Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ94VR2FGRBWB7S3YGCA5KB3

Run Details

Duration:
31.7s
Cost:
$0.003312
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain had been falling for hours, a relentless drumming that turned London streets into slick, black mirrors. Detective Harlow Quinn hunched deeper into her coat, the collar of worn, dark wool scratching her jawline. Her gaze swept the alley’s sodden end, tracking the erratic path of Tomás Herrera. He’d been her quarry for a week, a whisper of a name connected to the clique’s illicit dealings, a ghost who’d suddenly materialized tonight, desperate and running. His olive skin gleamed under the weak streetlight, his short, dark curls plastered to his forehead, the Saint Christopher medallion around his neck glinting as he stumbled. Finnigan, the courier Quinn had interrogated earlier, had given Tomás up. "He's the one who gets the special supplies. Goes down below. Silas's old place, the Nest, he uses it sometimes, but he… he goes *under* for the real trade." Finnigan, now weeping in a holding cell, had pointed a trembling finger towards the city’s forgotten arteries. Silas’s bar, The Raven's Nest, was just a front, a known haunt but never outright raided, its distinctive green neon sign a lure rather than a beacon of true commerce. Quinn had seen Tomás emerge from its back entrance moments ago, not with merchandise, but with a frantic, hunted look. Now he was trying to lose her in the labyrinthine backstreets of Soho. Tomás veered sharply, a desperate lunge towards a gaping maw of darkness set into a grimy brick wall. It looked like an old service entrance, long disused, its heavy steel door scabbed with rust and peeling paint, a ratty chain securing it loosely. A grate covered what might have been a ventilation shaft beside it, but it was too small for a man. Tomás didn't pause. He scrabbled at the chain, a glint of metal—a key, perhaps, or something else—in his hand. He wrenched the door open with surprising force, the rusted hinges groaning a protest that was swallowed by the downpour. Without a backward glance, he plunged into the absolute blackness beyond. Quinn broke into a sprint. Her service boots splashed through puddles, her movement a brutal efficiency honed by eighteen years of pursuit. The salt-and-pepper hair, cropped close, stayed put. Her sharp jaw was set. She’d lost a partner once, Liam Morris, three years ago, swallowed by a case that defied logic, a supernatural shadow she still couldn't outrun. That failure was a constant thrum beneath her skin, pushing her to follow, to *never* let another lead turn cold and vanish into the unknown. Not again. She reached the doorway. The air that seeped out was colder, carrying a damp, earthy smell mixed with something metallic and faintly sweet, like overripe fruit decaying in a damp cellar. It prickled the back of her throat. Her hand, steady despite the adrenaline, found the doorframe. The opening was a rectangle of pure void, swallowing sound and light. She couldn't see Tomás. He could be minutes ahead, or already gone. The thought was a cold blade. Did she follow? Her training screamed caution. This wasn't a typical criminal den. Finnigan’s panicked words echoed: *"goes down below. The Veil Market."* Names she’d dismissed as folklore, sensationalist rubbish peddled by informants trying to earn their keep. An underground black market. For what? Banned substances? Enchanted goods? Information? The codex she’d painstakingly compiled on the clique often hinted at strange acquisitions, things that couldn't be bought on any legitimate street. And Tomás, the ex-paramedic scrubbed from the register for "unauthorised treatment of unique patients," was clearly part of it. He knew this place. He was fleeing *into* it. She heard a faint scraping from below. A sound of resistance, then a click, followed by a heavy thud that vibrated up through the metal doorframe. He’d locked it behind him. Or worse, he’d triggered something. This was the gamble. She had no warrant for whatever lay beneath this disused entrance, no backup that even suspected the nature of the chase. She had only the raw instinct that Tomás Herrera was a thread leading to the heart of something rotten, something that might explain Liam’s fate. Her worn leather watch showed 02:17. No one would be looking for her. She took a breath that tasted of rain and exhaust fumes, then stepped into the darkness. Her boots hit rough concrete. The descent was steep, uneven, a rough-hewn ramp carved into the earth, or perhaps an old access tunnel. The air grew thicker, the metallic sweetness more pronounced, now mingled with a cloying incense and the unmistakable, acrid tang of something chemical, something volatile. Water dripped constantly from unseen pipes overhead, forming shallow pools that reflected her flashlight beam in distorted, wavering patterns. The silence was profound, broken only by her own breathing and the hollow echo of her boots. Then, the tunnel opened. It was vast. An impossible expanse swallowed by shadow, stretching out into a cavernous space that seemed to hum with a furtive energy. Her flashlight beam, powerful as it was, barely pierced the gloom, revealing rough-hewn walls that hinted at ancient