Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ94VH014KAR2KBDPZSXXA3V

Run Details

Duration:
23.5s
Cost:
$0.001906
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The stale air of the abandoned Underground station clung to Detective Harlow Quinn like damp wool. It carried the ghosts of exhaust fumes, sweat, and something else, something metallic and faintly sweet, like spilled ink mixed with ozone. Above her, yellow police tape cordoned off the gaping maw of the Piccadilly Line’s northern terminus, an entrance few ever sought and fewer still found easily. Down here, the air thickened, heavy with the phantom pulse of commerce that had once, and sometimes still did, thrum beneath London’s skin. The Veil Market. Even the name felt like a poorly kept secret. Her boots crunched on grit and what might have been calcified something-or-other. Her worn leather watch read 02:17. The uniformed officers guarding the entrance wore expressions that spoke of a long, cold night spent contemplating things they’d rather not, a sentiment Harlow knew intimately. They’d let her through with no more than a nod, the glint of her badge and the military precision of her bearing cutting through their weariness. Eighteen years on the force, and the world still offered up its strangest puzzles when the city slept. The cavernous space opened up before her: vaulted ceilings lost in shadow, corroded signage for destinations long forgotten, and the skeletal remains of kiosks that once hawked wares far stranger than cheap souvenirs. This was not a typical crime scene. No blood spatter painting the tiled walls, no overturned furniture suggesting a frantic struggle. Instead, an unnatural stillness. Everything felt… curated. Almost too clean. Harlow swept her gaze across the scene, her brown eyes cataloging details with practiced speed. A scattered assortment of peculiar objects lay strewn across the grimy platform floor: a single, obsidian-black glove, its fingers unnervingly elongated; a pile of desiccated herbs that smelled vaguely of anise and regret; a chipped ceramic bird with eyes made of chips of turquoise, lying on its side as if it too had been startled into stillness. And in the center of it all, a chalk outline. Neat. Precise. A stark white phantom on the stained concrete. “They’re usually messier,” she murmured, the sound tight in her throat. A voice, light and slightly reedy, startled her. “Messy is a matter of perspective, Detective.” Harlow turned, her hand instinctively tightening on the grip of the service pistol holstered at her hip. Standing near a crumbling information booth, framed by the shadows cast by her own portable work light, was Eva Kowalski. Curly red hair, perpetually escaping its confines, frames a face dusted with freckles. Round glasses perched on her nose, glinting as she tilted her head. She clutched a worn leather satchel stuffed with books as if it were a shield. Eva, the occult researcher and childhood friend of Aurora, was not standard police issue. Not by a long mile. What was she doing here? Harlow scanned for any uniformed officer who might have brought her in, but saw none engaged with her. Eva seemed to have found her own way. Of course she had. The Veil Market was her kind of swamp. “Kowalski,” Harlow acknowledged, her tone neutral, but her mind already filing away the anomaly. “How did you get down here?” Eva adjusted her glasses. "I have my sources, Detective. And my own reasons for… investigating the ebb and flow of certain markets. This location was rumored to be active last night. When it wasn't this morning, and word got out something had gone… amiss, my interest was piqued." She gestured vaguely towards the chalk outline with a slender finger. "And you’re here because someone found the outline." "Someone reported a disturbance," Harlow corrected, walking slowly towards the body’s former position. "And then the evidence suggested a more organized termination. Or, as it appears, a perfectly executed extraction." Her jaw, sharp and defined, clenched. The clique. They were always involved in these more elaborate disappearances, their tendrils reaching into these hidden corners of the city. They dealt in things best left undisturbed. Things that left no conventional trace. “Extraction?” Eva echoed, taking a tentative step forward. “You see a body?” “I see the absence of one,” Harlow stated, kneeling carefully by the chalk outline. The concrete beneath was scuffed, but not violently. No dragged limbs, no smear marks suggesting a desperate fight for life. Just a few dark, almost inky droplets that didn’t quite look like blood. And a faint, geometric pattern pressed into the grime around the outline, like a seal pressed into wax. “But the chalk outline is precise,” Eva mused, her gaze following Harlow’s. “Almost too precise. Not the rough, hurried work of a killer trying to mark a body on the run. This looks like… a marker. A diagram.” Harlow ran a gloved finger near one of the dark droplets. It was dry, brittle. It didn't soak into the concrete like blood; it sat on top, almost like a stain from something entirely alien. “Diagrams are often drawn by the living, Kowalski. Or their accomplices.” She looked up at Eva. “What’s your theory? Did the clique use a ghost to ferry the victim away? Or perhaps a conjurer who spirited them into thin air?” Her voice dripped with sarcasm, a shield against the prickle of unease that always accompanied such scenes. It reminded her too much of Morris. Of how things had gone wrong three years ago, a case that had started mundane and ended with unanswered questions that tasted of the impossible. Eva, blessedly, didn’t seem to register the sarcasm as a personal attack. "Ghosts are imprecise, Detective. And conjurers, the theatrical sort, leave traces of their craft. This… this feels like something else. Something more fundamental." She stepped closer, her boot scuffing against one of the peculiar objects. A small, intricately carved wooden hand. Its fingers were curled into a gesture Harlow didn't recognize, but it felt unnerving, like a silent warning. "Fundamental how?" Harlow asked, standing to her full height. 