Run: 2026-02-24-01KJ8X8S7RNNQ47P8VA11NYRP0

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Duration:
1m 12s
Cost:
$0.079810
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The first deadbolt turned with a sound like a knuckle cracking. Then the second. By the time Rory reached the third, Ptolemy had already bolted from the kitchen counter and disappeared beneath a stack of Eva's Sumerian lexicons, which told her everything she needed to know about who was standing on the other side. She opened the door anyway. Lucien Moreau leaned against the doorframe like he'd been sculpted there — one shoulder pressed to the wood, the ivory handle of his cane tucked under his palm, his charcoal suit so precisely tailored it made the narrow hallway of the Brick Lane walk-up look like a stage set designed around him. The smell of cumin and frying oil drifted up from the curry house below, and it was absurd, the contrast: the spice-tinged stairwell, the water-stained ceiling, and Lucien standing in the middle of it all like he'd taken a wrong turn out of a Parisian cocktail bar. His mismatched eyes found hers. The amber one caught the light from the bare bulb overhead. The black one swallowed it. "No," Rory said. "I haven't said anything yet." "You're here. That's enough." She kept her hand on the door. Her grip was steady, which she considered a victory. "How did you even know I was at Eva's?" "You weren't at your flat. You weren't at the restaurant." He said it simply, as though tracking her movements across East London were a perfectly reasonable Tuesday evening activity. "Yu-Fei told me you'd finished your deliveries early." "Remind me to have a word with Yu-Fei about her information-sharing policies." Something flickered at the corner of his mouth. Not quite a smile. Lucien's smiles were rare, deliberate things — offered like concessions. This was more like muscle memory, a reflex he caught and killed before it could fully form. "May I come in?" "No." "Rory." The way he said her name — that slight roll on the R, the vowel opened wider than any English speaker would shape it — landed in her chest like a stone dropped into still water. She hated that. She hated that after three weeks of silence, after the way things had ended at the Harrow Street meeting, after he'd looked at her across that back room and chosen to say nothing while Marchetti's people closed ranks around him, her stupid treacherous body still responded to the sound of her own name in his mouth. She stepped aside. He entered the flat the way he entered every room: cataloguing it. His gaze swept the cluttered surfaces — Eva's research notes pinned to a corkboard above the radiator, the scrolls unfurled across the kitchen table, the towers of paperbacks on every horizontal surface. A coffee mug sat on a stack of Ottoman trade records. Ptolemy's food bowl was wedged between a dog-eared copy of Frazer's *Golden Bough* and what appeared to be a fourteenth-century grimoire sealed in a plastic bag. "Your friend has eclectic taste," he said. "Eva's in Edinburgh. Research trip." Rory shut the door but didn't replace the deadbolts. She wanted the option of a quick exit. A petty gesture, maybe, and one that wouldn't mean much to a man who was half-demon and carried a blade in his cane, but it was the principle of the thing. "So whatever you're here for, you can say it to me and leave." Lucien turned. In the cramped front room, the distance between them shrank to almost nothing — three feet, maybe four. She could see the faint shadow of stubble along his jaw, which was unusual. Lucien was meticulous about his appearance. The platinum blond hair was still slicked back, the suit still immaculate, but there was something underneath the polish that looked frayed. Like a painting with hairline cracks running through the varnish. "You haven't answered my messages," he said. "You sent one message. One. And it said 'We should talk.' That's not a message, Lucien, that's a hostage negotiation opener." "And yet you're still holding the hostage." "What hostage?" "Whatever it is you're not saying to me." The silence that followed was the kind that had weight. Rory felt it settle across her shoulders. She crossed her arms, then uncrossed them because she knew he'd read it as defensive, and she refused to give him the satisfaction. Instead she moved to the kitchen — two steps, that's all it took in Eva's flat — and filled the kettle. Doing something with her hands helped. It always had. Back in Cardiff, during the worst of it with Evan, she'd scrubbed the kitchen until her knuckles bled and her mother had found her at two in the morning with steel wool and a vacant expression. That was a different life. A different kind of silence. She set the kettle on the burner and turned around. Lucien had not followed her. He stood where she'd left him, his weight shifted slightly onto the cane, watching her with an expression she couldn't decode. That was the thing about his eyes — the mismatched pair made it impossible to get a clean read. You'd think you'd caught something in the amber one, something warm and almost human, and then the black one would pull your focus like a gravity well and you'd lose the thread entirely. "Three weeks," she said. "You let three weeks