Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ94SQ5BCAZW5VXC32D5AEPH

Run Details

Duration:
29.3s
Cost:
$0.002723
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air grew thick, not with mist, but with an impossible stillness. It pressed against Rory’s eardrums, a heavy blanket that stole the sounds from the world outside. Beside her, Nyx shimmered, their shadowy form a darker silhouette against the muted light filtering through the ancient oaks. Isolde, a cascade of silver hair down her back, moved with her characteristic unsettling grace, leaving no impression on the mossy ground. They stood between two colossal stones, gnarled and worn by millennia, their surfaces etched with symbols that seemed to writhe at the edge of perception. "This is it," Rory murmured, her voice sounding tinny in the profound quiet. She instinctively touched the smooth, cool bulge of the Heartstone Pendant beneath her jacket. It remained inert, its typical warmth absent, as if its magic found no purchase in this place. A shiver traced its way up her spine, not of cold, but of sheer, disorienting wonder. Isolde’s voice was a dry rustle. "Where the paths of the green grow long, and the sky forgets its haste." Nyx shifted, a ripple of shadow. "The demarcation feels… blurred. Like a smudged line drawn in ash." Their faint violet eyes scanned the dense, interwoven branches overhead, where the light seemed to originate not from a sun, but from the very leaves themselves. They stepped through the gap between the stones. It wasn't a barrier they crossed, but rather a change in atmosphere, a shift in reality. The earthy scent of damp soil and old wood intensified, layered with an impossibly sweet, floral perfume that promised forgotten summers. Wildflowers, a kaleidoscope of colours Rory had only dreamed of, carpeted the ground, climbed the rough bark of impossibly old trees, and spilled like living jewels from shadowed hollows. They bloomed in riotous profusion, a tapestry of blues, purples, and vibrant golds that defied any earthly season. "Bloody hell," Rory breathed, her gaze sweeping across the impossible flora. "This is… a lot." Her practical boots sank slightly into the yielding moss, anchoring her to this alien ground with a dull thud. Isolde moved ahead, her silver tresses catching the ethereal light. "The roots remember where they were buried, waiting for the dew of forgotten dawns." "What roots?" Rory glanced around, trying to orient herself. The standing stones had vanished, swallowed by the encroaching, vibrant forest. Every direction looked the same, an overwhelming expanse of living colour and ancient growth. Nyx glided closer, their form coalescing slightly. "The roots of the world, Rory. And the roots that snake between them." They indicated the trees. The oaks were titans, their bark thick and furrowed like the hide of ancient beasts. Strange, bioluminescent fungi clung to their undersides, casting a soft, pulsing glow that mingled with the hazy, diffused sunlight. Rory reached for the Fae-Forged Blade at her hip. The moonsilver hilt felt colder than usual, a bone-deep chill that seemed to seep into her palm even through the leather grip. "It feels… angry," she muttered, drawing it a few inches. A faint, otherworldly luminescence flared along the blade’s edge, a cool white light that pulsed faintly. "It senses the Fae," Nyx confirmed, their voice a whisper carried on an unmoving breeze. "And the thinness of the Veil." They walked deeper, the sounds of the outside world fading completely, replaced by a low, resonant hum that seemed to emanate from the earth itself. A soft, melodic whispering echoed through the trees, like voices on the edge of hearing, too indistinct to form words, too persistent to ignore. The air itself felt alive, charged with an unseen energy that prickled Rory’s skin. "How far does this go?" Rory asked, her voice hushed. She felt a growing sense of unease, a primal instinct that whispered of thresholds crossed. Isolde paused, turning with a faint, enigmatic smile. "As far as the memory of the wood allows. And where memory sleeps, dreams often take root." "Dreams?" Rory prodded, her mind grasping for logic. "Isolde, what are we doing here?" "Seeking the echo," Isolde replied, her pale lavender eyes holding a distant, knowing glint. "The echo of a song sung before the world learned to listen to silence." Suddenly, a wave of disorientation washed over Rory. The vibrant wildflowers at her feet seemed to blur, their colours deepening and then fading with impossible speed, as if years had compressed into moments. The ground beneath her tilted, and she stumbled, catching herself on the rough bark of a nearby tree. It felt strangely warm, almost alive. "Whoa," she gasped, steadying herself. "What