Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ94PZDTZAZ2YQRHS50E0K9D

Run Details

Duration:
20.2s
Cost:
$0.010001
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Three solid clicks of the deadbolts, heavy brass against the older wood, echoed in the stairwell. Rory pulled the door inward, expecting her friend Eva, whose keys always seemed to be waging a silent war against the locks. Instead, the frame filled with a silhouette that made her breath catch, sharp and sudden, in her throat. Lucien. He stood impeccably, effortlessly, on the landing, completely out of place amidst the curry-scented air and worn-out linoleum. His tailored charcoal suit, dark as a moonless night, seemed to absorb the dim light, making his slicked-back platinum blond hair an even starker contrast. One amber eye, luminous and feline, narrowed slightly, while the other, a midnight black, was unreadable. He carried his ivory-handled cane with an easy grace that almost made her forget the thin blade it concealed. "Aurora." His voice, a low rumble, was undeniably French, a rich sound that had once made her shiver for entirely different reasons. Now, it only tightened the knot in her stomach. “Or do you prefer Rory these days?” Her own name, spoken with such casual intimacy after weeks of silence, felt like a trespass. She gripped the doorknob, her knuckles white. “Lucien. What are you doing here?” The question came out sharper than she intended, laced with a mix of surprise and the familiar sting of old hurt. She hadn't seen him since… since that night in Soho. The details were still a blur of whiskey, sharp words, and a final, lingering kiss that had tasted of regret. A ghost of a smile, cool and detached, touched his lips. It didn't reach his eyes. “My apologies for the impromptu visit. I tried calling.” She hadn't answered. She’d seen his number light up her screen, had watched it with a sick fascination, then had ruthlessly deleted the contact. “My phone seems to be on the fritz.” It was a lie, and they both knew it. Her phone worked perfectly; she just hadn’t wanted to talk to him. He inclined his head, a gesture of mock deference. “A convenient affliction.” His gaze swept over her, taking in her worn jeans and paint-splattered t-shirt – her uniform for an evening of attempting to decipher Eva’s cryptograms. She hated how easily he could dissect her, how her bright blue eyes, usually so guarded, felt suddenly transparent under his scrutiny. He was a fixer, an information broker, a man who saw everything. “Are you going to invite me in, Rory?” He used the nickname this time, a subtle pressure. She hesitated, her mind racing. Every instinct screamed for her to slam the door shut, to pretend he was a bad dream she could lock away. But he wouldn't leave. She knew Lucien well enough to know he always got what he wanted. Besides, he didn’t just show up to chat. There had to be a reason, and a dark part of her was morbidly curious. With a sigh she didn't bother to hide, she stepped back, pulling the door wider. “Fine. But make it quick.” Lucien entered, and the cramped space of Eva’s flat, already overflowing with books, scrolls, and research notes, seemed to shrink further around him. He moved with an almost ethereal quietness, his charcoal suit a stark anomaly amidst the bohemian chaos. Beneath his crisp lapels, she could just make out the subtle gleam of a silver pocket square. The scent of whatever high-end cologne he wore—something expensive and faintly citrusy, like a winter morning in the South of France—entered with him, battling valiantly against the persistent aroma of the curry house downstairs. His gaze flicked around the room, taking in the precarious stacks of ancient texts on every surface, the maps pinned haphazardly to the walls, the half-eaten bowl of ramen on the rickety coffee table. Nothing escaped him. Her eyes followed his, a frantic desire to tidy, to conceal the mess the apartment truly was, warring with her stubborn pride. Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby cat, emerged from a fortress of divination manuals, tail twitching, and rubbed against Lucien’s expensive trousers. Lucien didn't flinch. He bent, a slow, deliberate movement, and scratched the cat behind the ears. Ptolemy purred, a low rumble that vibrated through the floorboards. “You’ve made a friend,” Rory said, the words laced with an acidity she couldn't quite contain. Even animals flocked to him. He straightened, his expression unreadable. “Ptolemy always had good taste, even if his owner’s choice in… company… occasionally wavered.” His eyes found hers, a direct hit. The subtext hung heavy in the air between them: *You*. The heat flushed her cheeks. It was a cheap shot, designed to remind her of their last argument, of the things he’d said when he thought she was being reckless, when he thought he knew better. He always thought he knew better. She crossed her arms over her chest, trying to project an image of unyielding resolve. “To what do I owe the pleasure, Lucien? I’m busy.” He retrieved a slim leather-bound notebook from an inside pocket and flipped it open with a practiced ease. “I have information you might find… pertinent. Regarding Evan.” The name landed like a punch to the gut. Evan. Her abusive ex, the reason she’d fled Cardiff, the ghost she was still trying to outrun. Rory felt a cold dread creep up her spine. “What about him?” she