Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ94J6WZ4Z6JVGPJ58N28M38

Run Details

Duration:
25.9s
Cost:
$0.002391
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The downpour hammered the city, each drop a tiny projectile against Detective Harlow Quinn’s rain-slicked uniform. Streetlights bled into hazy halos, turning the slick tarmac into a fractured mirror of distorted light. Her lungs burned, a raw, searing agony with every gasping breath, but the figure ahead, a blur of dark clothing against the gleaming wet pavement, drove her onward. He was fast, agile, weaving through the deserted night like a phantom, a shadow gifted legs. Quinn’s boots slapped a frantic rhythm, their worn soles fighting for purchase on the treacherous ground. Every alley mouth, every shadowed doorway, offered potential escape routes, but the suspect, Tomás Herrera, seemed to anticipate each one, sliding through them with unnerving grace. Her military bearing, honed over eighteen years of confronting the worst London had to offer, warred with the primal exhaustion clawing at her. Herrera was athletic, muscles rippling under tight fabric as he vaulted a low wall surrounding a darkened shopfront. Quinn landed heavily on the other side, her shoulder slamming against unforgiving brick. A sharp gasp, a grunt of pain, but she pushed off immediately. Herrera risked a glance back, his face a fleeting glimpse of olive skin and dark, curly hair plastered to his forehead. A glint of something metallic around his neck caught the weak light – Saint Christopher, she registered with a surge of grim satisfaction. He was headed for the grimy underbelly, the places polished Londoners pretended didn’t exist. "Nowhere left to run, Herrera!" Quinn’s voice, a hoarse rasp, battled the drumming rain. He didn't reply, just angled sharply into a narrow passage tucked between two crumbling warehouses, a black maw sucking him into darkness. Quinn plunged after him, the passage barely wide enough for her shoulders. Overflowing bins of rotting refuse blocked the path, their stench thick and cloying. Herrera navigated them with practiced ease, his worn leather jacket brushing against sodden cardboard. Quinn stumbled, a cascade of decaying matter spilling around her feet, the smell of decay momentarily overwhelming. She saw him emerge from the other side, his silhouette framed by a single, flickering gas lamp at the mouth of what looked like a disused service tunnel. But before he reached it, he veered sharply left, towards a set of steep, stone steps descending into the earth, half-hidden by a cascade of ivy and slick with moss. Quinn’s pursuit became a controlled slide. Her hands shot out, finding purchase on rough, cold brickwork as her feet lost traction. She hit the top of the steps hard, the impact jarring her teeth. Herrera was already halfway down. The cascade of water from the street seemed to gather here, sluicing down the worn stone, turning the descent into a miniature waterfall. He moved with a desperation now, each step a calculated risk. Quinn swore, the sound swallowed by the deluge. She descended after him, her service weapon held ready, the cold metal a familiar weight against her rain-soaked fingers. The air grew perceptibly colder, the smell of damp earth and something metallic, acrid, piercing through the general dampness. It was a scent she hadn't smelled in years, a smell that snagged at the edges of her memory like a phantom limb. At the foot of the steps, Herrera didn't pause. He skirted a grimy, iron-grated opening spewing vapour – a vent for some subterranean heat source that offered no comfort. He then ducked through a jagged gap in a graffiti-scarred concrete wall, barely visible through the sheeting rain. Quinn followed, her uniform snagging on protruding rebar. She reached the gap he’d used and stopped, her forward momentum arrested by a sudden, profound stillness in the air. The rain still hammered down somewhere above, a muffled roar, but here, the immediate sound was different. A low thrumming, like the slow beat of a giant, unseen heart. Strange, guttural murmurs drifted up from the deeper darkness, punctuated by what sounded like muffled bartering, sharp clicks, and the occasional, distant clang of metal. The metallic tang she’d smelled earlier intensified, mingling with the sharp, sweet scent of exotic spices and something else… something organic and vaguely floral, yet deeply unsettling. It was the smell of things that shouldn’t be. The very air felt thick, heavy with secrets and a potent, alien energy. Through the gap, she saw not a continuation of city infrastructure, but what appeared to be an entrance to a vast, cavernous space extending into impenetrable gloom. Dim, flickering light sources, not electric, cast long, dancing shadows. The rough-hewn walls seemed to absorb what little illumination existed. This was no ordinary sewer access, no forgotten subway passage. This was something else, something hidden. The Raven's Nest was a dive bar, a place of shadows and secrets, but it was *real*. This place, this descent, felt like stepping through a tear in the fabric of the world she knew. Herrera had vanished into it. Quinn gripped the cold, wet concrete, her knuckles white. Her service weapon felt heavy, inadequate. This was the kind of territory that had swallowed DS Morris three years ago. Unexplained circumstances. Supernatural origins. The words echoed in the hollow space behind her eyes. Her training screamed caution, retreat, call for backup – but backup wouldn't understand what she was up against, not yet. They’d see a rogue paramedic fleeing arrest. They wouldn't see the unnatural chill, smell the dangerous allure, hear the whispers of forbidden commerce. He was a suspect, a target. Her partner, Morris, had been swallowed by similar unknown depths. Retrieving Herrera, connecting him to the clique’s activities, was paramount. But the instinct that had kept her alive, that pushed her to follow, warred with a primal fear. This place pulsed with an ancient, potent otherness. Stepping inside meant leaving behind the familiar rules, the predictable consequences. It meant willingly plunging into the heart of the very darkness that had claimed her partner. She could turn back, file a report about a suspect fleeing into an unknown subterranean network. The chain of custody would break, Herrera would disappear into the labyrinth, and whatever he was connected to would remain hidden. Or she could follow. She took a deep breath, the strange, cloying air filling her lungs, tasting of dust, decay, and something like petrichor mixed with ozone. The descent beckoned like a siren's call, promising answers and oblivion in equal measure. Her worn leather watch, its face cracked, told her it was late. Very late indeed. The sounds from below grew louder, more distinct, a symphony of the forbidden. A faint, high-pitched whine, like a strained energy, hummed beneath the other noises. Herrera was somewhere in that darkness, a knot she needed to untangle. With a surge of adrenaline that temporarily dulled the ache in her body, Quinn tightened her grip on her firearm, her gaze fixed on the gaping maw before her.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences1
