Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ94P7NEBYBDPT70XCFQ0WAA

Run Details

Duration:
31.8s
Cost:
$0.013385
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt groaned, a scorched metallic protest that echoed through the narrow hallway. Rory leaned her shoulder against the door, shoving upward to settle the frame while she wrestled the final lock. The scent of cumin and turmeric seeped through the floorboards from the curry house downstairs, thick enough to coat the tongue. Behind her, Ptolemy the tabby cat stretched on a stack of yellowed scrolls, his claws snagging the parchment with a rhythmic, papery rasp. The door finally swung inward. Lucien Moreau stood in the dim light of the landing, a sharp silhouette against the peeling floral wallpaper of the corridor. The rain had glazed his charcoal wool coat, turning the fabric a shade closer to midnight. He didn't move. He didn't speak. He simply existed there, a polished obsidian blade dropped into a pile of junk. Rory gripped the edge of the door, her knuckles turning the colour of bleached bone. The small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist throbbed, a phantom pulse she hadn't felt in months. "The locks are new." Lucien’s voice carried the smooth, dangerous weight of velvet wrapped around a stone. He stepped over the threshold without waiting for an invitation, the tip of his ivory-handled cane clicking rhythmically against the warped linoleum. "Eva worries. Some people don't know how to stay gone." Rory slammed the door shut. The force vibrated through her boots. She didn't turn around immediately, staring instead at the wood grain, her heart hammering a frantic rhythm against her ribs. "You look thinner, Rory." Lucien surveyed the cramped flat, his heterochromatic eyes moving with predatory precision. The amber eye caught the flicker of a bare lightbulb, glowing like a trapped spark, while the black eye remained a bottomless void. He looked out of place among the piles of research notes and discarded delivery containers from the Golden Empress. He was a creature of marble and silk, now surrounded by the clutter of a life she’d tried to build out of his reach. "It’s called work. You should try it when you aren't busy brokering lives." She finally turned, crossing her arms to hide the slight tremor in her hands. She stood her ground as he drifted deeper into the room, pausing by a shelf of heavy grimoires. Ptolemy arched his back, a low growl vibrating in the cat’s throat. Lucien ignored the animal, his attention fixed on a stray black hair clinging to his sleeve. He flicked it away with a gloved finger. "Life in the East End suits you. The grit provides a certain camouflage." "I wasn't hiding from the city, Lucien. I was hiding from you." He stopped his pacing. The air in the flat shifted, growing heavy and charged, the way it did just before a lightning strike. The half-demon heritage he carried—the taint of Avaros—bled into the room, a subtle pressure against her skin. He turned his head, the platinum blond of his hair shimmering under the harsh bulb. "And yet, you chose a flat above a curry house with three deadbolts. A fortress for a girl who claims she isn't afraid." He moved toward her. It wasn't a fast movement, but it possessed a terrifying grace. The ivory cane stayed at his side, a silent witness. Rory refused to back away, even as the heat radiating from him began to melt the chill the rain had brought inside. "I’m not that girl anymore. I don't work for you. I don't owe you." "You owe me a conversation we never finished in Marseille." His black eye seemed to expand, the pupil swallowing the iris until it reflected nothing but her own defiant face. He stopped inches away. The scent of him—expensive sandalwood, rain, and the metallic tang of something ancient—overwhelmed the smell of spices from below. It was a scent that lived in her nightmares and her most guarded memories. "There was nothing left to say. I left. You stayed. That’s how endings work." Lucien reached out. His gloved thumb brushed the pulse point on her neck, just above the collar of her jumper. The contact sent a jolt through her, a frantic heat that made her breath hitch. He didn't pull away. "You didn't leave, Rory. You fled. There is a distinction." "I survived." She reached up, grabbing his wrist to pull his hand away, but she didn't drop it. The leather of his glove felt cool, but the strength beneath it was undeniable. They stood locked in the narrow space between the sofa and the door, a mess of books at their feet and months of silence between their mouths. "The Frenchman returns to the scene of the crime." Rory’s voice lacked the bite she intended. It came out as a scorched whisper. She felt the heat of his skin through the leather, a reminder of the nights in London’s underworld when they’d shared more than just information. "I returned for what belongs to me." He stepped closer, closing the final inch of space. The ivory handle of his cane pressed against her hip, a