Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ94KQ0WXPNJQ8WADXS3MR8D

Run Details

Duration:
27.1s
Cost:
$0.015352
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Harlow squeezed between the metal fence and the brick wall, dust blooming around her knees. She ducked under a sagging pipe, its rust flaking onto her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair. Her worn leather watch, a solid weight on her left wrist, showed 03:17. Moonlight bled a faint silver through cracks in the grime-coated vents above, slicing thin light across the derelict Tube station. Emergency lights strung by forensics cast long, skeletal shadows across the platforms, illuminating graffiti-scarred walls and twisted tracks. She took it all in, her sharp jaw set, a familiar cold knot tightening in her gut. She’d seen unusual. This felt… different. DS Miller, a man built like a bulldog and just as subtle, waited for her at the base of the stairs, shrugging into his own forensic suit, the plastic crinkling with every movement. He wiped sweat from his brow, smearing it on the clear visor. "Glad you could make it, Quinn," Miller’s gravelly voice echoed off the tiled walls. "Another Friday night special for Her Majesty's finest." Harlow didn't acknowledge the comment. She pulled on her own suit, the sterile fabric a stark contrast to the grit underfoot. Her eyes swept the scene from the entrance, cataloging every detail before stepping further inside. She spotted the faint, almost imperceptible shimmer near the ventilation shafts, a distortion in the air. A trick of the light, perhaps, but it pricked at her. "What have we got?" Harlow’s voice was low, cutting through the cavernous space between them. Her military precision in movement was a silent question. Miller gestured towards the far end of the platform where a body lay. "Male, mid-thirties, looks like. Found by a pair of urban explorers. Didn't touch anything, apparently. Good kids, for once." He pointed to a small, discarded camera peeking from beneath a rusted metal barrel near the wall. "His, probably. Or theirs. We're still checking.” "How?" Harlow’s gaze remained fixed on the far end. "Blunt force trauma to the head, primary assessment," Miller explained, following her stare. "Looks like he tripped or fell, hit his head on the rail." He moved towards the body, his heavy boots crunching on loose debris. "Or someone helped him fall. Mugging gone sideways, maybe. No wallet, no phone. Pockets turned inside out." Harlow stepped onto the platform, her boots quiet on the concrete. The smell was complex: damp concrete, rusty metal, something acrid beneath it, like burnt sugar. Forensic officers moved with practiced care, their flashlights dancing over the scene. The train tracks glinted under their beams, disappearing into the darkness of the tunnels. She stopped several meters from the body, letting her eyes travel the length of the platform. This wasn't just an abandoned station. Signs of recent occupation laced the space. Not tramps, or kids with spray paint. Elaborate, faded chalk marks bloomed on the walls, strange symbols woven into complex patterns, almost hidden by layers of dust. Small, charred depressions marred the floor in irregular circles. Some, like shallow craters, indicated something intensely hot had rested there, briefly. "Tripped?" Harlow walked slowly, her gaze sweeping from the man to the surroundings and back. Her bearing remained upright, unwavering. "In a place like this, he'd be lucky not to trip every five feet." The victim lay slumped against a structural pillar, head angled unnaturally. A dark, tacky stain bloomed on the concrete beneath him. His clothes, practical and well-worn though without obvious labels, showed no signs of a struggle beyond the head wound. No torn fabric, no scuff marks on his knees or palms. His hands were clasped loosely, palms facing upwards, as if he had been holding something delicate before he fell. A faint reddish-brown residue coated his fingertips. Miller knelt beside the body, careful not to disturb the scene. "Could have been unexpected. Came out of the tunnel, maybe surprising someone." He gestured down the track. "Found a length of rebar down there. Looks like the murder weapon." Harlow didn’t follow his gaze down the dark tunnel. She focused on the victim’s hands. The absence of a defensive wound on his forearms, the way his hands rested… it didn't fit. A man fighting for his life would instinctively raise his arms. She stepped closer, her keen brown eyes narrowing. The reddish-brown stain on his fingertips wasn't just blood. It shimmered with an almost iridescent quality, like dried beetle wings, catching the faint light. And beneath his left hand, partially obscured by the sleeve of his jacket, lay a small, dark bone, carved crudely into the shape of a key. "Rebar looks like a fit for the wound geometry," Miller continued, oblivious to Harlow's detailed observation. "The angle of impact, the sheer force... matches." Harlow straightened, her gaze fixing on Miller. "Then why is there no secondary impact?" Miller looked up from the victim. "What do you mean?" "If he fell, hitting his head here," Harlow tapped the pillar beside the victim’s head wound, "his body would have continued its momentum. He'd have slid, or his head would bounce. There's no scuffing on the pillar, no secondary blood spatter further down. Just one neat, dark pool." She paused, her eyes sweeping over the intricate, faded chalk marks again. "And if he was mugged, why no signs of struggle beyond the blow? What did the mugger want? His wallet and phone? Nothing else