Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ94VT11W71Y3ZHRMHSE8E7C

Run Details

Duration:
39.9s
Cost:
$0.002378
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The latch clicked, the first of three deadbolts sliding back with a metallic groan. Rory Carter expected Eva, then. Always Eva. Her hands, usually quick and sure from years of delivering parcels, fumbled with the final lock. She pulled the door inward, ready with a breezy greeting, but the words died in her throat. Standing on the threshold, silhouetted against the dim communal hallway light, was Lucien Moreau. Her breath hitched. It wasn't a soft intake; it was a sharp, arrested gasp. The worn floorboards of Eva’s cramped flat seemed to tilt. Lucien stood as always, impossibly neat. His platinum blond hair slicked back from his forehead, charcoal suit sharp enough to cut glass, the ivory handle of his cane gleaming softly. But his eyes – one the colour of warm amber, the other a void of black – held a stillness that pinned her. They scanned her, taking in the unfamiliar surroundings, then resettled on her face. A flicker, too quick to name, crossed his features. "Rory." His voice. It was a low rumble, carrying the faint, sophisticated lilt of far-off lands she’d only glimpsed on delivery routes. It had been years. Too many years. She took a step back, her hand instinctively going to the crescent scar hidden on her left wrist, a ghost of a childhood fall she hadn't thought about in ages. "Lucien. What… how did you find me?" Her voice was a rough whisper, betrayal and surprise warring within her. This was Eva’s place. Safe. Or it was supposed to be. He didn’t step forward, respecting the invisible line she’d drawn. He simply inclined his head. “London isn’t as large as you might hope, Aurora.” He used her full name, the formal address a deliberate reminder of their past and, perhaps, the distance he felt between them now. She gripped the doorframe, knuckles white. "You shouldn't be here." The words came out colder than she intended, a shield forged from old hurts and present anxieties. The last time she saw him, everything had been a tangled mess of unspoken words and bitter endings. She’d fled Cardiff, fled Evan, fled the ghost of what she’d thought love might be, and landed in London with Eva’s help. Lucien had been part of the world she’d desperately tried to outrun. A faint shadow touched his lips, not quite a smile. "And yet, here I am." He gestured with his cane towards the interior of the flat. "May I?" Eva’s flat. Cramped. Overflowing. A sanctuary of paper and ink. The air perpetually thick with the scent of old paper, dust, and the faint, spicy aroma that seeped up from the curry house below. It was a far cry from whatever polished domains he usually inhabited. She hesitated, her mind racing through a dozen reasons to slam the door shut, but the sight of him, so solid and unexpected, rooted her. She finally stepped aside, leaving the doorway open, an invitation she immediately regretted. He entered with a quiet grace that seemed to absorb the room's accumulated chaos. He moved past her, his tailored suit a stark contrast to the overflowing bookshelves that lined the walls, scrolls spilling from precariously stacked paperbacks, research notes pinned to every available inch of plaster. A tabby cat, Ptolemy, uncurled from a patch of weak sunlight on the rug, stretched languidly, then eyed Lucien with narrowed, unimpressed green eyes before retreating to a higher perch amidst Eva’s textual Everest. Rory watched him, her back now to the door. She could still feel the phantom pressure of its weight, the urge to bolt. Lucien’s gaze swept over the room, a silent, appreciative survey of Eva’s obsessive scholarship. It was the sort of thing he might do, assessing a mark or a treasure. "She's still at it, then?" he murmured, his eyes finally returning to Rory. "Still chasing shadows in forgotten scripts?" "Eva’s brilliant," Rory said, her voice regaining some of its usual crispness, a defence mechanism. "She uncovers things others miss." "No doubt. She always did have a flair for the… obscure." His gaze lingered, a subtle assessment that made Rory acutely aware of her worn jeans and the faint smudge of grease on her cheek from the earlier delivery run. He looked like a creature of polished marble dropped into a dust-filled attic. "And you?" she challenged, crossing her arms. "What brings the esteemed fixer to Brick Lane? Looking for lost artefacts hiding amongst Eva’s incunabula?" Her attempt at a light tone fell flat, brittle. Lucien turned his full