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
78.01% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1137
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count2
1
adverb"very"
count3
highlights
0"sharply"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1137
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"fractured"
count1
1
word"searing"
count1
2
word"gleaming"
count1
3
word"treacherous"
count1
4
word"potential"
count1
5
word"fleeting"
count1
6
word"glint"
count1
7
word"maw"
count2
8
word"navigated"
count1
9
word"practiced ease"
count1
10
word"calculated"
count1
11
word"familiar"
count2
12
word"weight"
count1
13
word"profound"
count1
14
word"gloom"
count1
15
word"electric"
count1
16
word"dancing"
count1
17
word"echoed"
count1
18
word"chill"
count1
19
word"depths"
count1
20
word"pulsed"
count1
21
word"predictable"
count1
22
word"symphony"
count1
highlights
0"fractured"
1"searing"
2"gleaming"
3"treacherous"
4"potential"
5"fleeting"
6"glint"
7"maw"
8"navigated"
9"practiced ease"
10"calculated"
11"familiar"
12"weight"
13"profound"
14"gloom"
15"electric"
16"dancing"
17"echoed"
18"chill"
19"depths"
20"pulsed"
21"predictable"
22"symphony"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences78
matches(empty)
32.97% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences78
filterMatches
0"hear"
1"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"appeared to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences78
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1140
ratio0.001
matches
0"real"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount1135
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.97
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Detective1
Harlow1
Quinn11
Tomás1
Herrera10
London1
Saint1
Christopher1
Londoners1
Raven1
Nest1
Morris2
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Tomás"
3"Herrera"
4"Saint"
5"Christopher"
6"Londoners"
7"Raven"
8"Morris"
places
0"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
11.11% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences72
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"looked like a disused service tunnel"
1"sounded like muffled bartering, sharp clic"
2"felt like stepping through a tear in th"
3"something like petrichor mixed with ozone"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.877
wordCount1140
matches
0"not a continuation of city infrastructure, but what appeared to be an entrance to a vast, cavernous space e"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs13
mean87.69
std47.3
cv0.539
sampleLengths
0118
1124
214
3136
4142
575
6103
798
85
986
10116
114
12119
91.77% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences78
matches
0"was headed"
1"been swallowed"
2"was connected"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs178
matches(empty)
32.97% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences78
ratio0.038
matches
0"A glint of something metallic around his neck caught the weak light – Saint Christopher, she registered with a surge of grim satisfaction."
1"He skirted a grimy, iron-grated opening spewing vapour – a vent for some subterranean heat source that offered no comfort."
2"Her training screamed caution, retreat, call for backup – but backup wouldn't understand what she was up against, not yet."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1139
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"graffiti-scarred concrete wall,"
1"faint, high-pitched whine,"
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.02897278314310799
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.013169446883230905
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences78
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences78
mean14.62
std6.68
cv0.457
sampleLengths
016
116
228
316
416
526
623
718
813
912
1021
1123
1214
1314
1422
1512
1613
1714
1817
1928
2030
216
2215
2313
245
2523
2611
278
2819
2919
3023
319
3220
3318
348
3520
3617
3712
3825
3919
408
419
4213
4327
4410
4510
4610
476
4817
4918
53.85% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.34615384615384615
totalSentences78
uniqueOpeners27
43.86% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences76
matches
0"Very late indeed."
ratio0.013
88.42% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences76
matches
0"Her lungs burned, a raw,"
1"He was fast, agile, weaving"
2"Her military bearing, honed over"
3"He was headed for the"
4"He didn't reply, just angled"
5"She saw him emerge from"
6"Her hands shot out, finding"
7"She hit the top of"
8"He moved with a desperation"
9"She descended after him, her"
10"It was a scent she"
11"He skirted a grimy, iron-grated"
12"He then ducked through a"
13"She reached the gap he’d"
14"It was the smell of"
15"Her service weapon felt heavy,"
16"Her training screamed caution, retreat,"
17"They’d see a rogue paramedic"
18"They wouldn't see the unnatural"
19"He was a suspect, a"
ratio0.329
38.95% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences76
matches
0"The downpour hammered the city,"
1"Streetlights bled into hazy halos,"
2"Her lungs burned, a raw,"
3"He was fast, agile, weaving"
4"Quinn’s boots slapped a frantic"
5"Every alley mouth, every shadowed"
6"Her military bearing, honed over"
7"Herrera was athletic, muscles rippling"
8"Quinn landed heavily on the"
9"A sharp gasp, a grunt"
10"Herrera risked a glance back,"
11"A glint of something metallic"
12"He was headed for the"
13"Quinn’s voice, a hoarse rasp,"
14"He didn't reply, just angled"
15"Quinn plunged after him, the"
16"Herrera navigated them with practiced"
17"Quinn stumbled, a cascade of"
18"She saw him emerge from"
19"Quinn’s pursuit became a controlled"
ratio0.842
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences59
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Her military bearing, honed over eighteen years of confronting the worst London had to offer, warred with the primal exhaustion clawing at her."
1"It was a scent she hadn't smelled in years, a smell that snagged at the edges of her memory like a phantom limb."
2"He skirted a grimy, iron-grated opening spewing vapour – a vent for some subterranean heat source that offered no comfort."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
78.6633%