Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ94QHCWY90CCJTAVVSNRH9W

Run Details

Duration:
22.4s
Cost:
$0.012412
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory’s boots met packed earth, the sudden solidity a shock after the lurch of passage. Air, thick and sweet, filled her lungs, tasting of unfamiliar spices and ripening fruit. The sky above pulsed with a warm amber, not a cloud in sight, painting the sprawling landscape in hues of gold and orange. No sun, no moon, just that pervasive, luminous glow. "Hel," she breathed, the word a rasp. The Heartstone Pendant, nestled against her sternum, warmed, a faint, rhythmic thrum vibrating through her. Nyx coalesced beside her, the shadows drawing together into a towering, indistinct form. Its violet eyes, twin pinpricks of light in the dimness, swept over the vista. "Precisely," Nyx's voice whispered, a current of air through dry leaves. "Dymas. The domain of excess." Rory scanned the horizon. Gentle hills rolled away, draped in what looked like vineyards, but not as she knew them. Vines as thick as her leg coiled skyward, their leaves a deep, shimmering violet. Clusters of fruit, fat and luminous, hung heavy; some gleamed with an inner cyan light, others pulsed with a soft green. The air vibrated with the buzz of unseen insects, a low hum beneath the distant, echoing strains of what might have been music or a grand chorus. It felt both breathtaking and unsettling. "No wonder it's Gluttony," Rory muttered, stepping forward. Her stride felt oddly heavy, the earth beneath her remarkably fertile yet unnervingly silent. No birdsong, no rustle of natural wind, only the omnipresent hum and the faint, sweet-sick aroma. She reached out, her fingers brushing a leaf from a nearby vine. It felt like cool velvet, leaving a faint, fruity residue on her skin. She sniffed her fingers. Overwhelmingly sweet. "Resistance to its allure is… challenging," Nyx whispered, a faint shimmer preceding its movement further into the grove. Its form flowed, a graceful dance of encroaching darkness through the vibrant landscape. Rory drew the Fae-Forged Blade. The moonsilver gleamed, a cool counterpoint to the warm amber glow. Its slender, leaf-shaped form felt perfectly balanced in her grip, a sliver of defiance against the overwhelming indulgence. They moved between rows of the colossal vines. The ground here grew richer, darker, almost black, scattered with fallen, half-eaten fruits that glowed with a sickening brilliance. Rory watched for movement, her gaze darting from shadow to shadow. The silence, broken only by the hum, pressed in. This realm was opulent, yes, but it felt empty, hollow. A path, paved with smooth, dark stone, appeared, winding deeper amidst groves of what looked like fruit trees, their branches laden. Each tree bore different fruits, impossible colours and shapes. One tree offered clusters of elongated, crimson berries that wept thick, clear sap onto the path. Another held segmented, iridescent pods, each scale the size of her palm, shimmering like oil slicks. "It’s almost too much," Rory said, pushing a stray strand of black hair from her eyes. Every sense felt assaulted, overwhelmed by the sheer variety and intensity. Her stomach churned, not from hunger, but from the dizzying, cloying richness of the air. Nyx paused, a shadow lengthening by a tree laden with fat, golden globes, each studded with tiny, pulsating blue veins. "The intention." "To consume," Rory finished, her voice flat. She saw now. It wasn't just physical food; it was a feast for the eyes, the nose, the mind. A constant, unending demand on the senses. They ventured deeper. The path widened, opening into a gargantuan garden. Here, plants grew in impossible formations: towering spirals of crimson blossoms, bushes that resembled intricate spun-sugar sculptures, trees with bark like polished obsidian, bearing luminous, bell-shaped fruits that chimed softly in a nonexistent breeze. Large, crystalline fountains burbled in the distance, sending arcing sprays of glistening liquid into decorative pools. The liquid within those pools pulsed, reflecting the amber sky and the vibrant flora in dizzying patterns. Rory approached one of these fountains. The water, if it was water, was thick, swirling with flecks of gold. It emanated a potent, sweet aroma, different from the air, like honeyed wine. Her throat tightened. This was engineered seduction, every fibre of Dymas designed to tempt, to overwhelm. "The architects of this realm understand human desires," Nyx’s whisper drifted from behind her. "And how to bend them." Rory’s bright blue eyes narrowed. "No Wardens here, I take it." The thought had been nagging at her. On Earth, they'd monitor rifts. Here? She clenched her grip on the Fae-Forged Blade. "Just the… Prince?" "Belphegor," Nyx articulated, a faint shift in its form suggesting a nod. "His domains are well-maintained, but not guarded in the traditional sense against new arrivals. Rather, they are designed to ensnare." A faint, rhythmic thumping echoed now, growing louder, accompanied by low, resonant voices. They came from further ahead, beyond a massive hedge maze of glowing emerald foliage. Rory instinctively pressed closer to Nyx, her heart thudding a faster rhythm against her ribs. "Sounds like a party," she muttered, the sarcasm thin. "Or a contest," Nyx corrected, its form becoming slightly less ethereal. "Culinary challenges, gladiatorial feasts. The Dymasian courts thrive on competitive indulgence." Rory peered through a gap in the emerald leaves. Beyond, a vast arena opened up. Grandstands, sculpted from what looked like dark, polished wood, curved around a circular stage. But this wasn’t a stage for gladiators. It was a colossal kitchen. Cauldrons the size of small cars bubbled over roaring, enclosed fires. Chefs, their forms humanoid but elongated and subtly alien, moved with focused intensity, stirring steaming stews, carving