Run: 2026-02-24-01KJ8X4E0PTSC4WGYF7776BZ98

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Duration:
56.5s
Cost:
$0.039690
Provider:
Anthropic

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The portal smelled of overripe figs. Rory noticed it before she noticed anything else — that thick, sweetly rotten smell rolling through the tear in the air like warm breath from an open oven, and she nearly pulled back from it on instinct. She didn't. She pressed her lips together, squared her shoulders, and stepped through. The ground on the other side was soft. Not wet, not muddy, but yielding in the way of very old soil that had been turned and fed for centuries, dark and loamy and somehow warm underfoot even through the soles of her trainers. She took one step and then another and then stopped breathing for a moment because the sky above her was amber. Not sunrise amber. Not the pale, apologetic gold of an English morning. This was deep and saturated, the colour of a tiger's eye gemstone held up to the light, and it stretched in every direction without a single cloud to interrupt it. No sun either — the light came from everywhere and nowhere at once, sourceless and honeyed, laying itself across the landscape like something poured. "Well," she said. It was not a useful thing to say. She said it anyway. Nyx stepped through behind her, their silhouette condensing from shadow into something approaching solidity as they cleared the rift. In this light, the violet glow of their eyes was muted, replaced by something warmer. They tilted their head upward and were still for a long moment, which from Nyx constituted a significant reaction. "Dymas," they said, in that whisper-from-nowhere voice. "I haven't been here since before the Restoration." "How long ago was that?" "Long enough." Isolde came last, stepping through the portal with the unhurried grace of someone crossing the threshold of a familiar room. Her silver hair caught the amber light and held it, and she left no impression at all in the dark soil as she moved forward to stand beside Rory. Pale lavender eyes swept the landscape without urgency. "The feast was set," she said, "before any of you thought to arrive." Rory had given up asking Isolde to speak plainly. She filed the comment somewhere in the back of her mind and turned to look at what was actually in front of them. The vineyards began perhaps fifty metres from where they stood and ran to the horizon without interruption, row after meticulous row of vines hung so heavy with fruit that the canes bowed under the weight. The grapes were not the purple-black of any cultivar Rory had ever delivered produce past — they ranged through colours she lacked proper names for, a deep bruised violet at one end, a luminous copper at the other, and between them something that looked almost arterial. She took a step toward the nearest row without meaning to and stopped herself. The air here was not quite right. It was too full — dense with fragrance the way air got during the brief ridiculous peak of summer, except there was no summer here, no season at all, just this relentless amber warmth pressing against her skin. She could smell yeast and honey and something beneath both that she recognised as the faint copper note of blood, barely there, a grace note under the sweetness. It made her stomach turn even as it made her mouth water, which disturbed her more than either reaction alone. She pressed her thumb against the crescent scar on her left wrist. Old habit. "Don't eat anything," Nyx said, without looking at her. "I wasn't going to." "You were thinking about it." She was. She put her hands in her pockets. They moved deeper along a broad dirt path that ran between the vineyard rows, and the vines closed in on either side with a slowness that felt deliberate, the way very old things moved — not menacing exactly, but aware. Rory kept her eyes moving. The Fae blade was at her hip, tucked under her jacket in a plain leather sheath Isolde had produced without comment. She could feel the cold of it through the fabric, constant and faintly reassuring. The Heartstone at her collarbone was doing something new. It had pulsed with warmth near the portal — she'd felt it before they even located the rift, a steady beat against her sternum like a second heart finding its rhythm. But now, deeper in, it had shifted to something she could only describe as eager. Not painful. Not alarming. Just insistent, a low thrumming warmth that moved when she moved, orienting toward something she hadn't found yet. She didn't mention it to the others. Not yet. What she did mention was the sound. "Do you hear that?" She stopped walking. Nyx stopped. Even Isolde paused, though her expression suggested she had been hearing it considerably longer. It was music, or something that functioned as music — a low, resonant hum that seemed to rise from the earth itself rather than from any instrument or throat. It had no melody in the conventional sense, just a series of tones that shifted against each other in complex, overlapping layers, and when Rory stood still and let herself actually hear it rather than strain after it, she realised it wasn't unpleasant. It was, in fact, the most beautiful thing she'd ever heard, and that was precisely what made her skin prickle. "The terroir," Nyx said. "The land here is old enough to have a voice. Don't let it lull you." "I wasn't—" "You were doing that too." She bit down on her reply and kept walking. The path widened as they crested a shallow rise, and beyond it lay the first of the structures. Rory had expected something medieval — hewn stone, rough timber, the functional architecture of ancient agriculture. What she found instead were open pavilions of pale material she couldn't identify, something between stone and bone, hung with garlands of fruit and draped with fabric in deepening shades of crimson and gold. Long tables ran beneath the pavilion roofs and the tables were set — plates and cups and serving vessels laid as if for an imminent feast — but there was no one anywhere that she could see. The food on the tables had not spoiled. That was the wrong