Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ94R3MDQF89T5MKXQC6TD8T

Run Details

Duration:
27.5s
Cost:
$0.003034
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The sharp rap echoes through the narrow hallway, a sound too precise for a drunk stumble or a hurried delivery. Rory sighs, wiping flour from her hands onto a worn apron. Probably Silas, needing help with a keg. Or a late-night customer with a complex order. She unlocks the deadbolt, the tumblers groaning in protest. She opens the door. And the world tilts. Lucien. He’s leaning against her doorframe, impossibly elegant even in the dim, flickering light of the stairwell above Silas' bar. His platinum blond hair gleams, slicked back as if sculpted by a god just for him. But it’s his eyes—one the startling amber of a trapped firefly, the other a void of pure black—that arrest her. They sweep over her, cataloging the flour dusting her cheeks, the faded band t-shirt, the stark contrast to the tailored charcoal suit that always draped his frame perfectly. He holds his ivory-handled cane loosely, its ornate curve a familiar, unsettling anchor. "Rory," he says. The word is low, a rumble that seems to vibrate in her bones. It’s been a long time. Too long. Her name, spoken by him, feels like a key turning in a lock she thought rusted shut. She doesn’t breathe. Her hand, still holding the doorknob, tightens. The crescent scar on her left wrist, usually hidden beneath her sleeve, tingles with phantom pressure. "Lucien. What—" He pushes off the frame with a fluid motion that belies the lean strength beneath the expensive fabric. He doesn't wait for an invitation, stepping across the threshold into the cramped space of her flat, bringing with him the faint, intoxicating scent of expensive soap and something else, something deeper, darker, the subtle undercurrent of ozone and ancient stone that always clung to him. It’s the scent of the London she tried to forget, the one that lived in alleyways and shadowed corners, the one that had claimed her for a brief, intense, terrifying time. "You didn’t answer my calls," he states, his voice smooth, unhurried, laced with a faint French accent that makes her stomach clench. His gaze takes in the meager furnishings, the scattered remnants of her life above Silas' bar: a worn armchair, a stack of books precariously balanced on a teetering side table, a half-eaten plate of something that smells vaguely of old noodles. It’s a stark picture next to his immaculate presentation, and he doesn’t miss it. His lips curl, almost imperceptibly. "I don't have your number. And you don't have mine," Rory counters, finding her voice, though it cracks slightly. She closes the door, the click of the deadbolt a small, decisive sound. She eyes the three deadbolts on Eva’s flat in the codex, realizing her own security measures are far less elaborate, built more from habit than necessity lately. Here, it's just her and Silas downstairs. Silas, her landlord. Not exactly protection, but he knew how to handle trouble. "Evidently," Lucien murmurs, his gaze finally settling on her face. His heterochromatic eyes, one amber, one black, bore into hers. There’s an unspoken history there, a universe of shared moments and fractured promises. He knows she’s been hiding. He knows she’s been trying to disappear. "What do you want?" she asks, crossing her arms, a futile gesture of defense. The flour on her apron feels like a badge of her new, carefully constructed ordinariness. It’s a far cry from the Rory who ran with him through the city's underbelly, a far cry from the woman who’d looked into those impossible eyes and felt a dangerous certainty. "A matter of some urgency," he replies, his tone shifting, the veneer of casual observation replaced by a sharp, professional focus. He straightens his cuffs, a tiny, deliberate movement. "A mutual acquaintance has gone missing. Someone you knew, perhaps." Rory stiffens. "Missing? Who?" Panic, sharp and cold, pricked at her. The world she’d escaped was always a breath away from collapsing. "A young woman. Her name was Anya. Worked at the Jade Dragon, near your old route from the Empress." The Jade Dragon. Rory knew it. A dive, perpetually under new ownership, always on the edge of trouble. Anya. The name stirred a vague recognition, a fleeting scent of cheap perfume and desperation from her delivery days. "I don't know anyone by that name." "Are you certain?" His gaze intensifies, probing. The air in the small flat seems to thicken, charged with his presence. It’s the same potent energy that had drawn her in, the same danger she’d run from. "She was asking about a certain ledger. A ledger that might have your name on it as a courier. Or, at the very least, a recipient." Rory’s breath hitched. A ledger. The unspoken things between them always revolved around secrets, around transactions. "I don't do that anymore, Lucien." The words were a plea, a statement of newly built fact. She’d left that life behind when she left Evan, when she fled Cardiff. She was just Rory now. Just a delivery person. He takes a step closer, and she instinctively braces herself, looking