Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ94H6BFKD3CN15GXQCF2KEF

Run Details

Duration:
42.5s
Cost:
$0.002315
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Dark wood gleamed under the low lights of The Raven’s Nest. Old maps—faded admiralty charts of forgotten naval routes, schematic drawings of London’s labyrinthine sewer system—adorned the walls, interspersed with sepia-toned photographs of faces Rory couldn't place but felt she should know. The air hung thick with the scent of spilled ale and slow-burning tobacco, a permanent, comforting fug. Rory nursed a gin and tonic at a small, scarred table tucked into a corner, her black shoulder-length hair pulled back loosely, a few strands escaping to shadow her cheekbones. The small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a relic of a childhood tumble from a climbing frame, peeked from beneath the rolled sleeve of her plain grey jumper. She traced its edge with her thumb, the rough wool a familiar, grounding texture. A familiar shuffling sound broke the low murmur of conversation from the bar's main room. It was Silas, his grey-streaked auburn hair neat above a face etched with lines that spoke of years spent watching and waiting. He navigated the tables with that characteristic, almost imperceptible drag in his left leg, a silver signet ring glinting on his right hand as he steadied himself against a chair back. He paused, his hazel eyes sweeping the room, then landed on her. A flicker of surprise, quick as a struck match, bloomed and faded on his face. He moved towards her table, his usual quiet authority now tinged with something resembling curiosity. He didn't call out, didn't make a show. He simply arrived, filling the space beside her with a presence that felt both solid and slightly detached, like a figure in one of the old photographs on the wall. The faint scent of pipe tobacco and something sharp, like old paper, wafted from him. "Rory," he said, his voice a low rumble that barely disturbed the air. "I didn't expect to see you sitting here. Not for a while, anyway." She looked up, her bright blue eyes widening for a fraction of a second before settling into a more guarded expression. Her voice, when she replied, was steady, betraying none of the sudden clench in her stomach. "Silas. You're still here." Her words hung there, a simple statement devoid of judgment, yet carrying the weight of years unspooled. Silas’s gaze lingered on her, his eyes missing little. He noted the subtle weariness around her eyes that hadn’t been there before, the less polished way she carried herself, the way her hands, though clean, looked too capable, too used to rougher work than he remembered. "Where else would I be?" he asked, a faint smile playing on his lips. "This old place is my anchor. Keeps the ship from drifting too far." He gestured to the chair opposite her. "Mind if I?" She gave a small shake of her head. "Please." He sat, the slight limp announcing his movement. He didn’t order a drink, not yet. He simply looked at her, a silent inventory being taken. The silence stretched, filled only by the bar’s ambient hum. Silas broke it, his tone carefully neutral, laced with an old man’s indulgence. "You look… different, Rory. Not the girl I used to see sketching in that little notebook, dreaming of distant cities." Rory’s fingers stilled on the scar. A nervous laugh escaped her. "That feels like another lifetime, Silas." Her eyes flickered towards the door, then back. "Things change." "They do," Silas agreed, his gaze drifting to a framed map of the London Underground. "Sometimes for the better, sometimes..." He let the sentence trail off, his eyes reflecting the dim light. "You still living above the premises?" "Yeah," she confirmed, her voice flat. "It's… convenient." Her smile was thin. "Makes the rounds easier." Silas’s eyebrows lifted infinitesimally. "'Rounds,' is it? Not lectures and law books, then?" She turned her half-empty glass in her hands, the condensation leaving a damp ring on the tabletop. "Life took some unexpected detours." The crescent scar on her wrist caught his eye again. He remembered it vaguely, a story about a fall. There