Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ94JV8CNN5XNJ125CZ4HH7X

Run Details

Duration:
31.2s
Cost:
$0.012435
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the pavement of Soho, turning the streetlights into blurred smears of amber against the dark. Inside The Raven’s Nest, the air held the scent of old paper, spilled gin, and the faint, metallic tang of the damp. Rory sat at the far end of the mahogany bar, her back to a wall covered in yellowed maps of cities that no longer existed. She traced the crescent scar on her left wrist, a nervous habit that surfaced whenever the hum of the city felt too loud. Silas moved behind the bar with a practiced, heavy rhythm. The slight drag of his left leg on the floorboards acted as a metronome for the quiet evening. He reached for a bottle of Highland park, the silver signet ring on his right hand catching the dim light as he poured a measure into a glass. He slid the drink toward Rory without a word, his hazel eyes briefly meeting hers before he turned to polish a highball glass. The bell above the door gave a lonely chime. A man stepped in, shaking a black umbrella that looked expensive enough to cover Rory’s rent for a month. He wore a charcoal wool overcoat, perfectly tailored to shoulders that had broadened since Rory last saw them. He paused, blinking against the low light, his gaze sweeping over the black-and-white photographs on the walls before settling on the bar. Rory froze. The glass in her hand felt suddenly heavy. The man approached the bar, his leather brogues clicking sharply against the wood. He didn't see her at first. He looked at Silas, then at the rows of bottles, his expression one of mild, professional curiosity. "A gin and tonic. Hendrick’s, if you have it." The voice was deeper, stripped of the soft Welsh lilt that used to crack whenever he laughed. It was the voice of a man who gave presentations in glass-walled boardrooms. Silas glanced at Rory, his expression unreadable, then turned to the optics. Rory cleared her throat, the sound scraping against the silence of the room. "They usually stick to the classics here, Leo. You might have to settle for whatever’s in the well." The man turned. His face, once soft and prone to easy smiles during late-night study sessions in Cardiff, had sharpened. Fine lines branched from the corners of his eyes, and the boyish mess of brown hair was now slicked back, precise and severe. He stared at her for a long beat, his hand still gripping the handle of his umbrella. "Rory?" Leo took a step closer, his eyes traveling over her straight, shoulder-length black hair and the faded denim jacket she wore over her Golden Empress uniform. "You look like you’ve seen a ghost. Or a debt collector." "I heard you left. Everyone said you just... vanished. My mother mentioned something about London, but then the trail went cold." Leo moved to the stool beside her, but he didn't sit. He hovered, an intruder from a life she had buried under layers of Soho grime. "Cardiff is a small city for people with big secrets, Leo. London is better for horizontal movement." Silas set the gin and tonic down. He lingered for a second, his hand resting on the bar top, the auburn hair on his knuckles turning grey in the light. He gave Rory a sharp, questioning look. She gave a microscopic shake of her head. Silas nodded and retreated to the other end of the bar, though he stayed within earshot, his presence a silent weight. "Horizontal? You were top of the class, Rory. Brendan had a place for you at the chambers. We all thought..." "I don't care much for what the chambers thought. Or what my father planned. I moved on." Leo finally sat, the fabric of his coat whispering. He looked at her hand, where she still traced the scar. "Is he here? Evan?" The name landed like a stone in a shallow pool. Rory’s fingers clamped shut over her wrist. "Evan is a bruise that finally faded. Don’t go poking at it." "I didn't mean to. It’s just... you’re different. You used to be the loudest person in the library. Now you’re sitting in a basement bar in Soho hiding in the shadows." "I’m not hiding. I’m living. There’s a distinction you clearly haven't mastered yet in the world of high-rise law." Leo took a slow sip of his drink, his throat moving as he swallowed. He gazed at a map of 19th-century Prague pinned behind the bar. "I’m an Associate now. Senior level. I spend my days arguing over intellectual property and my nights looking at spreadsheets. It isn't what we talked about back then. We were going to change the world, remember? Human rights. Pro bono work for the miners' families." "We were twenty and fueled by cheap cider. Reality has a way of thinning the blood." "You always were the cynic, but this is... it's a lot of shadow for one person, Rory." Leo touched the sleeve of her jacket, his fingers brushing the fabric tentatively. "I stayed for a while. After