up at his slightly superior height. He smells of secrets and danger, and something else, something that makes her traitorous body remember. "The world has a way of finding anyone, Rory. Especially those who know things. Especially those who owe favors. Or are owed them." He gestures vaguely with the tip of his cane. "This Anya. She was asking questions. Dangerous questions. And before she vanished, she mentioned your name to a rather unsavory client. A client who happens to be very interested in retrieving this ledger. And in silencing anyone associated with it." He’s telling her she’s in danger. He’s always been the one to deliver bad news, or good news wrapped in dark warnings. But this feels different. He’s here, in her tiny, flour-dusted sanctuary. He’s bringing the storm to her door. "Why come to me?" Her voice is quiet, laced with a weariness that stretches back years. "Why not the police? Or… someone else?" Lucien tilts his head, his platinum hair catching the dim light. His heterochromatic eyes are unnervingly calm. "The police would be… unproductive. And as for someone else," he pauses, and the silence stretches, pregnant with implication, "there is no one else who can navigate this particular intersection of the mundane and the… esoteric. No one else with your unique perspective. And," he adds, a flicker of something that might be regret, or perhaps something warmer, crossing his face, "no one else I would trust to look into this. Not truly." Trust. The word lands like a stone in a still pond. He didn't trust her. Not really. Not when it mattered. And she hadn't trusted him either, not when she finally understood the depth of his world, the price of his power. "You don't trust me," Rory states flatly, meeting his gaze. Her bright blue eyes, usually so sharp, feel clouded with a familiar ache. A small, humorless smile touches Lucien's lips. "Perhaps not completely. But I remember your ingenuity. Your ability to see what others miss. And," his gaze lingers on her face, on the faint flush of her cheeks, the determined set of her jaw, "I remember the one who once made me forget the meaning of the word." Her chest tightens. The memory floods her: late nights in dimly lit rooms, hushed conversations that led to impossible places, the thrill of danger sharpened by the stark intensity of his presence. The way his hand felt, impossibly warm, against her skin. The vulnerability he’d never shown anyone else, only to her. And then, the abrupt end, the shattering realization that his world, his nature, was a chasm she couldn’t bridge, a risk that was ultimately too great. She had run. He had let her go. Or perhaps he had simply watched her flee, as he watched everything. "That Rory is gone," she says, her voice rough. The scar on her wrist throbs, a phantom echo of vulnerability. "Is she?" Lucien steps closer still, his cane tapping softly against the worn floorboards. He stops inches from her, the air crackling with unspoken history. He’s taller, and she has to tilt her head back to meet his unsettling gaze. She can see the flecks of gold in the amber eye, the depthless abyss of the black one. He smells overpowering now, a dizzying mix of danger and something dangerously like desire. "Or is she merely… hibernating? Waiting for the right stimulus?" He raises a hand, and Rory flinches, expecting a touch, an accusation, a demand. Instead, his long fingers hover in the air between them, tracing the air as if he could sketch her essence. "You smell of yeast and desperation, Rory. Not the perfume of the woman I once knew." His voice is a low, rough caress. "I work," she snaps, the flour on her apron suddenly feeling like a defense. "I needed a job. This is my life now." "And your life," he continues, his gaze never leaving her face, "is currently in danger. Anya's disappearance is the first ripple. The ledger she mentioned… it’s a list of names, Rory. Names of people who have trafficked in forbidden things. Some still active, some long gone. But the one who wants it found doesn't care about antiquity. He wants to erase history, and anyone connected to it." He pauses, his eyes locking onto hers with an intensity that feels both predatory and possessive. "And you, my dear Rory, were a significant part of the network that kept that history intact. You moved packages. You carried messages." The accusation, however veiled, lands. She remembers the coded deliveries, the hushed meetings, the exhilaration mixed with dread. She remembers Lucien’s quiet guidance, his impossible knowledge, his possessive glances. She’d thought she was just helping him, navigating a side hustle. She hadn’t fully grasped the stakes, not until the night she saw the real price of this double life. "I was young," she whispers, her voice barely audible. "And foolish." "You were brilliant," he corrects softly. "And you fascinated me. You still do." He closes the remaining distance, and Rory’s breath catches. His fingers, cool and smooth, brush a stray strand of hair from her cheek. The touch is electric, familiar, devastating. It ignites a fire she thought had long been extinguished. Her scabbed