Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ94HCTXKVXKF521NNWVYNR4

Run Details

Duration:
27.4s
Cost:
$0.011403
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain lashed against the windows of the Raven’s Nest, a rhythmic drumming that competed with the low hum of the green neon sign humming over the door. Inside, the air smelled of stale hops, expensive tobacco, and the faint, citrusy tang of the polish Silas used on the mahogany bar. Silas moved behind the counter with a practiced, uneven rhythm, the slight drag of his left leg muted by the sawdust on the floor. He wiped a highball glass, his silver signet ring clicking against the rim with every rotation. Aurora sat on the end stool, her fingers tracing the maps etched into the wood of the bar top. Her black hair fell forward, a dark curtain that veiled her profile. She watched the condensation crawl down a glass of amber liquid she hadn’t touched. The door groaned on its hinges. A gust of wet Soho air cut through the warmth, carrying the scent of diesel and rain. A woman stepped in, shaking a designer umbrella before leaning it against the coat rack. She wore a tailored camel-hair coat that looked like it cost more than Aurora’s flat. Her eyes scanned the room, squinting through the dim amber light before landing on the stool at the end of the bar. The newcomer froze. Her leather heels clicked toward the bar, hesitant. “Aurora? Aurora Carter?” Aurora didn't look up immediately. She recognized the voice—a clipped, polished accent that belonged to lecture halls in Cardiff and garden parties she’d spent a lifetime trying to forget. She tucked a strand of hair behind her ear, exposing the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. “Camille.” Camille Vance slid onto the stool beside her, her movements fluid and possessed of an effortless grace. She smelled of bergamot and something clinical, something successful. She took in Aurora’s oversized hoodie and the faint smudge of soy sauce on her sleeve from the afternoon shift at the Golden Empress. “I heard you’d moved to London. I didn't think I’d find you in a place like this.” Camille glanced at the black-and-white photographs of forgotten spies and empty streets that lined the walls. Silas approached them, his hazel eyes sharp, assessing the newcomer with the cold precision of a man who’d spent decades reading threats in the tilt of a shoulder. “What can I get you?” Silas’s voice was a low rasp. He didn't smile. “A gin and tonic, please. Hendrick’s, if you have it.” Camille turned back to Aurora the moment Silas turned his back. “You look... different, Rory. Last I heard from your mother, you were finishing the degree. She said you’d gone to ground. No one’s seen you since the New Year’s gala three years ago.” Aurora finally raised her glass, the ice clinking. The liquid burned her throat, a sharp contrast to the cold rain outside. “I didn't finish it. Law didn't suit the scenery.” “Your father was devastated. Brendan had a traineeship lined up for you at the firm. He still talks about it, you know. He thinks you’re just having a very long gap year.” Camille’s laugh was thin, like parchment tearing. She reached out, her hand hovering near Aurora’s arm before she thought better of it and pulled back. “And Evan? Have you spoken to him? He was a wreck after you left. He spent months looking for you.” Aurora’s grip tightened on her glass. The crescent scar on her wrist seemed to throb, a ghostly remnant of a night she’d buried under layers of South London pavement. She looked at Camille, really looked at her. Camille’s skin was perfect, her eyes bright with the uncomplicated ambition of someone who had never had to run for her life. “The drinks are on me tonight, Camille. Take it as a parting gift from the girl you used to know.” Silas set the gin and tonic down. He lingered, his hand resting on the bar near Aurora. He caught her eye, a silent question in the tilt of his head. Aurora gave a microscopic shake. “You’re working here?” Camille looked at the bar, then at Silas, then back to Aurora. Her expression shifted from surprise to a pity that felt like a slap. “Rory, you were the top of our year. You had the highest marks in Constitutional Law. You could be anywhere. Why are you hiding in a basement in Soho?” “I like the maps. They tell me exactly where I am.” Aurora stood up, her stool scraping harshly against the floorboards. She felt the weight of the flat key in her pocket, the one that led to the small, sparse room above the bar where no one ever raised a hand to her. “You haven’t changed at all, Camille. You still talk about the future like it’s a foregone conclusion. Like it’s something we’re all entitled to.” “I just don't understand. Is it the money? If you need help, I could talk to your father. He’d take you back in a heartbeat. He just wants his daughter home.” “I am home.” Aurora leaned in, the neon light from the window catching the blue of her eyes, making them look like cracked ice. “Tell my father you didn’t see me. Tell Evan you found a ghost. It