| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 22 | | tagDensity | 0.455 | | leniency | 0.909 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 81.93% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1107 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "utterly" | | 2 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1107 | | totalAiIsms | 32 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "fractured" | | 2 | "crystalline" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "vibrated" | | 5 | "wavered" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "warmth" | | 9 | "fleeting" | | 10 | "ephemeral" | | 11 | "echoes" | | 12 | "echoed" | | 13 | "resonated" | | 14 | "unreadable" | | 15 | "flicker" | | 16 | "churn" | | 17 | "intensity" | | 18 | "flickered" | | 19 | "pulse" | | 20 | "beacon" | | 21 | "enigmatic" | | 22 | "stark" | | 23 | "depths" | | 24 | "throbbed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 69 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 80.75% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 69 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 80 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 2 | | totalWords | 1109 | | ratio | 0.002 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 45 | | wordCount | 935 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.6 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 5 | | Grove | 1 | | Rory | 15 | | Isolde | 6 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Blade | 4 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 2 | | Nyx | 8 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Blade" | | 3 | "Pendant" | | 4 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.698 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like cool, polished obsidian, utte" | | 1 | "looked like spun copper, emitting a low," | | 2 | "absence that seemed to pull at the very edges of reality" | | 3 | "felt like stepping into a story written" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 4 | | per1kWords | 3.607 | | wordCount | 1109 | | matches | | 0 | "not with static electricity, but with the sensation of stepping into a vibrant, liquid medium" | | 1 | "not of stone or wood, but of intertwined, crystalline veins, pulsed with slow, interna" | | 2 | "not of darkness, but of pure, void-like absence" | | 3 | "not answers, but deeper questions" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 28 | | mean | 39.61 | | std | 21.33 | | cv | 0.538 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 85 | | 1 | 71 | | 2 | 83 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 27 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 42 | | 7 | 33 | | 8 | 62 | | 9 | 51 | | 10 | 44 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 34 | | 13 | 24 | | 14 | 76 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 28 | | 17 | 64 | | 18 | 27 | | 19 | 21 | | 20 | 43 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 23 | | 23 | 45 | | 24 | 31 | | 25 | 26 | | 26 | 23 | | 27 | 62 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 150 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 80 | | ratio | 0.05 | | matches | | 0 | "Beside her, Isolde moved with an ethereal grace; her silver hair flowed as if underwater, and where her bare feet touched the ground, no imprint remained." | | 1 | "They occasionally coalesced into fleeting, ephemeral shapes – tiny, winged sparks, miniature nebulae, minuscule stars that winked out as soon as they formed." | | 2 | "This place wasn't just alien; it felt impossibly ancient, a realm where fundamental laws might be mere suggestions." | | 3 | "The pulsing luminescence, the singing plants, the motes of light, the silent void – it was overwhelming." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 936 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 31 | | adverbRatio | 0.03311965811965812 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013888888888888888 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 80 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 80 | | mean | 13.86 | | std | 6.44 | | cv | 0.464 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 9 | | 2 | 27 | | 3 | 31 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 24 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 26 | | 10 | 25 | | 11 | 26 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 26 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 19 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 27 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 23 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 18 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 19 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 20 | | 43 | 20 | | 44 | 17 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 64.17% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.4 | | totalSentences | 80 | | uniqueOpeners | 32 | |
| 49.02% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "Then she looked at Isolde," |
| | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 15 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "It wasn't the glare of" | | 1 | "She stood on a surface" | | 2 | "They spiralled upwards, disappearing into" | | 3 | "Their form wavered, coalescing momentarily" | | 4 | "It was cool, impossibly so," | | 5 | "She drew the Fae-Forged Blade." | | 6 | "She noticed something else." | | 7 | "They occasionally coalesced into fleeting," | | 8 | "It wasn't a sound to" | | 9 | "She gestured upwards towards the" | | 10 | "It formed a vast, shadowy" | | 11 | "she asked, her voice barely" | | 12 | "Its cold moonsilver felt grounding," | | 13 | "She looked at Nyx, a" | | 14 | "She took another step, her" |
| | ratio | 0.221 | |
| 26.18% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 59 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "The air crackled, not with" | | 1 | "Rory blinked, her bright blue" | | 2 | "The familiar dappled sunlight of" | | 3 | "It wasn't the glare of" | | 4 | "She stood on a surface" | | 5 | "They spiralled upwards, disappearing into" | | 6 | "Plants resembling articulated shards of" | | 7 | "The air hung heavy, thick" | | 8 | "Rory murmured, the words lost" | | 9 | "This place was beyond anything" | | 10 | "Nyx glided a few feet" | | 11 | "Their form wavered, coalescing momentarily" | | 12 | "Nyx's voice, a fainter whisper" | | 13 | "The obsidian underfoot was unnervingly" | | 14 | "Rory took a tentative step," | | 15 | "Isolde murmured, her pale lavender" | | 16 | "Rory reached down, her fingers" | | 17 | "It was cool, impossibly so," | | 18 | "She drew the Fae-Forged Blade." | | 19 | "The moonsilver gleamed, casting its" |
| | ratio | 0.868 | |
| 73.53% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "Before her stretched a landscape" |
| | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 43 | | technicalSentenceCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "The familiar dappled sunlight of the Fae Grove fractured and vanished, replaced by an all-encompassing, soft luminescence that spilled from the very fabric of t…" | | 1 | "She stood on a surface that felt like cool, polished obsidian, utterly smooth and unbroken." | | 2 | "Before her stretched a landscape that defied every earthly principle." | | 3 | "They spiralled upwards, disappearing into a sky that was no sky, but a vast, swirling nebula of amethyst mist, alive with silent, miniature lightning." | | 4 | "Plants resembling articulated shards of obsidian glass rose from the polished surface, their edges catching the ambient light and splintering it into a thousand…" | | 5 | "Wide, fan-like leaves of a metallic sheen unfurled from stalks that looked like spun copper, emitting a low, resonant frequency that vibrated in Rory's teeth." | | 6 | "The air hung heavy, thick with a cloying, sweet scent like overripe moonfruit and damp earth, a perfume that made the back of her throat ache." | | 7 | "Beside her, Isolde moved with an ethereal grace; her silver hair flowed as if underwater, and where her bare feet touched the ground, no imprint remained." | | 8 | "The moonsilver gleamed, casting its own cool light that stood apart from the warm, pearlescent glow of their surroundings." | | 9 | "Rory felt a prickling sensation on her skin, a subtle shift in air pressure that made her ears pop." | | 10 | "It wasn't a sound to be pinpointed, but a physical sensation that resonated deep within her bones." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory murmured, the words lost in the vastness" | | 1 | "her left, a familiar ghost against her skin" | | 2 | "Rory said, her voice tight" | | 3 | "Rory guessed, her heart quickening" | | 4 | "she asked, her voice barely a whisper" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "Rory guessed (guess)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 22 | | tagDensity | 0.364 | | leniency | 0.727 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.364 | |