managed, her voice suddenly tight. Lucien paused, watching her reaction. It was a calculated move, designed to assert control, to prove he still held some sway over her emotions. “He’s asking questions.” Her heart hammered against her ribs. “What kind of questions?” “Pertinent ones. About your sudden disappearance. About your new life in London. He’s persistent, Aurora. More so than the average jilted lover.” “He’s not a jilted lover, he’s a stalker,” Rory snapped, her cool façade cracking. “Why are you even looking into this? I left that behind.” “Did you?” His gaze was piercing. “Or did it simply follow you?” He took a step closer, reducing the already small distance between them. The scent of him, that expensive cologne, intensified, wrapping around her. “My business, as you know, is information. I heard whispers, put two and two together. It seems your past is more tenacious than you anticipated.” He was a half-demon, with connections in the darkest corners of London’s supernatural underworld. If he was digging, it wasn’t out of idleness. It was always for a price, or for reasons veiled in his own complex manipulations. But Evan… the thought of him finding her, of him being here, in *her* city, in *her* space, made her stomach clench. “What do you want, Lucien?” She kept her voice even, despite the tremor in her hands she was desperately trying to conceal. He leaned against a stacks of books, miraculously not toppling them. His finger traced the worn spine of an ancient grimoire. “Simply to offer my services, Aurora. Protection. And perhaps… an opportunity.” “Protection from Evan?” She scoffed. “I don’t need you to rescue me. I did that myself.” She thought of their last fight, of him trying to control her choices, telling her who she could and couldn’t trust. He’d implied she was naive, that she couldn’t handle herself. The memory burned. “Indeed, you are remarkably resilient,” he conceded, the corner of his mouth twitching. “But this situation, my dear, carries certain… implications. Implications that might draw unwanted attention. Attention from entities far more troublesome than a disgruntled human ex-boyfriend.” He pushed off the books, closing the distance again, until he was close enough that she could feel the faint warmth radiating from him. Close enough that she could see the flecks of gold in his amber eye, the subtle curve of his lips. “What entities?” she challenged, refusing to back down. Her heart beat a rapid tattoo against her ribs, a mixture of fear and something else, something she refused to name. “You’ve been exploring the edges of this city’s underbelly, haven’t you, Aurora?” His voice softened, became a silken whisper. “Yu-Fei Cheung’s Golden Empress. Silas’s bar. Eva’s… esoteric projects. You’re not just delivering takeaways anymore, are you? It’s a dangerous game you’re playing, Rory.” He knew too much. He always knew too much. And the way he said "Rory" this time, it was a caress, a reminder of the intimacy they’d once shared. Her mind flashed to his hands on her skin, the surprising gentleness beneath his polished exterior. “I can handle myself,” she insisted, though her voice lacked conviction this time. She took a step back, needing space, needing to break the spell he was weaving around her. The air in the flat felt suddenly too thick, too charged. Lucien’s gaze remained fixed on her, unwavering. “Perhaps. But a lone wolf often falls prey to the pack, no matter how sharp her teeth.” He gave a small, almost imperceptible shrug. “I am merely offering a partnership. My resources, my knowledge… for a small consideration, of course.” “A small consideration? You don’t do anything for a ‘small consideration’,” she countered, her anger rekindling. “You always have an angle. You always want something.” “Don’t we all, Aurora?” He let the silence stretch, loaded with unspoken history. The attraction between them, always a simmering ember, felt like it had just been doused with kerosene, flaring brighter and more dangerously than ever. All the hurt, all the anger, all the desperate longing from their complicated parting, swirled in the small cramped space. “Just tell me the price, Moreau,” she said, her voice barely a whisper. She hated him for making her need him, for being the only one who seemed to truly understand the darkness that lurked beneath London’s surface. She hated him for being so infuriatingly attractive. He regarded her for a long moment, his heterochromatic eyes searching hers, as if trying to decipher the complex calculus of her emotions. A faint, almost imperceptible smile touched his lips, a genuine one this time, full of a knowing that both infuriated and thrilled her. “Let’s just say,” Lucien murmured, his voice dropping, “that the initial consultation comes with a certain… understanding. A rekindling of old alliances. The price comes later. And it might not be what you expect.” He held her gaze, and in the depths of his mismatched eyes, she saw not just calculation, but a flicker of something far more complex: a yearning, a ghost of the connection that had once bound them. The unspoken words hung in the air, a challenge, a promise. Rory swallowed, her throat suddenly dry. She knew, with a certainty that chilled her to the bone, that she was walking into a trap. But with Evan lurking, and Lucien offering a shield she couldn’t afford to refuse, she had little choice. The game had already begun.
