Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ94MFG8Z865ZW8HFZ6RH947

Run Details

Duration:
20.3s
Cost:
$0.011771
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Harlow Quinn’s breath tore through her lungs. Rain lashed her face, a cold slap against her skin. Tomás Herrera, a dark blur framed by the neon glow of a late-night kebab shop, surged ahead. His curly dark hair, plastered to his scalp, offered no resistance to the deluge. He weaved through bins, a ghost slipping between the overflowing rubbish and the peeling paint of Soho’s narrow alleyways. Her worn leather watch, tight on her left wrist, indicated a minute had passed since she first spotted him. Eighteen years on the force taught her to trust gut over clock. This wasn't a casual stroll. He knew she was there. His eyes, warm brown usually, had flashed with stark recognition when their paths crossed under the shimmering reflection of Rupert Street. Then he bolted. Her boots slapped against the wet pavement, a rhythmic echo to her own pounding heart. The pursuit had dragged them west, then north, past the slumbering theatres, a silent ballet of pursuit and evasion. Tomás’s olive skin offered a stark contrast to the pale brickwork as he launched himself over a low wall. He landed light, a cat, then vanished into the deeper shadows of a service lane. Quinn hurdled the wall, her movements economical, honed by years of training. A shard of pain flared in her left knee, a memory of a bad jump during an old raid. She ignored it. The alley reeked of stale beer and damp earth. Water streamed from blocked gutters, forming muddy rivulets that snaked towards a rattling drain. "Herrera!" Her voice, rough with exertion, bounced off the grimy walls. "Stop." She grimaced. It felt amateurish, useless. He wouldn't. He never did. Tomás appeared at the far end, silhouetted against a distant streetlamp. A quick glance over his shoulder. He saw her. His pace intensified, a desperate sprint. His Saint Christopher medallion, a faint glint against his chest, bounced with each stride. He vanished around the corner. Quinn pushed harder. Her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair was soaked, dripping cold rivulets down her neck. Her sharp jaw was set. This wasn't just about the case; it was about the missing pieces, the ones that kept her awake, the pieces Morris knew. Herrera always seemed to hover on the edge of her dark map. The alley opened onto a wider thoroughfare, Camden High Street, a river of red brake lights and shimmering black tarmac. Tomás was already a block ahead, weaving through the sparse traffic, a dark phantom among the yellow cabs. He moved with a practiced fluidity, a man who knew these streets intimately. Quinn dodged a bus, ignoring the driver's blare. The rain had intensified, a solid sheet now, blurring the world into streaks of light and shadow. The scent of ozone and wet asphalt filled the air. She angled her sprint, cutting through a narrow pedestrian alley, banking on local knowledge to shave off his lead. He was fast. Faster than she predicted. He didn't look back again, a sign he knew his escape route, or that she was closer than he wanted. He hung a sharp right into a derelict side street. The buildings here were husks, windows boarded, graffiti claiming the brickwork. Lampposts flickered, casting long, distorted shadows that danced with the pounding rain. This street sloped downwards, away from the hum of traffic, a forgotten artery leading into the city’s underbelly. The air grew colder, heavy with the metallic tang of damp concrete. Tomás reached what looked like a collapsed storefront, its iron gate rusted shut, then slipped through a narrow gap in the corrugated metal. Gone. Quinn reached the gap. Her gaze scanned the entrance. No obvious signs, no security cameras. Just darkness beyond the metal. She squeezed through, tearing her jacket on a jagged edge. Inside, the space was an unlit antechamber, the ground uneven with broken glass and wet debris. The air was thick, still, an oppressive quiet after the street’s cacophony. A faint, almost imperceptible tremor resonated through the floor. The scent of damp earth combined with something else, a sweet, earthy musk, unfamiliar, intriguing. Tomás was nowhere in sight. Only a deeper darkness awaited. She