wouldn’t even be a lie.” Camille reached for her drink, her fingers trembling slightly. The silence between them stretched, filled with the ghosts of the people they’d been in Cardiff—two girls who shared notes and dreamed of the Old Bailey. That world felt like a fever dream now, thin and translucent. “You’re scaring me, Aurora. You’ve got this... hardness in you. You used to be the one who laughed at everything. Remember the night we snuck into the library? We thought we were such rebels.” “We were children playing at being adults. Now I’m just an adult who stopped playing.” Silas moved to the sink, the splashing water the only sound in the sudden lull of the bar. He watched them through the reflection in the polished brass of the beer taps. He knew the look on Aurora’s face. It was the look of someone cutting a lead. “I should go,” Camille said, though she didn’t move. She stared at Aurora’s hand, where the scar was most visible. “He really didn't mean to hurt you that night, you know. It was an accident. He told us all.” Aurora’s breath hitched, a jagged sound. She looked at the scar, then at Silas. Silas stopped what he was doing. His frame straightened, his quiet authority suddenly filling the space behind the bar like a physical weight. “The lady asked you to tell the people back home she wasn’t here,” Silas said, his voice dropping an octave. Camille blinked, startled by the intervention. She looked at Silas, seeing the grey-streaked hair and the hardness in his hazel eyes that suggested he’d seen things far worse than a family dispute. “I was just—” “You were leaving.” Silas didn't move, but the air in the Raven’s Nest grew cold. Camille stood up, her expensive coat rustling. she fumbled for her umbrella, her poise finally fracturing. “Fine. Stay here then. Stay in the dark with the maps and the ghosts. But don't expect us to wait forever for you to wake up.” She turned and hurried toward the door. The bell chimed a lonely note as she disappeared into the Soho rain. Aurora sat back down. Her knees felt like water. She stared at the spot where Camille had been, the ghost of bergamot still lingering in the air. Silas reached under the bar and pulled out a fresh bottle of rye. He poured a finger into a clean glass and pushed it toward her. He didn't ask questions. He didn't offer platitudes. He just leaned his weight onto his good leg and waited. “She thinks I’m lost,” Aurora whispered, her voice barely audible over the rain. Silas picked up a rag and started on a new glass. “People like that don't know the difference between being lost and being gone.” Aurora looked at her reflection in the dark window. The neon green light turned her skin a sickly, supernatural hue. She picked up the rye. She thought about the library in Cardiff, the smell of old paper, and the girl who used to laugh at everything. That girl was dead. She’d died in a kitchen in a flat she couldn't afford, with blood on her wrist and a suitcase she hadn't finished packing. “She’ll tell them,” Aurora said. “Let her. They can’t find someone who doesn’t want to be found.” Silas tapped his silver ring against the wood, a steady, grounding beat. Aurora took a sip of the rye, letting the heat settle the tremors in her hands. She looked at the map on the bar, her finger resting on a small, unnamed island in the middle of a painted sea. The rain continued its assault on the glass, blurring the world outside until Soho was nothing more than a smudge of yellow and grey. Inside the Nest, the shadows were long and the silence was heavy with the things they both chose not to say. “Do you ever regret it?” she asked. Silas paused, his gaze drifting to the maps on the wall, his eyes lingering on a corner of Eastern Europe that had been redrawn a dozen times since he’d last walked its streets. He shifted his weight, his knee giving a dull, familiar throb. “Regret is for people with enough time to look backward, Rory. We’re too busy staying upright.” He moved to the door and flipped the sign from OPEN to CLOSED. The neon flickered once, then died, plunging the front of the bar into a deep, velvet darkness. Aurora finished her drink. She stood up, her movements slow and deliberate. She felt the weight of her history pressing down on her, a physical pressure against her ribs. She looked at the door, then at the stairs leading up to her flat. “I’m going up,” she said. “Goodnight, Carter.” “Goodnight, Silas.” She walked toward the back, her shadow stretching out across the maps. As she reached the stairs, she stopped and looked back. Silas was still there, a solitary figure in the dim light, polishing a glass that was already clean. The Raven’s Nest felt smaller tonight, the walls closing in with the memory of a voice from a life she no longer possessed. The rain didn't let up. It drummed on the roof, a relentless reminder of the world outside, the world that was still looking for a version of her that didn't exist anymore. She climbed the stairs, her hand trailing on the banister, leaving the bergamot and the pity behind in the dark.