knuckles, stained with flour, are a world away from the delicate silk of his suits. "You ran, Rory," he says, his voice a low murmur against her skin, sending shivers down her spine. "And I let you. Perhaps that was my mistake." His thumb grazes her cheekbone, a feather-light touch that makes her knees weak. Her bright blue eyes, wide and vulnerable, search his face desperately. She sees the amber glint, the black void, and knows she’s falling again. "Don't," she breathes, her voice trembling. "Don't do this. We can't—" "Can't we?" he challenges, his gaze holding hers captive. He leans closer, his scent overwhelming her, the familiar danger pulling her in like a tide. "Or is it that you don't want to? That you're afraid of what happens when the delivered package is yourself? When the courier finally admits she wants to be held?" The words hang in the air between them, charged with a desperate longing, a shared ache. His eyes darken, the heterochromia swirling like twin nebulae, and Rory forgets the flour, forgets the cramped flat, forgets the life she built as carefully as a fortress. She only sees him, the man who was both her ruin and her greatest temptation. The man who is now back, breaking down the very walls she'd spent years constructing, unannounced, and with a danger that binds them together again. The crescent scar on her wrist burns, a reminder of a past she'd tried to outrun, a past that had just kicked down her door.
created_at"2026-02-25T00:56:23.957Z" 2/25/2026, 12:56:23 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Rory states flatly [flatly]"
1"he corrects softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.538
leniency1
rawRatio0.095
effectiveRatio0.095
62.04% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1976
totalAiIsmAdverbs15
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"loosely"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count2
3
adverb"carefully"
count2
4
adverb"very"
count3
5
adverb"truly"
count1
6
adverb"really"
count1
7
adverb"completely"
count1
8
adverb"softly"
count2
9
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"loosely"
2"slightly"
3"carefully"
4"very"
5"truly"
6"really"
7"completely"
8"softly"
9"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
8.91% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1976
totalAiIsms36
found
0
word"echoes"
count1
1
word"complex"
count1
2
word"stark"
count3
3
word"familiar"
count4
4
word"stomach"
count1
5
word"unspoken"
count3
6
word"fractured"
count1
7
word"constructed"
count1
8
word"fleeting"
count1
9
word"charged"
count2
10
word"sanctuary"
count1
11
word"silence"
count1
12
word"implication"
count1
13
word"navigate"
count1
14
word"flicker"
count1
15
word"determined"
count1
16
word"intensity"
count2
17
word"echo"
count1
18
word"desire"
count1
19
word"tracing"
count1
20
word"coded"
count1
21
word"navigating"
count1
22
word"electric"
count1
23
word"silk"
count1
24
word"down her spine"
count1
25
word"glint"
count1
26
word"reminder"
count1
highlights
0"echoes"
1"complex"
2"stark"
3"familiar"
4"stomach"
5"unspoken"
6"fractured"
7"constructed"
8"fleeting"
9"charged"
10"sanctuary"
11"silence"
12"implication"
13"navigate"
14"flicker"
15"determined"
16"intensity"
17"echo"
18"desire"
19"tracing"
20"coded"
21"navigating"
22"electric"
23"silk"
24"down her spine"
25"glint"
26"reminder"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences128
matches
0"d with dread"
98.21% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences128
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seems to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences141
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen83
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1974
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions20
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount1499
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.73
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Silas3
London1
French1
Eva1
Rory11
Jade1
Dragon1
Evan1
Cardiff1
Lucien6
Trust1
persons
0"Silas"
1"Eva"
2"Rory"
3"Jade"
4"Dragon"
5"Evan"
6"Lucien"
places
0"London"
1"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences97
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"rumble that seems to vibrate in her bones"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.507
wordCount1974
matches
0"Not exactly protection, but he knew how to handle trouble"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences141
matches
0"left that life"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean51.95
std32
cv0.616
sampleLengths
055
14
24
31
496
566
62
795
882
979
1045
1161
1239
1322
1419
1544
1662
1755
18105
1940
2023
2190
2242
2323
2456
2598
2620
2782
2857
2923
30106
3159
3211
3369
3464
3511
3655
37109
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences128
matches
0"been extinguished"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs232
matches
0"was just helping"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences141
ratio0.007
matches
0"But it’s his eyes—one the startling amber of a trapped firefly, the other a void of pure black—that arrest her."
