Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ94NYHQH9FZ8D8BT64MPK30

Run Details

Duration:
27.0s
Cost:
$0.011202
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The first deadbolt gave a heavy, metallic click, followed by the second and third. Rory didn’t like being this jumpy, but Brick Lane had a way of seeping into your nerves after midnight. The scent of turmeric and cumin from the curry house downstairs usually acted as a comfort, a savory blanket over the city’s grime, but tonight it felt oppressive, thick enough to choke on. She pulled the heavy door open just a crack, the security chain still engaged. She expected a delivery gone wrong or perhaps one of Eva’s eccentric academic contacts looking for a lost translation. She didn't expect Lucien Moreau. He stood in the dim yellow light of the hallway, looking as though he’d stepped directly out of a dream or a nightmare, depending on the day of the week. He wore a tailored charcoal wool coat that probably cost more than Rory’s annual rent, and his platinum blond hair was slicked back with its usual lethal precision. The only thing that marred his image of untouchable elegance was the slight tension in his jaw and the way he leaned a fraction too heavily on his ivory-handled cane. "Rory," he said. His voice was a low, melodic rasp that still had the power to make the hair on her arms stand up. "You’re staying at the sanctuary of scrolls, I see. Eva mentioned you were house-sitting." Rory’s grip tightened on the edge of the door. "Eva’s been talking to you? I specifically told her I didn’t want anyone to know where I was. Especially not you, Lucien." He tilted his head, his heterochromatic eyes catching the light. The amber one glowed with a faint, predatory warmth, while the jet-black one remained a bottomless void. "She didn't tell me. I’m a fixer, darling. Finding people is what I do. And you are remarkably difficult to lose when I don't want to lose you." "The locks are here for a reason," she said, though her heart was hammering a frantic rhythm against her ribs. "Go away. We said everything that needed to be said in Southwark." "We said nothing in Southwark," he countered, stepping closer to the door. "You yelled a great deal, and I was... uncharacteristically silent. It was an imbalance I’ve come to regret." Rory looked down at his hand on the cane. His knuckles were white. She looked back up at his face, noticing for the first time the slight grayness to his complexion. He wasn't just here to talk. He was hurt. She sighed, a sound of pure, frustrated defeat, and unlatched the chain. "If you bleed on Eva’s Persian rug, she’ll have both our heads. Get in." She stepped back, allowing him to limp into the cramped flat. The space was a labyrinth of waist-high stacks of books and ancient, yellowing scrolls. Ptolemy, the ginger tabby, looked up from a pile of research notes and let out a sharp, disapproving chirp before leaping onto a bookshelf. Lucien closed the door behind him with a soft thud. He didn't lock the deadbolts; he just leaned against the wood for a moment, his eyes drifting shut. The silence between them was heavy, filled with the ghosts of their last encounter—shouted accusations, the rain on the Thames, and the crushing weight of things he wouldn't tell her about his life in the Avaros underworld. "Sit," Rory commanded, pointing to a velvet armchair that was currently buried under a stack of journals. She unceremoniously dumped the journals onto the floor, ignoring the way Lucien winced at the lack of organizational respect. He sank into the chair, his cane clattering against the floorboards. Rory stood over him, her arms crossed. "Talk. Why are you here, and why do you look like you’ve been run over by a carriage?" "A minor disagreement with a business associate," Lucien murmured, reaching up to undo the top buttons of his coat. "The kind who uses silver-edged blades. It’s... inconvenient for someone of my heritage." Rory’s breath hitched. "Silver?" She moved instinctively, her anger momentarily eclipsed by a panicked flick of her training. She knelt before him, her black hair falling forward as she reached for his hands. She checked his palms first, then began unbuttoning his waistcoat with trembling fingers. "Rory," he said, his voice softer now, warning and pleading all at once. "Shut up," she snapped. "I’m looking for the entry point." She found it on his left side, just above the hip. A jagged tear in his white silk shirt was stained with an alarming amount of dark, sluggish blood. The skin around the wound was beginning to turn a sickly, bruised purple—the reaction of his demonic blood to the silver. She stood up and hurried to the kitchen, grabbing a bowl of water and a clean cloth. When she returned, she found him watching her with an expression she couldn't quite decipher. It wasn't the cold, calculating look of the Frenchman who brokered secrets for the elite; it