Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ94JTBARHYETDDV2AFXVN2B

Run Details

Duration:
34.8s
Cost:
$0.014778
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of The Raven’s Nest hummed against the Soho drizzle, casting an oily emerald sheen over the puddles. Aurora stepped out of the damp night, the bell above the door chiming a dull metallic note that the thick air swallowed. Inside, the scent of parched paper and expensive gin settled over her like a heavy blanket. Silas stood behind the bar, polishing a crystal tumbler with the methodical precision of a clockmaker. The silver signet ring on his right hand caught the dim light, reflecting the yellowed maps pinned to the walls. He didn't look up, but the rhythm of his cloth slowed. His left leg shifted, the floorboards creaking under the weight of his old injury. "Late for a shift, or early for a drink, Rory?" Aurora pulled the collar of her jacket tight, her black hair clinging to her cheeks in wet streaks. "The Golden Empress had a rush. Yu-Fei doesn't believe in breaks when the spring rolls are flying." Silas set the glass down, his hazel eyes drifting toward the door as it swung open again. A man stepped in, shedding a tan trench coat that looked like it cost more than Aurora’s flat. He stood with a rigid, practiced posture, his eyes scanning the room with a clinical detachment that didn't belong in a pub. Aurora froze. She reached for her left wrist, her fingers tracing the crescent-shaped scar beneath her sleeve. The man’s gaze snagged on her, and for a heartbeat, the Soho bar vanished, replaced by the grey stone corridors of Cardiff University. "Rory?" Leo Thorne didn't move. The boy who had once spent his afternoons sketching charcoal portraits in the back of lecture halls had been replaced by a man carved from flint. His jaw sat square, his hair cropped into a severe, corporate fade. He looked like the sort of barrister her father would have invited for Sunday lunch to discuss property law. "Leo. You’re a long way from the M4." He crossed the floor, his leather brogues clicking on the wood. He didn't offer a hug. He stopped just outside her personal space, the smell of sandalwood and rain clinging to him. "Work brings me to London. I heard you’d moved, but Eva wouldn't say where." Silas slid a glass of amber liquid toward Aurora without being asked. He lingered, his presence a quiet, towering shadow at the edge of the bar. Leo looked at Silas, then back at Aurora, his brow knitting together. "You’re working here?" "I live upstairs. I work for a restaurant down the street. It’s a life, Leo." Leo took a stool, his movements stiff. He didn't look at the maps or the black-and-white photographs of forgotten agents and jazz musicians. He looked at the scratches in the mahogany bar. "Your father still asks about you. He thinks you’re doing a Master’s at King’s. He tells people you’re specializing in international arbitration." Aurora gripped her glass, the ice clicking against the sides. "Let him think what helps him sleep. Better a scholar in his head than a delivery girl in Soho." "He’s old, Rory. He’s not the man who forced those textbooks down your throat anymore." "He hasn’t changed. He just ran out of people to bark at." Leo signaled Silas for a scotch. He didn't look at the menu. "I took the position at his firm. Three years ago. I’m a junior partner now." Aurora’s laugh was a sharp, jagged thing. "You hated the law, Leo. You wanted to move to Florence and paint until your fingers bled. You used to say the Bar was a cage for people who were afraid of the sun." Leo stared at his reflection in the dark wood of the bar. He didn't blink. "The sun doesn't pay the mortgage. And Florence is expensive. You grow up, you realize that the cage is actually quite comfortable if you have the right furniture." "You look like you're wearing a mask that’s two sizes too small." "And you look like you’re hiding, Rory. You were the smartest person in our year. You could have run circles around any of those professors. Now you’re pouring drinks and running errands for a noodle shop?" Aurora leaned in, her blue eyes flashing under the low lights. "I’m not hiding. I’m breathing. No one here cares about my LSAT scores or who my father is. I don't have to look over my shoulder for Evan every time a door opens." Leo’s expression flickered at the name. He reached out as if to touch her arm, then pulled back, his hand curling into a fist on the bar. "Evan is gone. He’s in Bristol now. He doesn't have any power over you." "Power isn't just about where someone stands. It’s about the space they take up in your head. I left that version of me in Wales. Why are you trying to drag her back?" Silas moved to the end of the bar, his limp more pronounced as he reached for a bottle on the top shelf. He didn't say a word, but his silence was a heavy, watchful thing. "I’m not dragging you back. I’m asking why you threw it all away. You had a future." "I had a script, Leo. There’s a difference." Leo took a long swallow of his drink. The harsh light of the bar highlighted the new lines around his mouth. He looked exhausted, the kind of soul-deep weariness that no amount of expensive tailoring could hide. "I remember you in the library. You used to highlight your notes in three different colors because you said the law was a puzzle you could solve if you looked at it from the right angle." "That girl was a fool. She thought if she followed all the rules, the world would be fair. Then she found out that the people who write the