Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ94R81YJC697HSD0EHPFCDM

Run Details

Duration:
50.4s
Cost:
$0.002670
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The edge of the Fae Grove met Richmond Park’s sprawl like a seam ripped in reality. Rory stepped through a curtain of weeping willow branches, the leaves brushing her face like cold, wet fingers. The usual drone of city traffic, a constant hum even miles out, vanished. It didn't fade; it was gone, as if a giant hand had cupped its palm over the world outside. The air changed instantly, growing thick, heavy, carrying a scent that was both damp earth and something else – a sickly sweet perfume, like overripe fruit left too long in the sun. She paused, drawing a breath. Her lungs felt it immediately, a drag against the usual ease. The silence pressed in, immense, a physical weight against her eardrums. Not the quiet of a sleeping park, but a void, an absence of sound that felt deliberately manufactured. She wore her favourite black hoodie, zipped high to her chin, and her worn jeans. The Heartstone Pendant, usually nestled against her collarbone, offered a faint, consistent warmth beneath the fabric of her base layer. It was the only familiar thing in this sudden, unnatural stillness. She came because of the note tucked into her last delivery order from the Golden Empress. A single, stark sentence written on stiff, cream-coloured paper: "Richmond Grove. Midnight. The whispers know." It wasn't signed. Nothing like it had ever appeared in her orders before. Yu-Fei Cheung, her boss, never wrote notes. This felt… different. And the pendant, the one an anonymous stranger had pressed into her hand weeks ago outside Silas’s bar, had begun its slow, steady thrumming about an hour after she’d found the note. A subtle warmth, then a growing heat, a silent alarm only she could feel. Her boots crunched on something that wasn't leaves nor earth. A scatter of white, like bone fragments. She nudged them with her toe. No, not bone. Petals. Dried, brittle petals littering the path, though the wildflowers in the Fae Grove, legend had it, bloomed perpetually, vibrant and alive. These were desiccated, ancient. She edged further in. The trees here were different. Ancient oaks, their bark twisted like arthritic knuckles, stood sentinel. Not just one or two, but a ring of them, forming a rough circle. Standing stones, the whispers had called them, though she saw only these gnarled trees. Moonlight, pale and weak, filtered through the dense canopy, casting shifting, indistinct shadows that played tricks on the eye. Was that a flicker of movement to her left, near the base of a particularly thick oak? She stopped, straining her ears. Nothing. Only the blood thrumming in her own temples. The warmth from the Heartstone intensified. A distinct pulse, like a slow heartbeat against her skin. It wasn't the gentle warmth it usually offered when she was simply curious. This was insistent, pressing. Hel portal. The thought, unbidden, surfaced from somewhere deep. But how? This was Richmond Park, not some shadowed crossroads in a forgotten fairy tale. She raised a hand, tracing the line of her jaw with a trembling thumb. She resisted the urge to speak, to call out, to break the profound quiet even if it meant shattering the fragile illusion of safety. Any sound felt like an invitation, a concession that she acknowledged the unseen audience. Her job was dealing with the tangible, the solid, the delivered. This… this was something else entirely. The warmth of the pendant spread, a tight knot beneath her sternum, driving the cold from her skin but doing little to soothe the ice in her gut. The very bark of the nearest oak seemed to breathe, expanding and contracting with a slow, agonizing rhythm that didn't match any natural process. She remembered the weight of the pendant in the palm of her hand the day it was given to her, by a man whose face she hadn't seen clearly in the dim light of the London street. He’d spoken no word, simply pressed it into her hand, a cool, smooth weight that had vanished when she’d looked at it again, only to reappear as the deep crimson Heartstone she now wore. It throbbed. Not just warm now, but hot. A fierce, urgent pounding against her skin. Her breath hitched. This wasn't just the Fae Grove. This was a nexus. A gateway. And whatever the pendant was warning her about had found her. There was a scent again, stronger this time. Not the cloying perfume anymore, but something akin to damp velvet and decaying pearls. It clung to the air, insinuating itself into her nostrils, heavy and ancient. She tilted her head, trying to pinpoint its source, but it emanated from everywhere, coating the clearing like a fine, invisible dust. The wildflowers pulsed with their internal light, their petals curled inwards, as if basking in the presence of whatever watched her. A single, perfect crimson blossom, no larger than her thumbnail, seemed to strain towards her, its stem bending impossibly. The whispers intensified. They were no longer vague susurrations, but distinct, sibilant sounds just on the edge of comprehension, like a language sung backwards. They coiled around her, a silken, venomous embrace. She could feel the vibrations of the sounds against her eardrums, a