Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ94R4ZWYBA0JTBFDG2F60R7

Run Details

Duration:
17.6s
Cost:
$0.008305
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Three deadbolts scraped their protest as Rory eased the door open, the sound echoing a familiar unease. She peered into the dimly lit hallway, the scent of stale curry spices clinging to the air from the restaurant below. A silhouette, tall and unnervingly composed, stood waiting. Lucien Moreau. His platinum hair, usually slicked back, caught the faint glow from the landing light, shining like polished metal. One amber eye, the other a void of black, fixed on her, an unreadable depth in their heterochromatic gaze. He wore a charcoal suit, precisely tailored, a stark contrast to the threadbare carpet beneath his polished shoes, and rested a hand on the ivory handle of his cane. His presence felt too large for the narrow space, too sharp for the soft edges of the building. Rory’s breath hitched. She had not seen him in eight months, not since the rain-slicked night they parted ways, words like daggers still twisting in her memory. “Fancy seeing you here, Carter,” he offered, his French accent a low purr, a sound that always managed to settle deep in her bones, whether she wanted it to or not. His lips twitched, a hint of a smile she saw for the first time or the thousandth. Rory’s fingers whitened on the doorknob, knuckles popping. A small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist pulsed with an phantom ache she always attributed to old wounds, but in this moment, it felt like a fresh one. “Lucien.” Her voice came out flat, hollow. She felt the heat rising in her face, a mix of old anger and something else, something she refused to name. “What do you want?” He pushed past her, not waiting for an invitation. The heavy click of the door closing behind him seemed to seal them in, the flat’s cramped space suddenly shrinking. Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, blinked from his perch atop a leaning tower of arcane literature, then stretched, unconcerned by the sudden intrusion. Lucien’s gaze swept the room, taking in the precarious stacks of books, the scrolls unfurled across every available surface, the general air of organised chaos. His expression remained neutral, yet Rory felt the weight of his silent judgment, the unspoken comparison to his own meticulously ordered life. “An urgent matter,” he announced, turning back to her. He came to a stop a few feet away, close enough for the faint scent of expensive cologne to reach her. It was the same scent he always wore, a subtle blend of sandalwood and something sharper, reminiscent of forgotten spices. “It requires your… unique talents.” Rory scoffed, crossing her arms over her chest, a defiant stance. She remembered the last time he’d asked for her ‘unique talents’, how that had ended. “My unique talents are currently dedicated to not having you standing in my friend’s living room.” Lucien’s gaze flickered to the scar on her wrist, partially visible where her sleeve rode up. He did not comment, a practiced silence that only served to grate on her nerves further. “Charming as ever,” he allowed, a dry note in his tone. He reached into his inner jacket pocket, retrieving a folded piece of parchment. It was old, yellowed, crisscrossed with unfamiliar symbols. “A contact of mine came across this. He believes it points to a ritual, one with potential for… significant disruption.” He paused, letting the implication hang in the air, a silent threat. “And you, Carter, have always possessed a knack for understanding things others do not.” She stepped forward, plucking the parchment from his outstretched hand. Her fingers brushed his, a spark, or perhaps just a phantom memory of one, tracing a path up her arm. She ignored it, focusing on the script, her bright blue eyes scanning the intricate lines. Eva’s flat, with its endless supply of dark arts references, often meant Rory picked up more than she intended. This looked like something pulled straight from one of Eva’s ancient texts. “And you think *I* can decipher this?” Rory asked, tapping a challenging fingernail against one of the symbols. “You forget, I’m a delivery girl. Not some occult scholar.” “You are more than that, Aurora. You always have been,” he replied. The use of her full name, a rare occurrence with him, sent a tiny shiver down her spine. It felt intimate, a label from a past life. “Don’t you dare.” Her voice dropped, a warning. “Don’t you dare come here, after all this time, and pretend like you know anything about me.” He tilted his head, his slicked-back platinum hair catching the light again. The movement was imperceptible, yet it felt like a deliberate challenge. “I know enough.” “You know nothing,” she shot back, the words laced with a bitterness she hadn’t realised still festered so close to the surface. “You know how to use people, how