Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ94MWEAKQ2W8EG5P48P5TN9

Run Details

Duration:
32.9s
Cost:
$0.014160
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign outside The Raven’s Nest hummed, a low-frequency vibration that rattled the windowpanes and bled a sickly emerald hue onto the rain-slicked Soho pavement. Inside, the world slowed. Shadows pooled in the corners of the bar, trapped between the framed maps of 19th-century London and the yellowed photographs of men who had long since vanished. Aurora Carter sat at the far end of the mahogany bar, her fingers tracing the rim of a glass of lukewarm water. The straight, shoulder-length black hair she’d cut herself fell forward, obscuring her profile. She watched Silas Blackwood through the mirror behind the rows of amber bottles. Silas moved with a practiced, economy of motion, his auburn hair streaked with grey catching the dim light. He dragged his left leg in a slight, rhythmic limp as he polished a highball glass. The silver signet ring on his right hand clinked against the glass, a steady, metallic ticking that marked the passing minutes. The door chime gave a lonely, singular ring. Cold air rushed into the room, smelling of wet asphalt and expensive cologne. Aurora didn't turn. She felt the shift in the room before she saw it. Silas’s hazel eyes flicked toward the entrance, his hands going still. He didn't greet the newcomer. He simply waited, the rag draped over his shoulder. A man stepped into the circle of green light cast by the window. He wore a charcoal wool coat over a tailored navy suit. He looked like the Cardiff courtrooms Aurora had fled—polished, rigid, and entirely out of place in a Soho basement. He scanned the room, his eyes skipping over the maps until they landed on the woman at the end of the bar. "Laila?" The name hit Aurora like a physical blow. It was a ghost of a name, one she hadn't worn since the nights she spent studying tort law under the glow of a library lamp in Wales. She didn't look up. She looked at the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a childhood mark that felt like the only permanent thing she owned. "The bar is closed for private prep, mate," Silas said. His voice was a gravelly rumble that carried the weight of his years in the field. He didn't move from behind the tap, but his posture flattened, the quiet authority of a man who knew exactly where the exits were. The man ignored Silas. He took three steps toward Aurora, his leather soles clicking on the hardwood. "It is you. I thought—I told myself I was imagining it when I saw you yesterday near the Golden Empress." Aurora finally turned her head. Her bright blue eyes were cold, reflecting the neon green from the street. "Julian." "You look..." Julian searched for a word, his gaze traveling over her scuffed boots and the faded denim of her jacket. "Different. We thought you went to Bristol. Your father told everyone you were working for a firm in the West Country." Aurora stood up, her 5'6" frame suddenly taking up more space. She didn't offer a chair. "My father says a lot of things to keep the neighbors from whispering. How did you find this place?" Julian gestured vaguely toward the door. "I followed the bike. The one with the Golden Empress box on the back. I didn't want to believe it. A delivery person, Rory? After everything? You were the top of the bench. You had the Carter name behind you." "I have my own name now," Aurora said. She looked at Silas. "Silas, give him a drink. He looks like he’s seen a ghost." Silas reached for a bottle of Highland malt without being asked. He poured a double, the liquid hitting the glass with a heavy splash. He slid it across the bar. The glass stopped exactly in front of Julian. Julian didn't touch the drink. He stared at Aurora, his face tight with a mixture of pity and a burgeoning, misplaced anger. "Evan still asks about you. He was devastated when you disappeared. To leave like that, in the middle of the night, without a word to your mother—" "Don't speak his name in here," Aurora snapped. The cool-headed mask she wore daily slipped, revealing the jagged edge of the woman who had run from Cardiff with nothing but a rucksack and a bruised ribcage. "And don't talk to me about my mother. You didn't see the letters I sent that she never answered." Julian flapped a hand as if she were being hysterical. "She was hurt, Rory. We all were. You were meant for the Bar. You were supposed to be standing next to me at the firm. Instead, I find you in a hole in Soho, living like a runaway." "I'm not a runaway," Aurora said. She walked toward him, her steps silent unlike his. She stopped just outside his personal space, the scent of his expensive life clashing with the smell of the damp wood and Silas’s pipe tobacco. "I’m exactly where I chose to be. I don't answer to the chambers. I don't answer to my father’s ideas of what a woman with a barrister’s blood should do with her time." Julian finally took a sip of the scotch. He winced at the strength of it. "And this is it? This is the grand life? Delivering noodles and hiding in a bar owned by—" He looked at Silas, noting the limp, the grey-streaked hair, and the way Silas was currently cleaning a knife with a focused intensity. "What is this