valuable? Look at his clothes, quality fabric, no brand names – not the kind of target for a casual street mugging. He looks like someone who knew his way around." Miller frowned, slowly rising. "He could have been stunned by the first blow. Dropped instantly." "Perhaps," Harlow conceded, her tone flat. Her gaze rested on the small bone key again. "And this?" She nudged it carefully with the toe of her boot, indicating it to the attending forensic technician. The technician, a young woman with nervous eyes, carefully bagged the bone. "Looks like carved bone, Detective. Lucky we spotted it." "Lucky indeed," Harlow murmured, more to herself than to the tech. She remembered vague reports from other precincts, whispers of strange tokens found at unusual scenes. Unexplained circumstances. Morris's ghost stirred in the dust of her memory. She moved away from the body, walking the perimeter of the platform. Her eyes caught on something else. A faint, almost transparent residue clinging to the rough concrete near one of the chalk circles. It wasn't dust. It shifted, reflecting the emergency lights with an inner glow, like powdered mother-of-pearl. She crouched, examining it closely. It carried that acrid, burnt-sugar smell, but with something else: ozone, like after a lightning strike. "Miller," she called, without turning. "Did the explorers note anything else, anything unusual prior to finding the body?" Miller pulled out his notepad. "Just that the tunnels felt 'weird.' Said they heard strange noises, like whispers, but put it down to the acoustics. Kids." He shook his head. Harlow didn’t dismiss it. She remembered the shimmer she’d seen upon entering. The subtle distortion in the air. The whispers Morris had reported before… before. "The head wound you described," Harlow continued, her voice gaining a sharper edge, "blunt force trauma. Is it consistent with a normal rebar strike?" Miller thumbed through his notes. "Seems to be, Detective. Pretty nasty." "I ask because a fall or a single blow from an attacker would not leave the specific kind of indentation I'm seeing," Harlow stated, her brown eyes fixed on the victim's injury, even from across the platform. "The wound on his scalp looks too clean, too… precise. As though something, perhaps something with a sharper edge than rebar, but just as heavy, struck him once, perfectly. Not a chaotic blow, not a struggle. An execution." Miller walked back towards her, a skeptical line forming between his eyebrows. "Execution, Quinn? In a derelict Tube station? For what? A bone? You're grasping at straws. It's a mugging, plain and simple." Harlow stood, turning to face him. Her gaze was steady, unwavering. "His pockets are turned out, you said. What about the absence of anything else? No empty wallet, no phone case left behind. No keys? No watch?" She looked at her own worn leather watch. "Most people wear a watch." Miller paused, running a hand over his chin. "We're still processing. Could be the attacker took everything." "Everything valuable, yes. But the victim doesn't have the typical profile of someone carrying significant cash or high-end electronics for a 'casual' mugging. And the bone key. Why leave that? Unless it was considered worthless." Harlow gestured around the platform, encompassing the strange markings, the almost invisible residue, the very air itself. "This isn't a mugging, Miller. This is a transaction." She walked back to the victim. The reddish-brown residue on his fingers now fascinated her. She remembered Miller saying the urban explorers found him. But the crime scene, despite the body, seemed too quiet, too undisturbed for a natural death or a violent struggle. It hinted at a rushed departure, not a meticulous cleanup. "Look at the hands again," Harlow pointed. "They're not clenched, not in defense. They're open, as if releasing something. And that residue… it's not blood. Not entirely. It's iridescent. When did you last see blood shimmer like that?" Miller leaned closer, squinting. "Never. But it could be some chemical, something he'd touched." "Or something he *was*," Harlow countered, her voice a low murmur. She knelt, ignoring the discomfort of the plastic suit against the cold concrete. Her eyes scanned the blood pool. It was dark, almost black in places, but at its very edges, she saw it: tiny, intricate spirals, like miniature sea shells, visible only to the keenest eye. Patterns woven into the drying fluid. Harlow stood, her gaze moving from the patterned blood to the victim’s body, then sweeping across the entire platform, finally landing on the distant, shadowy mouth of the tunnel. This man hadn't just tripped while being mugged. He had been part of something far more complex, something that whispered from the fringes of understanding. The Veil Market, some old-timer on the force had once drunkenly muttered about. Supernatural black market. A hidden place that moved. "Get me a full chemical analysis on that residue," Harlow told Miller, her eyes now burning with a quiet intensity. "And I want a specialist to examine those chalk markings. Someone who knows things beyond graffiti." She pointed to the iridescent stain. "And I want a full breakdown of the victim's pockets, every fibre, every speck of dust. If he was mugged, the perp would have been looking for quick cash, not for specific, arcane items. Unless..." She left the implication hanging in the stale air, allowing Miller to ponder it as she turned to stare into the vast, echoing darkness of the tunnel mouth. The mundane interpretation suddenly seemed too flimsy, too thin to hold the weight of what lay before them.