was that?" "A breath," Isolde said, her gaze fixed on a point far beyond the visible trees. "The Grove inhales." Rory blinked, trying to clear her head. The quality of the light shifted subtly, becoming sharper, more intense. The deep hum from the earth intensified, a rhythmic pulse that vibrated through her bones. Her Fae-Forged Blade pulsed with its faint light, now noticeably brighter, its coldness leaching into her hand with a steady, insistent pressure. "My blade is glowing," she said, drawing it free of its sheath. The moonsilver gleamed, casting an eerie light on the surrounding, impossibly coloured petals. "It recognizes kindred spirits," Nyx observed, their shadowy form rippling as if absorbing the strange luminescence. "Or perhaps, the old wounds." A profound quiet fell over them. The melodic whispering ceased. The deep thrumming softened to an almost imperceptible vibration. The very air seemed to hold its breath, and the impossibly blooming flowers around them slowly, deliberately, began to curl inwards, their vibrant colours dimming as if the sun had begun to set. A palpable sense of being watched descended, not with menace, but with an ancient, detached curiosity. "It feels like the whole forest is… looking," Rory whispered, her grip tightening on the Fae-Forged Blade. Every leaf, every twisted branch, seemed imbued with a silent, watchful awareness. "The grove does not judge," Isolde stated, her voice low. "It merely waits for the story to unfold." She turned her head, as if listening to a distant sound. "The tapestry frays. The weavers have grown weary." "What tapestry? What weavers?" Rory kept her gaze sharp, scanning the deepening shadows. Isolde’s pale lavender eyes met Rory’s. "The threads that bind the worlds. The patterns of what is, and what might be. When they unravel, the spaces between widen." She gestured to the grove. "This is a place where the Veil wears thin. Where the old patterns hold fast, and the new ones tear at the seams." Rory felt a prickle of apprehension. Her Fae-Forged Blade grew noticeably heavier, colder, its luminescence intensifying, casting a cool, white halo around her hand. The Heartstone Pendant beneath her shirt remained a distant, inert memory. "We need to keep moving," Rory said, her voice firm, trying to push past the dreamlike atmosphere. She stepped forward, pushing a curtain of luminous moss aside. A narrow path, not cleared but seemingly parted by unseen hands, wound deeper into the trees, beckoning them into a denser, more ethereal twilight. Isolde nodded, her silver hair shimmering like moonlight caught in mist. "The path leads to the heartwood, where time forgets its track, and silence speaks in colours." Nyx flowed forward, a living shadow merging with the encroaching gloom, leading the way. Rory followed, her Fae-Forged Blade held ready, its cold glow their only clear beacon in the deepening, alien woods. The scent of impossible flowers grew richer, almost cloying, and the deep thrum of the grove pulsed a little faster against her skin, like a whispered heartbeat. The trees drew closer, their branches intertwined overhead, forming a dense canopy that allowed only slivers of the hazy light to filter through. The air grew colder, carrying the faint, distant chime of what might have been wind chimes made of frost, or perhaps the sound of unseen bells. Rory’s breath plumed again, thick and white, a stark contrast to the vibrant greens and golds of the grove. The wildflowers, once a riot of colour, seemed to dim, their petals curling inwards, as if their season had passed, or merely shifted to another unseen cycle. "Are we going somewhere specific?" Rory whispered, her eyes scanning the bewildering, shifting scenery. Nyx glided ahead, their form a ripple of shadow that seemed to absorb the deepening gloom. "We are going where the path leads. And where it leads us." Isolde’s voice, calm and resonant, cut through the heavy quiet. "The heartwood remembers the first pulse. The furthest echo hears the deepest call." Rory paused. A strange resonance, deep within her chest, began to stir. It wasn’t the pendant or the blade, but something internal, a flicker of awareness, a subtle hum that seemed to align with the grove’s own pulse. She instinctively touched the faint, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. A relic of a childhood fall, her mother had once said. But sometimes, in moments of stillness, the faint line seemed to ache with a phantom chill. Suddenly, the path opened into a small, circular glade. In its centre stood not trees, but a single, colossal crystal, pulsing with a soft, internal light. It shimmered with the deep hues of twilight, shot through with veins of amethyst and polished silver. Strange, geometric symbols were etched into