detail. All of it gleamed under the sourceless amber light as if freshly plated, steam still rising from dishes at the far end, fruit still glistening, bread still pulling itself apart at the seams with interior warmth. The absence of any host or diner made it worse somehow, not better. It looked like a painting of anticipation. Rory's hand drifted toward the Heartstone. It was beating hard now, a staccato pulse, directing her attention toward the far end of the largest table where a single goblet sat apart from the rest, filled with something darker than wine. "Isolde," she said carefully. "The gift predates the giving," Isolde said, already looking at her with those pale eyes. "And the thief who does not take is still known for what they have touched." "That's—" Rory lowered her voice on instinct, though there was no one to overhear. "That's not actually helpful." "It is entirely helpful. You are choosing not to find it so." Nyx had drifted ahead, their form thinning at the edges the way it did when they were uneasy — not afraid, Rory didn't think Nyx did afraid precisely, but uncertain in a way that manifested as the slow erosion of their body's margins. The shadow-stuff of their hands bled into the air around them. "Something is watching," they said quietly. "Not at us. Watching the path ahead." Rory looked. The path continued beyond the pavilions, narrowing again between two hillsides thick with orchard trees, and the fruit hanging from those branches caught her attention before the shape beneath them did. Enormous fruit — swollen, almost grotesque in their excess, pressing against each other, splitting at the seams in one or two places and releasing something that rolled down the bark in slow dark rivulets. And there, between the trunks, a stillness that wasn't natural stillness. The kind of stillness that had stopped itself. She reached under her jacket and wrapped her fingers around the Fae blade's hilt. The cold bit into her palm instantly, sharp and clean, and she felt her thinking snap into focus the way it always did when cold water hit her face. Good. "All right," she said quietly, to both of them, to neither of them, to herself. "We go carefully." Nyx's violet eyes found hers in the amber dark. "We go carefully," they agreed. Isolde had already moved ahead of both of them. She left nothing behind her in the soil but the faint impression of bent grass, and even that was closing.
created_at"2026-02-24T22:43:19.203Z" 2/24/2026, 10:43:19 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"she said carefully [carefully]"
1"they said quietly [quietly]"
2"she said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.44
leniency0.88
rawRatio0.273
effectiveRatio0.24
72.49% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1454
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"sweetly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count2
2
adverb"precisely"
count2
3
adverb"carefully"
count3
highlights
0"sweetly"
1"very"
2"precisely"
3"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
51.86% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1454
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"whisper"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count4
4
word"stomach"
count1
5
word"could feel"
count1
6
word"pulsed"
count1
7
word"complex"
count1
8
word"glistening"
count1
9
word"anticipation"
count1
10
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"whisper"
1"familiar"
2"weight"
3"warmth"
4"stomach"
5"could feel"
6"pulsed"
7"complex"
8"glistening"
9"anticipation"
10"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences87
matches
0"d with warmth"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences87
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences101
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1466
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount1342
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.82
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
English1
Nyx8
Isolde6
Rory11
Fae2
Heartstone2
persons
0"Nyx"
1"Isolde"
2"Rory"
places
0"Heartstone"
globalScore1
windowScore1
38.06% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"hum that seemed to rise from the earth itself rather than from any instrument or throat"
1"something between stone and bone, hung with gar"
2"looked like a painting of anticipation"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches4
per1kWords2.729
wordCount1466
matches
0"Not wet, not muddy, but yielding in the way of very old soil"
1"not muddy, but yielding in the way of very old soil"
2"not menacing exactly, but aware"
3"not afraid, Rory didn't think Nyx did afraid precisely, but uncertain in a way"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences101
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean31.19
std30.6
cv0.981
sampleLengths
06
150
264
366
43
512
653
715
85
92
1057
1113
1232
1395
1493
1514
169
174
185
199
2080
219
2268
239
247
254
2619
2792
2819
292
305
319
32105
3369
3440
354
3630
3718
3812
3954
4013
4186
4244
4318
449
455
4629
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences87
matches
0"been turned"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs201
matches
0"was doing"
1"was beating"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences101
ratio0.109
matches
0"Rory noticed it before she noticed anything else — that thick, sweetly rotten smell rolling through the tear in the air like warm breath from an open oven, and she nearly pulled back from it on instinct."
1"No sun either — the light came from everywhere and nowhere at once, sourceless and honeyed, laying itself across the landscape like something poured."
2"The grapes were not the purple-black of any cultivar Rory had ever delivered produce past — they ranged through colours she lacked proper names for, a deep bruised violet at one end, a luminous copper at the other, and between them something that looked almost arterial."
3"It was too full — dense with fragrance the way air got during the brief ridiculous peak of summer, except there was no summer here, no season at all, just this relentless amber warmth pressing against her skin."