phantom caress. Her eyes darted from shadow to shadow, seeking a source, an anchor, a form. There was nothing solid. Only the shifting, the amorphous, the deeply unnerving certainty that something was moving with fluid intent just beyond the reach of her sight. The standing stones, the ancient oaks, felt like witnesses, their silent forms exuding an ancient, terrible knowledge. A movement, distinct this time. Closer. A shadow peeled away from the trunk of the largest oak, not a mere deepening of gloom, but a smear of absolute blackness, impossibly deep, that flowed across the forest floor. It moved with astonishing speed, not gliding, but unfurling, like ink dropped into water. She saw no limbs, no head, no discernible shape, yet it possessed a terrifying, deliberate trajectory. It stopped several yards away, a patch of void that seemed to absorb the moonlight, to deepen the surrounding darkness. Rory froze, every instinct screaming at her to run, but her feet felt rooted to the strange, petal-strewn ground. The air crackled with unspoken threat. The whispers swirled around the patch of darkness, a chorus of unseen entities celebrating a discovery. The pendant flared. A burst of intense heat against her chest. For a fleeting second, the crimson gemstone seemed to ignite, its inner glow flaring with an almost blinding intensity. The deep crimson of its surface swirled, looking less like polished stone and more like a trapped vortex of blood. It pulsed, not just with warmth, but with a raw, potent energy that made her teeth ache. Through the dense trees, past the unnerving glow of the wildflowers, she saw something stir within the patch of absolute blackness. A subtle shifting, a coalescing of the nothingness. A profound, ancient hunger radiated from it, a palpable force that pressed against her mind.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences1
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.43% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1167
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"deliberately"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"deliberately"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1167
totalAiIsms32
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"weight"
count3
2
word"warmth"
count6
3
word"familiar"
count1
4
word"stark"
count1
5
word"could feel"
count2
6
word"sentinel"
count1
7
word"flicker"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count1
9
word"tracing"
count1
10
word"profound"
count2
11
word"tangible"
count1
12
word"throbbed"
count1
13
word"pounding"
count1
14
word"velvet"
count1
15
word"pulsed"
count2
16
word"perfect"
count1
17
word"gloom"
count1
18
word"unspoken"
count1
19
word"fleeting"
count1
20
word"intensity"
count1
21
word"palpable"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"weight"
2"warmth"
3"familiar"
4"stark"
5"could feel"
6"sentinel"
7"flicker"
8"pulse"
9"tracing"
10"profound"
11"tangible"
12"throbbed"
13"pounding"
14"velvet"
15"pulsed"
16"perfect"
17"gloom"
18"unspoken"
19"fleeting"
20"intensity"
21"palpable"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences94
matches
0"t with warmth"
82.07% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences94
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences94
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1168
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions19
wordCount1162
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.26
worstName"Fae"
maxWindowNameDensity0.5
worstWindowName"Fae"
discoveredNames
Fae3
Grove3
Richmond2
Park2
Heartstone3
Pendant1
Golden1
Empress1
Cheung1
Silas1
London1
persons
0"Pendant"
1"Cheung"
2"Silas"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Richmond"
3"Park"
4"Golden"
5"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences70
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"felt like an invitation, a concession t"
1"something akin to damp velvet and decaying pear"
2"as if basking in the presence of whatever watched her"
3"felt like witnesses, their silent forms"
4"void that seemed to absorb the moonlight, to deepen the surrounding darkness"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches7
per1kWords5.993
wordCount1168
matches
0"Not the quiet of a sleeping park, but a void, an absence of sound"
1"Not just one or two, but a ring of them, forming a rough circle"
2"Not just warm now, but hot"
3"Not the cloying perfume anymore, but something akin to damp velvet"
4"not a mere deepening of gloom, but a smear of absolute blackness, impossibly deep"
5"not gliding, but unfurling, like ink dropped into water"
6"not just with warmth, but with a raw, potent energy"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences94
matches
0"Was that a"
24.92% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs12
mean97.33
std23.09
cv0.237
sampleLengths
098
191
2100
352
497
557
697
7136
897
9104
10128
11111
94.06% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences94
matches
0"was gone"
1"were desiccated"
2"was given"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs174
matches
0"was dealing"
1"was warning"
82.07% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences94
ratio0.021
matches
0"It didn't fade; it was gone, as if a giant hand had cupped its palm over the world outside."