5'9" of Northern grit and ingrained skepticism. She tapped the side of her worn leather watch. "This is a crime scene. We deal in motive, opportunity, means. Not 'fundamental' anything." "The means," Eva said, retrieving the wooden hand and turning it over. "Look at the pattern here." She pointed to the faint geometric imprint on the ground. "It's not just a random scuff. Those lines… they are intentional. They form a nodal pattern, a kind of containment or channeling matrix. And these droplets…" She carefully touched one, then sniffed her fingertip. Her nose wrinkled. "Not blood. Nothing organic I recognize. It smells like… like static electricity and petrichor. Earthy, but charged." Harlow’s gaze followed Eva’s finger. The 'diagram' was indeed too regular, too deliberate. She’d initially dismissed it as scuff marks from an hasty departure, but now… it formed a complex, almost crystalline structure. It wasn't a symbol she recognized from any gang graffiti or occult ritual book she’d ever seen logged in her career. "The victim," Harlow prompted. "Who was it?" "A dealer," Eva said, her voice lowering. "Or at least, that's what he was known as in certain circles. His name was Silas Croft. Dealt in… unique items. Mostly charms, amulets, lesser artifacts. Had a stall over in the market proper, when it’s active." An artifact dealer. That narrowed the field. But it didn’t explain the absence of a body, the strange residue, or the precise geometric pattern. “And the clique?” Harlow pressed. “Silas would have owed them. Or crossed them. Someone contracted him, or took something from him. Standard procedure.” “Except standard procedure doesn’t account for the *way* it was done,” Eva countered, her nervousness habit of tucking hair behind her ear making a brief appearance before she smoothed it down. “He wasn’t killed and his body moved. He was… unmade. Or dissolved. Or perhaps folded away along the lines of this diagram.” Harlow’s breath hitched. Folded away. The thought was absurd, yet the pristine nature of the scene nagged at her. No signs of struggle, no blood, no DNA evidence that hadn’t been meticulously cleaned or simply never existed. It was as if Silas Croft had been erased from existence, not removed. “Who would have the capability?” Harlow asked, more to herself than to Eva. Her mind flashed back to Morris, to the unsettling quiet that followed his disappearance, the impossible evidence trail that led nowhere and everywhere at once. The feeling of standing at the edge of a truth so alien it felt like madness. Eva hesitated, then reached into her satchel. She pulled out a small, tarnished brass object. It was a compass, but unlike any Harlow had seen. The casing was worn smooth with age, bearing a patina of verdigris like an ancient coin. Its face was etched with swirling lines and symbols that seemed to writhe just out of the corner of her eye. “This,” Eva said, holding it out, “is a Veil Compass. Crafted by a Shade artisan. It doesn’t point north. It points… elsewhere. To rifts, portals, areas where the Veil between worlds is thin.” Harlow eyed the compass. The needle, instead of a simple sliver of metal, was a sliver of what looked like polished bone, suspended over the sigil-etched face by an unseen force. As Eva held it, the needle quivered, then spun wildly before settling. It pointed, not north, but directly at a dark, recessed alcove between two pillars at the far end of the platform. “It’s picking up something,” Eva whispered, her eyes wide behind her glasses. “Something residual. Silas Croft wasn’t just a dealer of trinkets, Detective. He stumbled upon something… bigger. Something that requires a more specialized custodian. And someone wanted it, by whatever means necessary. Perhaps Silas himself activated something, a failsafe, when he realized he was in danger. Or perhaps the buyer did.” Harlow’s gaze followed the compass needle. The alcove looked like any other shadowed recess in the derelict station, full of dust and shadows. But the compass… it was a tool of this hidden world, a world she usually only skirted the edges of in her investigations. A world that had swallowed Morris whole. She walked towards the alcove, her posture rigid, her senses on high alert. The air here felt colder, thinner. And as she got closer, she could almost hear it – a low, almost imperceptible hum, like a distant generator. Or a heartbeat. “This compass,” Harlow said, her voice gravelly, “its needle points to supernatural phenomena. You tell me, Kowalski. Did Silas Croft get spirited away by a portal? Or did he *open* one?” Eva joined her, the compass still in her hand, quivering slightly. “That’s the question, isn’t it? The clean absence of evidence… it suggests either a perfect crime, or a departure from this reality entirely. Silas wasn't strong enough for the latter. But the *thing* he was selling… or the person who bought it… they might have been.” Harlow peered into the alcove. There was some faint shimmering at the back, like heat haze rising from an impossibly cold surface. And the faint, sweet, ozonic scent was stronger here, mixed