created_at"2026-02-25T00:53:59.97Z" 2/25/2026, 12:53:59 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Harlow walked slowly [slowly]"
1"Harlow gestured around [around]"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.091
72.36% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1809
totalAiIsmAdverbs10
found
0
adverb"intensely"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count2
2
adverb"loosely"
count1
3
adverb"carefully"
count2
4
adverb"perfectly"
count1
5
adverb"very"
count2
6
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"intensely"
1"slowly"
2"loosely"
3"carefully"
4"perfectly"
5"very"
6"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
47.48% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1809
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"echoed"
count1
3
word"stark"
count1
4
word"complex"
count3
5
word"dancing"
count1
6
word"unwavering"
count2
7
word"shimmered"
count1
8
word"intricate"
count2
9
word"chaotic"
count1
10
word"scanned"
count1
11
word"intensity"
count1
12
word"implication"
count1
13
word"echoing"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"familiar"
2"echoed"
3"stark"
4"complex"
5"dancing"
6"unwavering"
7"shimmered"
8"intricate"
9"chaotic"
10"scanned"
11"intensity"
12"implication"
13"echoing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences113
matches(empty)
92.29% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences113
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences134
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen60
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1810
ratio0.001
matches
0"was"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions43
wordCount1211
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.73
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Miller17
Harlow21
Morris2
Veil1
Market1
persons
0"Miller"
1"Harlow"
2"Morris"
places(empty)
globalScore0.633
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences89
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1810
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences134
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean45.25
std27.3
cv0.603
sampleLengths
0104
145
222
363
424
556
69
754
852
977
1034
1177
1240
13101
1424
1514
1610
17114
1815
1934
2021
2137
2271
2318
2430
2525
2624
2711
2875
2933
3050
3117
3261
3354
3438
3514
3664
3775
3877
3946
99.05% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences113
matches
0"were clasped"
1"being mugged"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs202
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences134
ratio0
matches(empty)
82.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1223
adjectiveStacks3
stackExamples
0"illuminating graffiti-scarred walls"
1"faint reddish-brown residue"
2"acrid, burnt-sugar smell,"
adverbCount48
adverbRatio0.039247751430907606
lyAdverbCount18
lyAdverbRatio0.014717906786590351
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences134
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences134
mean13.51
std10.13
cv0.75
sampleLengths
015
115
213
320
418
517
63
72
81
933
1012
1114
128
135
1416
1515
1616
1711
1815
199
2013
2136
227
239
2413
2524
2617
2711
2815
2912
3014
3116
326
337
347
3520
369
3712
3815
395
4014
4111
4210
4319
4411
4519
467
4711
4817
4912
67.91% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.4253731343283582
totalSentences134
uniqueOpeners57
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences108
matches(empty)
ratio0
60.74% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount43
totalSentences108
matches
0"She ducked under a sagging"
1"Her worn leather watch, a"
2"She took it all in,"
3"She’d seen unusual."
4"He wiped sweat from his"
5"She pulled on her own"
6"Her eyes swept the scene"
7"She spotted the faint, almost"
8"Her military precision in movement"
9"He pointed to a small,"
10"He moved towards the body,"
11"She stopped several meters from"
12"Her bearing remained upright, unwavering."
13"His clothes, practical and well-worn"
14"His hands were clasped loosely,"
15"He gestured down the track"
16"She focused on the victim’s"
17"it didn't fit."
18"She stepped closer, her keen"
19"It shimmered with an almost"
ratio0.398
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount100
totalSentences108
matches
0"Harlow squeezed between the metal"
1"She ducked under a sagging"
2"Her worn leather watch, a"
3"Moonlight bled a faint silver"
4"Emergency lights strung by forensics"
5"She took it all in,"
6"She’d seen unusual."
7"DS Miller, a man built"
8"He wiped sweat from his"
9"Miller’s gravelly voice echoed off"
10"Harlow didn't acknowledge the comment."
11"She pulled on her own"
12"Her eyes swept the scene"
13"She spotted the faint, almost"
14"A trick of the light,"
15"Harlow’s voice was low, cutting"
16"Her military precision in movement"
17"Miller gestured towards the far"
18"He pointed to a small,"
19"Harlow’s gaze remained fixed on"
ratio0.926
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences108
matches(empty)
ratio0
98.21% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"His hands were clasped loosely, palms facing upwards, as if he had been holding something delicate before he fell."
1"Harlow stood, her gaze moving from the patterned blood to the victim’s body, then sweeping across the entire platform, finally landing on the distant, shadowy m…"
2"He had been part of something far more complex, something that whispered from the fringes of understanding."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"He moved, his heavy boots crunching on loose debris"
1"Harlow conceded, her tone flat"
2"Harlow murmured, more to herself than to the tech"
3"she called, without turning"
4"Harlow continued, her voice gaining a sharper edge,"
5"Harlow countered, her voice a low murmur"
13.64% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"Miller explained (explain)"
1"Miller continued (continue)"
2"Harlow conceded (concede)"
3"Harlow murmured (murmur)"
4"Harlow continued (continue)"
5"Harlow stated (state)"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.182
leniency0.364
rawRatio0.75
effectiveRatio0.273
76.1229%