were always stories. "Cardiff felt a long way off. A lot can happen when you throw yourself into a new current." "A new current," Silas echoed, his tone thoughtful. He watched her now, not as a casual acquaintance, but with the sharp, assessing gaze of his former life. He saw the way her shoulders tensed slightly when a door slammed outside, the constant subtle scan of her surroundings. It wasn't the bright-eyed curiosity of a student anymore. This was the careful alertness of someone who had learned to watch for threats. "This city," he continued, his voice dropping a little, drawing her in, "it’s a hungry place. You don't often find yourself here if you haven't been chewed up a bit, or deliberately sought out the teeth." Rory offered a wry twist of her lips. "Maybe a bit of both." She looked past him, towards the counter where a younger bartender was wiping glasses. "I deliver food. Yu-Fei's place, down on Market Street." Silas’s expression didn't change, but a certain stillness settled over him. He picked up his own untouched glass, twirling it slowly. "Yu-Fei. Yes, I know him. Good man. Knows how to keep his head down. Important skill." He took a slow sip of his drink, a dark amber liquid that looked potent even in the dim light. "You always had a sharp mind, Rory. The kind that could turn anything into an advantage. I remember your father speaking of your intellect." The mention of her father brought a shadow across her face, swift and fleeting. "Dad tries. Mum too." Her voice was tight. It wasn’t regret, not entirely. More like a dull ache, a recognition of a life she had deliberately stepped away from, a good one that couldn't hold her anymore. "It’s just… London has a way of changing your perspective. Makes you see what’s real. What keeps you warm at night." "Warmth," Silas mused, his words soft, almost to himself as he stared into his glass. "That's a commodity that's hard to come by, for some. Especially for those who carry burdens they didn't choose." He looked up, his hazel eyes meeting hers directly. There was an ancient weariness in their depths, a knowledge of costs and compromises that went far beyond the usual pains of life. "Prague taught me that much. The cost of certain kinds of knowledge. The faces you can’t forget. The price of silence." Rory remained quiet, absorbing his words, a strange resonance vibrating between them. She knew Silas had been in the intelligence world, had heard whispers. But he’d always maintained a careful distance, a professional facade. Now, in the dim, intimate confines of his bar, that facade seemed to be eroding, revealing something harder, more brittle beneath. She found herself leaning forward, drawn by the unguarded vulnerability in his tone. "What happened in Prague?" Silas offered a short, sharp laugh that held no humour. He waved a dismissive hand. "Old stories. Just stories. The point is, Rory, some paths, once you choose them, they choose you back. They carve themselves into you. And the deeper they go, the harder it is to find your way out, or even to remember what you were looking for in the first place." He tapped his signet ring against the glass. "You seem to have found your own kind of path. Delivering parcels through the city's veins. It's a different kind of observation, isn't it? Seeing London from the street rather than from a map." "It's honest work," Rory said, a defensive edge creeping into her voice. "Keeps the lights on. Keeps me… moving." "Movement is good," Silas conceded, his gaze never wavering. "Better than stagnation. But the wrong kind of movement, the kind that just circles the drain, can be just as fatal." He pushed his glass slightly away. "This city drains folk. It takes pieces. Most times, you don’t even know they're gone until you try to stretch and find you’re missing fingers." He paused, his eyes seeming to look not at Rory, but through her, at a distant horizon. "I’ve seen too many good people become… collateral. Too many bright futures extinguished by choices made in haste, or by forces that cared nothing for the flame." He finally set his glass down with a soft thud. "That scar on your wrist. A childhood accident you said?"
