Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ94H7TBJ8Q75W1E205RW7BY

Run Details

Duration:
12.9s
Cost:
$0.006365
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain slicked the Soho street, transforming the asphalt into a shimmering black mirror reflecting garish neon. Detective Harlow Quinn’s breath hitched in her throat, a raw sting from the damp chill air. Her lungs burned. She pumped her legs, the worn leather of her watch pressing into her left wrist, a rhythmic counterpoint to the thud of her boots on wet pavement. Tomás Herrera wove through the dwindling late-night crowds, a blur of dark jacket and dark, curly hair. He moved with a dancer’s grace, slipping between drunken revellers stumbling out of bars, navigating overflowing bins with an almost preternatural ease. Each time Quinn closed the gap, he would accelerate, vanishing behind a parked delivery van or a snatch of scaffolding, only to reappear a block ahead, his Saint Christopher medallion glinting under a streetlamp. A sharp turn off the main thoroughfare plunged them into a narrower alley, the air thick with the smell of stale beer and exhaust fumes. The alley walls rose high, brick faces slick with moisture, channelling the wind into icy gusts. Quinn’s closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair plastered to her forehead. Her sharp jaw was set. She spotted Tomás again, a fleeting shadow darting across a patch of damp concrete. He veered left, ducking down an even tighter passage, barely wider than his shoulders. Quinn’s military precision in her movements kept her pace relentless. She pushed herself harder, the memory of Morris a cold, sharp shard in her gut. Not again. Not this time. The passage opened into a forgotten square, a tangle of overgrown weeds and broken paving slabs. A lone, flickering lamppost cast long, distorted shadows. Tomás didn’t hesitate. He headed straight for what appeared to be a derelict antique shop, its windows boarded over, a faded, peeling sign hanging crookedly above a grimy door. The air here carried a different scent—something metallic, something earthy, overlaid with a faint sweetness, like dried herbs. Tomás reached the shop door, fumbling into his pocket. He pulled out a small, bone-white object, smooth and dark in the dim light. He pressed it against a specific point on the doorframe, near a barely visible, intricate carving. A low, grinding hum emanated from deep within the building. The door, previously a solid block of rotting timber, slowly swung inward with a groan. A sliver of impossibly bright, multi-coloured light spilled from the darkness beyond, illuminating the scar running along Tomás’s left forearm as he stepped through. He glanced back, his warm brown eyes meeting Quinn’s for a split second, a flicker of something unreadable in their depths, before the door swung shut again. The grinding hum faded, leaving only the distant city murmur and the relentless drumming of rain. Quinn reached the door, her chest heaving, water streaming down her face. She slammed her palm against the weathered wood, then tried the heavy iron handle. Locked. Solid. The wood yielded nowhere. She circled the derelict shop, scanning the walls, searching for any other entry point. Nothing. Just brick and boarded windows. The scent of unseen herbs lingered, now mixed with something acrid, almost like ozone. A low, guttural murmur echoed faintly from inside, alien to the sounds of London. She returned to the door, pressing her ear against the warped wood. The hum had stopped, replaced by a cacophony of hushed voices, a rustling, and an occasional, high-pitched tinkling, like miniature bells. A faint, almost imperceptible tremor resonated through the ground beneath her feet, a rhythmic pulse. She pulled out her tactical torch, playing its beam over the doorframe. The carving Tomás had touched stood out, intricate knotwork swirling into grotesque faces, their mouths gaping in silent screams. A faint, lingering warmth radiated from the spot where the bone token had pressed. This wasn’t a common bolthole. This was something else. Her mind flashed back to Morris, to the blank looks on the faces of the investigating officers, the dead ends, the official silence. The unexplained circumstances. A shiver, not from the cold, snaked down her spine. The logical part of her brain screamed to call for backup, to wait, to follow established procedure. But the memory of Morris, the gnawing suspicion that had haunted her for three years, whispered a different command. She knew Tomás Herrera was connected. He was part of the clique she suspected. This was her chance. She pulled back from the door, a decision solidifying in her gaze. She would find another way in. Quinn’s gaze lifted, sweeping the surrounding buildings, the architecture, the shadowed gaps between the structures. The abandoned Tube station beneath Camden. That meant tunnels. An extensive network. A shiver of unease ran through her, but she ignored it, pushing it down. Her focus narrowed, honed to a razor's edge. She found a loose drain grate half-hidden by a collapsed bin and a pile of sodden cardboard boxes a few yards down the alley. A foul, metallic smell rose from the dark opening below. She knelt, yanked the grate aside, and peered into the blackness. The faint murmur from the derelict shop seemed to intensify, drawn into the earth, echoing from the darkness beneath her. Quinn took a deep breath, the damp city air filling her lungs. She looked for a moment at the rain-lashed street, then down into the abyss. The decision made itself.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