its surface, each one glowing faintly. The air here was sharper, colder, smelling faintly of ozone and a clean, distant rain. The cloying sweetness of the flowers was muted, replaced by this crystalline purity. "What in the…?" Rory breathed, awe momentarily eclipsing her unease. The crystal was beautiful, terrifyingly so, a focal point of raw, contained power. Nyx stopped at the edge of the glade, their shadowy form casting elongated, distorted shapes across the polished stone floor. "A nexus," they stated, their voice flat. "The Fae used such monoliths to anchor existence, to weave their realities." Isolde approached the crystal slowly, her silver hair trailing behind her like moonlight on water. She reached out a hand, her fingers hovering inches from its radiant surface. The light within the crystal seemed to brighten, responding to her presence, the pulsing rhythm quickening. "Where the worlds touch, and the stories are writ." Rory felt a distinct pull, not physical, but a deep, resonant hum that seemed to emanate from the crystal and vibrate through her very being. It was an invitation, silent and compelling, to step into its luminescent heart. The Fae-Forged Blade grew noticeably colder in her hand, its glow flaring to a brighter, more insistent light, as if warding off or perhaps welcoming the raw energy radiating from the stone. "It feels… like the heart of everything," Rory murmured, taking a cautious step forward. The ground here was not moss, but smooth, dark stone that gleamed faintly. "The heartwood remembers," Isolde echoed, her voice barely a whisper, her gaze lost in the crystal's depths. "And the heart's echo calls its kin." Rory looked from the pulsing crystal to Nyx and Isolde. The alien beauty of the Fae Grove surrounded them, thick and intoxicating. The air hummed, the light pulsed, and the deep thrum resonated within her bones. This was a place where the ordinary rules ceased to matter, a place where magic was not an exception, but the very air they breathed. The crystal beckoned, a silent, impossibly glittering mystery.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags26
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"practical boots sank slightly [slightly]"
1"Rory glanced around [around]"
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.605
leniency1
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.077
68.02% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1876
totalAiIsmAdverbs12
found
0
adverb"very"
count4
1
adverb"slightly"
count2
2
adverb"completely"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count2
4
adverb"slowly"
count2
5
adverb"deliberately"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"slightly"
2"completely"
3"suddenly"
4"slowly"
5"deliberately"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1876
totalAiIsms65
found
0
word"shimmered"
count2
1
word"etched"
count2
2
word"profound"
count2
3
word"warmth"
count1
4
word"traced"
count1
5
word"scanned"
count1
6
word"kaleidoscope"
count1
7
word"tapestry"
count3
8
word"furrowed"
count1
9
word"chill"
count2
10
word"otherworldly"
count1
11
word"pulsed"
count4
12
word"whisper"
count2
13
word"echoed"
count2
14
word"charged"
count1
15
word"sense of"
count2
16
word"enigmatic"
count1
17
word"echo"
count4
18
word"glint"
count1
19
word"silence"
count2
20
word"almost alive"
count1
21
word"rhythmic"
count1
22
word"pulse"
count3
23
word"vibrated"
count1
24
word"palpable"
count1
25
word"scanning"
count2
26
word"unravel"
count1
27
word"apprehension"
count1
28
word"gloom"
count2
29
word"beacon"
count1
30
word"stark"
count1
31
word"resonance"
count1
32
word"flicker"
count1
33
word"crystal"
count8
34
word"crystalline"
count1
35
word"radiant"
count1
36
word"depths"
count1
37
word"resonated"
count1
highlights
0"shimmered"
1"etched"
2"profound"
3"warmth"
4"traced"
5"scanned"
6"kaleidoscope"
7"tapestry"
8"furrowed"
9"chill"
10"otherworldly"
11"pulsed"
12"whisper"
13"echoed"
14"charged"
15"sense of"
16"enigmatic"
17"echo"
18"glint"
19"silence"
20"almost alive"
21"rhythmic"
22"pulse"
23"vibrated"
24"palpable"
25"scanning"
26"unravel"
27"apprehension"
28"gloom"
29"beacon"
30"stark"
31"resonance"
32"flicker"
33"crystal"
34"crystalline"
35"radiant"
36"depths"
37"resonated"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences112
matches
0"felt a prickle"
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount14
narrationSentences112
filterMatches
0"wonder"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences129
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1876
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions72
wordCount1560
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.54
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory24
Nyx9
Heartstone2
Pendant2
Isolde13
Fae-Forged6