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.475
leniency0.95
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
71.49% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1403
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"loosely"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count3
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
3
adverb"deliberately"
count2
4
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"loosely"
1"slightly"
2"carefully"
3"deliberately"
4"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
21.60% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1403
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"comforting"
count1
1
word"traced"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count2
3
word"etched"
count1
4
word"navigated"
count1
5
word"glinting"
count1
6
word"flicker"
count1
7
word"tinged"
count1
8
word"stomach"
count1
9
word"weight"
count1
10
word"silence"
count2
11
word"flickered"
count1
12
word"echoed"
count1
13
word"fleeting"
count1
14
word"warmth"
count1
15
word"depths"
count1
16
word"resonance"
count1
17
word"facade"
count2
18
word"wavering"
count1
highlights
0"comforting"
1"traced"
2"familiar"
3"etched"
4"navigated"
5"glinting"
6"flicker"
7"tinged"
8"stomach"
9"weight"
10"silence"
11"flickered"
12"echoed"
13"fleeting"
14"warmth"
15"depths"
16"resonance"
17"facade"
18"wavering"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences72
matches
0"A flicker of surprise"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences72
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences90
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen58
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1401
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
91.98% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount948
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.16
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
London2
Rory7
Silas11
Underground1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Rory"
2"Silas"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.92
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
57.24% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.428
wordCount1401
matches
0"not as a casual acquaintance, but with the sharp, assessing gaze of his former life"
1"not at Rory, but through her, at a distant horizon"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs22
mean63.68
std36.9
cv0.579
sampleLengths
0132
195
268
326
441
5100
69
768
827
938
1016
1113
1263
13106
1436
1581
1672
1787
1872
19107
2019
21125
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences72
matches
0"being taken"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs148
matches
0"was wiping"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences90
ratio0.011
matches
0"Old maps—faded admiralty charts of forgotten naval routes, schematic drawings of London’s labyrinthine sewer system—adorned the walls, interspersed with sepia-toned photographs of faces Rory couldn't place but felt she should know."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount957
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.03761755485893417
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.01671891327063741
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences90
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences90
mean15.57
std10.22
cv0.656
sampleLengths
011
131
217
330
429
514
615
722
831
912
1015
1115
128
1330
1415
1513
1613
1721
1816
194
2017
219
2237
2314
2420
253
268
271
288
297
3010
3110
3213
3320
346
355
3614
372
3815
3917
406
416
426
434
444
459
4617
4715
489
494
62.59% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.4222222222222222
totalSentences90
uniqueOpeners38
46.30% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences72
matches
0"More like a dull ache,"
ratio0.014
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount41
totalSentences72
matches
0"She traced its edge with"
1"It was Silas, his grey-streaked"
2"He navigated the tables with"
3"He paused, his hazel eyes"
4"He moved towards her table,"
5"He didn't call out, didn't"
6"He simply arrived, filling the"
7"he said, his voice a"
8"She looked up, her bright"
9"Her voice, when she replied,"
10"Her words hung there, a"
11"He noted the subtle weariness"
12"he asked, a faint smile"
13"He gestured to the chair"
14"She gave a small shake"
15"He sat, the slight limp"
16"He didn’t order a drink,"
17"He simply looked at her,"
18"Her eyes flickered towards the"
19"He let the sentence trail"
ratio0.569
8.61% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount65
totalSentences72
matches
0"The air hung thick with"
1"Rory nursed a gin and"
2"The small, crescent-shaped scar on"
3"She traced its edge with"
4"A familiar shuffling sound broke"
5"It was Silas, his grey-streaked"
6"He navigated the tables with"
7"He paused, his hazel eyes"
8"A flicker of surprise, quick"
9"He moved towards her table,"
10"He didn't call out, didn't"
11"He simply arrived, filling the"
12"The faint scent of pipe"
13"he said, his voice a"
14"She looked up, her bright"
15"Her voice, when she replied,"
16"Her words hung there, a"
17"Silas’s gaze lingered on her,"
18"He noted the subtle weariness"
19"he asked, a faint smile"
ratio0.903
69.44% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences72
matches
0"Now, in the dim, intimate"
ratio0.014
84.94% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"It was Silas, his grey-streaked auburn hair neat above a face etched with lines that spoke of years spent watching and waiting."
1"He simply arrived, filling the space beside her with a presence that felt both solid and slightly detached, like a figure in one of the old photographs on the w…"
2"He noted the subtle weariness around her eyes that hadn’t been there before, the less polished way she carried herself, the way her hands, though clean, looked …"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"he said, his voice a low rumble that barely disturbed the air"
1"he asked, a faint smile playing on his lips"
2"He let, his eyes reflecting the dim light"
3"she confirmed, her voice flat"
4"Silas echoed, his tone thoughtful"
5"he continued, his voice dropping a little, drawing her in,"
6"Rory said, a defensive edge creeping into her voice"
50.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Silas agreed (agree)"
1"she confirmed (confirm)"
2"he continued (continue)"
3"Silas conceded (concede)"
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.175
leniency0.35
rawRatio0.571
effectiveRatio0.2
78.6067%