Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ94TV0AFV2ABV3347FB6FAA

Run Details

Duration:
25.6s
Cost:
$0.010375
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain in Camden didn’t just fall; it dissolved the city into a grey, light-smeared blur. Detective Harlow Quinn stepped over a puddle of oily runoff, her boots clicking with military precision against the slick pavement. She checked the worn leather watch on her left wrist—03:14. Her salt-and-pepper hair was already damp, the closely cropped strands clinging to her scalp, but she didn’t quicken her pace. Haste was the father of oversight, and Harlow Quinn had built an eighteen-year career on seeing what others hurried past. The entrance to the scene was tucked behind a rusted iron gate that led to an abandoned Tube station. Uniformed officers stood shivering under a makeshift awning, their breath blooming in the cold air. They straightened as she approached. Harlow didn’t need to show her badge; her sharp jawline and the sheer gravity of her presence were identification enough. "Downstairs, Ma’am," one of the officers said, gesturing toward the yawning black mouth of the stairwell. "DS Miller is already on-site. Forensic team is still setting up the lighting rigs." Harlow nodded and descended. The air changed instantly, shifting from the metallic tang of city rain to a thick, stagnant cloy of wet stone, old soot, and something sharp—like ozone after a lightning strike. Her flashlight cut a clean white swath through the dark, illuminating tiles that had yellowed like old teeth. Thirty feet below the surface, the tunnel opened into a cavernous maintenance bay that hadn't seen a commuter in fifty years. But it wasn't empty. "Quinn! Over here," a voice echoed through the gloom. Detective Sergeant Miller stood near a cluster of support pillars, his silhouette framed by the harsh, flickering glare of portable halogen lamps. He looked exhausted, his tie pulled loose, his eyes skipping nervously around the shadows of the vaulted ceiling. "What have we got, Miller?" Harlow asked, her voice low and steady. "John Doe. Late thirties," Miller said, pointing to a body crumpled near a wall of rusted lockers. "Looks like a mugging gone sideways. Pockets are turned out, watch is gone. There’s a puncture wound in the neck—probably a screwdriver or a sharpened bit of rebar. Typical Camden dregs looking for a score." Harlow knelt beside the body. She didn't touch anything yet. She simply observed. Her brown eyes tracked the splatter on the wall, the position of the victim’s feet, the way the dust on the floor had been disturbed. "A mugging," she repeated. Her voice held a note of dry skepticism. "Clean and simple," Miller insisted. "Probably one of the squatters who hide out down here. We find a couple of 'em every winter." Harlow leaned closer to the victim’s hand. The fingers were curled as if clutching at something that was no longer there. In the crevice between the thumb and forefinger, a small, circular impression remained in the flesh—a bruise in the shape of a coin. "A mugger takes the watch but leaves the victim’s shoes?" Harlow asked, gesturing to the expensive, bespoke leather oxfords on the dead man’s feet. "These are worth five hundred pounds on a bad day. If you’re desperate enough to kill for a wallet, you don't leave the shoes." She stood up and scanned the perimeter of the room. The dust patterns were wrong. In a neglected tunnel, dust should be a uniform velvet. Here, it was swept into strange, swirling vortices, as if a dozen people had been dancing in a circle hours before. "Miller, look at the wall," she said. He squinted. "It’s a wall, Quinn. Brick and grime." "The moisture," she corrected. "The condensation is dripping upward." Miller froze. He stepped back, his eyes widening as he looked at the beads of water on the brickwork. They were indeed defying gravity, crawling slowly toward the vaulted ceiling in thin, shimmering trails. "Pipes," Miller muttered, though he sounded unconvinced. "Magnetic interference from the Northern Line. It’s London, Harlow. Physics does weird things in these old tunnels." Harlow didn't answer. She walked toward a pile of debris near the far end of the bay. Something caught the light—a faint, greenish glimmer. She pulled a pair of nitrile gloves from her pocket, snapped them on, and reached into a crack in the masonry. She withdrew a small brass object. It was a compass, its casing thick with a heavy patina of verdigris. The face was etched with sigils that made her eyes ache if she stared at them too long. But it was the needle that drew her focus. It wasn't pointing North. It was spinning in a lazy, rhythmic circle, clicking softly against the glass like a heartbeat. "What’s that?" Miller asked, stepping closer. "A shadow compass," Harlow whispered. The words felt like they belonged to someone else—to DS Morris, the partner she’d lost three years ago. He had raved about things like this in the weeks before he disappeared. Tunnels that didn't appear on maps. Markets that only existed when the moon was full. "Some kind of prop?" Miller suggested. "The metal is too heavy for a prop," Harlow said, her thumb