was something raw and dangerously human. "You're still doing it," he said as she began to dab at the wound. "Doing what?" "Fixing things that aren't your responsibility. You fled Cardiff to get away from a man who broke you, Rory. You came to London to start over. Why are you kneeling on a floor in Whitechapel, tending to a half-demon who lied to you for six months?" Rory paused, the wet cloth turning pink in her hand. She looked up at him, her bright blue eyes fierce. "Because I'm a person, Lucien. Even if you've forgotten what that's like between all your deals and your shadows. And because I can't just let you die in my friend's living room." "I'm not going to die," he said, though his hand shook as he reached out, his fingers hovering just inches from her face. He didn't touch her, but she could feel the heat radiating from him. "But I couldn't go to the clinic. Not with the magpies watching my usual haunts. I thought... I hoped you might still have a weakness for lost causes." "You're not a lost cause. You're just a headache," she muttered, moving back to the wound. As she worked, the proximity became a physical weight. She was acutely aware of the scent of him—expensive cologne, old paper, and the metallic tang of blood. She could see the fine lines at the corners of his eyes and the way his throat moved when he swallowed. Her wrist brushed against his belt, and the sleeve of her sweater pulled back, revealing the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. Lucien’s hand suddenly closed over her arm, his grip firm but not painful. Rory froze. "Lucien, don't." "You still have it," he whispered, his black eye fixed on the pale mark. "The souvenir of a man who didn't deserve to breathe the same air as you." "It's a part of me," she said, her voice small. "Like your eyes. Like that cane. We all have our marks." "I should have killed him when I had the chance," Lucien said softly. There was no theatricality in the statement; it was a simple, terrifying fact. Rory pulled her arm back, her heart racing for an entirely different reason. "No. That’s exactly why I left you, Lucien. Because you think the answer to everything is a blade or a deal. I don't want to be protected by a monster. I wanted to be loved by a man." The silence that followed was so profound that Rory could hear the muffled sound of a car horn three blocks away. Lucien’s expression shuttered, the amber light in his eye dimming. He looked away, his jaw tightening. "I am both," he said quietly. "And I have never known how to separate them for you." Rory felt a lump form in her throat. She finished cleaning the wound in silence, her movements efficient and clinical to mask the fact that she wanted to lean forward and press her forehead against his chest. She applied a dressing she found in Eva's medicine cabinet, taping it down with more force than necessary. When she was finished, she didn't get up. She stayed on her knees, her hands resting on her thighs. "Why did you really come here, Lucien? You have dozens of safe houses. You have people who would die for you." Lucien reached out, and this time, he didn't hesitate. He tucked a strand of her black hair behind her ear, his thumb grazing her cheek. The touch was electric, a spark that traveled straight to her core. "I was tired," he admitted, his voice barely a whisper. "Tired of the masks. Tired of the cold. I realized that if I was going to bleed out, I wanted the last thing I saw to be something real. You are the only real thing I’ve ever found in this city, Rory." Rory leaned into his palm, despite every logical instinct screaming at her to run. "You're a liar, Lucien Moreau." "About many things," he agreed, leaning down until their breaths mingled. "About the cost of information, about the depth of my ruthlessness, and about my intentions for the soul of London. But I have never once lied to you about how I feel when I enter a room and find you in it." He didn't wait for her to bridge the gap. He leaned down and kissed her—a slow, desperate reclamation that tasted of salt and longing. It wasn't the suave, polished kiss of a broker; it was the kiss of a man who had been starving and had finally found bread. Rory responded with a fervor that frightened her, her fingers tangling in his platinum hair, pulling him closer. The hurt of their parting, the months of silence, the fear she’d felt when she saw him at the door—it all dissolved into the heat of the moment. When they finally pulled apart, both of them were breathless. Lucien rested his forehead against hers, his eyes closed. "You have to leave in the morning," she whispered, though she didn't move away. "I know," he said. "And this doesn't fix anything. You’re still a half-demon fixer with too many enemies, and I’m still a girl trying to stay out of the dark." Lucien opened his eyes. The black and the amber were inches from her blue. "I know that, too." He reached for his cane, using