Blade6
Suddenly2
Fae7
Grove1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Nyx"
2"Isolde"
3"Blade"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
globalScore0.731
windowScore0.667
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences104
glossingSentenceCount10
matches
0"symbols that seemed to writhe at the edge of perception"
1"hum that seemed to emanate from the earth itself"
2"as if absorbing the strange luminescence"
3"seemed imbued with a silent, watchful awareness"
4"as if listening to a distant sound"
5"ot cleared but seemingly parted by unseen ha"
6"shadow that seemed to absorb the deepening gloom"
7"hum that seemed to align with the grove’s own pulse"
8"hum that seemed to emanate from the crystal and vibrate through her very being"
9"as if warding off or perhaps welcoming the raw energy radiating from the stone"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches9
per1kWords4.797
wordCount1876
matches
0"not with mist, but with an impossible stillness"
1"not of cold, but of sheer, disorienting wonder"
2"not from a sun, but from the very leaves themselves"
3"not with menace, but with an ancient, detached curiosity"
4"not cleared but seemingly parted by unseen hands, wound deeper into the tree"
5"not trees, but a single, colossal crystal, pulsing with a soft, internal li"
6"not physical, but a deep, resonant hum"
7"not moss, but smooth, dark stone"
8"not an exception, but the very air they breathed"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences129
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean42.64
std23.52
cv0.552
sampleLengths
094
160
220
343
492
534
624
734
858
957
1021
1163
1225
1325
1414
1528
1657
178
1818
1955
2025
2121
2268
2329
2437
2513
2656
2735
2851
2927
3060
3195
3214
3328
3423
3576
3683
3723
3839
3953
4070
4127
4224
4369
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences112
matches
0"were etched"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs257
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences129
ratio0
matches(empty)
91.88% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1568
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"faint, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount64
adverbRatio0.04081632653061224
lyAdverbCount34
lyAdverbRatio0.021683673469387755
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences129
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences129
mean14.54
std6.68
cv0.459
sampleLengths
012
116
219
322
425
513
614
717
816
96
1014
116
1237
138
1416
1521
1629
1718
1811
1923
2010
2114
229
2311
2414
257
2617
2715
2819
299
3022
3110
3216
3315
346
3525
3624
3714
3810
3915
408
4117
428
436
4414
4514
468
4725
4818
496
42.25% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.23255813953488372
totalSentences129
uniqueOpeners30
60.06% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences111
matches
0"Suddenly, a wave of disorientation"
1"Suddenly, the path opened into"
ratio0.018
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences111
matches
0"It pressed against Rory’s eardrums,"
1"They stood between two colossal"
2"She instinctively touched the smooth,"
3"It remained inert, its typical"
4"Their faint violet eyes scanned"
5"They stepped through the gap"
6"It wasn't a barrier they"
7"They bloomed in riotous profusion,"
8"Her practical boots sank slightly"
9"They indicated the trees"
10"she muttered, drawing it a"
11"They walked deeper, the sounds"
12"She felt a growing sense"
13"It felt strangely warm, almost"
14"she gasped, steadying herself"
15"Her Fae-Forged Blade pulsed with"
16"she said, drawing it free"
17"She turned her head, as"
18"She gestured to the grove"
19"Her Fae-Forged Blade grew noticeably"
ratio0.243
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount104
totalSentences111
matches
0"The air grew thick, not"
1"It pressed against Rory’s eardrums,"
2"Isolde, a cascade of silver"
3"They stood between two colossal"
4"Rory murmured, her voice sounding"
5"She instinctively touched the smooth,"
6"It remained inert, its typical"
7"A shiver traced its way"
8"Isolde’s voice was a dry"
9"Nyx shifted, a ripple of"
10"Their faint violet eyes scanned"
11"They stepped through the gap"
12"It wasn't a barrier they"
13"The earthy scent of damp"
14"Wildflowers, a kaleidoscope of colours"
15"They bloomed in riotous profusion,"
16"Rory breathed, her gaze sweeping"
17"Her practical boots sank slightly"
18"Isolde moved ahead, her silver"
19"Rory glanced around, trying to"
ratio0.937
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences111
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences70
technicalSentenceCount14
matches
0"Isolde, a cascade of silver hair down her back, moved with her characteristic unsettling grace, leaving no impression on the mossy ground."
