Likely the same someone with technical knowledge." |
| 63 | "Infer agent: \"Someone with technical knowledge had cut the wires cleanly, not ripped them out.\"" |
| 64 | "But careful: the dash connects the two clauses." |
| 65 | "Original: \"The alarm system had been disabled by someone with technical knowledge — the wires had been cut cleanly, not ripped out.\"" |
| 66 | "After conversion: \"Someone with technical knowledge had disabled the alarm system — they had cut the wires cleanly, not ripped them out.\"" |
| 67 | "Or maybe \"he/she\" but \"they\" is gender-neutral." |
| 68 | "Better: \"Someone with technical knowledge had disabled the alarm system — the wires had been cut cleanly, not ripped out.\"" |
| 69 | "But then second part still passive." |
| 70 | "To be consistent, we should also convert second part if agent is same." |
| 71 | "Since it's a continuation, we can infer agent is the same." |
| 72 | "So convert both." |
| 73 | "Let's do: \"Someone with technical knowledge had disabled the alarm system — they had cut the wires cleanly, not ripped them out.\"" |
| 74 | "But rule 6: preserve word choices as much as possible." |
| 75 | "Changing \"the wires had been cut\" to \"they had cut the wires\" changes word order." |
| 76 | "But that's necessary for active voice." |
| 77 | "Alternatively, we could keep second part passive if agent is not clearly stated?" |
| 78 | "But rule 2 says infer agent when not stated using context clues." |
| 79 | "The context is the same sentence: \"by someone with technical knowledge\" so agent is that someone." |
| 80 | "So we should convert both." |
| 81 | "I'll convert second part as well." |
| 82 | "Next: \"A backup battery had also been removed.\"" |
| 83 | "Passive without agent." |
| 84 | "Who removed it?" |
| 85 | "Likely the same someone with technical knowledge or the thief." |
| 86 | "Context: preceding sentence about alarm system disabled." |
| 87 | "So agent is same." |
| 88 | "So: \"They had also removed a backup battery.\"" |
| 89 | "Or \"Someone with technical knowledge had also removed a backup battery.\"" |
| 90 | "But the previous conversion used \"Someone with technical knowledge\" as subject for first clause, then \"they\" for second." |
| 91 | "Here we have a new sentence." |
| 92 | "To maintain flow, maybe: \"They had also removed a backup battery.\"" |
| 93 | "But who is \"they\"?" |
| 94 | "Might be ambiguous." |
| 95 | "Better to use \"The thief\" or \"The intruder\"." |
| 96 | "But context: \"someone with technical knowledge\" is likely the intruder." |
| 97 | "So we can say \"The intruder had also removed a backup battery.\"" |
| 98 | "However, the original sentence is separate." |
| 99 | "Let's see surrounding: \"The alarm system had been disabled by someone with technical knowledge — the wires had been cut cleanly, not ripped out." |
| 100 | "So after converting first sentence, we have: \"Someone with technical knowledge had disabled the alarm system — they had cut the wires cleanly, not ripped them out." |
| 101 | "A backup battery had also been removed.\"" |
| 102 | "Still passive last sentence." |
| 103 | "To convert: \"They had also removed a backup battery.\"" |
| 104 | "But \"they\" refers to \"someone with technical knowledge\"?" |
| 105 | "Yes." |
| 106 | "So I'll convert to \"They had also removed a backup battery.\"" |
| 107 | "Agented passive: \"had been installed by a private firm\" -> \"A private firm had installed the security system only two years earlier.\"" |
| 108 | "Active." |
| 109 | "Agented passive: \"had been displayed by the gallery staff\" -> \"The gallery staff had displayed the stolen painting on the north wall for Monday's private viewing.\"" |
| 110 | "Active." |
| 111 | "Passive without agent." |
| 112 | "Who sliced the canvas?" |
| 113 | "The thief." |
| 114 | "Who left the frame?" |
| 115 | "The thief." |
| 116 | "Context: theft of painting." |
| 117 | "So infer agent: \"The thief had sliced the canvas from its frame with a blade, and had left the frame itself propped against the baseboard.\"" |
| 118 | "Or \"They had sliced...\"" |
| 119 | "I'll use \"The thief\" for consistency." |
| 120 | "..." |
| 121 | "Leave unchanged." |
| 122 | "..." |
| 123 | "Dialogue." |
| 124 | "Agented passive: \"had been compiled by the gallery owner\" and \"handed\" is also passive (had been handed)." |
| 125 | "So: \"The gallery owner, Mr." |
| 126 | "Crane, had compiled a guest list and handed it to the police that morning.\"" |
| 127 | "Active." |
| 128 | "Passive without agent." |
| 129 | "Who invited them?" |
| 130 | "Likely Mr." |
| 131 | "Crane or gallery staff." |
| 132 | "Context: guest list compiled by Crane." |
| 133 | "So agent is Crane or his staff." |
| 134 | "We can infer: \"Mr." |
| 135 | "Crane had invited twenty-three guests to Monday's viewing.\"" |
| 136 | "Or \"The gallery had invited...\"" |
| 137 | "But careful: the previous sentence says \"A guest list had been compiled by the gallery owner, Mr." |
| 138 | "Crane,\" so he is the one who invited?" |
| 139 | "Possibly." |
| 140 | "But the next sentence: \"Every one of them had been vetted by Crane's staff before the event.\"" |
| 141 | "So vetting is by staff, inviting might also be by Crane or staff." |
| 142 | "I'll infer agent as \"Crane\" or \"the gallery\"." |