tracing the protective sigils. "And the energy..." She stopped herself. She was a detective, not a mystic. She relied on evidence. A sudden scuffling sound echoed from the dark mouth of a connecting maintenance tunnel. "Police! Don't move!" Miller shouted, his hand flying to his holster. A figure stumbled out of the shadows, hands raised, a leather satchel swinging wildly from her shoulder. It was a young woman, her curly red hair a frantic halo in the halogen light. She wore round glasses that had slipped down the bridge of her freckled nose. "I’m not... I’m not armed! Please!" the woman gasped. Harlow stepped forward, her flashlight beam pinning the newcomer. "Identify yourself." "Eva... Eva Kowalski," the girl stammered. She looked no older than twenty-six. Her green eyes were wide with terror, and she immediately began tucking a stray lock of hair behind her left ear—a nervous tic she repeated three times in ten seconds. "I’m a researcher. British Museum. I was just... I was looking for the archives." "The British Museum’s restricted archives aren't located in abandoned Tube stations, Miss Kowalski," Harlow said, her voice dropping into a cold, interrogative register. "And they certainly don't require their researchers to carry bone tokens." Harlow pointed her light at the floor where Eva had stumbled. A small, polished piece of bone, carved with a jagged rune, lay in the dust. Eva’s face went white. "I don't know what that is." "Liars usually have better composure," Harlow said. She walked toward the girl, her 5'9" frame casting a long, intimidating shadow. "You’re an occult researcher. You’ve been seen with the group I’m tracking. The clique." Eva swallowed hard, her hand darting to her ear again. "I just study history, Detective. Ancient history. Sometimes the history is... unconventional." "A man is dead over there, Eva," Harlow said, gesturing to the body. "And look at your satchel. The strap is frayed. You didn't just walk in here. You were pulled." Harlow reached out and gripped the brass compass she’d found. As she approached Eva, the needle stopped spinning. It snapped toward the girl’s satchel and stayed there, vibrating with such intensity that Harlow could feel the hum in her teeth. "Miller," Harlow called out, not breaking eye contact with Eva. "Go back to the surface. Tell the forensics lead I want a Level 4 sweep for non-biological residue. Tell them to check the air for sulfur and ozone." "Harlow, come on," Miller scoffed. "A Level 4 for a vagrancy killing? The Super will have my head for the overtime." "Go, Miller," she snapped, the command sharp as a whip-crack. Once his footsteps faded into the distance, Harlow turned back to Eva. She held up the compass. "This belonged to the man over there. He was a courier, wasn't he? Bringing something to the Veil Market." Eva’s breath hitched. "The Market is gone, Detective. It moved at midnight. The full moon was two days ago, but the tides stayed high. They... they didn't leave him because they wanted to. They left him because something intervened." "What intervened?" Harlow asked, her jaw tightening. Eva looked at the body, then back at Harlow. Her voice was a mere whisper. "The same thing that took your partner." The silence in the tunnel became absolute. Harlow felt a phantom chill, the same one that had haunted her for three years since the night DS Morris had vanished from a locked evidence room. She looked down at the compass in her hand. The verdigris seemed to glow under the artificial light, and for the first time, Harlow Quinn acknowledged the evidence her training told her to ignore. The puncture wound in the victim’s neck wasn't from a screwdriver. The angle was impossible for a human strike. The blood hadn't been stolen by a mugger; it had been drained with surgical, predatory precision. "Show me what's in the bag, Eva," Harlow said, her voice softer now, but no less firm. Eva hesitated, then slowly reached into her worn leather satchel. She pulled out a book—an ancient, vellum-bound ledger that seemed to absorb the light around it. "He was trying to sell this. It’s a manifest. A list of everyone who has traded at the Veil Market for the last century." Harlow looked at the book, then at the body of the man who had died for it. She realized then that Miller’s 'simple' case was a doorway, and she was already standing on the threshold. "Keep it hidden," Harlow said, her eyes scanning the dark corners of the ceiling where the water continued to drip upward. "If my department finds that, you’ll disappear into a basement in Whitehall and you’ll never see the sun again." "Why are you helping me?" Eva asked. Harlow Quinn checked her watch again. The clicking of the leather strap felt like the only real thing left in the world. "I’m not helping you, Miss Kowalski. I’m following the evidence. And for the first time in eighteen years, the evidence is telling me that the world is much bigger—and much hungrier—than I ever imagined." She turned toward the stairs, her military bearing masking the tremor in her hands. "Now get out of here before Miller comes back with the cavalry. We’ll talk again. And next time, bring the rest of the history."