94.35% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount885
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount885
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"rhythmic"
count2
2
word"navigating"
count1
3
word"glinting"
count1
4
word"fleeting"
count1
5
word"intricate"
count2
6
word"flicker"
count1
7
word"unreadable"
count1
8
word"depths"
count1
9
word"streaming"
count1
10
word"scanning"
count1
11
word"echoed"
count1
12
word"cacophony"
count1
13
word"resonated"
count1
14
word"pulse"
count1
15
word"warmth"
count1
16
word"silence"
count1
17
word"down her spine"
count1
18
word"echoing"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"rhythmic"
2"navigating"
3"glinting"
4"fleeting"
5"intricate"
6"flicker"
7"unreadable"
8"depths"
9"streaming"
10"scanning"
11"echoed"
12"cacophony"
13"resonated"
14"pulse"
15"warmth"
16"silence"
17"down her spine"
18"echoing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences71
matches(empty)
82.49% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences71
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"appeared to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences71
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords884
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount884
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.9
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Harlow1
Quinn8
Herrera2
Saint1
Christopher1
Tomás7
Morris3
London1
Tube1
Camden1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Herrera"
3"Saint"
4"Christopher"
5"Tomás"
6"Morris"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount884
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
51.86% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs9
mean98.22
std32.56
cv0.331
sampleLengths
0135
1113
271
3131
480
593
699
7132
830
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences71
matches
0"was connected"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs143
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences71
ratio0.014
matches
0"The air here carried a different scent—something metallic, something earthy, overlaid with a faint sweetness, like dried herbs."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount892
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, bone-white object,"
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.03139013452914798
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.01233183856502242
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences71
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences71
mean12.45
std7.35
cv0.59
sampleLengths
016
116
23
327
417
522
634
725
816
99
105
1114
1214
1310
1415
152
163
1716
188
193
2026
2118
229
2314
2416
2510
2615
2724
2827
2916
3012
3114
321
331
344
3514
361
375
3814
3914
4012
4121
4215
4312
4419
4514
465
474
4823
493
44.37% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.2676056338028169
totalSentences71
uniqueOpeners19
49.75% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences67
matches
0"Just brick and boarded windows."
ratio0.015
76.72% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences67
matches
0"Her lungs burned."
1"She pumped her legs, the"
2"He moved with a dancer’s"
3"Her sharp jaw was set."
4"She spotted Tomás again, a"
5"He veered left, ducking down"
6"She pushed herself harder, the"
7"He headed straight for what"
8"He pulled out a small,"
9"He pressed it against a"
10"He glanced back, his warm"
11"She slammed her palm against"
12"She circled the derelict shop,"
13"She returned to the door,"
14"She pulled out her tactical"
15"Her mind flashed back to"
16"She knew Tomás Herrera was"
17"He was part of the"
18"She pulled back from the"
19"She would find another way"
ratio0.358
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences67
matches
0"Rain slicked the Soho street,"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn’s breath hitched"
2"Her lungs burned."
3"She pumped her legs, the"
4"Tomás Herrera wove through the"
5"He moved with a dancer’s"
6"Each time Quinn closed the"
7"A sharp turn off the"
8"The alley walls rose high,"
9"Quinn’s closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair"
10"Her sharp jaw was set."
11"She spotted Tomás again, a"
12"He veered left, ducking down"
13"Quinn’s military precision in her"
14"She pushed herself harder, the"
15"The passage opened into a"
16"A lone, flickering lamppost cast"
17"Tomás didn’t hesitate."
18"He headed straight for what"
19"The air here carried a"
ratio0.955
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
ratio0
97.26% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences47
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Quinn reached the door, her chest heaving, water streaming down her face."
1"The carving Tomás had touched stood out, intricate knotwork swirling into grotesque faces, their mouths gaping in silent screams."
2"But the memory of Morris, the gnawing suspicion that had haunted her for three years, whispered a different command."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
83.0267%