took a step forward, her hand instinctively going to the grip of her sidearm. The chamber smelled of stale electricity, a ghost of the power that once coursed through these walls. She saw an opening, a black maw leading down a set of eroded concrete steps. The air grew cooler, carrying a new scent now – something ancient, earthy, and strangely alive. She descended, one measured step at a time. The world narrowed to the beam of her flashlight. The steps ended on a platform. She was in a disused Tube station. Rusting tracks lay coated in a thick layer of grit and grime. Stalactites of calcium clung to the arched ceiling, reflecting the sickly yellow glow of her light. The space was enormous, desolate. Then, she heard it. A faint murmur, a low hum of voices. And a strange, flickering light. Not a natural light. It pulsed with an alien rhythm from deeper within the tunnel. Tomás stepped from behind a crumbling pillar, a hand on his chest, catching his breath. He saw her, his eyes wide. He held something in his hand, a small, polished object. He pressed it against a section of the tunnel wall. A section of the wall, disguised as natural rock formation, slid inward with a guttural groan of turning gears she hadn't heard before. Beyond it, a vibrant, chaotic light spilled out. A cacophony of sound replaced the tomb-like silence: hawkers' cries, the clang of metal, the murmur of a crowd. The strange musk intensified, mingling now with exotic spices and something else, something primal, almost like freshly spilled blood. Tomás looked back at Quinn, his face etched with a mix of defiance and exhaustion. He held up the object, a tiny, bleached bone, against the opening. As if a silent signal, the light surged, beckoning him. He slipped through the shifting wall. Quinn stood at the threshold of the concealed entrance. The "wall" was now a doorway, open to a world she couldn't comprehend. She saw figures moving inside, not all of them human. Shadows stretched long and grotesque, not from any familiar light source. The air thrummed with raw energy. The hidden market pulsed like a living thing. The sounds were overwhelming – conversations in languages she had never heard, the sharp clang of metal, the low murmur of what sounded like an animal. The smells were a riot: burning incense, cured meats, damp earth, and something acrid, chemical, like burnt ozone. Her training screamed danger. Every fibre of her being told her to stop. This wasn't a police operation. This wasn't the London she knew. This was something else entirely. A hulking figure, more shadow than substance, moved past the gap in the wall, its eyes glowing with a faint, internal luminescence. Its head tilted, as if sensing her presence, though it did not directly look at her. The bone token. That was the entry. She had seen Tomás use it. She didn't have one. The opening, which had hesitated for a moment, began to slide closed again, slowly, inexorably, with the same grinding groan. Tomás was gone. Vanished into the market. Quinn stared, her heart hammering against her ribs. Logic demanded withdrawal. Radio for backup. Explain this. But what would she say? "I tracked a former paramedic into a fantasy realm beneath Camden?" They would laugh her out of the force. Send her to a shrink. The memory of Morris, his frantic, desperate whispers just before he vanished, flashed in her mind. *There are things, Harlow. Things they don't teach you in the academy.* This was it. The edge of the map. The line in the sand. Every instinct, years of methodical procedure, urged caution. But a deeper, primal urge, fueled by the unsolved mystery of her partner's death, pulled her forward. This was where the answers were. This was where Herrera led her. The gap narrowed further, a sliver of the chaotic market visible. She could still hear the distant hum. The decision hung heavy in the damp, subterranean air. To step in was to abandon everything she knew, to chase a ghost into an unknown darkness. To walk away meant Morris remained just a memory, an unresolved scar. Her jaw tightened. Her hand left the butt of her pistol. She pushed her shoulders back, the military precision returning to her almost unconsciously, a shield against the fear. The stench of that market, that primal hum, drew her in. She took a deep breath.