excavation, overlaid with the cracked, stained concrete of a more recent era. This had to be the abandoned Tube station Finnigan had mumbled about. But it wasn't abandoned. Somewhere ahead, a low murmur began to coalesce. A vast, echoing drone of voices, hushed bartering, the clinking of unseen objects, the skittering of feet. Pinpricks of light, like dying embers, began to appear deeper within the gloom, casting flickering, unreliable illumination. It smelled of damp earth, exotic spices, mildew, and something else—something sharp and vital, like blood kept too long. This was the Veil Market. She advanced slowly, the flashlight beam cutting a hesitant path. Figures moved at the periphery of her vision, indistinct shapes cloaked in shadow or fabric she couldn’t identify. They flitted between stalls that seemed to coalesce from the gloom itself, their contents hinted at by the strange glow from within – glinting metal, iridescent vials, pulsating objects shrouded in silk. Quinn’s detective instincts warred with a primitive unease. Her military precision felt inadequate here. Her badge, her authority, meant nothing in this subterranean bazaar. She saw them then – the patrons. Some were human, gaunt, their eyes hollow, clutching worn satchels. Others… others were harder to categorize. A being with skin like polished obsidian that seemed to absorb the light; another whose limbs moved with a disconcerting, insectile grace. A vendor with a face obscured by a veil of iridescent scales haggled over something small and luminescent with a hunched figure whose silhouette suggested a disturbing lack of joints. Quinn paused, her focus sharpening. She had to find Tomás. He wouldn't disappear into the general throng; he was a dealer, or a supplier, certainly not a mere shopper. He'd be seeking out a specific stall, making a transaction. She moved with more purpose now, weaving through the cautious flow of bodies. The air thrummed with a low, guttural music that seemed to emanate from the very earth. Strange aromas warred for dominance: burnt sugar, damp fur, something akin to ozone after a lightning strike, and the ever-present, unnerving sweetness. She passed a stall piled high with what looked like desiccated animal parts, arranged with unsettling artistry. Another displayed rows of intricately engraved vials filled with liquids of unsettling hues, pulsing with their own inner light. Then, she caught a glimpse of familiar olive skin and dark, plastered curls. Tomás. He was three stalls down, on the left, his back to her. He was standing before a stall draped in dark velvet, where a figure whose face was concealed by a deep hood was handing him something small and dark. Tomás’s hand trembled as he reached out, his Saint Christopher medallion catching a stray gleam from a nearby stall’s wares. Was that the *special supply* Finnigan had mentioned? Quinn began to increase her pace, her boots no longer crunching but moving silently on the damp ground. This was it. She pushed past a stall selling glowing fungi, ignoring the vendor’s hissed protest. The space between her and Tomás was closing. But as she moved, she saw it. The vendor with the hooded face spoke, and a brief, almost imperceptible gesture from the hood made the air around the dark velvet stall shimmer. A ward? A marker? Tomás accepted the item, stuffing it into his coat pocket, and turned. His eyes widened, widening even further as they locked onto Quinn, advancing across the market floor. Panic flared, stark and raw. Tomás didn't hesitate. He shoved past the hooded figure without a word and disappeared into the dense crowd moving deeper into the market’s heart. Quinn stopped. She could follow. She could plunge into that unknown throng, a lone detective in a place where laws were unwritten and dangers unseen. Her breath hitched. The memory of Liam’s vacant eyes, the impossible case files, the questions that had gnawed at her for three years—they were a physical ache. This was her chance. This was *why* she did this. But the hood of the vendor Quinn had just passed turned slightly, and she felt a prickle on her skin, a silent, unseen scrutiny. The air seemed to grow heavy, thick with unspoken threats. The path Tomás had taken was merely the beginning. Who knew what lay beyond, or what waited for someone who dared to trespass? Her hand instinctively went to the worn leather strap of her watch. Eighteen years of service, and she'd never felt so utterly out of her depth. The decision was hers. Follow him into the abyss, or retreat, a failure in her own eyes, knowing the clique’s operations were deeper and more dangerous than she could have imagined, leaving Tomás and his secrets to the shadows. The rain hammered down somewhere far above, a forgotten world with its own rules and consequences. Here, in the Veil Market, the consequences felt immediate, and immeasurably strange. She saw Tomás’s silhouette vanish behind a stall selling shimmering fabrics that moved as if alive. His path led further in. Deeper. A cold, hard resolve settled over Quinn. Liam deserved answers. And so did she. She took one last look at the hooded vendor, a silent promise of defiance in her eyes. Then, Detective Harlow Quinn plunged into the throng, swallowed by the Veil Market.