it to push himself up, but he didn't head for the door. Instead, he reached out a hand to Rory, helping her to her feet. He didn't let go of her hand once she was standing. "But for tonight," he said, looking around the room filled with Eva's dusty secrets and the steady, rhythmic purr of the cat, "could we just be people in a flat on Brick Lane? No demons, no pasts. Just us." Rory looked at the three deadbolts on the door, then back at the man who had bypassed every one of her defenses without even trying. She squeezed his hand. "Just for tonight," she agreed. "But you’re sleeping on the sofa. I'm not explaining a half-demon in my bed to Eva when she gets back from Oxford." A small, genuine smirk played across Lucien’s lips—the first real one she’d seen in years. "As you wish, Rory. But I should warn you, I'm a terrible houseguest. I have very specific requirements for my morning coffee." "Get on the sofa, Moreau," she laughed, the sound bright and unexpected in the quiet flat. As she watched him settle onto the small, lumpy couch, his cane leaning against the armrest, Rory realized that the locks on the door weren't nearly as strong as she’d thought. But for the first time since she’d fled Cardiff, she wasn't afraid of what was inside with her.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
75.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"She moved instinctively [instinctively]"
1"Lucien said softly [softly]"
2"he said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.458
leniency0.917
rawRatio0.136
effectiveRatio0.125
89.87% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1975
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"softly"
2"really"
3"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
44.30% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1975
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"oppressive"
count1
1
word"tension"
count1
2
word"sanctuary"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count1
4
word"silence"
count4
5
word"encounter"
count1
6
word"weight"
count2
7
word"velvet"
count1
8
word"silk"
count1
9
word"calculating"
count1
10
word"could feel"
count1
11
word"racing"
count1
12
word"profound"
count1
13
word"efficient"
count1
14
word"electric"
count1
15
word"whisper"
count1
16
word"the last thing"
count1
17
word"rhythmic"
count1
highlights
0"oppressive"
1"tension"
2"sanctuary"
3"warmth"
4"silence"
5"encounter"
6"weight"
7"velvet"
8"silk"
9"calculating"
10"could feel"
11"racing"
12"profound"
13"efficient"
14"electric"
15"whisper"
16"the last thing"
17"rhythmic"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences99
matches
0"felt a lump"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences99
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences125
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1969
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions31
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
86.90% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount1347
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.26
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Brick1
Lane1
Eva3
Lucien11
Moreau1
Rory17
Thames1
Avaros1
Frenchman1
Cardiff1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Lucien"
2"Moreau"
3"Rory"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Thames"
3"Avaros"
4"Cardiff"
globalScore0.869
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences85
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite decipher"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1969
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences125
matches
0"realized that the"
96.50% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs55
mean35.8
std17.46
cv0.488
sampleLengths
066
138
288
338
431
555
632
730
840
926
1049
1165
1236
1336
1432
1546
1613
1710
1850
1954
2014
212
2246
2352
2464
2516
2648
2736
284
2929
3021
3126
3251
3337
3417
3555
3640
3737
3852
3919
4053
4149
4246
4319
4414
454
4626
4718
4842
4939
98.17% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences99
matches
0"was slicked"
1"was finished"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs232
matches
0"was hammering"
1"was beginning"
2"was standing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount4
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences125
ratio0.08
matches
0"He didn't lock the deadbolts; he just leaned against the wood for a moment, his eyes drifting shut."
1"The silence between them was heavy, filled with the ghosts of their last encounter—shouted accusations, the rain on the Thames, and the crushing weight of things he wouldn't tell her about his life in the Avaros underworld."
2"The skin around the wound was beginning to turn a sickly, bruised purple—the reaction of his demonic blood to the silver."
3"It wasn't the cold, calculating look of the Frenchman who brokered secrets for the elite; it was something raw and dangerously human."