attention to her then. The heterochromatic eyes seemed to pierce right through her defences. “I was looking for you, Rory.” He let the statement hang, heavy with implications. The air between them thickened, charged with years of silence and the raw, undeniable hum of attraction that had always simmered beneath the surface, even as their interactions dissolved into acrimony. Rory’s jaw tightened. “You found me. Congratulations. Now, if you’ll excuse me.” She made a move towards the door, a clear dismissal. Lucien’s hand shot out, not to grab, but to rest his ivory cane on the floorboards an inch from her path. The gesture was purely symbolic, a statement of presence. “I thought we might talk. Properly. Uninterrupted.” "We had our chance to talk. We ran out of road years ago." She met his gaze, a challenge. Her heart hammered a frantic rhythm against her ribs. The hurt was a dull ache, yes, but beneath it, the old, dangerous spark flared, a heat she’d sworn to extinguish. He offered that half-smile again, the one that never quite reached his eyes. “Perhaps you ran out of road. I merely took a different route.” His eyes flickered to her left wrist, a flicker that made her skin prickle. He hadn’t missed a thing. "Did you leave Cardiff with nothing but the clothes on your back and a few good friends?" Rory flinched. The question, so loaded, so direct, struck a nerve. She had fled Evan, fled the suffocating pressure of her father’s expectations, and now Lucien was here, dredging it all up. "What do you want, Lucien?" Her voice was tight, strained. The room suddenly felt suffocatingly small. Ptolemy shifted on his perch, a soft, inquisitive meow. He finally took a slow step forward, his gaze never leaving hers, weaving through the precarious stacks of books and scrolls that separated them. He stopped just beyond the edge of the rug, close enough that she could detect the subtle, proprietary scent of expensive cologne beneath the general mustiness of Eva’s flat. "I have information. Information that concerns you. Information you need to hear." "Information? About what? My ex? My career as a delivery driver? The fact that I pay rent above a pub?" She laughed, a short, sharp sound devoid of humour. "I thought you dealt in bigger things, Luc." The old nickname slipped out, a slip of the tongue she immediately regretted. His eyes narrowed almost imperceptibly. He leaned on his cane, a picture of controlled impatience. “The world you’re trying to build, Rory, is built on foundations you don’t fully understand. And those foundations are cracking.” He paused, letting his words sink in. “Evan wasn't just some bloke with a temper. And the people who came looking for you after he couldn’t find you… they aren't going to give up.” Rory felt a cold dread seep into her bones. She pushed the thought of Evan away, a dark chapter she’d fought hard to close. But Lucien knew things. He always knew things. “Who are you talking about?” He straightened, his expression unreadable. “People who have a vested interest in your particular heritage. Aurora Carter. Malphora.” The name hung in the air, heavy and alien. Malphora. A name whispered in hushed tones by Eva, a name ripped from ancient texts. Rory recoiled as if struck. "I don't know what you're talking about." "Don't you?" His gaze was intense, challenging. He took another step, closing the remaining distance until he stood directly before her, the clutter of Eva's life forming a bizarre barrier between them. She could see the faint pulse beating in his throat, the sharp line of his jaw. The attraction, that old, unwelcome current, surged, battling with the fear and resentment. "You ran, Rory. You ran from Cardiff, from Evan, from the life they expected you to lead. You thought you could disappear into anonymity, delivering parcels and living above a pub. But some things, once awakened, cannot be easily silenced or ignored." He reached out, his fingers hovering inches from her face, a gesture of possessiveness her mind screamed against, yet her body remained frozen. His thumb brushed a stray strand of black hair from her cheek, his touch both feather-light and searingly intimate. Her entire body hummed with the contact. She forgot to breathe. The air crackled. "They know you're here, Rory," he said, his voice dropping to a low, resonant tone that vibrated deep within her. "And they know what you are. And I," he paused, his amber eye meeting her bright blue, "am here to warn you. Or perhaps," his black eye seemed to glint with something more, something ancient and dangerous, "to offer you protection."