created_at"2026-02-25T00:57:53.435Z" 2/25/2026, 12:57:53 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags40
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Eva hesitated then [then]"
dialogueSentences57
tagDensity0.702
leniency1
rawRatio0.025
effectiveRatio0.025
88.50% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1739
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"nervously"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count2
2
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"nervously"
1"slowly"
2"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
51.12% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1739
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"echoed"
count2
1
word"gloom"
count1
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"velvet"
count1
4
word"dancing"
count1
5
word"magnetic"
count1
6
word"etched"
count1
7
word"rhythmic"
count1
8
word"tracing"
count1
9
word"intensity"
count1
10
word"could feel"
count1
11
word"footsteps"
count1
12
word"whisper"
count1
13
word"silence"
count1
14
word"chill"
count1
15
word"scanning"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"gloom"
2"scanned"
3"velvet"
4"dancing"
5"magnetic"
6"etched"
7"rhythmic"
8"tracing"
9"intensity"
10"could feel"
11"footsteps"
12"whisper"
13"silence"
14"chill"
15"scanning"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences121
matches
0"e with terror"
95.63% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences121
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences133
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen68
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1730
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions23
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions70
wordCount1345
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity2.08
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Harlow28
Quinn4
Tube1
Detective2
Sergeant1
Miller10
North1
Morris2
Eva10
Tell2
Level1
Super1
Veil2
Market1
You3
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Sergeant"
3"Miller"
4"Morris"
5"Eva"
6"Tell"
7"Super"
8"Veil"
9"You"
places(empty)
globalScore0.459
windowScore0.333
26.54% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences81
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"as if clutching at something that was no longer there"
1"felt like they belonged to someone else"
2"ledger that seemed to absorb the light around it"
3"felt like the only real thing left in t"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1730
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences133
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs55
mean31.45
std18.68
cv0.594
sampleLengths
086
159
230
352
425
59
640
712
852
938
1012
1123
1244
1348
1446
157
169
179
1834
1924
2045
2166
226
2351
246
2533
2614
2711
2847
299
3011
3156
3234
3326
3410
3534
3622
3731
3840
3938
4021
4110
4236
4339
447
4522
4668
4735
4817
4950
84.96% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount7
totalSentences121
matches
0"was tucked"
1"been disturbed"
2"were curled"
3"was swept"
4"was etched"
5"been seen"
6"been stolen"
7"been drained"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs232
matches
0"were indeed defying"
1"wasn't pointing"
2"was spinning"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences133
ratio0.083
matches
0"The rain in Camden didn’t just fall; it dissolved the city into a grey, light-smeared blur."
1"She checked the worn leather watch on her left wrist—03:14."
2"Harlow didn’t need to show her badge; her sharp jawline and the sheer gravity of her presence were identification enough."
3"The air changed instantly, shifting from the metallic tang of city rain to a thick, stagnant cloy of wet stone, old soot, and something sharp—like ozone after a lightning strike."
4"In the crevice between the thumb and forefinger, a small, circular impression remained in the flesh—a bruise in the shape of a coin."
5"Something caught the light—a faint, greenish glimmer."
