Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ94Q9FRG1CQZJ26BGWX70VH

Run Details

Duration:
27.0s
Cost:
$0.010448
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The iron gates of Richmond Park had long since clicked shut, but the gap in the hawthorn hedge near the Victorian boundary wall remained. Aurora squeezed through, the thorns catching on her waxed jacket. She didn't mind the tear. The air inside the park felt heavy, thick with the scent of damp peat and something cloyingly sweet, like lilies left too long in a vase. She reached into her collar, fingers brushing the Heartstone Pendant. The crimson gem burned against her collarbone. It didn't just warm; it throbbed, a rhythmic pulse that matched the frantic cadence of her own heart. The silver chain bit into the back of her neck. "Just a quick look, Rory. In and out." The sound of her own voice felt flat, swallowed by the dense fog rolling off the Pen Ponds. She stepped off the paved path, her boots sinking into the rot-blackened mulch of the forest floor. London’s orange glow vanished behind a curtain of grey. The distant hum of the A3 died. In its place came a silence so profound it made her ears ring. The ancient oak standing stones loomed ahead. They weren't stone at all, but petrified wood, gnarled and twisted into pillars that reached like skeletal fingers for a starless sky. This was the boundary. The entrance to the Grove. As she crossed the threshold between two oaks, the temperature plummeted. Her breath bloomed in a jagged white cloud. Sunlight shouldn't exist here at midnight, yet a pale, sourceless luminescence bathed the clearing. Wildflowers—primroses, bluebells, and foxgloves—carpeted the ground in a riot of impossible spring colors, despite the October frost waiting just outside the veil. Rory touched the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. The skin there tingled. "Eva? You here?" A rustle came from the treeline. Not the sway of branches in the wind, but a sharp, deliberate snap. A dry branch breaking under significant weight. Rory spun. The foxgloves swayed, their bells nodding in a breeze she couldn't feel. Nothing stood there. She moved deeper into the clearing, her eyes darting between the silver-barked trees. The Heartstone flared, casting a bloody light across her chin and chest. The heat grew prickling, uncomfortable. A soft, wet thud echoed behind her. She whirled again, hand gripping the hilt of the small folding knife in her pocket. The space where she’d stood a moment ago was empty, but the grass remained flattened, three distinct circular depressions pressed into the soil. They were too large for a deer, too irregular for a man. "I know someone’s there. Silas sent me. We just want to talk." The silence stretched. Then, from the heights of a canopy that seemed to stretch miles upward, a voice drifted down. It wasn't a voice so much as a vibration in her marrow. "Talk is for the salt-bloods, Laila." Rory flinched at the name. Nobody called her Malphora’s old title anymore. She backed away, her heel catching on a thick, exposed root. She stumbled, falling hard onto her palms. The soil felt unnervingly warm, like the skin of a feverish animal. She scrambled up, wiping dirt from her jeans. The trees had moved. The two oaks she had passed through were gone, replaced by a wall of interlocking thorns that pulsed with a slow, vegetable heartbeat. The clearing had shrunk. The standing stones seemed closer now, leaning inward at impossible angles. A high-pitched whistle, like a teakettle left on the stove, pierced the air. It came from the left. No, the right. It circled her, spiraling inward. Rory gripped the Heartstone, the crimson light leaking through her fingers. "Show yourself. Stop the games." Something white flashed at the periphery of her vision. A tall, spindly shape, draped in what looked like moth-eaten lace or perhaps translucent skin. It ducked behind a standing stone before she could lock her gaze on it. The whistling stopped. "Isolde?" The name felt like ash in her mouth. She shouldn't have said it. The Grove responded instantly. The wildflowers turned their heads toward her, their petals peeling back to reveal rows of tiny, needle-like thorns. The sweet scent shifted, turning metallic and sharp. A rhythmic clicking started. *Tiptap. Tiptap. Tiptap.* It sounded like fingernails tapping on a glass table. The noise originated from directly behind her. Rory didn't turn this time. She frozen, her muscles locked in a primal rejection of what her senses suggested. A shadow stretched out before her, elongated and distorted by the sourceless light. The shadow’s neck was too long, ending in a head that sat at a jaunty, broken angle. "The stone is hungry, Rory. Are you?" The voice whispered directly into her ear, though she felt no breath against her skin. It carried the dry, papery quality of dead leaves skittering over pavement. Rory lunged forward, sprinting toward a gap in the thorns. The ground beneath her softened, turning into a loamy slurry that tried to claim her boots. She didn't look back. She could hear the *tiptap* accelerating behind her, a frantic, skittering gallop. She vaulted over a fallen log, her shoulder clipping a branch. The wood didn't break; it flexed like muscle, dragging a jagged line across her jacket. "Leaving so soon? The hour has barely begun. Or has it been years?" The voice came from the log she had just jumped over. Rory halted, gasping for air that tasted of copper and old honey. She looked at her watch. The second hand had stopped moving. It