place, Rory? It feels like a tomb." "It’s a sanctuary," Silas said. He leaned forward, his signet ring catching the light. "And the lady asked you not to mention certain names. I’d listen to her. She’s smarter than you, and she’s got better aim." Julian laughed, a sharp, brittle sound. "You've always had a flair for the dramatic, Rory. But look at you. You’ve lost weight. You have circles under your eyes. You’re twenty-five years old and you look like you’ve lived fifty." "Time moves differently when you’re not insulated by a trust fund and a degree from Cardiff University," Aurora said. She reached out and touched the sleeve of his charcoal coat. The wool was fine, soft. "You look exactly the same, Julian. That’s the tragedy. You haven't changed a single thought since we were twenty. You still think the world is a series of ladder rungs." "Because it is," Julian said. He reached for her hand, but she pulled back, her left wrist disappearing into her sleeve. "Come home. I can talk to your father. We can fix the gap in your CV. We can tell people you were traveling. A sabbatical. People love a sabbatical." Aurora looked at the maps on the wall. They were outdated, showing empires that no longer existed and borders that had been redrawn in blood. "I don't have a gap in my life, Julian. I have a life. It’s just not one you can see from your office window." "You deliver food," Julian said, his voice dropping to a whisper. "You live above a pub. This isn't a life. It’s a penance." "It’s a clearing," Aurora said. She looked him straight in the eyes, her blue gaze unwavering. "I cleared away the things that were killing me. If I look like I’ve lived fifty years, it’s because I spent the last five actually breathing. I don't want the firm. I don't want the house in Penarth. And I definitely don't want the man you still call a friend." Julian set the glass down. The whiskey was half-finished. He looked around the room again, his eyes lingering on the bookshelf that hid Silas’s secret room. He looked like he wanted to say something profound, something that would crack her resolve and bring his old friend back to the fold. "Your father is retiring next year," Julian said. "He wanted you to take his seat at the table." "He should have raised a daughter who wanted a seat, then," Aurora said. "Not a daughter who wanted a way out." Silas moved to the end of the bar and picked up the half-empty glass. He dumped the contents into the sink and wiped the mahogany dry. The finality of the movement was punctuated by the hum of the neon sign. Julian straightened his coat. He looked at Aurora one last time, his face settling into a mask of disappointment. "You’ve wasted yourself, Laila. You had everything." "I have everything I need," she said. Julian turned and walked toward the door. He didn't look back. The chime rang again, a sharp, metallic note that cut through the silence of the bar. The cold air rushed in and then was choked off as the door clicked shut. Aurora stayed standing in the middle of the room. The green light from the window made her look like a statue carved from sea glass. Silas didn't say anything for a long time. He just continued his slow, rhythmic cleaning, his limp dragging against the floorboards. "You okay, kid?" Silas asked. Aurora didn't answer immediately. She walked back to her stool and sat down. She looked at her reflection in the mirror, past the bottles, past the maps. She touched the crescent scar on her wrist. "He didn't even notice the scar," she whispered. "He used to tell me he knew everything about me, and he didn't even remember how I got it." Silas stopped polishing. He looked at her through the mirror. "Most people only see what they expect to see. They don't look at what’s actually there." "He smelled like Cardiff," she said. "He smelled like my father's study. Dust and old paper and secrets." "The rain will wash it out of the air soon enough," Silas said. He reached under the bar and pulled out a small plate of dumplings he’d kept warm. He slid them toward her. "Eat. You have a shift in the morning." Aurora picked up a pair of chopsticks. Her hand was steady. She looked at the green light on the floor and the way the shadows danced as cars passed by outside. The weight of the encounter sat in her stomach, heavy and cold, a reminder of a world that was still turning without her, oblivious to the fact that she had found a different way to exist. "He thinks I'm a failure," she said, her voice barely audible over the hum of the neon. Silas leaned his elbows on the bar. "In this city, being a failure is often the only way to be free. He’s still wearing a tie he didn't choose. You’re wearing your own skin." Aurora bit into a dumpling. The flavor was sharp, real, and grounding. She didn't look at the door. She didn't think about the charcoal coat or the firm in Cardiff. She watched the maps on the wall, the old, incorrect territories that no longer existed, and felt the immense, quiet pressure of the years she had left to fill. The Raven’s Nest grew darker as the streetlights outside flickered. Silas went back to his work, his silver ring clicking against the glass, a steady heartbeat in the silence of Soho. Aurora sat in the green glow, a ghost in her own sanctuary, waiting for the rain to stop.
