"He'd clocked her almost immediately — she'd give him that."
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"Herrera moved well for someone who wasn't law enforcement — quick lateral cuts through alleys, a vaulted fence she had to go around — but he wasn't trained for this."
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"She'd noted it in her file on him — one of a dozen details she'd collected over the past four months, building a case against the clique piece by patient piece."
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"Her watch — old leather, the crystal fogged — read twenty past eleven."
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"A padlock hung from its hasp — open, swinging gently."
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"Concrete steps led down into darkness, and a smell rose to meet her — old stone, damp earth, and something else."
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"She was descending into one of the abandoned stations — there were dozens scattered beneath the city, sealed off and forgotten."
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"He'd gone alone because she'd told him to — she was tied up in court, it was supposed to be a simple recon, they'd hit it properly the next morning."
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"But the file stayed open on her desk, and the clique kept surfacing in her peripheral vision — Herrera, Silas and his bar, others she'd identified — all of them connected to cases that bent logic until it snapped."
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"A woman at a nearby stall was selling what appeared to be teeth — hundreds of them, sorted by size into wooden trays, each one faintly glowing from within."
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"The market would move — her informants had told her that much, though they'd never said where or when."
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"The noise hit her first — a low, constant hum of commerce, voices in English and languages she didn't recognize, the clink of coins that didn't sound like any currency she carried."
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"She was taller than most of the women here and a fair number of the men, which was a disadvantage; her salt-and-pepper crop was distinctive in a crowd of hoods and hats."
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"He was standing at a stall draped in dark cloth, speaking rapidly to a vendor she couldn't see clearly — a figure seated behind a curtain of hanging beads who handed him a small package wrapped in brown paper."
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"Herrera's face cycled through surprise, calculation, and something she hadn't expected — concern."
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"Three of them, walking in a formation that Quinn recognized as tactical — spaced, deliberate, covering angles."
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"Now running an unlicensed medical practice for people who, according to her informants, weren't entirely people."
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"The alley was narrow, reeking of bins and standing water, and she slowed her pace, listening."
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"The beam cut through the dark, sweeping over wet concrete, a toppled recycling bin, a fire escape ladder that was rusted in its raised position."
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"From ahead came the murmur of voices, plural, and a warm amber glow that seeped around the corridor's bend like something alive."
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"She'd filed it under unsubstantiated, along with a growing collection of reports that stretched the limits of what she was willing to believe."
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"His voice had been steady when he said it, which was worse than if he'd been screaming."
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"A man in a long coat was examining a compass that spun in directions a compass shouldn't spin."
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"Two teenagers huddled over something that moved in a glass terrarium, something with too many limbs."
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"The connection to the clique would dissolve like smoke, and she'd be back to fragments and rumors and a dead partner who'd been swallowed by something she could…"
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"The noise hit her first — a low, constant hum of commerce, voices in English and languages she didn't recognize, the clink of coins that didn't sound like any c…"
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"She was taller than most of the women here and a fair number of the men, which was a disadvantage; her salt-and-pepper crop was distinctive in a crowd of hoods …"
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"A rack of knives with blades that shimmered between solid and translucent."
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"A birdcage containing no bird, only a small, persistent darkness that chirped."
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"He was standing at a stall draped in dark cloth, speaking rapidly to a vendor she couldn't see clearly — a figure seated behind a curtain of hanging beads who h…"
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"He was looking at her the way a paramedic looks at someone who's walked into traffic without seeing the bus."
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"The lanterns dimmed, not flickering, not going out, but pulling inward, as though the flames were retreating from something."
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"His hand went to the medallion at his throat and he gripped it hard, knuckles whitening, as though drawing strength from it."