rules are the ones who break them the best." "Is that why you’re here? In a bar that looks like a museum for lost causes?" Leo gestured to the room, his hand sweeping past the bookshelf that concealed Silas’s private room. Aurora followed his gaze. She saw the maps of cities that no longer existed and the faces of people who had lived double lives. "It’s honest work, Leo. More honest than helping corporations find loopholes in environmental regulations." "I do more than that." "Do you? When was the last time you picked up a charcoal pencil?" Leo didn't answer. He stared at his signet ring, a gold band that mimicked the one on Silas’s hand but lacked the weight of history. "I sold my easels. There wasn't room in the new flat." "There’s always room for the things that matter. You just traded them for something that shines." "You judge me for staying, but you’re just as stuck. You’re frozen in the moment you ran away. You’re twenty-five, Rory. You can’t spend the rest of your life as a ghost in Soho." Aurora stood up, the legs of her stool scraping against the floor. "Watch me." Leo reached into his pocket and pulled out a leather wallet. He extracted a crisp fifty-pound note and laid it on the bar. "Your father is having heart surgery in three weeks. He won't call you. He’s too proud. But he’s scared." The air in the room seemed to thin. Aurora felt the crescent scar on her wrist throb, a phantom ache from a childhood fall. "Why are you telling me this?" "Because I’m the one who sits with him. Because I’m the one who became the son he wanted while his daughter disappeared into the London fog. I wanted you to know that the cage you fled is getting smaller." Silas picked up the fifty-pound note, his eyes never leaving Leo’s face. "We don't take bills this large at this hour. No change." Leo stood up and buttoned his trench coat. He looked at Aurora one last time, his eyes searching hers for a glimpse of the girl from Cardiff. He found only the cold, sharp blue of a woman who had learned how to survive. "Keep the change. For the ghosts." He turned and walked out into the Soho rain. The bell chimed again, a final, lonely sound. Aurora stood at the bar, her hand trembling as she reached for her drink. Silas moved toward her, his face a mask of practiced calm. He took the empty glass and replaced it with a fresh one, the ice clinking softly in the quiet bar. "You knew him well?" "I thought I did. A long time ago." Silas nodded, his gaze lingering on the door where the green neon light continued to pulse. "Time has a way of turning people into caricatures of themselves if they aren't careful." "He thinks I'm the one who's changed." "Everyone thinks they're the same person they were ten years ago, Rory. They just find better ways to lie to the mirror." Aurora looked at the maps on the wall, the intricate lines of forgotten borders and secret routes. She traced the scar on her wrist, the skin appearing pale and fragile under the emerald glow. "He said my father is sick." Silas didn't answer. He simply continued to polish the mahogany, the rhythmic movement of his hand the only sound in the room. "The rain's picking up," Silas whispered. Aurora looked toward the window. The Soho street was a blur of movement and light, a thousand lives crossing paths in the dark. She reached for her jacket, the damp fabric cold against her skin. "I should get back to the Empress. Yu-Fei will be wondering where I am." "Stay for one more. On the house." Aurora sat back down, the weight of the conversation pressing into her shoulders like lead. She watched the green light flicker against the glass, the emerald hue bleeding into the amber liquid. "He looks so much like them now, Silas. The lawyers. The men in suits. He sounds like them too." "Wealth is a very loud noise. It drowns out the person underneath." "He used to draw me. While we were studying. He’d hide the sketches in my textbooks so I’d find them during exams." Silas paused, his hand resting on the bar next to hers. "And now he's the one holding the textbook." Aurora closed her eyes, the memory of charcoal-stained fingers and Welsh rain blurring behind her lids. She could still hear Leo’s voice, the clinical edge of it cutting through her defenses. "He’s right about one thing. I am hiding." "Hiding is a form of preservation, Rory. Don't mistake it for weakness." The door opened again, a group of rowdy tourists spilling in from the street, their laughter breaking the silence like a hammer against glass. The tension in the room shattered, the heavy air of the past dissipating into the mundane noise of a Soho night. Aurora watched Silas shift back into his role as the barman, his limp less noticeable as he moved to serve the new arrivals. She looked at the spot where Leo had sat, the wood still holding a faint smudge of condensation from his glass. "I thought I'd forgotten how it felt," she murmured to the empty stool. She stood up and pulled her hood over her head, the black fabric obscuring her face. She didn't look back at the maps or the photographs. She walked toward the door, her boots echoing on the floorboards. As she pushed the door open, the Soho wind whipped the heat from the bar, replacing it with the sharp, metallic taste of the city. "Rory?" Silas called out over the noise of the tourists. She paused in the doorway, the green light framing her silhouette. "Be careful of the puddles. They’re deeper than they look tonight." Aurora stepped out into the rain, the neon sign humming above her as she disappeared into the crowd.