99.69% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount446
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.04035874439461883
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.017937219730941704
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences141
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences141
mean14
std11.89
cv0.849
sampleLengths
020
111
27
38
49
54
64
71
819
916
1020
1128
1213
133
1413
155
162
1717
183
197
2016
212
2218
2346
2431
2522
2641
2714
285
2919
3013
3127
327
333
3410
3510
3610
3713
385
397
4014
4115
4232
4321
448
4510
462
479
4811
4919
35.82% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats20
diversityRatio0.2553191489361702
totalSentences141
uniqueOpeners36
83.33% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences120
matches
0"Probably Silas, needing help with"
1"Just a delivery person."
2"Instead, his long fingers hover"
ratio0.025
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount74
totalSentences120
matches
0"She unlocks the deadbolt, the"
1"She opens the door."
2"He’s leaning against her doorframe,"
3"His platinum blond hair gleams,"
4"They sweep over her, cataloging"
5"He holds his ivory-handled cane"
6"It’s been a long time."
7"Her name, spoken by him,"
8"She doesn’t breathe."
9"Her hand, still holding the"
10"He pushes off the frame"
11"He doesn't wait for an"
12"It’s the scent of the"
13"he states, his voice smooth,"
14"His gaze takes in the"
15"It’s a stark picture next"
16"His lips curl, almost imperceptibly."
17"She closes the door, the"
18"She eyes the three deadbolts"
19"His heterochromatic eyes, one amber,"
ratio0.617
18.33% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount106
totalSentences120
matches
0"The sharp rap echoes through"
1"Rory sighs, wiping flour from"
2"She unlocks the deadbolt, the"
3"She opens the door."
4"He’s leaning against her doorframe,"
5"His platinum blond hair gleams,"
6"They sweep over her, cataloging"
7"He holds his ivory-handled cane"
8"The word is low, a"
9"It’s been a long time."
10"Her name, spoken by him,"
11"She doesn’t breathe."
12"Her hand, still holding the"
13"The crescent scar on her"
14"He pushes off the frame"
15"He doesn't wait for an"
16"It’s the scent of the"
17"he states, his voice smooth,"
18"His gaze takes in the"
19"It’s a stark picture next"
ratio0.883
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences120
matches(empty)
ratio0
25.76% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences61
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"He pushes off the frame with a fluid motion that belies the lean strength beneath the expensive fabric."
1"It’s a far cry from the Rory who ran with him through the city's underbelly, a far cry from the woman who’d looked into those impossible eyes and felt a dangero…"
2"He smells of secrets and danger, and something else, something that makes her traitorous body remember."
3"The memory floods her: late nights in dimly lit rooms, hushed conversations that led to impossible places, the thrill of danger sharpened by the stark intensity…"
4"And then, the abrupt end, the shattering realization that his world, his nature, was a chasm she couldn’t bridge, a risk that was ultimately too great."
5"Instead, his long fingers hover in the air between them, tracing the air as if he could sketch her essence."
6"He leans closer, his scent overwhelming her, the familiar danger pulling her in like a tide."
7"She only sees him, the man who was both her ruin and her greatest temptation."
8"The man who is now back, breaking down the very walls she'd spent years constructing, unannounced, and with a danger that binds them together again."
9"The crescent scar on her wrist burns, a reminder of a past she'd tried to outrun, a past that had just kicked down her door."
29.76% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"she says, her voice rough"
1"Lucien steps, his cane tapping softly against the worn floorboards"
2"she whispers, her voice barely audible"
3"she breathes, her voice trembling"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount8
fancyTags
0"he states (state)"
1"Rory states flatly (state)"
2"she snaps (snap)"
3"he continues (continue)"
4"she whispers (whisper)"
5"he corrects softly (correct)"
6"she breathes (breathe)"
7"he challenges (challenge)"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.615
effectiveRatio0.41
74.8397%