go by." "You asked me for space." "I asked you not to lie to me. There's a difference." He was quiet for a moment. Then: "I didn't lie." "You stood there and said nothing while Marchetti told me the Harrow Street job was clean. You knew it wasn't. You knew what was in those crates, and you looked me right in the face and said nothing, and that — " She stopped. Swallowed. The kettle began its low, preliminary hiss. "That's the same thing, Lucien. In every way that matters, that is the same thing." He moved then. One step forward. The cane tapped once against the floorboards, a precise sound, almost musical. "If I had told you in that room, in front of Marchetti's people, what was in those crates, you would be dead. Not figuratively. Not eventually. You would have been killed before you made it to the street." "So you made the choice for me." "Yes." "You don't get to do that." "I know." The kettle screamed. Rory pulled it off the burner with a hand that was no longer quite as steady as she wanted it to be. She poured water over a teabag in a chipped mug — one of Eva's, printed with the words *ARCHAEOLOGISTS DO IT IN THE DIRT* — and stared at the dark bloom of tannins spreading through the water. "My ex used to make choices for me," she said quietly. "What I wore. Where I went. Who I talked to. He'd frame it as protection too. He was very convincing." The silence that followed was different from the others. Heavier. When she raised her eyes, Lucien's expression had shifted into something she had never seen on him before. It wasn't pity — he was too sharp for pity — but it was something close to pain. The amber eye burned. The black one was very, very still. "I am not him," he said. His voice was low, stripped of its usual careful modulation. The accent thickened, as it did in the rare moments when he let something slip past the control. "I will never be him. And if you tell me his full name, I will make certain he never —" "Stop." She held up a hand. The crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist caught the kitchen light, a pale sliver against her skin. "That's not why I told you." "Then why?" "Because I need you to understand what it costs me. Trusting someone who decides what I can and can't handle." She wrapped both hands around the mug. The heat was almost scalding. She didn't let go. "I left Cardiff to get away from someone who treated me like I was breakable. I will not do that again. Not for anyone. Not even for someone I —" She stopped. The word hung there, half-formed, obvious as a gunshot in the cramped and cluttered flat. Lucien took another step. He was close enough now that she could smell his cologne — something warm, woody, underlaid with a faint metallic note that she'd never been able to identify, something that might have been the Avaros half of him bleeding through the human surface. His cane rested against the edge of the kitchen table. He reached out and, very slowly, very deliberately, placed his hand over both of hers where they gripped the mug. His skin was warmer than it should have been. It always was. "Say it," he said. "No." "Rory." "You first." She looked up at him. Her bright blue eyes met his mismatched pair without flinching. "You're the one who showed up at my door. You're the one who tracked me across London on a Tuesday night. You first, Lucien. For once in your life, you go first." He exhaled. She watched something behind his expression come apart — not dramatically, not like a wall crumbling, but like a lock turning. The third deadbolt. The one that takes the longest. "I have not slept in eleven days," he said. "I have brokered three deals I did not care about. I sat in a meeting with a Marchetti lieutenant this morning and realized I had not heard a single word he said because I was thinking about the way you looked at me in that back room. The way you looked at me like I had become every terrible thing you'd ever trusted." He paused. His thumb moved against her knuckle, a motion so small it could have been involuntary. "I am not a good man. I have done unconscionable things for money, for survival, for reasons I cannot even remember. But I have never —" He stopped. Started again. "Losing you is the first thing in a very long time that has frightened me." The mug was shaking. Or her hands were. She couldn't tell the difference anymore. "That's not the word I was looking for," she said. But her voice had gone thin, and the corner of her mouth was doing something traitorous. "I know what word you were looking for." His hand tightened over hers. "And I am terrified of it. And I am here anyway." Rory set the mug down. She didn't step back. She didn't step forward. She stood in the tiny kitchen of her best friend's flat on Brick Lane, with the smell of curry drifting up through the floorboards and a tabby cat hiding behind a stack of dead languages, and she made a choice that was entirely, stubbornly, irreversibly her own. She reached up and laid her hand against his jaw. The stubble was rough under her palm. His breath caught — a small, involuntary sound that unraveled something in her chest she'd spent three weeks trying to keep knotted. "If you ever make a choice like that for me again," she said, "I will walk, and you will not find me. Not with