with something else now – something mineral, like damp earth and crushed quartz. It wasn’t blood. It wasn’t anything she could easily categorize. It was the residue of a place that was no longer quite *here*. Her partner, Morris, had been lost in a similar void. A case that had started with a missing person and ended with a sealed room that showed no signs of entry or exit, only an unnatural chill and the lingering scent of… what? She’d never found an answer, only a gnawing certainty that some things defied logical explanation. She looked back at Eva, at the earnest, intelligent face behind the round glasses. The scholar’s perspective, illuminated by tools like the Veil Compass, offered a terrifyingly plausible counterpoint to her own evidence-based deductions. The evidence didn't add up. Not by conventional means. But perhaps, just perhaps, the means were not conventional at all. The Veil Market, a place where the impossible was often just another commodity, had delivered its latest riddle. And Harlow Quinn, despite her instincts screaming for the familiar comfort of logic, found herself standing on the precipice of understanding that there were more things in heaven and earth, and beneath the streets of London, than were dreamt of in her police academy textbooks. The scent of ozone tingled at the back of her nose. The hum grew louder. The precise geometry on the platform floor suddenly looked less like a diagram and more like a recipe.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags24
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.632
leniency1
rawRatio0.042
effectiveRatio0.042
83.19% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2082
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"perfectly"
count1
3
adverb"carefully"
count2
4
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
2"perfectly"
3"carefully"
4"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
47.17% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2082
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"maw"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"glint"
count1
3
word"stark"
count1
4
word"glinting"
count1
5
word"standard"
count3
6
word"scanned"
count1
7
word"amiss"
count1
8
word"echoed"
count1
9
word"charged"
count1
10
word"complex"
count1
11
word"crystalline"
count1
12
word"structure"
count1
13
word"pristine"
count1
14
word"etched"
count2
15
word"quivered"
count1
16
word"perfect"
count1
17
word"chill"
count1
18
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"maw"
1"pulse"
2"glint"
3"stark"
4"glinting"
5"standard"
6"scanned"
7"amiss"
8"echoed"
9"charged"
10"complex"
11"crystalline"
12"structure"
13"pristine"
14"etched"
15"quivered"
16"perfect"
17"chill"
18"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences129
matches(empty)
98.56% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences129
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"seem to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences134
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen151
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords4
totalWords2084
ratio0.002
matches
0"way"
1"open"
2"thing"
3"here"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions80
wordCount1716
uniqueNames19
maxNameDensity1.34
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Underground1
Detective2
Harlow23
Quinn2
Piccadilly1
Line1
London2
Veil5
Market3
Eva19
Kowalski2
Aurora1
Morris4
Silas6
Croft4
Crafted1
Shade1
You1
Compass1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Line"
3"Eva"
4"Kowalski"
5"Morris"
6"Silas"
7"Croft"
8"You"
9"Compass"
places
0"Detective"
1"London"
2"Market"
globalScore0.83
windowScore0.667
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences82
glossingSentenceCount7
matches
0"felt like a poorly kept secret"
1"quite look like blood"
2"It was as if Silas Croft had been erased from existence, not removed"
3"felt like madness"
4"symbols that seemed to writhe just out of the corner of her eye"
5"looked like polished bone, suspended over"
6"looked like any other shadowed recess in"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.48
wordCount2084
matches
0"not north, but directly at a dark, recessed alcove between two pillars at t"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences134
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean57.89
std30.03
cv0.519
sampleLengths
099
188
264
392
411
515
696
743
820
967
1070
1112
1265
1338
14124
1571
1639
1781
1854
197
2044
2147
2253
2350
2454
2562
2633
2764
2862
2953
3042
3131
3257
3368
3458
35150
83.50% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount8
totalSentences129
matches
0"been calcified"
1"been startled"
2"was scuffed"
3"were curled"
4"been erased"
5"was etched"
6"been lost"
7"were dreamt"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs281
matches
0"was selling…"
57.57% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences134
ratio0.03
matches
0"A scattered assortment of peculiar objects lay strewn across the grimy platform floor: a single, obsidian-black glove, its fingers unnervingly elongated; a pile of desiccated herbs that smelled vaguely of anise and regret; a chipped ceramic bird with eyes made of chips of turquoise, lying on its side as if it too had been startled into stillness."
1"It didn't soak into the concrete like blood; it sat on top, almost like a stain from something entirely alien."
2"She walked towards the alcove, her posture rigid, her senses on high alert. The air here felt colder, thinner. And as she got closer, she could almost hear it – a low, almost imperceptible hum, like a distant generator. Or a heartbeat."