1"The air changed instantly, growing thick, heavy, carrying a scent that was both damp earth and something else – a sickly sweet perfume, like overripe fruit left too long in the sun."
84.66% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1164
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"stiff, cream-coloured paper:"
1"strange, petal-strewn ground."
adverbCount51
adverbRatio0.04381443298969072
lyAdverbCount21
lyAdverbRatio0.01804123711340206
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences94
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences94
mean12.43
std8.29
cv0.667
sampleLengths
016
118
213
319
432
55
611
711
818
915
1020
1111
1216
1318
1410
157
162
171
1832
1914
2010
217
226
233
241
2521
264
274
285
2910
3014
3114
3219
3317
345
351
368
376
3810
3913
404
412
427
432
4413
4514
4624
4714
4811
491
44.68% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3191489361702128
totalSentences94
uniqueOpeners30
79.37% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences84
matches
0"Only the blood thrumming in"
1"Only the shifting, the amorphous,"
ratio0.024
91.43% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences84
matches
0"It didn't fade; it was"
1"She paused, drawing a breath."
2"Her lungs felt it immediately,"
3"She wore her favourite black"
4"It was the only familiar"
5"She came because of the"
6"Her boots crunched on something"
7"She nudged them with her"
8"She edged further in."
9"She stopped, straining her ears."
10"It wasn't the gentle warmth"
11"She raised a hand, tracing"
12"She resisted the urge to"
13"Her job was dealing with"
14"She remembered the weight of"
15"He’d spoken no word, simply"
16"Her breath hitched."
17"It clung to the air,"
18"She tilted her head, trying"
19"They were no longer vague"
ratio0.321
61.19% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount67
totalSentences84
matches
0"The edge of the Fae"
1"Rory stepped through a curtain"
2"The usual drone of city"
3"It didn't fade; it was"
4"The air changed instantly, growing"
5"She paused, drawing a breath."
6"Her lungs felt it immediately,"
7"The silence pressed in, immense,"
8"She wore her favourite black"
9"The Heartstone Pendant, usually nestled"
10"It was the only familiar"
11"She came because of the"
12"A single, stark sentence written"
13"Nothing like it had ever"
14"Yu-Fei Cheung, her boss, never"
15"A subtle warmth, then a"
16"Her boots crunched on something"
17"A scatter of white, like"
18"She nudged them with her"
19"These were desiccated, ancient."
ratio0.798
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
ratio0
51.95% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"The air changed instantly, growing thick, heavy, carrying a scent that was both damp earth and something else – a sickly sweet perfume, like overripe fruit left…"
1"Not the quiet of a sleeping park, but a void, an absence of sound that felt deliberately manufactured."
2"Moonlight, pale and weak, filtered through the dense canopy, casting shifting, indistinct shadows that played tricks on the eye."
3"The warmth of the pendant spread, a tight knot beneath her sternum, driving the cold from her skin but doing little to soothe the ice in her gut."
4"The very bark of the nearest oak seemed to breathe, expanding and contracting with a slow, agonizing rhythm that didn't match any natural process."
5"He’d spoken no word, simply pressed it into her hand, a cool, smooth weight that had vanished when she’d looked at it again, only to reappear as the deep crimso…"
6"She tilted her head, trying to pinpoint its source, but it emanated from everywhere, coating the clearing like a fine, invisible dust."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
76.2607%