created_at"2026-02-25T00:58:25.193Z" 2/25/2026, 12:58:25 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.563
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
90.22% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1533
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"languidly"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"languidly"
2"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
31.51% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1533
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"gleaming"
count1
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"flicker"
count2
3
word"lilt"
count1
4
word"whisper"
count1
5
word"reminder"
count1
6
word"unspoken"
count1
7
word"sanctuary"
count1
8
word"racing"
count1
9
word"stark"
count1
10
word"amidst"
count1
11
word"weight"
count1
12
word"marble"
count1
13
word"charged"
count1
14
word"silence"
count1
15
word"flickered"
count1
16
word"unreadable"
count1
17
word"pulse"
count1
18
word"vibrated"
count1
19
word"glint"
count1
highlights
0"gleaming"
1"scanned"
2"flicker"
3"lilt"
4"whisper"
5"reminder"
6"unspoken"
7"sanctuary"
8"racing"
9"stark"
10"amidst"
11"weight"
12"marble"
13"charged"
14"silence"
15"flickered"
16"unreadable"
17"pulse"
18"vibrated"
19"glint"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences101
matches(empty)
72.14% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences101
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences111
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen65
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1535
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount1211
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.91
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Eva11
Lucien9
Moreau1
Cardiff1
Evan3
London1
Ptolemy2
Everest1
Rory9
persons
0"Carter"
1"Eva"
2"Lucien"
3"Moreau"
4"Evan"
5"Ptolemy"
6"Rory"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"London"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
50.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences75
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"not quite a smile"
1"grace that seemed to absorb the room's accumulated chaos"
2"looked like a creature of polished marble"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.651
wordCount1535
matches
0"not to grab, but to rest his ivory cane on the floorboards an inch from her p"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences111
matches(empty)
77.76% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean52.93
std22.35
cv0.422
sampleLengths
068
199
229
360
447
579
628
784
881
952
1019
1120
1253
1332
1463
1522
1637
1749
1861
1957
2065
2150
2269
2337
2418
2536
2661
2798
2861
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences101
matches
0"was supposed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs205
matches(empty)
91.38% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences111
ratio0.018
matches
0"It wasn't a soft intake; it was a sharp, arrested gasp."
1"But his eyes – one the colour of warm amber, the other a void of black – held a stillness that pinned her."
93.88% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1213
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount57
adverbRatio0.04699093157460841
lyAdverbCount23
lyAdverbRatio0.018961253091508656
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences111
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences111
mean13.83
std10.32
cv0.746
sampleLengths
014
15
22
316
417
514
63
711
810
96
1024
1123
1213
139
143
1519
164
173
1830
1919
204
211
226
2310
245
2532
266
2721
2818
2922
3012
3110
3216
332
342
351
361
376
3824
3912
4025
4113
4214
4333
4434
459
4614
4714
4815
4913
52.55% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.34234234234234234
totalSentences111
uniqueOpeners38
35.84% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences93
matches
0"Too many years."
ratio0.011
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount55
totalSentences93
matches
0"Her hands, usually quick and"
1"She pulled the door inward,"
2"Her breath hitched."
3"It wasn't a soft intake;"
4"His platinum blond hair slicked"
5"They scanned her, taking in"
6"It was a low rumble,"
7"It had been years."
8"She took a step back,"
9"Her voice was a rough"
10"He didn’t step forward, respecting"
11"He simply inclined his head."
12"He used her full name,"
13"She gripped the doorframe, knuckles"
14"She’d fled Cardiff, fled Evan,"
15"He gestured with his cane"
16"It was a far cry"
17"She hesitated, her mind racing"
18"She finally stepped aside, leaving"
19"He entered with a quiet"
ratio0.591
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount88
totalSentences93
matches
0"The latch clicked, the first"
1"Rory Carter expected Eva, then."
2"Her hands, usually quick and"
3"She pulled the door inward,"
4"Her breath hitched."
5"It wasn't a soft intake;"
6"The worn floorboards of Eva’s"
7"Lucien stood as always, impossibly"
8"His platinum blond hair slicked"
9"They scanned her, taking in"
10"A flicker, too quick to"
11"It was a low rumble,"
12"It had been years."
13"She took a step back,"
14"Her voice was a rough"
15"This was Eva’s place."
16"He didn’t step forward, respecting"
17"He simply inclined his head."
18"He used her full name,"
19"She gripped the doorframe, knuckles"
ratio0.946
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
ratio0
74.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The air perpetually thick with the scent of old paper, dust, and the faint, spicy aroma that seeped up from the curry house below."
1"He moved past her, his tailored suit a stark contrast to the overflowing bookshelves that lined the walls, scrolls spilling from precariously stacked paperbacks…"
2"The air between them thickened, charged with years of silence and the raw, undeniable hum of attraction that had always simmered beneath the surface, even as th…"
3"He took another step, closing the remaining distance until he stood directly before her, the clutter of Eva's life forming a bizarre barrier between them."
13.89% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"The words came out, a shield forged from old hurts and present anxieties"
1"he murmured, his eyes finally returning to Rory"
2"The old nickname slipped out, a slip of the tongue she immediately regretted"
3"he paused, his amber eye meeting her bright blue,"
56.25% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
1"she challenged (challenge)"
2"She laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.156
leniency0.313
rawRatio0.6
effectiveRatio0.188
73.0080%