cold bar of bone. He looked down at her, his amber eye searching hers for the cracks she knew were there. "I don't belong to anyone. Least of all a fixer for the damned." "You belong to yourself. But your secrets? Those belong to the man who knows how to keep them." He leaned in, his breath ghosting over her ear. The heterochromia of his gaze was dizzying up close—one side fire, one side night. Rory felt the old pull, the magnetic slide toward the edge of a cliff she had spent a year trying to climb away from. "Why now? After six months of nothing?" She finally let go of his wrist, her fingers trailing over the tailored wool of his coat. The fabric felt soft, a stark contrast to the hardness of the man beneath. "Because the Golden Empress only delivers so far, and I grew tired of the taste of disappointment." Lucien pulled a small, crumpled receipt from his pocket—a delivery slip from Rory’s day job. It didn't have a name on it, only a scribbled address and a smudge of grease. He dropped it, the paper fluttering to the floor like a dying moth. "You followed me through a delivery order? That’s low, even for you." "Efficiency is never a low blow." He took a step back, but the tension didn't break; it only stretched, becoming a thin, vibrating wire. He surveyed the room once more, his gaze lingering on the bed nestled in the corner, half-hidden by a folding screen. "This place is a cage, Rory." "It’s a home. There’s a difference." "A home has a hearth. This has a drafty window and the smell of old paper. You were meant for better than hiding in the shadows of Brick Lane, playing at being human." Rory laughed, a sharp, jagged sound. She walked past him, heading for the small kitchenette to put some distance between them. She gripped the edge of the counter, the Formica peeling under her fingernails. "I *am* human, Lucien. That’s the part you always seem to forget. I don't have a realm to retreat to when things get bloody. I have this. I have a bike, a flat, and a cat that hates you." "Ptolemy has excellent taste. He simply recognizes a predator when one enters his territory." Lucien didn't follow her. He leaned against the bookshelf, his posture relaxed, though his eyes remained sharp. He looked like a king sitting on a throne of trash. "What do you want, Lucien? Really? You didn't come here to critique my interior design." "I came to see if the fire had gone out." He tapped the ivory head of his cane against his palm. The sound was like a heartbeat. "And?" He looked at her then, really looked at her, stripping away the layers of her defiance until he reached the hurt she’d buried under her Cardiff-bred stoicism. "It’s smouldering. Which is far more dangerous." Rory turned back to him, her black hair swinging against her shoulders. The blue of her eyes flashed, bright and cold as a winter sky. "You should leave before it catches." "I’ve never been particularly afraid of a little heat." He moved again, this time with a purpose that made Rory’s heart skip. He didn't stop until he was standing in the cramped kitchen area with her. The space was so small she could feel the cold dampness of his coat against her arms. He reached out, his bare hand—he’d removed the glove—finding the crescent scar on her wrist. He traced it with his thumb, the skin-to-skin contact sending a shiver of pure, unadulterated electricity through her spine. "You still have it." "Scars don't just vanish because you want them to." "Neither do people, it seems." He tilted his head, his face inches from hers. The Heterochromatic eyes were steady, unblinking. "Are you going to scream for help, Rory? Or are you going to realize your locks were never meant to keep me out?" "They were meant to keep me in." Her hand rose, unbidden, her fingers curling into the lapel of his suit. She pulled him closer, the movement fueled by a cocktail of resentment and a hunger she couldn't starve. "Then you’ve failed your mission." Lucien’s hand migrated from her wrist to the small of her back, his touch firm, pulling her flush against the charcoal wool of his chest. The ivory cane clattered to the floor, forgotten. "I hate you." Her voice was a ragged edge, whispered against the space between their lips. "I know." He didn't close the gap. He waited, his breath mingling with hers, letting the silence of the flat and the distant sound of Brick Lane traffic build the pressure until it was unbearable. Ptolemy jumped off the scrolls, disappearing into the shadows of the bedroom, leaving them alone in the flickering light of the kitchen. "Tell me to leave, Rory. Say it like you mean it, and I’ll walk out that door and let the locks do their work." Rory looked at the black eye, the one that saw the demon in the room, and then at the amber one, the one that saw only her. Her fingers tightened on his lapel, the fabric bunching in her grip. "The third lock sticks. You’d never get it open in time." Lucien smiled, a slow, predatory curve of his lips that didn't reach his eyes. "I suppose I'll have to stay, then."