you left. I went to your mother’s house. She looked older. She wouldn't tell me where you went, but she cried when I asked if you were safe. She still thinks you’re practicing law somewhere." "She thinks what she needs to think so she can sleep at night. I send her postcards. I tell her the weather is fine." "You’re a delivery driver, Rory. I saw the bag on the chair when I walked in. Golden Empress? That’s the takeaway on Wardour Street." Rory straightened her posture, the cool-headedness she’d earned over the last few years clicking into place. "It pays the rent. It keeps me moving. I don't have to carry anyone’s files, and I don't have to lie to judges. I deliver noodles to people who don't know my name. It’s remarkably liberating." Leo looked around the bar again, his eyes lingering on Silas, who was now intently cleaning the espresso machine. "And this place? It’s a hole in the wall, Rory. It smells like a retirement home for spies." "It’s home. Silas is... he's a friend." "A friend who looks like he knows thirty ways to break a man’s ribs." Silas didn't look up, but the corner of his mouth twitched. He moved to the sink, the limp in his leg more pronounced in the quiet of the pub. "He’s a good man. Which is more than I can say for most of the people we grew up with." Leo shook his head, a lock of his perfect hair falling over his forehead. He didn't push it back. For a second, the polished shell cracked, and Rory saw the boy who used to share his notes with her in the back of a lecture hall. "I regret it, you know. Not coming with you. Or not stopping you. Everything feels so heavy now. The house, the car, the partner track. It’s like I’m wearing a suit made of lead. I saw you sitting here through the window and for a moment, I thought I’d stepped back seven years. But then you looked at me." "And?" "The Rory I knew didn't have those eyes. You look like you’ve survived a war. And I look like I’ve spent the whole time in a bunker." Rory took a long swallow of her bourbon, the burn sliding down her throat. "There wasn't a war, Leo. Just a series of very loud exits. You chose the path that had a map. I chose to burn the map." "Are you happy?" "That’s a very Cardiff question. In London, we just ask if you’re busy." "You’re deflection personified." Leo reached into his pocket and pulled out a gold-embossed business card. He slid it across the bar. It looked strikingly white against the dark, scarred wood. "I’m in town for a conference. Just for the weekend. If you ever want to... I don't know. If you ever want to talk about something other than delivery routes." Rory didn't touch the card. She watched a bead of condensation roll down Leo’s gin glass, carving a path through the frost. "I don't think my father would like to know where I am, Leo. If you tell him, or if you tell my mother anything other than that I look well..." "I wouldn't. I’m not that man." "You’re wearing a three-thousand-pound coat and you’re drinking Hendrick’s in a bar that doesn't have a cocktail menu. You’re exactly that man." Leo let out a breath that was half-laugh, half-sigh. He finished his drink in one go and stood up, the chair scraping sharply. He looked at the card on the bar, then at her. He reached out as if to touch her shoulder, but his hand hovered in the air before dropping back to his side. "You have a crescent scar on your wrist, and you still have that habit of biting your lip when you’re lying. Some things don't change, Rory. No matter how much Soho you pour over them." He turned and walked toward the door. The green neon from the sign outside washed over him as he opened it, a brief flash of emerald before the London rain swallowed him whole. The silence returned to The Raven’s Nest, heavier than before. Rory stared at the white business card. The name *Leo Vance* was printed in a crisp, sans-serif font. Silas limped back toward her. He picked up Leo’s empty glass and set it in the rack. He didn't ask who the man was. He didn't ask why Rory’s hand was shaking just enough to make the ice clink in her glass. "He forgot his umbrella," Silas remarked, nodding toward the black object leaning against the bar. Rory looked at the umbrella. It was sleek, expensive, and entirely out of place. "He was always forgetting things," she said. She picked up the business card. The edges were sharp and clean. She thought about the library in Cardiff, the smell of damp coats and old ink, and the way Leo used to look at her before everything went wrong. She thought about the girl who wanted to change the world. Rory stood up and walked to the small bin behind the bar. She dropped the card inside. "Keep the umbrella, Silas. You can give it to someone who needs to stay dry." "And you?" Rory pulled her denim jacket tighter around her chest. She looked at the green neon light shivering in the puddles outside the window. "I’ve always preferred the rain."