created_at"2026-02-25T00:54:38.289Z" 2/25/2026, 12:54:38 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags42
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"Julian gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
1"He looks like [like]"
2"It feels like [like]"
3"you look like [like]"
dialogueSentences54
tagDensity0.778
leniency1
rawRatio0.095
effectiveRatio0.095
97.36% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1892
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
44.50% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1892
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"tracing"
count1
1
word"rhythmic"
count2
2
word"flicked"
count1
3
word"scanned"
count1
4
word"carried the weight"
count1
5
word"intensity"
count1
6
word"sanctuary"
count2
7
word"weight"
count2
8
word"whisper"
count1
9
word"unwavering"
count1
10
word"profound"
count1
11
word"resolve"
count1
12
word"silence"
count2
13
word"encounter"
count1
14
word"stomach"
count1
15
word"reminder"
count1
16
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"tracing"
1"rhythmic"
2"flicked"
3"scanned"
4"carried the weight"
5"intensity"
6"sanctuary"
7"weight"
8"whisper"
9"unwavering"
10"profound"
11"resolve"
12"silence"
13"encounter"
14"stomach"
15"reminder"
16"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences116
matches
0"was devastated"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences116
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences122
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen67
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1890
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions30
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions88
wordCount1513
uniqueNames19
maxNameDensity1.39
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Soho4
London1
Carter2
Silas17
Blackwood1
Cardiff3
Aurora21
Wales1
Julian13
Golden1
Empress1
Rory2
Highland1
You13
Bar1
Penarth1
Dust1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Silas"
4"Blackwood"
5"Aurora"
6"Julian"
7"Rory"
8"You"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
2"Cardiff"
3"Wales"
4"Highland"
5"Penarth"
globalScore0.806
windowScore0.667
59.64% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences83
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"looked like the Cardiff courtrooms Aurora"
1"felt like the only permanent thing she"
2"looked like he wanted to say something pr"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1890
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences122
matches
0"sent that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs50
mean37.8
std21.12
cv0.559
sampleLengths
058
1103
28
352
465
51
663
750
837
918
101
1142
1216
1319
1446
1524
1638
1749
1855
1948
2073
2166
2237
2339
2465
2550
2625
2724
2823
2966
3050
3118
3221
3340
3426
357
3642
3725
3821
395
4035
4127
4226
4318
4442
4567
4617
4734
4859
4949
84.09% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount7
totalSentences116
matches
0"being asked"
1"was devastated"
2"were meant"
3"were supposed"
4"were outdated"
5"been redrawn"
6"was punctuated"
7"was choked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs263
matches
0"were being"
1"were traveling"
2"was still turning"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences122
ratio0.008
matches
0"He looked like the Cardiff courtrooms Aurora had fled—polished, rigid, and entirely out of place in a Soho basement."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount995
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.0371859296482412
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.016080402010050253
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences122
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences122
mean15.49
std12.7
cv0.82
sampleLengths
027
14
227
322
413
513
618
716
821
98
1013
113
1211
1311
145
159
1613
1711
1819
1922
201
218
2228
234
2423
2510
2616
2724
284
2913
3020
315
3213
331
3421
3521
3616
3713
386
3910
4010
416
424
432
447
457
4617
477
4838
4927
36.07% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats17
diversityRatio0.29508196721311475
totalSentences122
uniqueOpeners36
31.75% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences105
matches
0"Instead, I find you in"
ratio0.01
44.76% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount46
totalSentences105
matches
0"She watched Silas Blackwood through"
1"He dragged his left leg"
2"She felt the shift in"
3"He didn't greet the newcomer."
4"He simply waited, the rag"
5"He wore a charcoal wool"
6"He looked like the Cardiff"
7"He scanned the room, his"
8"It was a ghost of"
9"She didn't look up."
10"She looked at the small"
11"His voice was a gravelly"
12"He didn't move from behind"
13"He took three steps toward"
14"Her bright blue eyes were"
15"I didn't want to believe"
16"You were the top of"
17"You had the Carter name"
18"He looks like he’s seen"
19"He was devastated when you"
ratio0.438
2.86% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount96
totalSentences105
matches
0"The green neon sign outside"
1"Shadows pooled in the corners"
2"Aurora Carter sat at the"
3"The straight, shoulder-length black hair"
4"She watched Silas Blackwood through"
5"Silas moved with a practiced,"
6"He dragged his left leg"
7"The silver signet ring on"
8"The door chime gave a"
9"Aurora didn't turn."
10"She felt the shift in"
11"Silas’s hazel eyes flicked toward"
12"He didn't greet the newcomer."
13"He simply waited, the rag"
14"A man stepped into the"
15"He wore a charcoal wool"
16"He looked like the Cardiff"
17"He scanned the room, his"
18"The name hit Aurora like"
19"It was a ghost of"
ratio0.914
95.24% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences105
matches
0"To leave like that, in"
1"If I look like I’ve"
ratio0.019
3.97% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"The green neon sign outside The Raven’s Nest hummed, a low-frequency vibration that rattled the windowpanes and bled a sickly emerald hue onto the rain-slicked …"
1"Shadows pooled in the corners of the bar, trapped between the framed maps of 19th-century London and the yellowed photographs of men who had long since vanished…"
2"The silver signet ring on his right hand clinked against the glass, a steady, metallic ticking that marked the passing minutes."
3"She looked at the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a childhood mark that felt like the only permanent thing she owned."
4"He didn't move from behind the tap, but his posture flattened, the quiet authority of a man who knew exactly where the exits were."
5"Julian set the glass down. The whiskey was half-finished. He looked around the room again, his eyes lingering on the bookshelf that hid Silas’s secret room. He …"
6"Aurora picked up a pair of chopsticks. Her hand was steady. She looked at the green light on the floor and the way the shadows danced as cars passed by outside.…"
95.59% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags34
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Julian said, his voice dropping to a whisper"
1"she said, her voice barely audible over the hum of the neon"
94.44% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags18
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Aurora snapped (snap)"
1"Julian laughed (laugh)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences54
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.111
81.6975%