enormous, unnamed roasts, decorating confections that glowed with an internal light. The air here was even heavier, thicker with the scent of countless dishes – sweet, savory, pungent, sour, all clashing and blending into a single, overwhelming feast for the nose. The thumping had been the rhythmic chopping of colossal blades on immense cutting boards. The voices, a blend of excited murmurs from the unseen audience in the stands, and the sharp commands of the judges patrolling the arena floor. "They're cooking," Rory whispered, her gaze wide. "For an audience?" "Consumption is an art form here, Aurora," Nyx stated. "And spectacle. Mortals who linger too long, who give themselves over to the initial temptations of Gluttony, often find themselves drawn into service. To create, for eternity, the very excess that enthralled them." A shiver traced its way down Rory’s spine, despite the inherent warmth of Dymas. "Helbound souls," she recalled. The horror of it solidified in her mind. To be condemned to a never-ending cycle of producing the very thing that damned you. The thought was chilling. She looked at her hands, then back at the gleaming Fae-Forged Blade. Its coldness, its sharp edge, felt like a vital anchor in this place of soft, cloying excess. She glanced at Nyx, their shadowed form an inscrutable sentinel beside her. "We need to find a way through this," Rory stated, her voice quiet but firm. "Not join the cooking show." The thought of remaining in Dymas, even for a moment longer than necessary, filled her with a profound sense of urgency. The warmth of the Heartstone suddenly felt less comforting, more like a brand. It wasn't just a guide; it was a beacon, here, in the heart of Hel. It pulled, gently, insistently, towards something deeper within the realm. "The path forward is rarely the obvious one," Nyx intoned, its eyes seeming to focus on a different part of the arena, perhaps beyond the immediate spectacle. "Especially when every avenue presents a silken snare." Rory took a deep breath, the spiced, sweet air doing little to steady her. The sight of the monstrous kitchen spectacle, the alien chefs, the unseen, ravenous audience – it all pressed in, a physical weight. The grandeur of Dymas was a hollow shell, masking a dreadful, consuming truth. She tightened her grip on the Fae-Forged Blade, its sharp edge a promise against the realm’s insidious embrace.
created_at"2026-02-25T00:56:05.284Z" 2/25/2026, 12:56:05 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.615
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
69.58% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1315
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"precisely"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
3
adverb"slightly"
count1
4
adverb"very"
count2
5
adverb"suddenly"
count1
6
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"precisely"
1"perfectly"
2"softly"
3"slightly"
4"very"
5"suddenly"
6"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1315
totalAiIsms35
found
0
word"lurch"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count3
2
word"rhythmic"
count3
3
word"scanned"
count1
4
word"vibrated"
count1
5
word"echoing"
count1
6
word"velvet"
count1
7
word"dance"
count1
8
word"silence"
count1
9
word"amidst"
count1
10
word"intensity"
count2
11
word"stomach"
count1
12
word"churned"
count1
13
word"intricate"
count1
14
word"crystalline"
count1
15
word"glistening"
count1
16
word"whisper"
count1
17
word"echoed"
count1
18
word"roaring"
count1
19
word"traced"
count1
20
word"warmth"
count2
21
word"chilling"
count1
22
word"gleaming"
count1
23
word"sentinel"
count1
24
word"profound"
count1
25
word"sense of"
count1
26
word"comforting"
count1
27
word"beacon"
count1
28
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"lurch"
1"pulsed"
2"rhythmic"
3"scanned"
4"vibrated"
5"echoing"
6"velvet"
7"dance"
8"silence"
9"amidst"
10"intensity"
11"stomach"
12"churned"
13"intricate"
14"crystalline"
15"glistening"
16"whisper"
17"echoed"
18"roaring"
19"traced"
20"warmth"
21"chilling"
22"gleaming"
23"sentinel"
24"profound"
25"sense of"
26"comforting"
27"beacon"
28"weight"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"stomach churned"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences96
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences105
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1317
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
85.06% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions43
wordCount1155
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.3
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Heartstone2
Pendant1
Rory15
Fae-Forged4
Blade4
Dymas4
Earth1
Nyx11
Hel1
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Pendant"
2"Rory"
3"Nyx"
places(empty)
globalScore0.851
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences78
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"looked like vineyards, but not as she kne"
1"felt like cool velvet, leaving a faint"
2"looked like fruit trees, their branches l"
3"looked like dark, polished wood, curved a"
4"felt like a vital anchor in this place"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.759
wordCount1317
matches
0"not from hunger, but from the dizzying, cloying richness of the air"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences105
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean43.9
std23.73
cv0.541
sampleLengths
061
122
227
316
488
569
631
734
857
962
1042
1122
1233
1378
1448
1519
1635
1732
1842
199
2022
21110
2239
2310
2442
2545
2641
2779
2835
2967
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences96
matches
0"was engineered"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs175
matches(empty)
6.80% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences105
ratio0.048
matches
0"Clusters of fruit, fat and luminous, hung heavy; some gleamed with an inner cyan light, others pulsed with a soft green."