your contacts. Not with your languages. Not with whatever demon-blooded trick you haven't told me about yet. Are we clear?" "Crystal," he said. "Good." She kissed him. It was not gentle. It was three weeks of silence and the memory of Harrow Street and the fear that she was making the worst mistake of her life and the absolute certainty that not kissing him would be worse. His free hand came up to the back of her neck, fingers threading into her black hair, and he kissed her back with a kind of desperate precision that was so thoroughly, so infuriatingly Lucien — controlled and uncontrolled at the same time, calculated and reckless in the same breath — that she almost laughed against his mouth. When they broke apart, his forehead rested against hers. His breathing was uneven. The amber eye was close enough to fill her vision, warm and bright and terrifyingly human. "For the record," he murmured, "I was going to say it." "I know." She traced the line of his jaw with her thumb. "You were just taking the scenic route." From beneath the stack of lexicons, Ptolemy let out a low, judgmental meow. Neither of them moved.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences57
tagDensity0.386
leniency0.772
rawRatio0.045
effectiveRatio0.035
73.22% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2054
totalAiIsmAdverbs11
found
0
adverb"precisely"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count6
4
adverb"slowly"
count1
5
adverb"deliberately"
count1
highlights
0"precisely"
1"perfectly"
2"slightly"
3"very"
4"slowly"
5"deliberately"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
68.35% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2054
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"tinged"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"silence"
count5
3
word"treacherous"
count1
4
word"weight"
count2
5
word"crystal"
count1
6
word"calculated"
count1
7
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"tinged"
1"flickered"
2"silence"
3"treacherous"
4"weight"
5"crystal"
6"calculated"
7"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences122
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences122
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"appeared to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences156
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen65
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords8
totalWords2074
ratio0.004
matches
0"Golden Bough"
1"ARCHAEOLOGISTS DO IT IN THE DIRT"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions31
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions44
wordCount1464
uniqueNames22
maxNameDensity0.61
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Rory6
Ptolemy3
Eva4
Sumerian1
Moreau1
Brick2
Lane2
Lucien9
Parisian1
East1
London1
Tuesday1
English1
Harrow2
Street2
Marchetti1
Ottoman1
Frazer1
Cardiff1
Evan1
Swallowed1
Avaros1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Eva"
3"Moreau"
4"Lucien"
5"Marchetti"
6"Frazer"
7"Evan"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"East"
3"London"
4"Harrow"
5"Street"
6"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
77.54% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences69
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as though tracking her movements across East London were a perfectly reasonable Tuesday evening activity"
1"something close to pain"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords0.964
wordCount2074
matches
0"not dramatically, not like a wall crumbling, but like a lock turning"
1"not like a wall crumbling, but like a lock turning"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences156
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs69
mean30.06
std32.25
cv1.073
sampleLengths
054
15
299
321
43
55
629
737
812
939
104
111
121
1395
143
1581
167
1766
1872
197
2021
217
222
238
24116
2510
2678
2710
285
2911
3010
3167
3256
337
341
356
362
3762
3831
3957
4054
4129
422
4366
442
4515
4677
4712
484
491
96.64% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences122
matches
0"been sculpted"
1"was wedged"
2", printed"
66.67% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs250
matches
0"was standing"
1"was almost scalding"
2"was shaking"
3"was doing"
4"was making"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount18
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences13
totalSentences156
ratio0.083
matches
0"Lucien Moreau leaned against the doorframe like he'd been sculpted there — one shoulder pressed to the wood, the ivory handle of his cane tucked under his palm, his charcoal suit so precisely tailored it made the narrow hallway of the Brick Lane walk-up look like a stage set designed around him."
1"Lucien's smiles were rare, deliberate things — offered like concessions."
2"The way he said her name — that slight roll on the R, the vowel opened wider than any English speaker would shape it — landed in her chest like a stone dropped into still water."
3"His gaze swept the cluttered surfaces — Eva's research notes pinned to a corkboard above the radiator, the scrolls unfurled across the kitchen table, the towers of paperbacks on every horizontal surface."
4"In the cramped front room, the distance between them shrank to almost nothing — three feet, maybe four."