created_at"2026-02-25T00:52:44.003Z" 2/25/2026, 12:52:44 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.176
leniency0.353
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.05% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1792
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count2
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"really"
2"slightly"
3"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
41.41% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1792
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count1
1
word"tracing"
count1
2
word"etched"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count1
4
word"scanned"
count1
5
word"effortless"
count1
6
word"throb"
count2
7
word"perfect"
count1
8
word"weight"
count5
9
word"silence"
count2
10
word"familiar"
count1
11
word"flickered"
count1
12
word"velvet"
count1
13
word"solitary"
count1
14
word"reminder"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"tracing"
2"etched"
3"warmth"
4"scanned"
5"effortless"
6"throb"
7"perfect"
8"weight"
9"silence"
10"familiar"
11"flickered"
12"velvet"
13"solitary"
14"reminder"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences102
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences102
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences130
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1790
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions74
wordCount1344
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity1.64
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Raven3
Nest4
Silas18
Soho3
Aurora22
Cardiff3
Vance1
Golden1
Empress1
South1
London1
Camille12
Old1
Bailey1
Eastern1
Europe1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Aurora"
4"Vance"
5"Camille"
6"Old"
7"Bailey"
places
0"Soho"
1"Cardiff"
2"Golden"
3"South"
4"London"
5"Eastern"
6"Europe"
globalScore0.682
windowScore0.333
63.79% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences87
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"looked like it cost more than Aurora’s fl"
1"felt like a slap"
2"felt like a fever dream now, thin and t"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1790
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences130
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs67
mean26.72
std19.66
cv0.736
sampleLengths
090
145
275
311
43
547
61
750
817
944
105
119
1210
1311
1433
1521
169
1732
1825
1920
2059
2120
2235
233
2425
2529
2611
2742
2824
2931
303
3121
3219
3346
3434
3515
3648
3739
3837
3920
4032
413
423
4328
4426
4520
4627
4745
4813
4911
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences102
matches
0"been redrawn"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs220
matches
0"was doing"
1"was still looking"
98.90% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences130
ratio0.015
matches
0"She recognized the voice—a clipped, polished accent that belonged to lecture halls in Cardiff and garden parties she’d spent a lifetime trying to forget."
1"The silence between them stretched, filled with the ghosts of the people they’d been in Cardiff—two girls who shared notes and dreamed of the Old Bailey."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1351
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.025166543301258327
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.009622501850481125
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences130
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences130
mean13.77
std8.06
cv0.585
sampleLengths
027
123
224
316
419
512
614
76
817
915
1015
1122
123
138
143
155
1624
1718
181
1917
209
2124
2217
2316
2428
255
266
273
2810
2911
3033
318
3213
339
3432
357
3618
3720
386
3923
408
4122
4220
437
4410
4513
465
473
4812
4913
36.92% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats17
diversityRatio0.2153846153846154
totalSentences130
uniqueOpeners28
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences99
matches(empty)
ratio0
42.22% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount44
totalSentences99
matches
0"He wiped a highball glass,"
1"Her black hair fell forward,"
2"She watched the condensation crawl"
3"She wore a tailored camel-hair"
4"Her eyes scanned the room,"
5"Her leather heels clicked toward"
6"She recognized the voice—a clipped,"
7"She tucked a strand of"
8"She smelled of bergamot and"
9"She took in Aurora’s oversized"
10"He didn't smile."
11"She reached out, her hand"
12"She looked at Camille, really"
13"He lingered, his hand resting"
14"He caught her eye, a"
15"Her expression shifted from surprise"
16"She felt the weight of"
17"He watched them through the"
18"He knew the look on"
19"It was the look of"
ratio0.444
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount96
totalSentences99
matches
0"Rain lashed against the windows"
1"Silas moved behind the counter"
2"He wiped a highball glass,"
3"Aurora sat on the end"
4"Her black hair fell forward,"
5"She watched the condensation crawl"
6"The door groaned on its"
7"A gust of wet Soho"
8"A woman stepped in, shaking"
9"She wore a tailored camel-hair"
10"Her eyes scanned the room,"
11"The newcomer froze."
12"Her leather heels clicked toward"
13"Aurora didn't look up immediately."
14"She recognized the voice—a clipped,"
15"She tucked a strand of"
16"Camille Vance slid onto the"
17"She smelled of bergamot and"
18"She took in Aurora’s oversized"
19"Camille glanced at the black-and-white"
ratio0.97
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences99
matches(empty)
ratio0
40.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences63
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"Rain lashed against the windows of the Raven’s Nest, a rhythmic drumming that competed with the low hum of the green neon sign humming over the door."
1"Her black hair fell forward, a dark curtain that veiled her profile."
2"Camille glanced at the black-and-white photographs of forgotten spies and empty streets that lined the walls."
3"Silas approached them, his hazel eyes sharp, assessing the newcomer with the cold precision of a man who’d spent decades reading threats in the tilt of a should…"
4"Camille’s skin was perfect, her eyes bright with the uncomplicated ambition of someone who had never had to run for her life."
5"Aurora leaned in, the neon light from the window catching the blue of her eyes, making them look like cracked ice."
6"Silas paused, his gaze drifting to the maps on the wall, his eyes lingering on a corner of Eastern Europe that had been redrawn a dozen times since he’d last wa…"
7"Silas was still there, a solitary figure in the dim light, polishing a glass that was already clean."
8"She climbed the stairs, her hand trailing on the banister, leaving the bergamot and the pity behind in the dark."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Silas said, his voice dropping an octave"
1"Aurora whispered, her voice barely audible over the rain"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Aurora whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.176
leniency0.353
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.059
74.5815%