1"It wasn't just physical food; it was a feast for the eyes, the nose, the mind."
2"The air here was even heavier, thicker with the scent of countless dishes – sweet, savory, pungent, sour, all clashing and blending into a single, overwhelming feast for the nose."
3"It wasn't just a guide; it was a beacon, here, in the heart of Hel."
4"The sight of the monstrous kitchen spectacle, the alien chefs, the unseen, ravenous audience – it all pressed in, a physical weight."
82.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1163
adjectiveStacks3
stackExamples
0"faint, sweet-sick aroma."
1"slender, leaf-shaped form"
2"luminous, bell-shaped fruits"
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.03181427343078246
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.012037833190025795
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences105
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences105
mean12.54
std6.84
cv0.545
sampleLengths
015
114
223
39
47
515
613
714
811
95
104
1116
1214
1321
1427
156
168
1714
1816
1912
2013
214
222
2318
2413
255
2611
2718
288
2919
3011
319
3210
3321
349
3516
3616
3716
3811
3915
4020
412
427
433
4416
457
463
478
4834
4916
69.21% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.4380952380952381
totalSentences105
uniqueOpeners46
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences92
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences92
matches
0"she breathed, the word a"
1"Its violet eyes, twin pinpricks"
2"It felt both breathtaking and"
3"Her stride felt oddly heavy,"
4"She reached out, her fingers"
5"It felt like cool velvet,"
6"She sniffed her fingers."
7"Its form flowed, a graceful"
8"Its slender, leaf-shaped form felt"
9"They moved between rows of"
10"Her stomach churned, not from"
11"She saw now."
12"It wasn't just physical food;"
13"They ventured deeper."
14"It emanated a potent, sweet"
15"Her throat tightened."
16"She clenched her grip on"
17"They came from further ahead,"
18"she muttered, the sarcasm thin"
19"It was a colossal kitchen."
ratio0.283
14.35% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount82
totalSentences92
matches
0"Rory’s boots met packed earth,"
1"The sky above pulsed with"
2"she breathed, the word a"
3"The Heartstone Pendant, nestled against"
4"Nyx coalesced beside her, the"
5"Its violet eyes, twin pinpricks"
6"Nyx's voice whispered, a current"
7"Rory scanned the horizon."
8"Vines as thick as her"
9"Clusters of fruit, fat and"
10"The air vibrated with the"
11"It felt both breathtaking and"
12"Rory muttered, stepping forward"
13"Her stride felt oddly heavy,"
14"She reached out, her fingers"
15"It felt like cool velvet,"
16"She sniffed her fingers."
17"Nyx whispered, a faint shimmer"
18"Its form flowed, a graceful"
19"Rory drew the Fae-Forged Blade."
ratio0.891
54.35% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences92
matches
0"To be condemned to a"
ratio0.011
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences54
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The ground here grew richer, darker, almost black, scattered with fallen, half-eaten fruits that glowed with a sickening brilliance."
1"Here, plants grew in impossible formations: towering spirals of crimson blossoms, bushes that resembled intricate spun-sugar sculptures, trees with bark like po…"
2"Chefs, their forms humanoid but elongated and subtly alien, moved with focused intensity, stirring steaming stews, carving enormous, unnamed roasts, decorating …"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"she breathed, the word a rasp"
1"Nyx's voice whispered, a current of air through dry leaves"
2"Nyx whispered, a faint shimmer preceding its movement further into the grove"
3"Rory finished, her voice flat"
4"Nyx corrected, its form becoming slightly less ethereal"
5"Rory whispered, her gaze wide"
6"Rory stated, her voice quiet but firm"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount10
fancyTags
0"she breathed (breathe)"
1"Nyx's voice whispered (whisper)"
2"Rory muttered (mutter)"
3"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
4"Nyx articulated (articulate)"
5"she muttered (mutter)"
6"Nyx corrected (correct)"
7"Rory whispered (whisper)"
8"Nyx stated (state)"
9"Rory stated (state)"
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.423
leniency0.846
rawRatio0.909
effectiveRatio0.769
71.6006%