4"She was acutely aware of the scent of him—expensive cologne, old paper, and the metallic tang of blood."
5"There was no theatricality in the statement; it was a simple, terrifying fact."
6"He leaned down and kissed her—a slow, desperate reclamation that tasted of salt and longing."
7"It wasn't the suave, polished kiss of a broker; it was the kiss of a man who had been starving and had finally found bread."
8"The hurt of their parting, the months of silence, the fear she’d felt when she saw him at the door—it all dissolved into the heat of the moment."
9"A small, genuine smirk played across Lucien’s lips—the first real one she’d seen in years."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1357
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount52
adverbRatio0.03831982313927782
lyAdverbCount20
lyAdverbRatio0.014738393515106854
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences125
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences125
mean15.75
std9.09
cv0.577
sampleLengths
014
119
233
314
419
55
630
728
830
93
1021
1114
129
1322
1410
1517
1628
1720
1812
1912
2018
219
224
2318
246
253
2612
2714
2811
2914
3024
3110
3218
3337
3417
3519
3611
377
3818
3919
4013
413
4215
4315
4413
4513
464
476
4811
4918
42.80% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.288
totalSentences125
uniqueOpeners36
35.46% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences94
matches
0"Instead, he reached out a"
ratio0.011
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount52
totalSentences94
matches
0"She pulled the heavy door"
1"She expected a delivery gone"
2"She didn't expect Lucien Moreau."
3"He stood in the dim"
4"He wore a tailored charcoal"
5"His voice was a low,"
6"He tilted his head, his"
7"she said, though her heart"
8"he countered, stepping closer to"
9"His knuckles were white."
10"She looked back up at"
11"He wasn't just here to"
12"He was hurt."
13"She sighed, a sound of"
14"She stepped back, allowing him"
15"He didn't lock the deadbolts;"
16"She unceremoniously dumped the journals"
17"He sank into the chair,"
18"She moved instinctively, her anger"
19"She knelt before him, her"
ratio0.553
2.55% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount86
totalSentences94
matches
0"The first deadbolt gave a"
1"Rory didn’t like being this"
2"The scent of turmeric and"
3"She pulled the heavy door"
4"She expected a delivery gone"
5"She didn't expect Lucien Moreau."
6"He stood in the dim"
7"He wore a tailored charcoal"
8"The only thing that marred"
9"His voice was a low,"
10"Rory’s grip tightened on the"
11"He tilted his head, his"
12"The amber one glowed with"
13"she said, though her heart"
14"he countered, stepping closer to"
15"Rory looked down at his"
16"His knuckles were white."
17"She looked back up at"
18"He wasn't just here to"
19"He was hurt."
ratio0.915
53.19% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences94
matches
0"When she was finished, she"
ratio0.011
82.32% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences59
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"He stood in the dim yellow light of the hallway, looking as though he’d stepped directly out of a dream or a nightmare, depending on the day of the week."
1"The only thing that marred his image of untouchable elegance was the slight tension in his jaw and the way he leaned a fraction too heavily on his ivory-handled…"
2"It wasn't the cold, calculating look of the Frenchman who brokered secrets for the elite; it was something raw and dangerously human."
3"He leaned down and kissed her—a slow, desperate reclamation that tasted of salt and longing."
4"Rory responded with a fervor that frightened her, her fingers tangling in his platinum hair, pulling him closer."
11.36% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"she said, though her heart was hammering a frantic rhythm against her ribs"
1"he said, his voice softer now, warning and pleading all at once"
2"he said, though his hand shook as he reached out, his fingers hovering just inches from her face"
3"she said, her voice small"
4"he admitted, his voice barely a whisper"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags19
fancyCount9
fancyTags
0"Lucien murmured (murmur)"
1"she snapped (snap)"
2"she muttered (mutter)"
3"he whispered (whisper)"
4"he admitted (admit)"
5"he agreed (agree)"
6"she whispered (whisper)"
7"she agreed (agree)"
8"she laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.396
leniency0.792
rawRatio0.474
effectiveRatio0.375
73.7482%