Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ94H3T8G5SHH14ZKJ1CR8NA

Run Details

Duration:
23.2s
Cost:
$0.009402
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The first deadbolt clicked with a heavy, metallic finality that echoed through the small entryway. The second followed with a rasping slide, and the third gave way with a stubborn jar that vibrated up Aurora’s arm, aggravating the faint ache in her left wrist where the crescent-shaped scar pulled tight against her skin. She didn’t need to look through the peephole. She knew the weight of the presence on the other side of the door, a gravity that felt like the gathering of a storm over the Bristol Channel. She pulled the door open. Lucien Moreau stood in the narrow, dimly lit hallway of the Brick Lane tenement, looking entirely too grand for a building that smelled perpetually of turmeric and damp floorboards. He was a study in monochromatic elegance: a tailored charcoal suit that fit his lean frame with surgical precision, his platinum blond hair slicked back without a single strand out of alignment despite the fine mist of London rain clinging to his shoulders. He leaned slightly on his ivory-handled cane, the black and amber of his heterochromatic eyes fixed on her with an intensity that made the air in the cramped flat feel suddenly thin. "You're late, Rory," he said. His voice was a smooth, dark velvet, the Marseille lilt sliding over the words like a secret. "I'm not late, Lucien. I'm unreachable. There’s a distinction," Aurora replied, her voice steadier than the frantic thrum of her pulse. She didn't move to let him in. She stayed braced against the doorframe, her black, shoulder-length hair falling forward to shield her expression. "How did you find me? Eva swore this place was off the grid." Lucien’s gaze flickered to the interior of the flat, past her shoulder to where Ptolemy, the tabby cat, was currently perched atop a precarious stack of occult scrolls. "Eva is a scholar, not a ghost. And you, ma chére, are far too bright a spark to stay hidden in a curry house attic forever." He shifted his weight, the ivory head of his cane catching the flickering light of the hallway bulb. "It’s raining. My suit is Italian wool. May I?" Aurora hesitated. Seeing him was like reopening a book she’d slammed shut six months ago—a book filled with whispered deals in the corners of Silas’s bar, the dangerous thrill of the supernatural underworld, and the terrifying, magnetic pull of a man who was only half-human. She thought of Evan, the shadow of her past in Cardiff, and the promise she’d made to herself to stay in the light, delivering takeout and dreaming of a law degree she might never finish. But Lucien wasn't the light. He was the twilight, beautiful and treacherous. She stepped back, swinging the door open. "Five minutes. I have a shift at the Golden Empress in an hour." Lucien stepped over the threshold, his presence instantly shrinking the room. He moved with a predatory grace, navigating the mountain of books and research notes that covered every available surface. He didn't sit; he stood by the window, looking out at the neon glow of Brick Lane while Ptolemy let out a low, inquisitive meow. "The Golden Empress," Lucien murmured, the name sounding like an insult in his mouth. "Yu-Fei’s little empire. You’re wasting that mind of yours, Rory. You were meant for better things than dodging mopeds and lukewarm spring rolls." "I'm safe there," she countered, closing the three deadbolts one by one. The sound felt like an admission of entrapment rather than security. "Safe is a luxury I didn’t have for a long time. I like the boredom. I like that nobody knows what I am or who my father is." Lucien turned, his amber eye glowing with a faint, demonic heat in the shadows. The black eye remained a bottomless void. "I know who you are. I have always known." The air between them crackled. Aurora felt the familiar, frustrating heat rising in her chest. They had ended things in a blur of sharp words and sharper silences after a job in Southwark went sideways. He had kept secrets; she had pulled away, terrified that her attraction to him was just another manifestation of her talent for choosing dangerous men. "Why are you here, Lucien? Truly." He reached into the inner pocket of his coat and pulled out a small, leather-bound ledger. He didn't hand it to her; he held it like bait. "I need a barrister’s daughter with a penchant for out-of-the-box thinking. There is a dispute in Avaros regarding the soul-tenure of a certain merchant. The Avarosian courts are… labyrinthine. Even for me." "I'm not a lawyer," she said, though her eyes lingered on the ledger. "I'm a dropout with a delivery bike." "You are the most intelligent woman I have ever met, human or otherwise," he said softly, stepping closer. The scent of him—expensive cologne, old parchment, and a hint of something metallic like ozone—rushed over her. "And you are bored to tears. I can see it in the way you’ve organized Eva’s scrolls. You’re starving for a problem you can’t solve with a map of East London." He was close enough now that she could see the fine lines of weariness around his eyes. Being a fixer for the supernatural world took its toll, even on someone with demon blood. "You left," she whispered, the hurt she’d been nursing since autumn finally leaking into her voice. "That night at the docks. You didn't say a word. You just disappeared into the fog and left me with the mess." Lucien’s expression softened, a rare crack in his porcelain facade. He reached out, his gloved hand hovering near her face before he let it drop to the ivory handle of his cane. "I stayed away to keep the mess off you, Aurora. The people I deal with… they saw you as a lever to use against me. I couldn't allow that. I thought if I vanished, you could have the quiet life you kept insisting you wanted." "I wanted you to ask me what I wanted," she snapped, her blue eyes flashing. "Instead of deciding for me. You’re