created_at"2026-02-25T00:58:23.189Z" 2/25/2026, 12:58:23 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
79.62% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1717
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
2
adverb"loosely"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
4
adverb"very"
count1
5
adverb"slightly"
count1
6
adverb"utterly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"sharply"
2"loosely"
3"slowly"
4"very"
5"slightly"
6"utterly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
30.11% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1717
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"whisper"
count1
1
word"glinting"
count2
2
word"beacon"
count1
3
word"maw"
count1
4
word"glint"
count1
5
word"echoed"
count1
6
word"vibrated"
count1
7
word"wavering"
count1
8
word"silence"
count1
9
word"profound"
count1
10
word"echo"
count1
11
word"gloom"
count3
12
word"echoing"
count1
13
word"silk"
count1
14
word"familiar"
count1
15
word"velvet"
count2
16
word"trembled"
count1
17
word"stark"
count1
18
word"unspoken"
count1
19
word"resolve"
count1
highlights
0"whisper"
1"glinting"
2"beacon"
3"maw"
4"glint"
5"echoed"
6"vibrated"
7"wavering"
8"silence"
9"profound"
10"echo"
11"gloom"
12"echoing"
13"silk"
14"familiar"
15"velvet"
16"trembled"
17"stark"
18"unspoken"
19"resolve"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences136
matches
0"felt a prickle"
37.82% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount8
narrationSentences136
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences136
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans6
markdownWords12
totalWords1715
ratio0.007
matches
0"under"
1"never"
2"\"goes down below. The Veil Market.\""
3"into"
4"special supply"
5"why"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions62
wordCount1675
uniqueNames19
maxNameDensity1.01
worstName"Tomás"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Tomás"
discoveredNames
London1
Harlow2
Quinn12
Tomás17
Herrera2
Saint2
Christopher2
Silas1
Raven1
Nest1
Soho1
Liam4
Morris1
Names1
Tube1
Finnigan5
Veil3
Market3
Detective2
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Tomás"
3"Herrera"
4"Saint"
5"Christopher"
6"Silas"
7"Raven"
8"Liam"
9"Morris"
10"Finnigan"
places
0"London"
1"Soho"
2"Veil"
3"Market"
globalScore0.993
windowScore0.833
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences94
glossingSentenceCount7
matches
0"looked like an old service entrance, long"
1"space that seemed to hum with a furtive energy"
2"stalls that seemed to coalesce from the gloom itself, their contents hinted at by the strange glow from within – glinting metal, iridescent vials, pulsating objects shrouded in silk"
3"obsidian that seemed to absorb the light; another whose limbs moved with a disconcerting, insectile grace"
4"music that seemed to emanate from the very earth"
5"something akin to ozone after a lightning strik"
6"looked like desiccated animal parts, arra"
83.38% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.166
wordCount1715
matches
0"not with merchandise, but with a frantic, hunted look"
1"no longer crunching but"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences136
matches
0"Was that the"
94.34% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs27
mean63.52
std30.5
cv0.48
sampleLengths
0103
1120
2113
385
477
599
686
729
884
94
1069
1161
125
1384
1475
1539
1687
1782
1842
1948
2045
2162
2257
2365
2450
2514
2630
97.52% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences136
matches
0"was swallowed"
1"was concealed"
2"were unwritten"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs277
matches
0"was trying"
1"was fleeing"
2"was standing"
3"was handing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences136
ratio0.051
matches
0"He scrabbled at the chain, a glint of metal—a key, perhaps, or something else—in his hand."
1"It smelled of damp earth, exotic spices, mildew, and something else—something sharp and vital, like blood kept too long."
2"They flitted between stalls that seemed to coalesce from the gloom itself, their contents hinted at by the strange glow from within – glinting metal, iridescent vials, pulsating objects shrouded in silk."
3"She saw them then – the patrons."