didn't twitch. It simply sat dead at the twelve. She looked up at the sky. The moon hadn't risen, but the stars were wrong. They were too large, swirling in rhythmic patterns that made her vision swim. The Heartstone was screaming now, a vibrant, angry red that illuminated the entire clearing. In the glow, she saw them. They weren't hiding anymore. They stood among the trees, dozens of them. Tall, pale figures with limbs like peeled willow branches. They had no eyes, only deep, vertical slits where noses should be, and mouths that stayed perfectly circular, frozen in a silent 'O'. They didn't move. They simply watched with those sightless faces. Rory’s breath hitched in her throat. She gripped the pendant so hard the silver chain snapped. She held the stone in her palm, its heat blistering her skin. "I have the Heartstone. You can't touch me." One of the figures, the one closest to the petrified oak, stepped forward. Its movements were stuttered, like a film skipping frames. It tilted its head, the neck cracking audibly in the silence. "The stone doesn't protect the wearer, little bird. It marks the meal." The creature raised a hand. Its fingers were tipped with long, black talons that looked like obsidian. It didn't reach for her throat. It reached for the stone. As the creature moved, the Grove began to fold. The trees leaned further, the canopy descending like a heavy velvet curtain. The boundaries of the clearing blurred, the grass rising up to meet the sagging sky. Rory backed away until her spine hit the rough, vibrating bark of a standing stone. The wood felt sticky. Looking down, she saw thick, amber resin oozing from the trunk, pinning her jacket to the wood. "Let me go." The tall figure stopped inches from her face. It smelled of ozone and ancient dust. The vertical slits on its face twitched, inhaling her scent. "You brought the key back to the lock. Why would we let you go?" The creature’s circular mouth stretched wider. Small, translucent cilia vibrated inside the throat. Rory fumbled with her knife, but her fingers were numb, the cold of the Grove finally seeping through her skin. The Heartstone in her hand pulsed one last time, a blinding flare of crimson that turned the world to the color of a fresh wound. In the flash, she saw the creature’s true face—a mass of writhing, pale grubs beneath the translucent skin. The light died. The clicking resumed, intensified, a thousand fingernails tapping on the stones around her. "The others are coming, Aurora. They’ve missed the taste of Cardiff rain." A hand, cold as a tombstone, settled over her mouth. The fingers were long enough to wrap entirely around her skull. Rory tried to scream, but the sound was muffled by the creature's palm. The resin from the tree crawled up her arms, warm and suffocating, pulling her into the bark. The wildflowers at her feet began to grow, their thorny vines winding around her ankles, dragging her down into the shifting, hungry earth. The last thing she saw before the darkness took her was the Heartstone, falling from her numb fingers and rolling into the Foxgloves, its glow fading to a dull, dying ember. The whistling started again, a cheerful, lonely tune that echoed through the trees. "Don't worry," the voice whispered, now coming from inside her own head. "Time moves differently here. You won't be forgotten for at least a century." The thorns closed over the clearing. The pale light flickered out. Richmond Park stood silent once more, the fog thick and impenetrable, hiding the gap in the hedge where a girl had walked in and never walked out. The Heartstone lay in the dirt, waiting for the next hand to find it. The shifting shadows of the trees danced over the crimson gem, and the clicking sound faded into the rustle of leaves. "Rory?" A voice called from the distance, far beyond the veil. It sounded like Silas. It sounded like home. But the voice was too high, too melodic, and it was laughing. She tried to move her hand, but it was wood. She tried to blink, but her eyelids were stone. The Grove breathed, a slow, deep inhalation that pulled the very air from her lungs. "Stay still," the creature whispered, its face pressing against hers. "The change is almost complete."
created_at"2026-02-25T00:55:57.182Z" 2/25/2026, 12:55:57 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences18
tagDensity0.167
leniency0.333
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.94% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1649
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
42.39% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1649
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"throbbed"
count1
1
word"rhythmic"
count3
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"silence"
count3
4
word"profound"
count1
5
word"loomed"
count1
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"echoed"
count2
8
word"pulsed"
count2
9
word"velvet"
count1
10
word"vibrated"
count1
11
word"the last thing"
count1
12
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"throbbed"
1"rhythmic"
2"pulse"
3"silence"
4"profound"
5"loomed"
6"weight"
7"echoed"
8"pulsed"
9"velvet"
10"vibrated"
11"the last thing"
12"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences145
matches(empty)
64.04% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount7
narrationSentences145
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
2"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences161
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords4
totalWords1646
ratio0.002
matches
0"Tiptap. Tiptap. Tiptap."