not my father, and you’re certainly not Evan." "No," Lucien said, his voice dropping to a low, rough growl. "I am significantly worse. And yet, I have spent every night for six months wondering if you were looking at the moon from some window and hating me for leaving, or hating me for coming into your life in the first place." The honesty of it was a physical blow. Aurora looked down at his hand, then at her own, where she was unconsciously rubbing the scar on her wrist. The silence in the flat grew heavy, filled only by the muffled sound of a car horn outside and Ptolemy’s rhythmic purring. She took a step into his space, forcing him to look down at her. "I don't hate you, Luc. That’s the problem. I hate how much I didn’t hate the chaos you brought with you." Lucien let the cane lean against a stack of law textbooks and reached out, this time finishing the gesture. His thumb traced the line of her jaw, his touch surprisingly cool. "The chaos is still there. It’s waiting for us. But the merchant in Avaros… it’s a legitimate contract. No blood, no knives. Just logic. Your specialty." "You came all the way here to offer me a job?" she asked, her breath hitching as his fingers slid into her hair, cupping the back of her head. "I came here because I couldn't breathe in a world where you weren't speaking to me," he admitted, the vulnerability in his heterochromatic eyes stripping away the last of her defenses. "The job is just the excuse to get past your three deadbolts." Aurora leaned into his touch, her eyes fluttering shut. The cool-headed, intelligent girl from Cardiff knew she should tell him to leave, that she should go to work and keep her life small and safe. But the woman who had fled to London for a second chance knew that safety was just another kind of cage. "Five minutes are up," she breathed against his palm. "I know," he murmured, leaning down until his forehead rested against hers. "Are you going to kick me out?" Aurora reached up, her fingers curling into the lapels of his charcoal suit, pulling him that final inch closer. "No. But if I lose my job at the restaurant because of this, you're paying for the curry." Lucien’s laugh was a low, melodic sound of triumph. He brushed his lips against hers, a tentative, questioning ghost of a kiss that tasted of rain and redemption. "Ma chére," he whispered, "I’ll buy you the whole restaurant, if only you’ll promise to never lock me out again." She didn't promise. She didn't have to. As she pulled him down into a real kiss, one that bridged the six months of silence and the miles of hurt, the three locks on the door felt less like a barrier and more like a secret they shared with the rest of the world. The scrolls could wait, the delivery could wait, and for the first time in a long time, Rory wasn't running. She was exactly where she was supposed to be.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.441
leniency0.882
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.059
87.11% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1552
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"truly"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"suddenly"
2"truly"
3"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
38.79% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1552
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"vibrated"
count1
2
word"weight"
count2
3
word"intensity"
count1
4
word"velvet"
count1
5
word"lilt"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count1
7
word"flickered"
count1
8
word"magnetic"
count1
9
word"treacherous"
count1
10
word"navigating"
count1
11
word"familiar"
count1
12
word"porcelain"
count1
13
word"facade"
count1
14
word"silence"
count2
15
word"rhythmic"
count1
16
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"vibrated"
2"weight"
3"intensity"
4"velvet"
5"lilt"
6"pulse"
7"flickered"
8"magnetic"
9"treacherous"
10"navigating"
11"familiar"
12"porcelain"
13"facade"
14"silence"
15"rhythmic"
16"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences67
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences67
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences86
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1549
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount1047
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity0.96
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Aurora7
Bristol1
Channel1
Moreau1
Brick2
Lane2
London2
Marseille1
Ptolemy3
Silas1
Evan1
Cardiff2
Lucien10
Southwark1
Rory1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Moreau"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Silas"
4"Evan"
5"Lucien"
6"Rory"
places
0"Bristol"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
3"London"
4"Marseille"
5"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
62.28% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like the gathering of a storm over"
1"felt like an admission of entrapment ra"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1549
matches(empty)
11.63% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount4
totalSentences86
matches
0"notes that covered"
1"terrified that her"
2"leave, that she"
3"knew that safety"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs33
mean46.94
std25.06
cv0.534
sampleLengths
089
15
2104
322
457
581
692
720
855
937
1051
1130
1260
136
1459
1520
1666
1733
1838
1977
2029
2153
2250
2335
2457
2529
2643
2756
289
2919
3037
3148
3282
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences67
matches
0"was supposed"
77.30% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs163
matches
0"was like reopening"
1"was unconsciously rubbing"
2"wasn't running"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences86
ratio0.058
matches
0"Seeing him was like reopening a book she’d slammed shut six months ago—a book filled with whispered deals in the corners of Silas’s bar, the dangerous thrill of the supernatural underworld, and the terrifying, magnetic pull of a man who was only half-human."