created_at"2026-02-25T00:55:46.883Z" 2/25/2026, 12:55:46 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.564
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
74.92% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1794
totalAiIsmAdverbs9
found
0
adverb"completely"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"perfectly"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count4
4
adverb"truly"
count2
highlights
0"completely"
1"slightly"
2"perfectly"
3"suddenly"
4"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1794
totalAiIsms37
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"amidst"
count2
2
word"unreadable"
count2
3
word"stomach"
count2
4
word"silence"
count2
5
word"familiar"
count1
6
word"racing"
count1
7
word"stark"
count1
8
word"flicked"
count1
9
word"desire"
count1
10
word"vibrated"
count1
11
word"wavered"
count1
12
word"resolve"
count1
13
word"practiced ease"
count1
14
word"calculated"
count1
15
word"complex"
count3
16
word"traced"
count1
17
word"could feel"
count1
18
word"warmth"
count1
19
word"whisper"
count2
20
word"reminder"
count1
21
word"charged"
count1
22
word"unwavering"
count1
23
word"unspoken"
count2
24
word"simmering"
count1
25
word"depths"
count1
26
word"flicker"
count1
27
word"yearning"
count1
28
word"chilled"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"amidst"
2"unreadable"
3"stomach"
4"silence"
5"familiar"
6"racing"
7"stark"
8"flicked"
9"desire"
10"vibrated"
11"wavered"
12"resolve"
13"practiced ease"
14"calculated"
15"complex"
16"traced"
17"could feel"
18"warmth"
19"whisper"
20"reminder"
21"charged"
22"unwavering"
23"unspoken"
24"simmering"
25"depths"
26"flicker"
27"yearning"
28"chilled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count2
highlights
0"hung heavy in the air"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences109
matches(empty)
90.43% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences109
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences123
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen71
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords3
totalWords1793
ratio0.002
matches
0"You"
1"her"
2"her"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount1430
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.63
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva4
French1
Soho1
Lucien9
South1
France1
Cardiff1
London2
Evan3
Close1
Rory5
persons
0"Eva"
1"Lucien"
2"Evan"
3"Rory"
places
0"Soho"
1"South"
2"France"
3"Cardiff"
4"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
35.06% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences87
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"felt like a trespass"
1"quite contain"
2"felt like it had just been doused with"
3"as if trying to decipher the complex calculus of her emotions"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.558
wordCount1793
matches
0"not just calculation, but a flicker of something far more complex: a yearning, a ghost"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences123
matches(empty)
95.04% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean43.73
std21.11
cv0.483
sampleLengths
056
11
278
338
480
525
653
771
817
966
1020
1191
1259
1345
1421
1536
1642
1725
1827
1944
2027
2110
2222
2325
2460
2560
2622
2732
2850
2982
3029
3143
3245
3341
3447
3525
3657
3746
3846
3982
4047
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences109
matches
0"been doused"
11.83% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount7
totalVerbs248
matches
0"was, warring"
1"was being"
2"was still trying"
3"was digging"
4"was desperately trying"
5"was weaving"
6"was walking"
73.17% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences123
ratio0.024
matches
0"Her phone worked perfectly; she just hadn’t wanted to talk to him."