3"Harlow peered into the alcove. There was some faint shimmering at the back, like heat haze rising from an impossibly cold surface. And the faint, sweet, ozonic scent was stronger here, mixed with something else now – something mineral, like damp earth and crushed quartz. It wasn’t blood. It wasn’t anything she could easily categorize. It was the residue of a place that was no longer quite *here*."
80.98% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1068
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"single, obsidian-black glove,"
adverbCount58
adverbRatio0.054307116104868915
lyAdverbCount22
lyAdverbRatio0.020599250936329586
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences134
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences134
mean15.55
std19.01
cv1.222
sampleLengths
016
122
226
323
43
59
612
76
826
926
1018
1133
127
1314
144
152
161
173
1815
1957
2010
211
221
238
2411
258
267
2717
2820
2913
3012
3115
3214
335
345
3518
368
374
388
3914
406
414
4255
438
4413
4523
462
4719
487
496
77.61% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.4925373134328358
totalSentences134
uniqueOpeners66
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount7
totalSentences111
matches
0"Even the name felt like"
1"Instead, an unnatural stillness."
2"Almost too clean."
3"Of course she had."
4"Just a few dark, almost"
5"Mostly charms, amulets, lesser artifacts."
6"Perhaps Silas himself activated something,"
ratio0.063
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences111
matches
0"It carried the ghosts of"
1"Her boots crunched on grit"
2"Her worn leather watch read"
3"They’d let her through with"
4"she murmured, the sound tight"
5"She clutched a worn leather"
6"She gestured vaguely towards the"
7"Her jaw, sharp and defined,"
8"They were always involved in"
9"They dealt in things best"
10"It was dry, brittle."
11"It didn't soak into the"
12"She looked up at Eva"
13"Her voice dripped with sarcasm,"
14"It reminded her too much"
15"She stepped closer, her boot"
16"Its fingers were curled into"
17"We deal in motive, opportunity,"
18"they are intentional."
19"They form a nodal pattern,"
ratio0.27
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount77
totalSentences111
matches
0"The stale air of the"
1"It carried the ghosts of"
2"The Veil Market."
3"Her boots crunched on grit"
4"Her worn leather watch read"
5"The uniformed officers guarding the"
6"They’d let her through with"
7"The cavernous space opened up"
8"This was not a typical"
9"Harlow swept her gaze across"
10"A scattered assortment of peculiar"
11"A stark white phantom on"
12"she murmured, the sound tight"
13"A voice, light and slightly"
14"Harlow turned, her hand instinctively"
15"She clutched a worn leather"
16"Eva, the occult researcher and"
17"Harlow scanned for any uniformed"
18"Eva seemed to have found"
19"The Veil Market was her"
ratio0.694
45.05% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences111
matches
0"To rifts, portals, areas where"
ratio0.009
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"Down here, the air thickened, heavy with the phantom pulse of commerce that had once, and sometimes still did, thrum beneath London’s skin."
1"The uniformed officers guarding the entrance wore expressions that spoke of a long, cold night spent contemplating things they’d rather not, a sentiment Harlow …"
2"A scattered assortment of peculiar objects lay strewn across the grimy platform floor: a single, obsidian-black glove, its fingers unnervingly elongated; a pile…"
3"Of how things had gone wrong three years ago, a case that had started mundane and ended with unanswered questions that tasted of the impossible."
4"Harlow’s breath hitched. Folded away. The thought was absurd, yet the pristine nature of the scene nagged at her. No signs of struggle, no blood, no DNA evidenc…"
5"Eva hesitated, then reached into her satchel. She pulled out a small, tarnished brass object. It was a compass, but unlike any Harlow had seen. The casing was w…"
6"Harlow’s gaze followed the compass needle. The alcove looked like any other shadowed recess in the derelict station, full of dust and shadows. But the compass… …"
7"Harlow peered into the alcove. There was some faint shimmering at the back, like heat haze rising from an impossibly cold surface. And the faint, sweet, ozonic …"
8"Her partner, Morris, had been lost in a similar void. A case that had started with a missing person and ended with a sealed room that showed no signs of entry o…"
9"She looked back at Eva, at the earnest, intelligent face behind the round glasses. The scholar’s perspective, illuminated by tools like the Veil Compass, offere…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags23
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"Eva mused, her gaze following Harlow’s"
1"She stepped, her boot scuffing against one of the peculiar objects"
2"Eva said, her voice lowering"
3"Harlow asked, more to herself than to Eva"
4"Eva whispered, her eyes wide behind her glasses"
5"Harlow said, her voice gravelly,"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
1"Harlow acknowledged (acknowledge)"
2"Harlow corrected (correct)"
3"Harlow stated (state)"
4"it didn’t (do)"
5"Eva whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.316
leniency0.632
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.316
78.0098%