to twist situations to your advantage. That’s what you know, Lucien. And that’s all you’ve ever known.” Lucien leaned against the doorframe separating the small living area from the even smaller kitchen, a picture of casual elegance amidst the clutter. He looked utterly unaffected by her venom, which only infuriated her further. “If you recall, Aurora, the last situation, as you put it, worked to our mutual advantage. Or did you forget the rather pressing danger we averted?” His tone remained even, infuriatingly calm. “I remember the aftermath,” she countered, her voice dropping to a near whisper, filled with an ache that still lingered. “I remember the quiet. I remember the missing phone calls. The empty space you left.” She finally met his gaze, holding it, letting the raw hurt show for a fleeting moment. “You just disappeared. No explanation, no goodbye.” His jaw tightened, a muscle tensing beneath his smooth skin. It was a subtle shift, barely visible, but Rory saw it. A rare crack in his impenetrable facade. “Sometimes, not saying goodbye is the greatest kindness,” he murmured, his gaze dropping to the floor, then back to her. The amber eye seemed to flicker, a momentary spark of something unreadable. “It avoids prolonging the inevitable.” “The inevitable?” Rory laughed, a low, humorless sound. “What, were we an ‘inevitable’ mistake, Lucien? Is that it? Just another loose end you tied up and swept under the rug?” She gestured around the cramped flat. “Because I distinctly recall a promise, on a cold London night, that we were… more than that.” Ptolemy, sensing the shift in atmosphere, leapt from his perch and weaved between their legs, his tail brushing against Lucien’s immaculately tailored trousers. Lucien glanced down, a flicker of a smile, almost gentle, gracing his lips as he avoided stepping on the cat. The unexpected softness made Rory’s stomach churn. “Promises are complex things, Aurora,” he finally said, his voice regaining its usual controlled cadence. “They are made in moments, but tested over vast stretches of time and circumstance. There were… factors at play.” “Always factors with you, aren’t there?” she challenged, her voice rising. “Always some grand, mysterious plan that justifies everything, even abandoning someone you supposedly cared about.” She gripped the parchment, crumpling the edge slightly. “So, what, some demonic ritual shows up, and suddenly the ‘factors’ allow you to resurface? Convenient.” His heterochromatic eyes narrowed, a glint of something sharp emerging. “This is not about convenience, Aurora. It’s about survival. For both of us. The symbols on this parchment… they speak of Avaros. My home realm, remember? My father’s world. This isn’t some minor blip on the magical radar. This could mean war.” Rory felt a cold dread seep into her. The word ‘Avaros’, the realm of demons, was not one thrown around lightly in their world. She hadn't wanted to think about Lucien's heritage, not since things had gone south. It was too tied up with *him*. Her anger warred with a primal fear. If he was right, if this was truly serious, then her personal feelings, no matter how potent, might have to take a back seat. He never came to her unless it was dire. That, she knew. She looked at the parchment again, tracing a finger over a particularly intricate sigil. “And Eva? She’s the expert on obscure demon lore. Why me?” “Eva is currently chasing a lead in Wiltshire,” Lucien responded, a hint of impatience coloring his tone now. “A fae enchantment, something about a missing flock of sheep and sudden, uncontrollable dancing. She is… indisposed. You, however, are here. And despite your current occupation, I know your mind, Carter. It discerns patterns where others see only chaos.” His words, a reluctant compliment, softened her posture, if only for a fraction of a second. She hated how easily he could disarm her, how a sliver of praise from him still felt like a valuable currency. “So, what’s the plan, then?” she asked, the fight draining from her voice, replaced by a weary resignation. She knew, deep down, she wouldn’t – couldn’t – turn her back on something that threatened London, or, judging by his expression, something much larger. “You drop a potentially world-ending artifact in my lap, remind me of everything I’d tried to forget, and then what? We just… pick up where we left off?” Lucien pushed off the doorframe, taking a step closer. The air between them crackled with unspoken history, with the ghosts of nights too passionate to forget, and mornings too silent to ignore. His heterochromatic eyes held hers, a silent challenge, an open question. “We start with the parchment, Aurora,” he murmured, his voice low, resonating through the cramped flat. “We ascertain its true purpose. And then, we decide what comes next.” He paused, his gaze dropping to her lips for a fleeting moment, before returning to her eyes. “Whatever that may be.”