created_at"2026-02-25T00:54:25.039Z" 2/25/2026, 12:54:25 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.04% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1436
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"inexorably"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"inexorably"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
12.95% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1436
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"stark"
count2
1
word"rhythmic"
count1
2
word"echo"
count1
3
word"pounding"
count2
4
word"glint"
count1
5
word"flickered"
count1
6
word"scanned"
count1
7
word"oppressive"
count1
8
word"cacophony"
count2
9
word"resonated"
count1
10
word"intriguing"
count1
11
word"maw"
count1
12
word"measured"
count1
13
word"pulsed"
count2
14
word"chaotic"
count2
15
word"silence"
count1
16
word"etched"
count1
17
word"familiar"
count1
18
word"hulking"
count1
19
word"methodical"
count1
highlights
0"stark"
1"rhythmic"
2"echo"
3"pounding"
4"glint"
5"flickered"
6"scanned"
7"oppressive"
8"cacophony"
9"resonated"
10"intriguing"
11"maw"
12"measured"
13"pulsed"
14"chaotic"
15"silence"
16"etched"
17"familiar"
18"hulking"
19"methodical"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences140
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences140
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences140
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords12
totalWords1438
ratio0.008
matches
0"There are things, Harlow. Things they don't teach you in the academy."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount1413
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity0.71
worstName"Tomás"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Quinn8
Herrera3
Soho1
Rupert1
Street2
Saint1
Christopher1
Morris3
Camden1
High1
Tube1
London1
Tomás10
Send1
Harlow2
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Herrera"
2"Saint"
3"Christopher"
4"Morris"
5"Tomás"
places
0"Soho"
1"Rupert"
2"Street"
3"Camden"
4"High"
5"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
73.47% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences98
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"looked like a collapsed storefront, its i"
1"sounded like an animal"
2"as if sensing her presence, though it did not directly look at her"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1438
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences140
matches(empty)
65.91% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs27
mean53.26
std20.28
cv0.381
sampleLengths
067
165
268
357
423
545
655
751
854
960
1054
1158
1234
1363
1463
1532
1641
1769
1843
1949
2081
2138
2217
2327
24123
2556
2645
97.74% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences140
matches
0"was soaked"
1"being told"
2"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs231
matches(empty)
81.63% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences140
ratio0.021
matches
0"This wasn't just about the case; it was about the missing pieces, the ones that kept her awake, the pieces Morris knew."
1"The air grew cooler, carrying a new scent now – something ancient, earthy, and strangely alive."
2"The sounds were overwhelming – conversations in languages she had never heard, the sharp clang of metal, the low murmur of what sounded like an animal."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount938
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.026652452025586353
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.009594882729211088
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences140
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences140
mean10.27
std5.87
cv0.571
sampleLengths
07
110
217
314
419
519
612
75
85
921
103
1115
1219
1319
1415
1512
1619
173
189
1914
2011
213
224
232
243
2511
266
273
286
2914
305
313
3213
335
3422
3512
3620
3718
3813
398
4017
4110
4219
433
444
4520
4610
4711
4812
4918
39.52% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.3142857142857143
totalSentences140
uniqueOpeners44
98.04% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences136
matches
0"Then he bolted."
1"Just darkness beyond the metal."
2"Only a deeper darkness awaited."
3"Then, she heard it."
ratio0.029
87.65% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount45
totalSentences136
matches
0"His curly dark hair, plastered"
1"He weaved through bins, a"
2"Her worn leather watch, tight"
3"He knew she was there."
4"His eyes, warm brown usually,"
5"Her boots slapped against the"
6"He landed light, a cat,"
7"She ignored it."
8"Her voice, rough with exertion,"
9"It felt amateurish, useless."
10"He never did."
11"He saw her."
12"His pace intensified, a desperate"
13"His Saint Christopher medallion, a"
14"He vanished around the corner."
15"Her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair"
16"Her sharp jaw was set."
17"He moved with a practiced"
18"She angled her sprint, cutting"
19"He was fast."
ratio0.331
33.53% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount116
totalSentences136
matches
0"Harlow Quinn’s breath tore through"
1"Rain lashed her face, a"
2"Tomás Herrera, a dark blur"
3"His curly dark hair, plastered"
4"He weaved through bins, a"
5"Her worn leather watch, tight"
6"This wasn't a casual stroll."
7"He knew she was there."
8"His eyes, warm brown usually,"
9"Her boots slapped against the"
10"The pursuit had dragged them"
11"Tomás’s olive skin offered a"
12"He landed light, a cat,"
13"Quinn hurdled the wall, her"
14"A shard of pain flared"
15"She ignored it."
16"The alley reeked of stale"
17"Water streamed from blocked gutters,"
18"Her voice, rough with exertion,"
19"It felt amateurish, useless."
ratio0.853
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences136
matches
0"As if a silent signal,"
1"To step in was to"
2"To walk away meant Morris"
ratio0.022
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences66
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"She angled her sprint, cutting through a narrow pedestrian alley, banking on local knowledge to shave off his lead."
1"Lampposts flickered, casting long, distorted shadows that danced with the pounding rain."
2"Tomás stepped from behind a crumbling pillar, a hand on his chest, catching his breath."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
89.4495%