Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
94
glossingSentenceCount
7
matches
0
"looked like an old service entrance, long"
1
"space that seemed to hum with a furtive energy"
2
"stalls that seemed to coalesce from the gloom itself, their contents hinted at by the strange glow from within – glinting metal, iridescent vials, pulsating objects shrouded in silk"
3
"obsidian that seemed to absorb the light; another whose limbs moved with a disconcerting, insectile grace"
4
"music that seemed to emanate from the very earth"
"He scrabbled at the chain, a glint of metal—a key, perhaps, or something else—in his hand."
1
"It smelled of damp earth, exotic spices, mildew, and something else—something sharp and vital, like blood kept too long."
2
"They flitted between stalls that seemed to coalesce from the gloom itself, their contents hinted at by the strange glow from within – glinting metal, iridescent vials, pulsating objects shrouded in silk."
3
"She saw them then – the patrons."
4
"A being with skin like polished obsidian that seemed to absorb the light; another whose limbs moved with a disconcerting, insectile grace."
5
"He wouldn't disappear into the general throng; he was a dealer, or a supplier, certainly not a mere shopper."
6
"The memory of Liam’s vacant eyes, the impossible case files, the questions that had gnawed at her for three years—they were a physical ache."
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
72
technicalSentenceCount
12
matches
0
"He’d been her quarry for a week, a whisper of a name connected to the clique’s illicit dealings, a ghost who’d suddenly materialized tonight, desperate and runn…"
1
"He wrenched the door open with surprising force, the rusted hinges groaning a protest that was swallowed by the downpour."
2
"The air that seeped out was colder, carrying a damp, earthy smell mixed with something metallic and faintly sweet, like overripe fruit decaying in a damp cellar…"
3
"The codex she’d painstakingly compiled on the clique often hinted at strange acquisitions, things that couldn't be bought on any legitimate street."
4
"She had only the raw instinct that Tomás Herrera was a thread leading to the heart of something rotten, something that might explain Liam’s fate."
5
"Water dripped constantly from unseen pipes overhead, forming shallow pools that reflected her flashlight beam in distorted, wavering patterns."
6
"An impossible expanse swallowed by shadow, stretching out into a cavernous space that seemed to hum with a furtive energy."
7
"Her flashlight beam, powerful as it was, barely pierced the gloom, revealing rough-hewn walls that hinted at ancient excavation, overlaid with the cracked, stai…"
8
"They flitted between stalls that seemed to coalesce from the gloom itself, their contents hinted at by the strange glow from within – glinting metal, iridescent…"
9
"A being with skin like polished obsidian that seemed to absorb the light; another whose limbs moved with a disconcerting, insectile grace."
10
"The memory of Liam’s vacant eyes, the impossible case files, the questions that had gnawed at her for three years—they were a physical ache."
11
"She saw Tomás’s silhouette vanish behind a stall selling shimmering fabrics that moved as if alive."