| 143 | "To be safe, use \"The gallery had invited twenty-three guests to Monday's viewing.\"" |
| 144 | "But the context is about Crane's involvement." |
| 145 | "Actually, the sentence before: \"A guest list had been compiled by the gallery owner, Mr." |
| 146 | "Crane,\" so he compiled the list, likely he invited." |
| 147 | "So \"Mr." |
| 148 | "Crane had invited twenty-three guests to Monday's viewing.\"" |
| 149 | "That seems fine." |
| 150 | "Agented passive: \"had been vetted by Crane's staff\" -> \"Crane's staff had vetted every one of them before the event.\"" |
| 151 | "Agented passive: \"had been circled in red by Crane himself\" -> \"Crane himself had circled two names in red.\"" |
| 152 | "Leave." |
| 153 | "Dialogue." |
| 154 | "Dialogue." |
| 155 | "Active." |
| 156 | "Agented passive: \"had been reported by the night guard\" -> \"The night guard had reported the theft at dawn — hours after the thief had come and gone.\"" |
| 157 | "Passive without agent." |
| 158 | "Who propped open?" |
| 159 | "The thief." |
| 160 | "Who tracked boot prints?" |
| 161 | "The thief." |
| 162 | "So: \"The thief had propped the emergency exit open with a brick, and had tracked muddy boot prints across the threshold.\"" |
| 163 | "Passive without agent." |
| 164 | "Who wiped it?" |
| 165 | "The thief." |
| 166 | "So: \"The thief had wiped the brick clean of fingerprints.\"" |
| 167 | "..." |
| 168 | "Leave." |
| 169 | "Dialogue." |
| 170 | "Dialogue?" |
| 171 | "Actually, this is Tomás speaking, so it's dialogue." |
| 172 | "So leave unchanged." |
| 173 | "But careful: The sentence \"The rear camera was spray-painted over at eleven fifteen.\"" |
| 174 | "This is passive without agent." |
| 175 | "But it's inside dialogue, so we do NOT change dialogue." |
| 176 | "So leave as is." |
| 177 | "Passive without agent." |
| 178 | "Who left them untouched?" |
| 179 | "The thief." |
| 180 | "Who targeted the one?" |
| 181 | "The thief." |
| 182 | "So: \"The thief had left the remaining cameras untouched — they had targeted only the one covering the back entrance.\"" |
| 183 | "Or \"The thief had left the remaining cameras untouched and had targeted only the one covering the back entrance.\"" |
| 184 | "But original uses dash." |
| 185 | "So: \"The thief had left the remaining cameras untouched — they had targeted only the one covering the back entrance.\"" |
| 186 | "But \"they\" might be ambiguous." |
| 187 | "Could use \"The thief\" again: \"The thief had left the remaining cameras untouched — he had targeted only the one covering the back entrance.\"" |
| 188 | "But gender unknown." |
| 189 | "Better: \"The thief had left the remaining cameras untouched — only the one covering the back entrance had been targeted.\"" |
| 190 | "But then second part still passive." |
| 191 | "To fully convert, we need to make both active." |
| 192 | "Since agent is same, we can say: \"The thief had left the remaining cameras untouched and had targeted only the one covering the back entrance.\"" |
| 193 | "But original dash might be for emphasis." |
| 194 | "We can keep dash: \"The thief had left the remaining cameras untouched — they had targeted only the one covering the back entrance.\"" |
| 195 | "I'll go with that." |
| 196 | "Active." |
| 197 | "Agented passive: \"had been photographed by the forensics team\" -> \"The forensics team had photographed the prints, but she wanted to see them for herself.\"" |
| 198 | "First part: agented passive: \"had been conducted by the insurance company\" -> \"The insurance company had conducted a formal appraisal just last month\"." |
| 199 | "Second part: \"the painting had been valued at three million.\"" |
| 200 | "Passive without agent." |
| 201 | "Who valued it?" |
| 202 | "The insurance company or appraisers." |
| 203 | "Context: appraisal by insurance company." |
| 204 | "So agent is insurance company." |
| 205 | "So: \"they had valued the painting at three million.\"" |
| 206 | "So: \"The insurance company had conducted a formal appraisal just last month — they had valued the painting at three million.\"" |
| 207 | "Active." |
| 208 | "Passive: \"be solved\" is passive infinitive?" |
| 209 | "Actually \"would not be solved\" is passive voice." |
| 210 | "Agent?" |
| 211 | "Possibly \"they\" or \"the police\"." |
| 212 | "But context: Nadia is certain." |
| 213 | "Could infer agent as \"she\" or \"the police\"." |
| 214 | "But maybe leave as agentless?" |
| 215 | "It's a prediction." |
| 216 | "Could change to: \"She knew they would not solve the case quickly — she was certain of that.\"" |
| 217 | "But careful: \"The case would not be solved quickly\" is a standalone clause." |
| 218 | "We can infer agent as \"the police\" or \"they\"." |
| 219 | "So: \"They would not solve the case quickly — she was certain of that.\"" |
| 220 | "But who is \"they\"?" |
| 221 | "The police department." |
| 222 | "It's clear from context." |
| 223 | "So I'll convert." |
| 224 | "Passive without agent." |
| 225 | "Who scattered the evidence?" |
| 226 | "The thief." |
| 227 | "So: \"But the thief had scattered the evidence carelessly, almost deliberately, as though he wanted to be found.\"" |
| 228 | "Or \"they\"." |
| 229 | "I'll use \"the thief\"." |
| 230 | "Now, compile all changes." |
| 231 | "I'll rewrite the passage with these conversions." |
| 232 | "Let's write it out." |