1"“A convenient affliction.” His gaze swept over her, taking in her worn jeans and paint-splattered t-shirt – her uniform for an evening of attempting to decipher Eva’s cryptograms."
2"The scent of whatever high-end cologne he wore—something expensive and faintly citrusy, like a winter morning in the South of France—entered with him, battling valiantly against the persistent aroma of the curry house downstairs."
81.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1440
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"slim leather-bound notebook"
adverbCount79
adverbRatio0.05486111111111111
lyAdverbCount28
lyAdverbRatio0.019444444444444445
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences123
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences123
mean14.58
std9.63
cv0.661
sampleLengths
016
122
218
31
418
525
616
719
822
99
107
1116
127
1327
145
155
1620
1711
185
199
203
2121
2217
2312
249
2528
2622
2712
2817
295
3021
314
3213
338
3415
3515
365
3723
3817
3917
4034
4134
423
4322
4419
453
4613
4710
4816
495
61.79% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.3902439024390244
totalSentences123
uniqueOpeners48
31.75% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences105
matches
0"Instead, the frame filled with"
ratio0.01
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount60
totalSentences105
matches
0"He stood impeccably, effortlessly, on"
1"His tailored charcoal suit, dark"
2"He carried his ivory-handled cane"
3"His voice, a low rumble,"
4"Her own name, spoken with"
5"She gripped the doorknob, her"
6"She hadn't seen him since…"
7"It didn't reach his eyes."
8"She hadn't answered."
9"She’d seen his number light"
10"It was a lie, and"
11"Her phone worked perfectly; she"
12"He inclined his head, a"
13"His gaze swept over her,"
14"She hated how easily he"
15"He was a fixer, an"
16"He used the nickname this"
17"She hesitated, her mind racing."
18"She knew Lucien well enough"
19"He moved with an almost"
ratio0.571
31.43% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount90
totalSentences105
matches
0"Rory pulled the door inward,"
1"He stood impeccably, effortlessly, on"
2"His tailored charcoal suit, dark"
3"He carried his ivory-handled cane"
4"His voice, a low rumble,"
5"Her own name, spoken with"
6"She gripped the doorknob, her"
7"The question came out sharper"
8"She hadn't seen him since…"
9"The details were still a"
10"A ghost of a smile,"
11"It didn't reach his eyes."
12"She hadn't answered."
13"She’d seen his number light"
14"It was a lie, and"
15"Her phone worked perfectly; she"
16"He inclined his head, a"
17"His gaze swept over her,"
18"She hated how easily he"
19"He was a fixer, an"
ratio0.857
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences105
matches
0"Now, it only tightened the"
1"Even animals flocked to him."
2"If he was digging, it"
ratio0.029
88.95% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences53
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The details were still a blur of whiskey, sharp words, and a final, lingering kiss that had tasted of regret."
1"He was a fixer, an information broker, a man who saw everything."
2"She hated him for making her need him, for being the only one who seemed to truly understand the darkness that lurked beneath London’s surface."
3"He regarded her for a long moment, his heterochromatic eyes searching hers, as if trying to decipher the complex calculus of her emotions."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount8
matches
0"she managed, her voice suddenly tight"
1"Rory snapped, her cool façade cracking"
2"he conceded, the corner of his mouth twitching"
3"she challenged, refusing to back down"
4"she insisted, though her voice lacked conviction this time"
5"she countered, her anger rekindling"
6"she said, her voice barely a whisper"
7"Lucien murmured, his voice dropping,"
21.79% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"Rory snapped (snap)"
1"he conceded (concede)"
2"she challenged (challenge)"
3"she insisted (insist)"
4"Lucien murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.205
leniency0.41
rawRatio0.625
effectiveRatio0.256
73.2384%