created_at"2026-02-25T00:53:30.607Z" 2/25/2026, 12:53:30 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences54
tagDensity0.056
leniency0.111
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.97% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1989
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
49.72% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1989
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"crystal"
count1
1
word"methodical"
count1
2
word"weight"
count3
3
word"scanning"
count1
4
word"tracing"
count1
5
word"comfortable"
count1
6
word"flickered"
count1
7
word"silence"
count2
8
word"throb"
count1
9
word"pulse"
count1
10
word"intricate"
count1
11
word"traced"
count1
12
word"rhythmic"
count1
13
word"flicker"
count1
14
word"tension"
count1
15
word"shattered"
count1
16
word"echoing"
count1
highlights
0"crystal"
1"methodical"
2"weight"
3"scanning"
4"tracing"
5"comfortable"
6"flickered"
7"silence"
8"throb"
9"pulse"
10"intricate"
11"traced"
12"rhythmic"
13"flicker"
14"tension"
15"shattered"
16"echoing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences86
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences137
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1989
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions64
wordCount1171
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.71
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Leo"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho6
Aurora20
Cardiff2
University1
Thorne1
Sunday1
Silas16
Leo14
Welsh1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Aurora"
3"Thorne"
4"Silas"
5"Leo"
places
0"Soho"
1"Cardiff"
globalScore0.646
windowScore0.5
85.06% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences77
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like it cost more than Aurora’s fl"
1"looked like the sort of barrister her fat"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1989
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences137
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs94
mean21.16
std13.94
cv0.659
sampleLengths
059
161
210
318
417
557
640
71
861
98
1032
1114
1238
133
1415
1532
1622
1710
1819
1915
2012
2112
2215
237
2434
2515
2628
2712
2836
2911
3033
3127
3214
3333
3435
3517
368
3737
3836
3937
4016
4116
4224
4314
445
4513
4625
4711
4816
4934
97.10% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences86
matches
0"been replaced"
1"being asked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs177
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences137
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1178
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.017826825127334467
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.0050933786078098476
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences137
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences137
mean14.52
std7.7
cv0.53
sampleLengths
021
122
216
316
420
511
614
710
818
917
1017
1118
1222
132
1415
1523
161
174
1826
1912
2019
218
2211
235
2416
2514
2612
2714
2812
293
3015
317
3216
339
3422
3510
3619
3715
3812
396
406
4115
427
4334
4412
453
4628
4712
4836
4911
43.43% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.26277372262773724
totalSentences137
uniqueOpeners36
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
ratio0
53.33% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences84
matches
0"He didn't look up, but"
1"His left leg shifted, the"
2"He stood with a rigid,"
3"She reached for her left"
4"His jaw sat square, his"
5"He looked like the sort"
6"He crossed the floor, his"
7"He didn't offer a hug."
8"He stopped just outside her"
9"He lingered, his presence a"
10"He didn't look at the"
11"He looked at the scratches"
12"He didn't look at the"
13"He didn't blink."
14"He reached out as if"
15"He didn't say a word,"
16"He looked exhausted, the kind"
17"She saw the maps of"
18"He stared at his signet"
19"He extracted a crisp fifty-pound"
ratio0.417
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount82
totalSentences84
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"Aurora stepped out of the"
2"Silas stood behind the bar,"
3"The silver signet ring on"
4"He didn't look up, but"
5"His left leg shifted, the"
6"Aurora pulled the collar of"
7"Silas set the glass down,"
8"A man stepped in, shedding"
9"He stood with a rigid,"
10"She reached for her left"
11"The man’s gaze snagged on"
12"Leo Thorne didn't move."
13"The boy who had once"
14"His jaw sat square, his"
15"He looked like the sort"
16"He crossed the floor, his"
17"He didn't offer a hug."
18"He stopped just outside her"
19"Silas slid a glass of"
ratio0.976
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
ratio0
87.05% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences64
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"He stood with a rigid, practiced posture, his eyes scanning the room with a clinical detachment that didn't belong in a pub."
1"The boy who had once spent his afternoons sketching charcoal portraits in the back of lecture halls had been replaced by a man carved from flint."
2"Leo gestured to the room, his hand sweeping past the bookshelf that concealed Silas’s private room."
3"She saw the maps of cities that no longer existed and the faces of people who had lived double lives."
4"The door opened again, a group of rowdy tourists spilling in from the street, their laughter breaking the silence like a hammer against glass."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Silas whispered (whisper)"
1"she murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences54
tagDensity0.037
leniency0.074
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.074
82.0227%