1"The earthy scent of damp soil and old wood intensified, layered with an impossibly sweet, floral perfume that promised forgotten summers."
2"They bloomed in riotous profusion, a tapestry of blues, purples, and vibrant golds that defied any earthly season."
3"Strange, bioluminescent fungi clung to their undersides, casting a soft, pulsing glow that mingled with the hazy, diffused sunlight."
4"They walked deeper, the sounds of the outside world fading completely, replaced by a low, resonant hum that seemed to emanate from the earth itself."
5"She felt a growing sense of unease, a primal instinct that whispered of thresholds crossed."
6"The vibrant wildflowers at her feet seemed to blur, their colours deepening and then fading with impossible speed, as if years had compressed into moments."
7"The very air seemed to hold its breath, and the impossibly blooming flowers around them slowly, deliberately, began to curl inwards, their vibrant colours dimmi…"
8"Her Fae-Forged Blade grew noticeably heavier, colder, its luminescence intensifying, casting a cool, white halo around her hand."
9"The trees drew closer, their branches intertwined overhead, forming a dense canopy that allowed only slivers of the hazy light to filter through."
10"Nyx glided ahead, their form a ripple of shadow that seemed to absorb the deepening gloom."
11"It wasn’t the pendant or the blade, but something internal, a flicker of awareness, a subtle hum that seemed to align with the grove’s own pulse."
12"Rory felt a distinct pull, not physical, but a deep, resonant hum that seemed to emanate from the crystal and vibrate through her very being."
13"The Fae-Forged Blade grew noticeably colder in her hand, its glow flaring to a brighter, more insistent light, as if warding off or perhaps welcoming the raw en…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags26
uselessAdditionCount13
matches
0"Rory murmured, her voice sounding tinny in the profound quiet"
1"Rory breathed, her gaze sweeping across the impossible flora"
2"Rory glanced around, trying to orient herself"
3"Nyx confirmed, their voice a whisper carried on an unmoving breeze"
4"Rory asked, her voice hushed"
5"Rory prodded, her mind grasping for logic"
6"Nyx observed, their shadowy form rippling as if absorbing the strange luminescence"
7"Rory whispered, her grip tightening on the Fae-Forged Blade"
8"Isolde stated, her voice low"
9"She turned, as if listening to a distant sound"
10"Rory said, her voice firm, trying to push past the dreamlike atmosphere"
11"Rory whispered, her eyes scanning the bewildering, shifting scenery"
12"they stated, their voice flat"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags17
fancyCount12
fancyTags
0"Rory murmured (murmur)"
1"Rory breathed (breathe)"
2"she muttered (mutter)"
3"Nyx confirmed (confirm)"
4"she gasped (gasp)"
5"Nyx observed (observe)"
6"Rory whispered (whisper)"
7"Isolde stated (state)"
8"Rory whispered (whisper)"
9"Rory breathed (breathe)"
10"they stated (state)"
11"Rory murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.395
leniency0.791
rawRatio0.706
effectiveRatio0.558
64.2958%