created_at"2026-02-25T00:56:25.348Z" 2/25/2026, 12:56:25 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags23
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"She gestured around [around]"
1"he finally said [finally]"
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.575
leniency1
rawRatio0.087
effectiveRatio0.087
78.35% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1617
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"precisely"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count2
2
adverb"utterly"
count1
3
adverb"slightly"
count1
4
adverb"lightly"
count1
5
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"precisely"
1"suddenly"
2"utterly"
3"slightly"
4"lightly"
5"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
1.05% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1617
totalAiIsms32
found
0
word"echoing"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"unreadable"
count2
3
word"stark"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"unspoken"
count2
7
word"flickered"
count1
8
word"silence"
count1
9
word"potential"
count1
10
word"implication"
count1
11
word"tracing"
count2
12
word"scanning"
count1
13
word"intricate"
count2
14
word"down her spine"
count1
15
word"amidst"
count1
16
word"aftermath"
count1
17
word"whisper"
count1
18
word"fleeting"
count2
19
word"facade"
count1
20
word"flicker"
count2
21
word"stomach"
count1
22
word"churn"
count1
23
word"complex"
count1
24
word"glint"
count1
25
word"dancing"
count1
highlights
0"echoing"
1"familiar"
2"unreadable"
3"stark"
4"pulsed"
5"weight"
6"unspoken"
7"flickered"
8"silence"
9"potential"
10"implication"
11"tracing"
12"scanning"
13"intricate"
14"down her spine"
15"amidst"
16"aftermath"
17"whisper"
18"fleeting"
19"facade"
20"flicker"
21"stomach"
22"churn"
23"complex"
24"glint"
25"dancing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences83
matches(empty)
91.22% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences83
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"managed to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences101
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1619
ratio0.001
matches
0"I"
1"him"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount1129
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.97
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory11
Moreau1
French1
Eva3
Lucien9
Ptolemy2
London1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Moreau"
2"French"
3"Eva"
4"Lucien"
5"Ptolemy"
places
0"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
18.42% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences76
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"felt like a fresh one"
1"looked like something pulled straight fro"
2"felt like a deliberate challenge"
3"felt like a valuable currency"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1619
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences101
matches(empty)
82.57% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean46.26
std20.31
cv0.439
sampleLengths
046
12
284
327
431
554
632
797
855
942
1032
1178
1276
1328
1439
1525
1626
1746
1835
1932
2058
2128
2237
2353
2450
2534
2650
2752
2888
2925
3057
3137
3271
3343
3449
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs180
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences101
ratio0.01
matches
0"She knew, deep down, she wouldn’t – couldn’t – turn her back on something that threatened London, or, judging by his expression, something much larger."
84.75% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount791
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount40
adverbRatio0.05056890012642225
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.01643489254108723
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences101
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences101
mean16.03
std8.1
cv0.505
sampleLengths
017
121
28
32
418
519
629
718
83
924
1031
1117
128
1329
147
1521
164
179
1820
1921
2025
2122
229
2321
2420
255
2611
2715
2816
2916
3016
3111
3213
338
3432
3514
3610
3720
3815
3919
4012
4118
4210
4312
4418
459
468
4717
4812
4911
47.52% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.32673267326732675
totalSentences101
uniqueOpeners33
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount51
totalSentences80
matches
0"She peered into the dimly"
1"His platinum hair, usually slicked"
2"He wore a charcoal suit,"
3"His presence felt too large"
4"She had not seen him"
5"he offered, his French accent"
6"His lips twitched, a hint"
7"Her voice came out flat,"
8"She felt the heat rising"
9"He pushed past her, not"
10"His expression remained neutral, yet"
11"he announced, turning back to"
12"He came to a stop"
13"It was the same scent"
14"She remembered the last time"
15"He did not comment, a"
16"he allowed, a dry note"
17"He reached into his inner"
18"It was old, yellowed, crisscrossed"
19"He paused, letting the implication"
ratio0.638
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount77
totalSentences80
matches
0"She peered into the dimly"
1"A silhouette, tall and unnervingly"
2"His platinum hair, usually slicked"
3"He wore a charcoal suit,"
4"His presence felt too large"
5"Rory’s breath hitched."
6"She had not seen him"
7"he offered, his French accent"
8"His lips twitched, a hint"
9"Rory’s fingers whitened on the"
10"A small, crescent-shaped scar on"
11"Her voice came out flat,"
12"She felt the heat rising"
13"He pushed past her, not"
14"The heavy click of the"
15"Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, blinked from"
16"Lucien’s gaze swept the room,"
17"His expression remained neutral, yet"
18"he announced, turning back to"
19"He came to a stop"
ratio0.963
62.50% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences80
matches
0"If he was right, if"
ratio0.013
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Ptolemy, sensing the shift in atmosphere, leapt from his perch and weaved between their legs, his tail brushing against Lucien’s immaculately tailored trousers."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags23
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"Her voice came out, hollow"
1"he murmured, his gaze dropping to the floor, then back to her"
2"he finally said, his voice regaining its usual controlled cadence"
3"she challenged, her voice rising"
4"Lucien responded, a hint of impatience coloring his tone now"
5"he murmured, his voice low, resonating through the cramped flat"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"he announced (announce)"
1"he murmured (murmur)"
2"Rory laughed (laugh)"
3"she challenged (challenge)"
4"Lucien responded (respond)"
5"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0.6
effectiveRatio0.3
72.2132%