created_at"2026-02-25T00:55:22.549Z" 2/25/2026, 12:55:22 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
94.32% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1760
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"really"
count2
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
31.82% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1760
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"rhythmic"
count1
2
word"throbbed"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count2
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"velvet"
count1
6
word"vibrated"
count1
7
word"flicker"
count1
8
word"marble"
count1
9
word"silk"
count1
10
word"flicked"
count1
11
word"charged"
count1
12
word"chill"
count1
13
word"silence"
count2
14
word"whisper"
count1
15
word"reminder"
count1
16
word"magnetic"
count1
17
word"stark"
count1
18
word"tension"
count1
19
word"predator"
count1
20
word"could feel"
count1
21
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"rhythmic"
2"throbbed"
3"pulse"
4"weight"
5"velvet"
6"vibrated"
7"flicker"
8"marble"
9"silk"
10"flicked"
11"charged"
12"chill"
13"silence"
14"whisper"
15"reminder"
16"magnetic"
17"stark"
18"tension"
19"predator"
20"could feel"
21"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"sent a jolt through"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences90
matches(empty)
95.24% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences90
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"began to"
2"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences132
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1752
ratio0.001
matches
0"am"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount1288
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.85
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Ptolemy3
Moreau1
Golden1
Empress1
Avaros1
London1
Rory11
Formica1
Cardiff-bred1
Heterochromatic1
Brick1
Lane1
Lucien9
persons
0"Ptolemy"
1"Moreau"
2"Avaros"
3"Rory"
4"Formica"
5"Lucien"
places
0"Golden"
1"London"
2"Brick"
3"Lane"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences79
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like a king sitting on a throne of"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1752
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences132
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs74
mean23.68
std19.9
cv0.841
sampleLengths
077
15
257
332
44
535
610
731
84
978
1013
1168
1213
1312
1455
1523
1647
1714
1810
1957
2014
2139
2210
232
2457
259
2639
277
2841
2913
3018
3147
327
3331
3417
3544
3612
376
3839
396
406
4133
4234
4339
4414
4528
4615
4710
4817
491
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs194
matches
0"was dizzying"
1"was standing"
12.99% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences132
ratio0.045
matches
0"The half-demon heritage he carried—the taint of Avaros—bled into the room, a subtle pressure against her skin."
1"The scent of him—expensive sandalwood, rain, and the metallic tang of something ancient—overwhelmed the smell of spices from below."
2"The heterochromia of his gaze was dizzying up close—one side fire, one side night."
3"Lucien pulled a small, crumpled receipt from his pocket—a delivery slip from Rory’s day job."
4"He took a step back, but the tension didn't break; it only stretched, becoming a thin, vibrating wire."
5"He reached out, his bare hand—he’d removed the glove—finding the crescent scar on her wrist."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1303
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.02762854950115119
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.007674597083653108
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences132
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences132
mean13.27
std7.04
cv0.531
sampleLengths
014
119
221
323
45
521
616
73
83
914
1015
1117
124
1313
1422
1510
165
176
1820
194
2012
2123
2219
2324
2413
2514
2618
2712
2816
298
3013
3112
324
3319
3417
3515
3623
374
3811
3910
4022
4114
4210
4320
444
4519
4614
4714
483
4917
40.91% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.21212121212121213
totalSentences132
uniqueOpeners28
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
ratio0
6.67% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount48
totalSentences90
matches
0"He didn't move."
1"He didn't speak."
2"He simply existed there, a"
3"He stepped over the threshold"
4"She didn't turn around immediately,"
5"He looked out of place"
6"He was a creature of"
7"She finally turned, crossing her"
8"She stood her ground as"
9"He flicked it away with"
10"He stopped his pacing."
11"He turned his head, the"
12"He moved toward her."
13"It wasn't a fast movement,"
14"His black eye seemed to"
15"He stopped inches away."
16"It was a scent that"
17"His gloved thumb brushed the"
18"He didn't pull away."
19"She reached up, grabbing his"
ratio0.533
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount89
totalSentences90
matches
0"The third deadbolt groaned, a"
1"Rory leaned her shoulder against"
2"The scent of cumin and"
3"The door finally swung inward."
4"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
5"The rain had glazed his"
6"He didn't move."
7"He didn't speak."
8"He simply existed there, a"
9"Rory gripped the edge of"
10"The small crescent-shaped scar on"
11"Lucien’s voice carried the smooth,"
12"He stepped over the threshold"
13"Rory slammed the door shut."
14"The force vibrated through her"
15"She didn't turn around immediately,"
16"Lucien surveyed the cramped flat,"
17"The amber eye caught the"
18"He looked out of place"
19"He was a creature of"
ratio0.989
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
ratio0
79.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences68
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"She didn't turn around immediately, staring instead at the wood grain, her heart hammering a frantic rhythm against her ribs."
1"It was a scent that lived in her nightmares and her most guarded memories."
2"The contact sent a jolt through her, a frantic heat that made her breath hitch."
3"He moved again, this time with a purpose that made Rory’s heart skip."
4"He waited, his breath mingling with hers, letting the silence of the flat and the distant sound of Brick Lane traffic build the pressure until it was unbearable…"
5"Lucien smiled, a slow, predatory curve of his lips that didn't reach his eyes."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
78.5256%