4"They moved deeper along a broad dirt path that ran between the vineyard rows, and the vines closed in on either side with a slowness that felt deliberate, the way very old things moved — not menacing exactly, but aware."
5"It had pulsed with warmth near the portal — she'd felt it before they even located the rift, a steady beat against her sternum like a second heart finding its rhythm."
6"It was music, or something that functioned as music — a low, resonant hum that seemed to rise from the earth itself rather than from any instrument or throat."
7"Rory had expected something medieval — hewn stone, rough timber, the functional architecture of ancient agriculture."
8"Long tables ran beneath the pavilion roofs and the tables were set — plates and cups and serving vessels laid as if for an imminent feast — but there was no one anywhere that she could see."
9"Nyx had drifted ahead, their form thinning at the edges the way it did when they were uneasy — not afraid, Rory didn't think Nyx did afraid precisely, but uncertain in a way that manifested as the slow erosion of their body's margins."
10"Enormous fruit — swollen, almost grotesque in their excess, pressing against each other, splitting at the seams in one or two places and releasing something that rolled down the bark in slow dark rivulets."
93.68% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1334
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount63
adverbRatio0.0472263868065967
lyAdverbCount18
lyAdverbRatio0.013493253373313344
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences101
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences101
mean14.51
std11.74
cv0.809
sampleLengths
06
137
22
311
48
535
621
73
89
930
1024
113
128
134
1419
1515
1619
177
188
195
202
2120
2229
238
2413
259
2623
2735
2846
2914
307
3138
3228
3320
3412
352
369
374
385
392
407
4140
425
4321
4414
459
4631
4715
482
492
45.54% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.32673267326732675
totalSentences101
uniqueOpeners33
45.05% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences74
matches
0"Just insistent, a low thrumming"
ratio0.014
57.84% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences74
matches
0"She pressed her lips together,"
1"She took one step and"
2"It was not a useful"
3"She said it anyway."
4"They tilted their head upward"
5"they said, in that whisper-from-nowhere"
6"Her silver hair caught the"
7"She filed the comment somewhere"
8"She took a step toward"
9"It was too full —"
10"She could smell yeast and"
11"It made her stomach turn"
12"She pressed her thumb against"
13"She put her hands in"
14"They moved deeper along a"
15"She could feel the cold"
16"It had pulsed with warmth"
17"She didn't mention it to"
18"She stopped walking."
19"It was music, or something"
ratio0.405
61.35% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences74
matches
0"The portal smelled of overripe"
1"Rory noticed it before she"
2"She pressed her lips together,"
3"The ground on the other"
4"She took one step and"
5"This was deep and saturated,"
6"It was not a useful"
7"She said it anyway."
8"Nyx stepped through behind her,"
9"They tilted their head upward"
10"they said, in that whisper-from-nowhere"
11"Isolde came last, stepping through"
12"Her silver hair caught the"
13"Rory had given up asking"
14"She filed the comment somewhere"
15"The vineyards began perhaps fifty"
16"The grapes were not the"
17"She took a step toward"
18"The air here was not"
19"It was too full —"
ratio0.797
67.57% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences74
matches
0"Even Isolde paused, though her"
ratio0.014
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount11
matches
0"Not wet, not muddy, but yielding in the way of very old soil that had been turned and fed for centuries, dark and loamy and somehow warm underfoot even through …"
1"The grapes were not the purple-black of any cultivar Rory had ever delivered produce past — they ranged through colours she lacked proper names for, a deep brui…"
2"It made her stomach turn even as it made her mouth water, which disturbed her more than either reaction alone."
3"They moved deeper along a broad dirt path that ran between the vineyard rows, and the vines closed in on either side with a slowness that felt deliberate, the w…"
4"Just insistent, a low thrumming warmth that moved when she moved, orienting toward something she hadn't found yet."
5"It was music, or something that functioned as music — a low, resonant hum that seemed to rise from the earth itself rather than from any instrument or throat."
6"It had no melody in the conventional sense, just a series of tones that shifted against each other in complex, overlapping layers, and when Rory stood still and…"
7"Long tables ran beneath the pavilion roofs and the tables were set — plates and cups and serving vessels laid as if for an imminent feast — but there was no one…"
8"All of it gleamed under the sourceless amber light as if freshly plated, steam still rising from dishes at the far end, fruit still glistening, bread still pull…"
9"Nyx had drifted ahead, their form thinning at the edges the way it did when they were uneasy — not afraid, Rory didn't think Nyx did afraid precisely, but uncer…"
10"Enormous fruit — swollen, almost grotesque in their excess, pressing against each other, splitting at the seams in one or two places and releasing something tha…"
79.55% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Nyx said, without looking at her"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"they agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.08
73.7658%