1"He didn't sit; he stood by the window, looking out at the neon glow of Brick Lane while Ptolemy let out a low, inquisitive meow."
2"He had kept secrets; she had pulled away, terrified that her attraction to him was just another manifestation of her talent for choosing dangerous men."
3"He didn't hand it to her; he held it like bait."
4"The scent of him—expensive cologne, old parchment, and a hint of something metallic like ozone—rushed over her."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1056
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, leather-bound ledger."
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.027462121212121212
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.013257575757575758
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences86
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences86
mean18.01
std10.72
cv0.595
sampleLengths
015
138
28
328
45
529
643
732
85
917
1021
117
1216
1313
1428
1544
169
172
1843
1935
205
217
227
2313
2411
2519
2625
2714
2823
2912
3011
3128
3214
337
349
355
3610
3720
3825
396
4016
4111
4232
4313
447
4518
4617
4731
4817
4916
37.60% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.3023255813953488
totalSentences86
uniqueOpeners26
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
ratio0
1.25% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences64
matches
0"She didn’t need to look"
1"She knew the weight of"
2"She pulled the door open."
3"He was a study in"
4"He leaned slightly on his"
5"His voice was a smooth,"
6"She didn't move to let"
7"She stayed braced against the"
8"He shifted his weight, the"
9"She thought of Evan, the"
10"He was the twilight, beautiful"
11"She stepped back, swinging the"
12"He moved with a predatory"
13"He didn't sit; he stood"
14"she countered, closing the three"
15"They had ended things in"
16"He had kept secrets; she"
17"He reached into the inner"
18"He didn't hand it to"
19"she said, though her eyes"
ratio0.547
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences64
matches
0"The first deadbolt clicked with"
1"The second followed with a"
2"She didn’t need to look"
3"She knew the weight of"
4"She pulled the door open."
5"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
6"He was a study in"
7"He leaned slightly on his"
8"His voice was a smooth,"
9"Aurora replied, her voice steadier"
10"She didn't move to let"
11"She stayed braced against the"
12"Lucien’s gaze flickered to the"
13"He shifted his weight, the"
14"She thought of Evan, the"
15"He was the twilight, beautiful"
16"She stepped back, swinging the"
17"Lucien stepped over the threshold,"
18"He moved with a predatory"
19"He didn't sit; he stood"
ratio0.922
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
ratio0
46.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The second followed with a rasping slide, and the third gave way with a stubborn jar that vibrated up Aurora’s arm, aggravating the faint ache in her left wrist…"
1"He was a study in monochromatic elegance: a tailored charcoal suit that fit his lean frame with surgical precision, his platinum blond hair slicked back without…"
2"He leaned slightly on his ivory-handled cane, the black and amber of his heterochromatic eyes fixed on her with an intensity that made the air in the cramped fl…"
3"Seeing him was like reopening a book she’d slammed shut six months ago—a book filled with whispered deals in the corners of Silas’s bar, the dangerous thrill of…"
4"He brushed his lips against hers, a tentative, questioning ghost of a kiss that tasted of rain and redemption."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"Aurora replied, her voice steadier than the frantic thrum of her pulse"
1"Lucien murmured, the name sounding like an insult in his mouth"
2"she said, though her eyes lingered on the ledger"
3"she snapped, her blue eyes flashing"
4"Lucien said, his voice dropping to a low, rough growl"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"Lucien murmured (murmur)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"she snapped (snap)"
3"he admitted (admit)"
4"she breathed (breathe)"
5"he murmured (murmur)"
6"he whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.382
leniency0.765
rawRatio0.538
effectiveRatio0.412
65.2097%