1"tiptap"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount1518
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.72
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park2
Victorian1
Heartstone7
Pendant1
Pen1
Ponds1
Grove5
October1
Malphora1
Foxgloves1
Silas1
Rory11
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Grove"
2"Malphora"
3"Foxgloves"
4"Silas"
5"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Victorian"
globalScore1
windowScore1
14.86% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences111
glossingSentenceCount6
matches
0"canopy that seemed to stretch miles upward, a voice drifted down"
1"seemed closer now, leaning inward at impossible angles"
2"looked like moth-eaten lace or perhaps tr"
3"felt like ash in her mouth"
4"sounded like fingernails tapping on a glas"
5"looked like obsidian"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.608
wordCount1646
matches
0"Not the sway of branches in the wind, but a sharp, deliberate snap"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences161
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs63
mean26.13
std17.34
cv0.664
sampleLengths
065
145
28
364
438
555
613
73
826
947
107
1150
1212
1332
146
1542
1650
1726
1811
195
2038
213
221
2343
247
2565
267
2727
2842
2926
3013
3111
3233
3342
346
3544
3610
3728
388
3933
4012
4128
4236
4336
443
4525
4614
4713
4845
4918
95.58% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences145
matches
0"were gone"
1"were stuttered"
2"were tipped"
3"was muffled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs267
matches
0"was screaming"
1"weren't hiding"
2"was laughing"
71.87% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences161
ratio0.025
matches
0"It didn't just warm; it throbbed, a rhythmic pulse that matched the frantic cadence of her own heart."
1"Wildflowers—primroses, bluebells, and foxgloves—carpeted the ground in a riot of impossible spring colors, despite the October frost waiting just outside the veil."
2"The wood didn't break; it flexed like muscle, dragging a jagged line across her jacket."
3"In the flash, she saw the creature’s true face—a mass of writhing, pale grubs beneath the translucent skin."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1017
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.03736479842674533
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.00983284169124877
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences161
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences161
mean10.22
std5.86
cv0.573
sampleLengths
024
110
25
326
410
57
618
710
88
918
1017
119
127
1313
147
1522
164
175
1811
198
2014
2122
229
234
243
256
2613
277
282
2912
303
3113
3212
335
347
3515
3623
3712
3812
393
4017
4112
426
435
447
4511
467
4712
488
494
31.37% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats30
diversityRatio0.2484472049689441
totalSentences161
uniqueOpeners40
23.64% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences141
matches
0"Then, from the heights of"
ratio0.007
92.34% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount45
totalSentences141
matches
0"She didn't mind the tear."
1"She reached into her collar,"
2"It didn't just warm; it"
3"She stepped off the paved"
4"They weren't stone at all,"
5"Her breath bloomed in a"
6"She moved deeper into the"
7"She whirled again, hand gripping"
8"They were too large for"
9"It wasn't a voice so"
10"She backed away, her heel"
11"She stumbled, falling hard onto"
12"She scrambled up, wiping dirt"
13"It came from the left."
14"It circled her, spiraling inward."
15"It ducked behind a standing"
16"She shouldn't have said it."
17"It sounded like fingernails tapping"
18"She frozen, her muscles locked"
19"It carried the dry, papery"
ratio0.319
6.10% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount128
totalSentences141
matches
0"The iron gates of Richmond"
1"Aurora squeezed through, the thorns"
2"She didn't mind the tear."
3"The air inside the park"
4"She reached into her collar,"
5"The crimson gem burned against"
6"It didn't just warm; it"
7"The silver chain bit into"
8"The sound of her own"
9"She stepped off the paved"
10"London’s orange glow vanished behind"
11"The distant hum of the"
12"The ancient oak standing stones"
13"They weren't stone at all,"
14"This was the boundary."
15"The entrance to the Grove."
16"Her breath bloomed in a"
17"Sunlight shouldn't exist here at"
18"Wildflowers—primroses, bluebells, and foxgloves—carpeted the"
19"Rory touched the crescent-shaped scar"
ratio0.908
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences141
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences74
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The Heartstone in her hand pulsed one last time, a blinding flare of crimson that turned the world to the color of a fresh wound."
1"The wildflowers at her feet began to grow, their thorny vines winding around her ankles, dragging her down into the shifting, hungry earth."
2"The last thing she saw before the darkness took her was the Heartstone, falling from her numb fingers and rolling into the Foxgloves, its glow fading to a dull,…"
3"The whistling started again, a cheerful, lonely tune that echoed through the trees."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"the creature whispered, its face pressing against hers"
38.89% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"the voice whispered (whisper)"
1"the creature whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences18
tagDensity0.111
leniency0.222
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.222
75.8340%