5"Instead she moved to the kitchen — two steps, that's all it took in Eva's flat — and filled the kettle."
6"That was the thing about his eyes — the mismatched pair made it impossible to get a clean read."
7"She poured water over a teabag in a chipped mug — one of Eva's, printed with the words *ARCHAEOLOGISTS DO IT IN THE DIRT* — and stared at the dark bloom of tannins spreading through the water."
8"It wasn't pity — he was too sharp for pity — but it was something close to pain."
9"He was close enough now that she could smell his cologne — something warm, woody, underlaid with a faint metallic note that she'd never been able to identify, something that might have been the Avaros half of him bleeding through the human surface."
10"She watched something behind his expression come apart — not dramatically, not like a wall crumbling, but like a lock turning."
11"His breath caught — a small, involuntary sound that unraveled something in her chest she'd spent three weeks trying to keep knotted."
12"His free hand came up to the back of her neck, fingers threading into her black hair, and he kissed her back with a kind of desperate precision that was so thoroughly, so infuriatingly Lucien — controlled and uncontrolled at the same time, calculated and reckless in the same breath — that she almost laughed against his mouth."
99.33% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1251
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount51
adverbRatio0.0407673860911271
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.007993605115907274
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences156
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences156
mean13.29
std13.03
cv0.98
sampleLengths
011
13
240
35
452
547
65
711
85
93
105
1111
129
139
1429
158
1612
178
184
1910
2017
214
221
231
2436
253
2656
273
2812
2932
3011
3126
327
3314
348
3531
3613
372
3818
3914
406
4122
4210
437
4421
457
462
478
4810
497
50.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.34615384615384615
totalSentences156
uniqueOpeners54
65.36% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences102
matches
0"Then the second."
1"Instead she moved to the"
ratio0.02
31.76% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount48
totalSentences102
matches
0"She opened the door anyway."
1"His mismatched eyes found hers."
2"She kept her hand on"
3"Her grip was steady, which"
4"He said it simply, as"
5"She hated that."
6"She hated that after three"
7"She stepped aside."
8"He entered the flat the"
9"His gaze swept the cluttered"
10"She wanted the option of"
11"She could see the faint"
12"She crossed her arms, then"
13"It always had."
14"She set the kettle on"
15"He stood where she'd left"
16"You'd think you'd caught something"
17"He was quiet for a"
18"He moved then."
19"She poured water over a"
ratio0.471
28.63% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount88
totalSentences102
matches
0"The first deadbolt turned with"
1"She opened the door anyway."
2"Lucien Moreau leaned against the"
3"The smell of cumin and"
4"His mismatched eyes found hers."
5"The amber one caught the"
6"The black one swallowed it."
7"She kept her hand on"
8"Her grip was steady, which"
9"He said it simply, as"
10"Something flickered at the corner"
11"Lucien's smiles were rare, deliberate"
12"This was more like muscle"
13"The way he said her"
14"She hated that."
15"She hated that after three"
16"She stepped aside."
17"He entered the flat the"
18"His gaze swept the cluttered"
19"A coffee mug sat on"
ratio0.863
49.02% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences102
matches
0"By the time Rory reached"
ratio0.01
38.69% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"By the time Rory reached the third, Ptolemy had already bolted from the kitchen counter and disappeared beneath a stack of Eva's Sumerian lexicons, which told h…"
1"A petty gesture, maybe, and one that wouldn't mean much to a man who was half-demon and carried a blade in his cane, but it was the principle of the thing."
2"The platinum blond hair was still slicked back, the suit still immaculate, but there was something underneath the polish that looked frayed."
3"He was close enough now that she could smell his cologne — something warm, woody, underlaid with a faint metallic note that she'd never been able to identify, s…"
4"She stood in the tiny kitchen of her best friend's flat on Brick Lane, with the smell of curry drifting up through the floorboards and a tabby cat hiding behind…"
5"His breath caught — a small, involuntary sound that unraveled something in her chest she'd spent three weeks trying to keep knotted."
6"His free hand came up to the back of her neck, fingers threading into her black hair, and he kissed her back with a kind of desperate precision that was so thor…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He said, as though tracking her movements across East London were a perfectly reasonable Tuesday evening activity"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences57
tagDensity0.228
leniency0.456
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.035
81.5069%