created_at"2026-02-25T00:53:31.539Z" 2/25/2026, 12:53:31 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.05
leniency0.1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.02% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1767
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"sharply"
count2
3
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"suddenly"
2"sharply"
3"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
77.36% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1767
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"traced"
count2
1
word"lilt"
count1
2
word"unreadable"
count1
3
word"silence"
count2
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"perfect"
count1
highlights
0"traced"
1"lilt"
2"unreadable"
3"silence"
4"weight"
5"perfect"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences78
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences78
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences116
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen59
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords2
totalWords1767
ratio0.001
matches
0"Leo Vance"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
63.38% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions54
wordCount1039
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.73
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Soho2
Raven2
Nest2
Highland1
Rory18
Silas9
Welsh1
Cardiff2
Golden1
Empress1
Prague1
Leo13
London1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Silas"
2"Leo"
places
0"Soho"
1"Raven"
2"Highland"
3"Cardiff"
4"Prague"
5"London"
globalScore0.634
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences70
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1767
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences116
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs72
mean24.54
std17.9
cv0.729
sampleLengths
087
179
29
359
410
536
69
730
812
913
1018
1160
121
1326
1411
1521
1626
1717
1866
1920
2017
2120
224
2317
2412
2531
2619
2726
2845
2916
3017
3113
3241
3324
3424
3516
3636
3719
3818
397
4014
4129
4220
4346
4459
451
4627
4714
4826
493
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences78
matches
0"was printed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs158
matches
0"was shaking"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences116
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1049
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"outside washed over him"
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.02669208770257388
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.010486177311725452
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences116
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences116
mean15.23
std9.48
cv0.623
sampleLengths
017
122
225
323
410
518
628
723
89
919
1018
1122
122
138
1413
156
1617
179
1817
1913
2012
2113
2218
233
2417
2523
2617
271
2826
2911
3021
3111
3215
3317
347
3523
367
378
3821
3920
4017
419
4211
434
4410
457
4612
4731
4819
4914
37.07% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.22413793103448276
totalSentences116
uniqueOpeners26
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
ratio0
41.05% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences76
matches
0"She traced the crescent scar"
1"He reached for a bottle"
2"He slid the drink toward"
3"He wore a charcoal wool"
4"He paused, blinking against the"
5"He didn't see her at"
6"He looked at Silas, then"
7"It was the voice of"
8"His face, once soft and"
9"He stared at her for"
10"He hovered, an intruder from"
11"He lingered for a second,"
12"He gave Rory a sharp,"
13"She gave a microscopic shake"
14"He looked at her hand,"
15"He gazed at a map"
16"He moved to the sink,"
17"He didn't push it back."
18"He slid it across the"
19"It looked strikingly white against"
ratio0.447
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount72
totalSentences76
matches
0"Rory sat at the far"
1"She traced the crescent scar"
2"Silas moved behind the bar"
3"The slight drag of his"
4"He reached for a bottle"
5"He slid the drink toward"
6"The bell above the door"
7"A man stepped in, shaking"
8"He wore a charcoal wool"
9"He paused, blinking against the"
10"The glass in her hand"
11"The man approached the bar,"
12"He didn't see her at"
13"He looked at Silas, then"
14"The voice was deeper, stripped"
15"It was the voice of"
16"Silas glanced at Rory, his"
17"Rory cleared her throat, the"
18"The man turned."
19"His face, once soft and"
ratio0.947
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
ratio0
60.44% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences52
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"A man stepped in, shaking a black umbrella that looked expensive enough to cover Rory’s rent for a month."
1"He wore a charcoal wool overcoat, perfectly tailored to shoulders that had broadened since Rory last saw them."
2"It was the voice of a man who gave presentations in glass-walled boardrooms."
3"He lingered for a second, his hand resting on the bar top, the auburn hair on his knuckles turning grey in the light."
4"Leo looked around the bar again, his eyes lingering on Silas, who was now intently cleaning the espresso machine."
5"Leo let out a breath that was half-laugh, half-sigh."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.025
leniency0.05
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
81.8775%