6"The words felt like they belonged to someone else—to DS Morris, the partner she’d lost three years ago."
7"Her green eyes were wide with terror, and she immediately began tucking a stray lock of hair behind her left ear—a nervous tic she repeated three times in ten seconds."
8"The puncture wound in the victim’s neck wasn't from a screwdriver. The angle was impossible for a human strike. The blood hadn't been stolen by a mugger; it had been drained with surgical, predatory precision."
9"Eva hesitated, then slowly reached into her worn leather satchel. She pulled out a book—an ancient, vellum-bound ledger that seemed to absorb the light around it. \"He was trying to sell this."
10"And for the first time in eighteen years, the evidence is telling me that the world is much bigger—and much hungrier—than I ever imagined.\""
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1112
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"grey, light-smeared blur."
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.025179856115107913
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.009892086330935251
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences133
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences133
mean13.01
std9.86
cv0.758
sampleLengths
016
120
210
320
420
519
615
75
820
916
1014
114
1230
1318
1421
154
169
1722
1818
1912
2017
2135
225
235
243
2525
264
278
285
2918
307
3114
3223
3324
3424
3510
365
3710
3821
397
402
417
424
435
442
4517
4615
477
4817
493
53.88% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.3684210526315789
totalSentences133
uniqueOpeners49
62.89% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences106
matches
0"Sometimes the history is..."
1"Once his footsteps faded into"
ratio0.019
76.60% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences106
matches
0"She checked the worn leather"
1"Her salt-and-pepper hair was already"
2"They straightened as she approached."
3"Her flashlight cut a clean"
4"He looked exhausted, his tie"
5"She didn't touch anything yet."
6"She simply observed."
7"Her brown eyes tracked the"
8"Her voice held a note"
9"She stood up and scanned"
10"He stepped back, his eyes"
11"They were indeed defying gravity,"
12"She walked toward a pile"
13"She pulled a pair of"
14"She withdrew a small brass"
15"It was a compass, its"
16"It wasn't pointing North."
17"It was spinning in a"
18"He had raved about things"
19"She stopped herself"
ratio0.358
26.04% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount92
totalSentences106
matches
0"The rain in Camden didn’t"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped over"
2"She checked the worn leather"
3"Her salt-and-pepper hair was already"
4"Haste was the father of"
5"The entrance to the scene"
6"They straightened as she approached."
7"Harlow didn’t need to show"
8"Harlow nodded and descended."
9"The air changed instantly, shifting"
10"Her flashlight cut a clean"
11"a voice echoed through the"
12"Detective Sergeant Miller stood near"
13"He looked exhausted, his tie"
14"Harlow asked, her voice low"
15"Miller said, pointing to a"
16"Harlow knelt beside the body."
17"She didn't touch anything yet."
18"She simply observed."
19"Her brown eyes tracked the"
ratio0.868
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences106
matches(empty)
ratio0
89.29% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Uniformed officers stood shivering under a makeshift awning, their breath blooming in the cold air."
1"Her flashlight cut a clean white swath through the dark, illuminating tiles that had yellowed like old teeth."
2"Thirty feet below the surface, the tunnel opened into a cavernous maintenance bay that hadn't seen a commuter in fifty years."
18.94% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags33
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"Harlow asked, her voice low and steady"
1"Harlow said, her thumb tracing the protective sigils"
2"Miller shouted, his hand flying to his holster"
3"Harlow said, her voice dropping into a cold, interrogative register"
4"Harlow called out, not breaking eye contact with Eva"
5"Harlow asked, her jaw tightening"
6"Harlow said, her voice softer now, but no less firm"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags25
fancyCount11
fancyTags
0"she repeated (repeat)"
1"Miller insisted (insist)"
2"she corrected (correct)"
3"Miller muttered (mutter)"
4"Harlow whispered (whisper)"
5"Miller suggested (suggest)"
6"Miller shouted (shout)"
7"the woman gasped (gasp)"
8"the girl stammered (stammer)"
9"Harlow called out (call out)"
10"she snapped (snap)"
dialogueSentences57
tagDensity0.439
leniency0.877
rawRatio0.44
effectiveRatio0.386
73.3913%