"As they drew closer, the sound hit them—a low, rhythmic thrumming, like a thousand cellos playing a single, vibrating chord."
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"It wasn't mechanical; it was the sound of growth, of sap moving through veins, of a realm that was perpetually over-ripening."
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"The smell was intoxicating—vanilla, scorched sugar, and something iron-rich and raw."
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"They were humans—or had been."
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"There was no fine print that could prepare a person for this—an eternity of tending golden orchards under an amber sky, never allowed to taste the bounty they gathered."
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"Rory stumbled, her boots hitting ground that felt unnaturally soft, like walking on powdered spice."
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"Glowing violet eyes flickered within the darkness of their hood, scanning the horizon with a predatory rhythm."
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"The sky of Dymas was a deep, radiant amber, as if they were standing inside a giant bead of honey backlit by a dying star."
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"She reached down, her fingers brushing the Heartstone pendant hanging from her neck."
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"On her hip, the Fae-forged blade Isolde had given her felt like an icicle against her thigh, its moonsilver hilt humming a low, discordant note that vibrated in…"
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"Instead of leaves, the branches were draped in translucent, crystalline veils that shimmered with every movement of the perfumed wind."
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"It wasn't mechanical; it was the sound of growth, of sap moving through veins, of a realm that was perpetually over-ripening."
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"She thought of the Golden Empress back in London, the grease-stained menus and the smell of cheap frying oil that clung to her clothes after a shift for Yu-Fei."
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"Some were translucent, revealing seeds that swam inside like tiny, golden fish."
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"There was no fine print that could prepare a person for this—an eternity of tending golden orchards under an amber sky, never allowed to taste the bounty they g…"
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"The ground changed from dust to a carpet of fallen blossoms that felt like crushed velvet under Rory’s boots."
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"The scent was becoming overwhelming, a cloying sweetness that made her head swim."
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"It was laden with silver platters, crystal decanters, and towering arrangements of food that defied geometry."
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"Some platters held fresh, steaming delicacies, while others were covered in a fine, iridescent mold that shimmered like crushed pearls."
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"Rory looked at the marble table, then at the silent, wire-mouthed workers moving in the distance, and finally at the amber sky that felt like it was slowly pres…"