4"A being with skin like polished obsidian that seemed to absorb the light; another whose limbs moved with a disconcerting, insectile grace."
5"He wouldn't disappear into the general throng; he was a dealer, or a supplier, certainly not a mere shopper."
6"The memory of Liam’s vacant eyes, the impossible case files, the questions that had gnawed at her for three years—they were a physical ache."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1682
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount57
adverbRatio0.03388822829964328
lyAdverbCount20
lyAdverbRatio0.011890606420927468
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences136
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences136
mean12.61
std8.82
cv0.7
sampleLengths
018
117
214
327
427
511
646
730
820
913
1018
1125
1220
133
1416
1520
1611
175
1817
197
205
2124
2225
232
244
2527
267
279
2812
294
308
316
323
334
346
3525
364
372
382
392
401
4122
4219
434
445
457
4619
475
485
494
45.59% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.33088235294117646
totalSentences136
uniqueOpeners45
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences125
matches
0"Then, the tunnel opened."
1"Somewhere ahead, a low murmur"
2"Then, she caught a glimpse"
3"Then, Detective Harlow Quinn plunged"
ratio0.032
63.20% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount49
totalSentences125
matches
0"Her gaze swept the alley’s"
1"He’d been her quarry for"
2"His olive skin gleamed under"
3"It looked like an old"
4"He scrabbled at the chain,"
5"He wrenched the door open"
6"Her service boots splashed through"
7"Her sharp jaw was set."
8"She’d lost a partner once,"
9"She reached the doorway."
10"It prickled the back of"
11"Her hand, steady despite the"
12"She couldn't see Tomás."
13"He could be minutes ahead,"
14"Her training screamed caution."
15"He knew this place."
16"He was fleeing *into* it."
17"She heard a faint scraping"
18"He’d locked it behind him."
19"She had no warrant for"
ratio0.392
36.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount106
totalSentences125
matches
0"The rain had been falling"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn hunched deeper"
2"Her gaze swept the alley’s"
3"He’d been her quarry for"
4"His olive skin gleamed under"
5"Finnigan, the courier Quinn had"
6"Finnigan, now weeping in a"
7"Silas’s bar, The Raven's Nest,"
8"Quinn had seen Tomás emerge"
9"Tomás veered sharply, a desperate"
10"It looked like an old"
11"A grate covered what might"
12"Tomás didn't pause."
13"He scrabbled at the chain,"
14"He wrenched the door open"
15"Quinn broke into a sprint."
16"Her service boots splashed through"
17"The salt-and-pepper hair, cropped close,"
18"Her sharp jaw was set."
19"She’d lost a partner once,"
ratio0.848
40.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences125
matches
0"Now he was trying to"
ratio0.008
23.81% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences72
technicalSentenceCount12
matches
0"He’d been her quarry for a week, a whisper of a name connected to the clique’s illicit dealings, a ghost who’d suddenly materialized tonight, desperate and runn…"
1"He wrenched the door open with surprising force, the rusted hinges groaning a protest that was swallowed by the downpour."
2"The air that seeped out was colder, carrying a damp, earthy smell mixed with something metallic and faintly sweet, like overripe fruit decaying in a damp cellar…"
3"The codex she’d painstakingly compiled on the clique often hinted at strange acquisitions, things that couldn't be bought on any legitimate street."
4"She had only the raw instinct that Tomás Herrera was a thread leading to the heart of something rotten, something that might explain Liam’s fate."
5"Water dripped constantly from unseen pipes overhead, forming shallow pools that reflected her flashlight beam in distorted, wavering patterns."
6"An impossible expanse swallowed by shadow, stretching out into a cavernous space that seemed to hum with a furtive energy."
7"Her flashlight beam, powerful as it was, barely pierced the gloom, revealing rough-hewn walls that hinted at ancient excavation, overlaid with the cracked, stai…"
8"They flitted between stalls that seemed to coalesce from the gloom itself, their contents hinted at by the strange glow from within – glinting metal, iridescent…"
9"A being with skin like polished obsidian that seemed to absorb the light; another whose limbs moved with a disconcerting, insectile grace."
10"The memory of Liam’s vacant eyes, the impossible case files, the questions that had gnawed at her for three years—they were a physical ache."
11"She saw Tomás’s silhouette vanish behind a stall selling shimmering fabrics that moved as if alive."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
77.1571%